专题07 书面表达（解析版）-5年（2017-2021）中考1年模拟英语真题分项汇编（江西专用）

5年（2017-2021）中考英语真题分项汇编（江西专用）专题07书面表达(解析版)一、2021年书面表达失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，采取有效行动，失败为成功。写作要点：1.WhathaveyoulearnedfromApple’sstory?2.Haveyoueverexperiencedafailure?Whatwasit?3.Whatwillyoudototurnitintoasuccess?要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Failurecanleadtosuccess.Weshouldstudyitandlearnwhywemakemistakes,thenfindwaystosolveourproblems.Also,weshouldnevergiveup!Ioncetriedoutforaspeechcompetition.Ipracticeditmanytimes.Unexpectedly,Ifailed.I’veneverspokeninfrontofthepubliceversince.Apple’sstoryisquiteaninspirationforme.WhatcanIdotomakeit?First,beconfidentandtrytospeakinpublicplaces.Second,askmyteachersorfriendsforsomeadviceandimprovemylanguageskills.Finally,bepersistentandpracticespeechesoverandoveragain.I’msureIwillsucceedsomeday.【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章，谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验，结合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么，你的失败经历，要如何将失败变为成功。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称写作，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么，时态为一般现在时；第二部分描写自己的失败经历，时态为一般过去时；第三部分为如何把失败变为成功，时态为一般现在时。写作时要行文连贯，条理清晰，语言准确。二、2020年59．为了帮助学生迎接中考，在中考前几个月，老师一般都会进行复习教学。一家英语教学研究中心(EnglishTeachingResearchCenter)正在对中考英语复习教学现状进行调查。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，向他们介绍你们班的英语复习课的情况，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法，并提出建议。写作要点：1.YourfeelingsaboutyourEnglishrevisionclasses.2.Classactivities:a.WhatdidyourEnglishteacherusuallydoinclass?b.Whatdidyouusuallydoinclass?3.YouradviceonEnglishrevisionclassestoyourEnglishteacher.要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswere______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________59．例文：IthinkmyEnglishrevisionclasseswereusefulbuttiring.Inclass,myEnglishteacherorganizeddifferentkindsofactivitiestohelpusreviewwhatwehadlearnt.Sometimessheexplainedhowtousethekeywordsandsentencepatterns.Wetooknotesandmadesentences.Withtheteacher'shelp,wepracticedlistening,readingandwritinginclass.Butweoftendidexercisesandhadexams,whichmademestressedout.IhopeEnglishrevisionclassescanbemoreenjoyable.Wecanplaygamesandrole—playconversations.It’sagoodideatohavediscussionswithmypartnersinEnglish.What’smore,Iliketeacherswhoarealwayswithasmile.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料类作文，要求写一篇关于中考英语复习教学现状的文章，谈谈你对英语复习课的感受及看法、复习课上老师及同学开展的一些活动、个人对于英语复习课的一些建议，以上写作要点缺一不可。根据题目要求可知，本文时态以为一般过去时为主，人称为第一人称和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题。2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全。首段介绍了自己对英语复习课的感受以及老师在课堂上的教学活动和学生的学习情况；第二段介绍了个人对英语复习课的改进意见。文章使用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。3.高分亮点：短语：takenotes；makesentences；practicedoingsth；stressedout；what’smore。句型：疑问词+动词不定式；which引导的定语从句；it作形式主语。三、2019年59.文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“Weneedtojudgepeoplebywhattheydo,notwhattheylooklike.”你同意文章最后提出的观点吗?对此观点你有何看法?请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。写作要点:I.Youropinion(agree/disagree/…);2.Reasons(looks,personality品性,ability…);3.Anexample(yourself/apersonaroundyou/afamousperson/…).要求:1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;2.如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名;3.词数不少于80。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文PossibleversionOne;Iagreewiththeopinion.Comparedwithlooks,personalityandabilityaremoreimportant.Becausewecan’tchangeourlookseasily,butwecandecideandcontrolwhatwedo.Thnakstothekindandhard-workingpeople,oursocietyisbecomingbetterandbetter.Forexample,MaYun,awell-knownbusinessman,doesn’tlookhandsome,buthecreatedAlibabawhichhaschangedourlifestyleandmadeourlifemoreconvenient.Hehasbeendoingsomuchforoursocietythatwealladmirehim.Becauseofhiscontributiontooursociety,weeventhinkhelookssocool.Solet’stryourbesttodomoreusefulthingsforoursocietyandpaylessattentiontoourlooks.PossibleVersionTwoInmyopinion,IthinkweneedtojudgepeoplebybothwhattheydoandwhattheylooklikeAperson'spersonalityandabilityareveryimportant,butforsomejobs,looksarealsoimportant,suchasanactororanactress,awaiterorawaitress,orevenateacherBecauseit'senjoyabletoseeagood-lookingpersonForexample,myteachersinmyclassallteachverywell,andtheyarekindandhelpful.Allofuslikethem.ButthemostpopularteacherismyEnglishteacher,becauseshelooksreallybeautiful.ShedressesherselfupeverydayandalwayshasasmileonherfaceSolet'stryourbesttoimproveourability,personalityandlooks.