读后续写问题解决类社区活动冲突沟通解决达到1+1大于2多篇范文详解课件-高三英语二轮复习

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沟通解决达到1+1>2宁波市2024学年第一学期高考与选考模拟考试原文分析读后续写原文审读多篇范文呈现解题思路分析读后续写可积累文本1、

原文审读：第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ThesunwassettingoverSpringdale,castingshadowsacrossthebusycommunitycenter.Agroupofteenagers,themembersoftheSpringdaleYouthCommittee,gatheredatatable.Theylookeddeterminedandworried.AmongthemwasEmily,asmartbutoftenunnoticedgirlwholoveshelpingothers.Forweeks,theyhadbeenorganizingafundraisingeventforthelocalhomelessshelter,astheshelterstruggledtoassisttheincreasingnumberofindividualsseekinghelp.Thebigdaywasoneweekaway,andeverythingwasset--untiltheydiscoveredanothergrouphadasimilarcharityeventonthesameday.Thiscoulddividethepeoplewhomightcomeandthedonationstheyhopedtoget.“Wecannotchangethedatenow,”saidTom,aseniormember,hisvoicefilledwithfrustration.“We’vealreadysentoutinvitations,andtheplaceisbooked.”Emilylistenedquietlytothediscussion.Sheknewchangingthedatewasn’tpossible,butsherealizedcompetingwithanotherworthycausecouldhurtbothsides.Afterthemeetingendedwithoutasolution,Emilydecidedtotakeaction.Shespentthenextdaylookingintowaystoworkwithothergroup,hopingtofindawaythatwouldhelpboththehomelessshelterandtheothercause.Thenextday,shecametothecommitteewithasuggestion.“Whatifwejoinourevents?”sheasked.“Wecouldshareresources,worktogetheronpromoting,andmostimportantly,makesurebothcausesaresupportedbythecommunity.”Thememberslookedateachother,somedoubtful,othersinterested.“That’sagreatidea,Emily,buthowwillwegetthemtoagree?”Laura,anothermember,asked.Emilyhadalreadythoughtthisthrough.“I’lltalktotheirorganizerandshowthemthebenefitsofajointevent.”Sheknewthepathaheadwouldbechallenging,butshewasdeterminedtomakeithappenforSpringdaleanditspeople.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort._______Paragraph2:Afterdaysofnegotiation,Emilyfinallygotapositivereply._______2、

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注释(定语从句)ItwastheseconddayinthenewofficeandMayawasstillonherown.Exceptthemanwhohadtakenherinduction(入职),therewasnooneelsewhohadsaida“hi”totheyoungwoman.Notonlywasitanewoffice(让步状语从句),itwasalsoanewcity.Whileshehadsuccessfullyclimbedthecorporateladder(阶梯)forabettersalary,shehan’treallymadeanyfriendsinthenewcityorofficeyet.Looking(非谓语动词做伴随动作)

atthewholeworkplacefromherseatattheendofthehall(方式状语),Mayafeltanurgetocry.Butshewasagrownwomanandthatwassimplynotanoption.Shedecidedtoeatherlunch,aslonelyasitmightfeel.Herlunchboxrevealedfriedricewithvegetablesandanoldmemoryhitherfromthedepthofhermind.

解题思路分析：1.构思思路

-问题梳理：明确文章中主要冲突点，即两个组织在同一时间举办活动可能分散资源的问题。Emily提出的合作方案能够解决冲突，形成一种双赢的解决方式。-情感发展：通过Emily的行动，展现她的责任心和对社区的热情，使她从一名普通的成员成长为团队的关键角色。2.提炼框架

-段落一：描述Emily与对方组织的沟通过程，她向他们展示合作的优势，例如资源共享、相互支持。可以通过对方组织的初步犹豫，然后逐渐理解Emily的建议。-段落二：两方达成协议，共同宣传活动。Emily和团队看到社区对活动的支持，感到欣慰与自豪。最终，她的努力得到认可，收获了团队成员的尊重。解题思路分析：3.实施写作

-细节刻画：通过描述Emily与对方的沟通过程，展示她的耐心与坚持。可以加入她内心的挣扎，如何用合理的理由说服对方。-人物成长：将Emily从一名“常被忽视的成员”塑造成“团队的主心骨”，展示她通过坚持和沟通获得的成长。续写注意事项：4.注意内容

-情感真实：尽量保持情感的真实和细腻，使Emily的成长和努力显得合情合理。-逻辑清晰：展示Emily提出的合作方案，并清晰地描述各方对该方案的反馈，使情节发展合理、自然。故事山模式：

