浙江省稽阳联谊学校高三上学期联考英语试题读后续写偷窃行为的懊悔讲义

读后续写：表达后悔的好词好句积累形容词/副词

guilty,regretful,guiltily名词/动词

guilt,regretmuchtoone’sregret/toone’sgreatregret

令某人深感遗憾的是withdeep/greatregret

很遗憾地befullofguilt/beconsumedwithguilt

满心愧疚afeelingofguilt

内疚感shedtearsofregret.

流下后悔的泪水regretdoing…后悔做某事feelsorryfor…后悔做某事feelregretfulabout...后悔做某事beashamedof...后悔做某事beguiltyabout/at/for/over....

后悔做某事1

With/Holdingthelittledogstatueinhishand,theoldmanfelt

afloodofregretwelledupinhim.

2

Jane

regretover

whatshehaddone.3“IfonlyIhadn’tactedsowillfully.”shethought

regretfully,withteaswellingupinhereyes.

4

Staringatallthemess,Ifelt

bitterlyregretful

thatIwasn'tcarefulenough.

5

HowIregretted

thatIwasn'tcarefulenough.Thecoffeespoiledmynewdress！6

Oops!Ispilledthecoffeeonmynewdress!

IfonlyIhadbeenmorecareful.7

“IfIhadn’tquarreledwithTom,Iwouldn’thavetobehere.”Janethought

regretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.8

Shewantedto

saysorryto

Tomforlosinghertemper.

9Iwasfeeling

astrangesenseofguilt.10

Iwasoverebyawaveofguiltand

wordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.

11

Isuddenly

feltguiltgrowinginsideme.

12

Filledwithguilt,

IrushedouttoapologizetoTom.13LookingatTom’sfacewetwithtears,

Ibegantofeelguilty.

Istayedthere

withtearsofregretinmyeyes.IfonlyIhadn'tquarreledwithTom!

I

regret

that

I

am

unable

to

accept

your

kind

invitation.

HadInotmisunderstoodhimthen,everythingwouldbedifferentnow!续写实战：2024年11月稽阳联谊学校高三联考英语——偷窃行为的懊悔Isat.Heglaredatme.“YoucangiveittomeorIcantakeit,yourchoice.Whatwillitbe?”Ipulledthepackageofhairribbonsoutofthepocketofmyjeans,handedittohimandbegged,“You’renotgoingtocallmydad,areyou?”“I’mcallingthepolice.Theywillcallyourfather.”MyheaddroppedontomyhandsandIsobbed,“No,please!Can’tyoujustletmego?Icanpayyou.Ihavemoneyinmypocket.I’monlyfourteenyearsold.Please,Iwon’tevershopliftagain!”“Saveyourtears.Theywon’tworkonme.I’msickofyoubadkidsstealing,justforthethrillofit.”Isatthere,tremblinguncontrollably.Thepreviousexcitementbroughtbystealinglipstick,teenmagazineandallthatstuff...nowgavewaytoimmensefearandshame.Thepolicearrived,andthepolicemenwalkedmetotheirblackandwhitecarandopenedthebackdoor.Igotin,andtheydrovemethroughthemiddleofoursmalltown.IsloucheddownintotheseatsonoonecouldseemeasIlookedoutthewindowattheeveningsky.ThenIsawthesteeple(尖塔)ofmyfamily’schurch,andtheguiltpiercedmelikeadagger.“HowcouldIhavebeensostupid?I’vebrokenmyfather’sheart...andGod’s,”thoughtI.Wearrivedatthestation,andaroundwomanwithasquarefaceaskedmequestionsuntilIranoutofanswers.Shepointedtothedoorofalargeopencellandsaid,“Sit.Wait.”Iwalkedin,andmyfootstepsmadeanechothatbouncedoffthebars.ThetearsstartedagainasIsatdownonahardbenchandheardherdialthetelephoneandsay,“Ihaveyourdaughterinacellatthepolicestation.No,she’snothurt.Shewascaughtshoplifting.Canyoueandgether?Okay.You’rewele,goodbye.”Sheyelled,“Heykid,yourfather’sonhisway.”1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Paragraph2:

Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”结合标黄部分，讲解重点词汇词组和句型，同时让学生注意人物心理变化和情节伏笔。思路分析：1.

第一段：悔恼与羞愧的情感表现情节发展：这一段要展示主人公从偷窃到被抓的心理转变，以及面对父亲的失望和责问时的自责。通过心理描写和细节刻画（如眼中的泪水、无法直视父亲的目光等）展示她的内心痛苦。写作技巧：运用动作链和心理描写来表达人物内心的变化。例如，“她低下头，眼泪滑过脸颊”或者“她的手指不停地抚摸着衣角”等细节，可以更好地展示人物的焦虑和无助。

第二段：父亲的宽容与理解情节发展：当父亲最终表达出理解和宽容时，主人公从内疚中走出来，得到父亲的安慰。通过父亲温暖的话语和肢体语言的描写（如安慰的手势、轻拍肩膀等），展现父爱的力量。写作技巧：此段的重点是情感的转折。可以通过动作链和温暖的语言展现父亲的宽容，“父亲抚摸着她的头，声音温柔却充满力量”就是一个典型的写作手法。通过直接引语和间接引语来增强人物对话的真实性，表现情感的层次。官方范文：Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Itwassoft,yetfilledwithamixofdisappointmentandconcern.Thenthewomancalledmeuptothedeskatthreetimesthenecessaryvolume.IkeptmyeyesonthefloorasIwalkedtowardthem.Isawmydad’sshoes,butIdidn’tspeaktohimorlookathim.Hesignedsomepapersandwewereallowedtoleave.Theairwasdarkandcoldaswewalkedtothecarinheavysilence.Thenhewhisperedinasadandfarawayvoice,“Mydaughter...athief...”Imeltedintoregretfultears.Themileshomefeltlikeforever.

Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”ItoldhimaboutthefirsttimeIstoleatubeoflipstickandhowIfeltequalamountsofthrillandguilt.Then,gradually,theguiltfadedasthethrillgrew.HottearsbitmyfaceasIsaid,“Pleaseforgiveme.I’llneverdoitagain.”DadrequiredmetomakealistofalltheplacesIstolefromandgotorepaytheowners.Thenextmorning,Ididexactlyasheasked.Itwasimpossiblyhard,butIdidit.Thankstohiscourage,Ineverstoleagain.研究范文1Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Myheartsankatthesound,steadyyetheavywithunspokendisappointment.Slowly,Ilookedupandsawmyfatherstandingatthecelldoor,hiseyesshadowedwithemotionsIcouldn’tquiteread—disbelief,sadness,perhapsevenhurt.Istoodfrozenashegesturedformetofollowhim.Thewalkoutofthepolicestationfeltlikeaneternity,withmyfather’ssilencelouderthananywordshecouldhavespoken.MyhandstrembledasIclutchedmyjacket,theweightofguiltpressingdownonme.Iwantedtoapologize,toexplain,butthelumpinmythroatsilencedme.Hisexpressionremainedcalmbutdistant,andIdreadedwhatwouldenextaswedrovehomeinpletesilence.Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”Hisvoicewasfirm,yettingedwithsadnessthatmademychesttighten.Strugglingtomeethisgaze,Istammered,“I...Ijustwantedtofitin,tofeellikeeveryoneelse.”Hiseyessoftened,andforthefirsttimethatnight,hishandrestedgentlyonmyshoulder.“Mistakeshappen,”hesaidquietly,“butwhatmattersiswhatyoulearnfromthem.”Hesharedastoryfromhisyouth—howhe,too,hadmadeafoolishchoiceonceandhurtsomeoneheloved,buthowhe’dworkedhardtoearntheirtrustagain.Hiswordscutthroughmyguilt,plantingaseedofdetermination.Asheleftmetoreflect,Irealizedthismistakedidn’tdefineme—itwasthebeginningofajourneytomakebetterchoicesandrebuildtrust.研究范文2Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.AsIwalkedthroughthefrontdoor,Ifeltmyheartpoundinmychest.Myfatherwassittinginthelivingroom,hiseyesmeetingminewithamixtureofdisappointmentandconcern.Hedidn’tsayaword,buthisgazespokevolumes.MyfeetseemedtomoveoftheirownaccordasIslowlyapproachedhim.Ifelttheweightofhisdisappointmentpressingdownonme.“Whydidyoudoit?”heasked,hisvoicelowbutfirm.Iopenedmymouth,butnowordscameout.Instead,tearsstartedtowellupinmyeyes.Icollapsedontothecouchbesidehim,myhandstrembling.“I’msorry,Dad,”Iwhispered,barelyabletospeakthroughmysobs.Theguiltsurgedwithinmelikeanoverwhelmingwave,andIburiedmyfaceinmyhands,wishingIcouldtakebackeverything.Afterwearrivedhome,Dadfinallyaskedme,“Why?”Afteralongsilence,myfatherfinallyspoke,hisvoicesofterthistime.“Idon’tknowwhyyoudidit,butIknowthatyou’renotabadperson.Youmadeamistake,butthatdoesn’tdefinewhoyouare.”Hiswordspiercedthroughthethickfogofguiltinmymind.Ilookedupathim,andforthefirsttimeinhours,Ifeltaflickerofhope.“ButI’msosorry,Dad.I’vedisappointedyou,”Isaid,myvoiceshaking.Hesmiledgentlyandplacedahandonmyshoulder.“Everyonemakesmistakes,butit’showwelearnfromthemthatmatters.I’mnotangry,butyouneedtolearnfromthis.”Awaveofreliefwashedoverme,andforthefirsttimethatday,Ifeltaweightliftoffmychest.研究范文3Aboutonehundredyearslater,Iheardhisvoicesaymyname.Itjoltedmeoutofmyhazeofshameandfear.Myfatherstoodatthecelldoor,hisfigureoutlinedbytheharshlight.Hisexpressionwasn’tangry—justtiredandheavywithdisappointment.“Let’sgo,Emily,”hesaidquietly,hisvoicecalmbutfirm.Theofficerhandedhimaclipboard,andtheyexchangedafewbriefwordsbeforeunlockingthedoor.Ishuffledwithmyheaddown,tooashamedtolookathim.Thewalktothecarfeltendless.Onceinside,thesilencewrappedarounduslikeaweight.ThehumoftheenginewastheonlysoundasDadgrippedthesteeringwheel,hisknuckles