【解析】这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。四、2018年六、书面表达59.假如国外中学生来你校进行为期一周的交流学习,期间计划参加一项中国传统文化的主题活动,为此向你们征求活动方案(plan)请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍你提供的活动方案,内容包括:茶或者民乐介绍,活动安排以及与之相关的理由。要求:1.从表格中任选一个主题,合理安排活动;2.短文条理清楚,行文连贯,内容可适当发挥;3.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。ChineseCultureIntroductionScheduleReasonsTeaPastandpresentTime:______Places:teafarm,teahouseActivities:1.teaprocessing2.ateaartperformance…FolkMusicMusicpiecesandtraditionalinstrumentsTime:_______Places:musicroom,schoolhallActivities:1.takemusicalinstrumentclasses2.attendafolkmusicconcert…Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroduce_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.【答案】Hello,friends.I'vegotaplanforyouwhichmayhelpyoulearnaboutChineseculture.Firstofall,I'dliketointroducetea.Ithasalonghistory.ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina.Sowewillhavesomeinterestingactivitiesaboutitforyou.OnSaturdaymorning,youaregoingtovisitabigfarmwhereyoucanlearnaboutteaprocessing.OnSaturdayafternoon,youaregoingtoateahouseafterdinnerwhereyoucanwatchateaartperformance.Whydoweplanavisittoateahouseforyou?Becauseyoucanleanalotmoreaboutteaculturethere.YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets,Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtime.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如helpsb.do，aboutChineseculture，I'dliketo，oneofthemostpopulardrinks，begoingto，afterdinner，alotmore，bemadewith，listento，haveagoodtime等。而ItissaidthatShenNongdiscovereditasadrink.TeaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksinChina./YouwillseeayoungladyinaChinesetraditionaldresswhoshowsyouhowacupofteaismadewithteasets,/Youcanenjoyitandrelaxyourselveswhilelisteningtopiecesoftraditionalfolkmusic.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。五、2017年六、书面表达（15分）微笑是人类最美的语言。某英语报以“smiles”为题，举办中学生征文活动，请根据下面的图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名与地名。3.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。SmilesAsmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.-____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PossibleVersionOne:SmilesAsmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileshowsyouarekindandfriendly.Ithelpsyougetonwellwithothers.Italsobringsgoodluckandmakesothersfeelwarm.WhenIwasinGrade6,anewstudentcametoourclass.Hedidbadlyinschoolwork.Noonetalkedwithhim.Hefeltverylonely.WhenIleantthis,eachtimeImethim,Igavehimabigsmile.Afterwards,heoftenaskedmequestionsaboutstudy.Webecamegoodfriendsandhedidbetterandbetterinhisstudy.Hesaiditwasmysmilethatmadehimmoreconfidentandoutgoing.Smilesaresoimportanttoourlife,solet’strytosmilemore.Ifwesmiletolife,lifewillsmilebacktous.PossibleVersionTwoSmilesAsmileisthemostbeautifullanguageofhumanbeings.Asmileislikethesunshineinwinter.Itwarmsourheartsandhelpsusgetonwellwitheachother.Apersonwhooftensmilesusuallybringsgoodluck.What’smore,smilescangiveusconfidence.WhenIwasyoung,Iwasveryshy.Iwasafraidtospeakinpublic.OnedayIneededtogiveaspeechinmyEnglishclass.IwassofrightenedthatIdidbadlyatthebeginning.ButwhenIsawabigsmileonmyteacher’sface,Igotmoreandmoreconfident.FinallyImadeit.Smilesareveryhelpfulinourlives.Weshouldkeepsmilesonourfaces.Ifwearehappy,wesmile.Ifwemeetdifficulties,weshouldsmile,tooLet’ssmiletolife!【详解】这是一篇图表作文。要求以“Smiles”为题，根据图表提示信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：微笑的力量、你的微笑故事以及故事给予你的启示。根据所给的提示材料可知文章时态主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称主要用第一人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。南昌市中考一模七、材料作文63．近日教育部要求，确保中小学生手机有限带入校园，禁止带入课堂。假设英语课上老师让你就该话题做一个值日报告。请你根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下过度使用手机带来的负面影响，谈谈如何规范使用手机，并提出如何正确使用手机的建议。写作要点：1.Thebadsidesofusingmobilephones:playinggames,chattingonline,notgoodforeyes2.Therightwaystousemobilephones:a.atschool:handittoteacherstokeep,…b.athome:useitwiththehelpofparents,…3.Youradviceonhowtousemobilephonesproperly.要求：1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3.词数不少于80词，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Mobilephonesarewidelyusedthesedays.However,theycausesomebadinfluenceonus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________