衔接点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；衔接点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；衔接点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；衔接点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。原文与续写的衔接点：-castshadowsacross：意为“在…投下阴影”。常用于描述光线对环境的影响。-filledwithfrustration：表示“充满了沮丧”。描述人物情感时常用的搭配。-takeaction：意为“采取行动”，表示下定决心去做某事。-lookintoways：指“寻找方法”，表示通过调查或研究找到解决办法。原文词汇和可积累部分：1.determine-词性：动词

-词义：决定；下定决心

-近义词：decide,resolve-反义词：hesitate,waver-例句：

-Shedeterminedtopursueherdreamsdespitethechallenges.-Heisdeterminedtosucceedinhiscareer.原文词汇和可积累部分：2.frustration-词性：名词

-词义：沮丧；挫折

-近义词：disappointment,discouragement-反义词：satisfaction,contentment-例句：

-Herfrustrationgrewastheprojectencounteredmoreissues.-Hefeltasenseoffrustrationwhenhiseffortswentunrecognized.原文词汇和可积累部分：3.resource-词性：名词

-词义：资源；材料

-近义词：supply,material-反义词：scarcity,lack-例句：

-Theschoolhaslimitedresourcesforextracurricularactivities.-Theyusedeveryavailableresourcetomaketheeventsuccessful.原文词汇和可积累部分：5.support-词性：动词/名词

-词义：支持；帮助

-近义词：aid,assist-反义词：oppose,discourage-例句：

-Thecommunitygatheredtosupportthecharityevent.-Shehasalwayssupportedherfriendsindifficulttimes.推荐的动作、心理、环境描写例句：动作描写1.Shehesitatedforamoment,thenknockedsoftlyonthedoor.2.Maya’sfingerstrembledslightlyassheopenedherlunchbox.3.Tinaextendedherhandwithawarmsmile,offeringapieceofhersandwich.心理描写1.AwaveofregretwashedoverMayaassherecalledherwordstoTina.2.Shefeltaflickerofhopewhenshenoticedthewomanstandingbesideher.3.Lonelinessgnawedatherheart,butsheresolvedtofacethedaywithcourage.环境描写1.Theofficebuzzedwithfaintchatter,butMayafeltlikeanoutsiderinadistantworld.2.Theclassroomwasfilledwiththearomaofsnacksandthechatterofchildren.3.Sunlightstreamedthroughthelargewindows,castinglongshadowsonthetiledfloor.语法现象分析：1.过去完成时：原文："Whileshehadsuccessfullyclimbedthecorporateladder..."作用：表示过去某一时刻之前已完成的动作。例句：ShehadrealizedhermistakebeforeTinaofferedherkindness.2.虚拟语气：潜在使用："IfonlyshehadbeenkindertoTinabackthen."作用：表示与过去事实相反的假设。例句：IfMayahadknownhowlonelyTinafelt,shewouldhaveacteddifferently.3.状语从句：原文："Whilethestudentssaidabig'hi'toherinchorus..."作用：描述时间或条件，补充背景信息。例句：WhenMayaglancedup,shesawthewomansmilingather.

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范文中涉及的语法知识点1.间接引语（ReportedSpeech）

例句：“ThecommitteeagreedtoletEmilyleadthiseffort.”

介绍：使用间接引语来表达他人的话语或决定，是叙述和复述他人观点时的常用语法结构，有助于更流畅地表达情节。2.非限定性从句（非谓语动词）

例句：“toletEmilylead,”“approached...layingoutherplan,”“afterdaysofnegotiation.”

介绍：不定式和动词的-ing形式用于表达意图、动作或事件的连续性，帮助简洁表达人物的行动或时间顺序。3.一般过去时和过去进行时的结合

例句：“Thecommitteeagreed”，“Emilywasamazedattheturnout.”

介绍：一般过去时用于主要动作，过去进行时用于描述特定情境中的持续状态或动作，二者结合使叙述更流畅且富有层次。4.对比从句（although,while等引导）

例句：“Althoughinitiallyunsure,”“Whiletheorganizerseemedhesitant.”

介绍：这些从句结构用于引出对比，增强描述中态度或状态的变化，使叙述更加丰富和细腻。

文中较好的短语及替换词汇1.layingoutherplan-释义：详细说明她的计划

-同义短语：explainingherstrategy,presentingherplan-替换词：outliningherproposal,elaboratingonhervision2.amixtureofnervesandexcitement-释义：紧张与兴奋交织

-同义短语：ablendofanxietyandexcitement,amixofnervousnessandenthusiasm-替换词：afeelingofboththrillandanxiety,acombinationofeagernessandunease3.wonthemover-释义：赢得他们的支持

-同义短语：gainedtheirsupport,broughtthemaround-替换词：securedtheirbacking,earnedtheirtrust4.poolingresources-释义：合并资源

