人教版英语八年级上册 Unit 10 　Section B (3a-)学案

Unit10Ifyougototheparty,you’llhaveagreattime!SectionB(3a-SelfCheck)写作素养进阶【主题分析——指明方向】主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”,涉及子主题“交流与合作、团队精神”。内容:描述生活中遇到的问题和烦恼,并根据问题和烦恼提出合理化的建议。要求:能正确使用if条件从句做出假设,并用should等情态动词给出合理化建议。【典例研磨——示范引领】假如你是李华,你校英语报“大家来帮忙”栏目收到一位叫Grace的同学的来信,信中她诉说了自己的两个烦恼:1.刷短视频上瘾;2.总是熬夜,导致上课犯困。你作为该报实习小编辑,请你写一篇英语短文,帮助她解决烦恼。Step1三定审题1.定人称:介绍对方的烦恼以及给对方建议时用第二人称;介绍自己的观点时用第一人称。2.定时态:一般现在时为主。3.定核心:针对他人的烦恼提出建议。Step2谋篇布局Step3遣词造句推敲词汇:1.对……疯狂becrazyabout

2.最好 hadbetter

3.参加 takepartin

4.熬夜 stayup

5.一……就…… assoonas

基础句式:1.我愿意给你一些建议。I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.2.你的第一个问题是你对看短视频上瘾。Thefirstproblemisthatyouarecrazyaboutwatchingshortvideos.3.对人们来说通过看它们(短视频)来放松很正常。It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthem.4.对它们上瘾就不好了。It’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutthem.5.你可以多参加户外活动。Youcantakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.6.如果你熬夜是为了完成作业,我认为你应该回到家先做作业。Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkfirstwhenyougethome.7.阅读可以使你放松。Readingcanmakeyourelaxed.8.阅读可以帮你睡得更好。Readingcanhelpyousleepbetter.升级句式:1.将基础句式3和4用连词but升级It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthembutit’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutthem.2.将基础句式5用hadbetter升级You’dbettertakepartinmoreoutdooractivities.3.将基础句式6用assoonas升级Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkassoonasyougethome.4.将基础句式7和8合并Readingcanmakeyourelaxedandhelpyousleepbetter.Step4润色成篇Hi,GraceI’velearnedaboutyourproblems.I’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.①Yourfirstproblemisthatyouarecrazyabout②watchingshortvideos.①用wouldlike句式引出愿意提些建议。续表It’snormalforpeopletorelaxbywatchingthem.Butit’snotgoodtobecrazyaboutit③.Whynot④setyourscreentimelimitsforyourself?Andyou’dbetter⑤takepartinmoreoutdooractivities.Thesecondproblemisthatyoualwaysstayup.Ifyoustayuptofinishyourhomework,Ithinkyoushoulddoyourhomeworkassoonasyougethome.Ifyoustayuptoplaygames,Iadvisethatyoushouldreadbeforebedtime.Readingcanmakeyourelaxedandhelpyousleepbetter.Ihopemyadvicewouldbehelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua②用becrazyabout来表达对某事上瘾。③灵活运用it作形式主语的句式,彰显深厚功底。④用Whynot...?句式提出建议,语言地道。⑤运用you’dbetter提出建议,句式富于变化。【实战写作——迁移创新】李磊是一名八年级学生,他沉迷于玩电脑游戏,并因此影响了他的学习。作为李磊的好朋友,你打算怎么帮助他呢?请根据下面所给的提示,写一篇短文。要求:70词左右。(开头和结尾不计入总词数)。提示:giveup,wastetime,beinterestedin,haveagreattimeDearLiLei,Thanksforyourletter.Iamsorrytohearthatyouareintroublenow.________________________________________________________________________