-同义短语：combiningresources,sharingresources-替换词：mergingassets,consolidatingresources5.asparkofinterest-释义：引起兴趣

-同义短语：ahintofinterest,aglimmerofenthusiasm-替换词：aflickerofcuriosity,atouchofintrigue6.onthedayoftheevent-释义：活动当天

-同义短语：atthetimeoftheevent,duringtheeventday-替换词：whentheeventtookplace,onthescheduledday7.filledthehall-释义：大厅里挤满了人

-同义短语：packedthevenue,crowdedthehall-替换词：overflowedintothespace,gatheredinlargenumbers8.broughtinrecorddonations-释义：创下捐款记录

-同义短语：raisedunprecedentedfunds,achievedafundraisingrecord-替换词：securedexceptionaldonations,setanewdonationrecord9.senseofprideandfulfillment-释义：自豪感与成就感

-同义短语：feelingofaccomplishment,senseofsatisfaction-替换词：prideandgratification,fulfillmentandjoy1.cast-词性:动词-词义:投掷，投射（光、影）-近义词:project,throw-联想词:shadow,light,beam-例句:-Thesunsetcastawarmglowovertheentirevalley.-Theoldtreecastalongshadowontheground.2.gatheredat-词性:动词短语-词义:聚集在-近义词:assembledat,metat-联想词:meet,congregation,group-例句:-Theygatheredatthecommunitycentertodiscussthenewproject.-Thestudentsgatheredattheentrancebeforetheeventstarted.3.organizeafundraisingevent-词性:动词短语-词义:组织募捐活动-近义词:arrangeacharityevent,hostafundraiser-联想词:charity,support,donation-例句:-Theyouthcommitteedecidedtoorganizeafundraisingeventfortheshelter.-Shehelpedorganizeafundraisingeventtosupportthelocalhospital.9.senseofprideandfulfillment-释义：自豪感与成就感

-同义短语：feelingofaccomplishment,senseofsatisfaction-替换词：prideandgratification,fulfillmentandjoy1.cast-词性:动词-词义:投掷，投射（光、影）-近义词:project,throw-联想词:shadow,light,beam-例句:-Thesunsetcastawarmglowovertheentirevalley.-Theoldtreecastalongshadowontheground.4.struggletodo-词性:动词短语-词义:努力去做某事，挣扎-近义词:tryhardto,striveto-联想词:effort,difficulty,persevere-例句:-Hestruggledtofinishtheprojectontime.-Thestudentsstruggledtounderstandthecomplextheory.5.book-词性:动词-词义:预订-近义词:reserve,schedule-联想词:reservation,arrange,plan-例句:-Weneedtobookavenuefortheeventassoonaspossible.-Shebookedatablefordinnerattherestaurant.6.withoutasolution-词性:短语-词义:没有解决方案-近义词:unresolved,noanswer-联想词:problem,difficulty,unresolved-例句:-Theyleftthemeetingwithoutasolutiontotheproblem.-Theteamdiscussedvariousoptionsbutleftwithoutasolution.7.thinkthrough-词性:动词短语-词义:仔细考虑-近义词:consider,deliberate-联想词:plan,analyze,evaluate-例句:-It’simportanttothinkthroughallthedetailsbeforemakingadecision.-Shethoughtthroughherproposalcarefully.8.spreadtheword-词性:动词短语-词义:传播消息-近义词:inform,sharenews-联想词:announce,notify,communicate-例句:-Theyusedsocialmediatospreadthewordabouttheevent.-Weneedtospreadthewordtoensureeveryoneknowsthenewplan.9.strengthen-词性:动词-词义:增强，加强-近义词:reinforce,bolster-联想词:support,improve,enhance-例句:-Thecommunityaimedtostrengthentiesthroughcollectiveactivities.-Shestrengthenedherskillswithadditionalpractice.10.layoutherplan-词性:动词短语-词义:陈述计划-近义词:presentherplan,outlineherstrategy-联想词:strategy,explanation,detail-例句:-Shelaidoutherplanfortheeventwithprecision.-Helaidouthisplaninfrontoftheteamforfeedback.11.poolresources-词性:动词短语-词义:合并资源-近义词:combineresources,shareresources-联想词:collaboration,unity,teamwork-例句:-Thetwogroupsdecidedtopoolresourcestomaximizetheimpact.-Bypoolingresources,theycouldachievemore.12.merge-词性:动词-词义:合并，融合-近义词:combine,unify-联想词:blend,join,integrate-例句:-Thetwocompaniesmergedtoformamorecompetitiveorganization.-Theydecidedtomergetheireffortsforabetteroutcome.13.exceed-词性:动词-词义:超过-近义词:surpass,outdo-联想词:more