义 高二学下期期末统一考试英语试题读后续写+大学录取：失落与觉醒+讲

读后续写：

IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,andmy

littlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,Williamand

MaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandreadthemtomein

herten-year-oldvoice:"Weregretthatwedonothaveaplaceforyou.."Rejected

fromGeorgetown."Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates..."Rejectedfrom

Cornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-fiveatWilliamand

Mary.

AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigesttherejections

immediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhomeandwentbackto

school.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgottenintoschoolstheyreallywanted

togoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn'treallyfailedatanything.1

gotgoodgrades,madetheschoolteamandscoredwellonmySATs.1hadn't

experiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,nodisease,nodivorce,

nocavities(鹄齿)even.Sobeingrejectedseemeddisastrous.

IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe"goodschools."1reallywantedtobe

chosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,ontheother

hand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'dbe

headedwiththeguvwhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,duringtests,

lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.

IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirst

choice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccer

ballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard(招生委员会)exactly

whattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,“Tvedecidedtogiveupthe

undergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse.??Thesubtextinthiswas:

I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150左右：

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答

Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.

Deeplytouchedbyhiswords,Ibegantoreassessmysituation.

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IwasinNewYorkCityonaschooltrip.Icalledhomefromapayphone,and

mylittlesister,Alex,saidfourenvelopeshadarrived:Georgetown,Cornell,

WilliamandMaryandtheUniversityofMassachusetts.Shethenopenedandread

themtomeinherten-year-oldvoice:"Weregretthatwedonothaveaplacefor

you.yRejectedfromGeorgetown."Youwereoneofmanyqualifiedcandidates.,y

RejectedfromCornell.Andnumberseventy-threeonawaitinglistofseventy-five

atWilliamandMary.

AcceptedtoUMass,mysafetyschool.Ididn'tdigestthe

rejectionsimmediately.ItouredtheUnitedNations,tooktrainhome

andwentbacktoschool.ThenIrealizedthatotherpeoplehadgotteninto

schoolstheyreallywantedtogoto.Uptothatpointinmyseventeenyears,Ihadn't

reallyfailedatanything.1gotgoodgrades,theschoolteamandscoredwellon

mySATs.Ihadn'texperiencedanymajordisappointmentsinmylife,nodeaths,

nodisease,nodivorce,nocavities（鹄齿）even.Sobeingrejected

seemeddisastrous（disaster）.

IhadalwaysassumedI'dgotooneofthe'“'goodschools.n1reallywanted

tobechosen:Thisistheplaceforsmartpeople,andwewantyou.UMass,onthe

otherhand,hadthereputationofbeingapartyschooltowhich,comeSeptember,I'd

beheadedwiththeguywhosatnexttomeintenth-gradehistoryandwho,during

tests,lefthisbookopenonthatfloorandturnedthepageswithhisfeet.

IdidnotgetactivelikemyfriendHeather,who,havingbeenrejectedbyherfirst

choice,madeILoveLucy-styleplanstodrivetotheDukecampuswithhersoccer

ballandherscience-fairprojecttoshowtheadmissionsboard（招生委员会）

exactlywhattheywererejecting.Isimplysaidthingslike,"I'vedecidedtogive

uptheundergraduatedegreeandtakeacake-decoratingcourse."Thesubtextin

thiswas:I'mstupid.Theworldisn'tfair.

短语和生词

1.beonaschooltripbe+on+sth处于做某事的过程中；-近义短语：onafield

trip,duringaschoolexcursion

-例句：Wewenttothemuseumonaschooltriplastyear.

2.calledhome

-近义短语：phonedhome,contactedhome

-例句：Icalledhometocheckonmyfamily.

3.payphone

-生词：付费电话

-近义词：publicphone,coin-operatedphone

-例句：Heusedapayphonetomakeacallsincehiscellphonedied.

4.Weregretthat...

-近义短语：Wearesorrythat...,Weapologizefor...

-例句：Weregretthatwecannotofferyouaplaceatthistime.

5.qualifiedcandidates

-近义短语：eligibleapplicants,suitablecandidates

-例句：Thereweremanyqualifiedcandidatesfortheposition.

6.safetyschool

-生词［保底学校

-近义短语：backupschool,fallbackoption

-例句：UMasswashersafetyschool,butshestillappliedtoherdream

colleges.

7.digesttherejections

-生词：消化拒绝

-近义短语：processtherejections,cometotermswiththerejections

-例句：Ittookhersometimetodigesttherejectionsfromhertopchoices.

8.madetheschoolteam

-近义短语：gotintotheschoolteam,wasselectedfortheschoolteam

-例句：Hemadetheschoolteamafterseveralroundsoftryouts.

9.majordisappointments

-近义短语：significantsetbacks,bigletdowns

-例句：Hehadneverfacedanymajordisappointmentsinlifeuntilnow.

10.failedatanything

-近义短语：experiencedfailure,fallenshort

-例句：Shehadneverfailedatanythingbefore,sotherejectionwashardto

accept.

11.oneofthe"goodschools"

-近义短语：oneoftheprestigiousschools,oneofthetopuniversities

-例句：Hedreamedofattendingoneofthe"goodschools"hisparentshad

mentioned.

12.partyschool

-生词［以聚会闻名的学校

-近义短语：schoolwithapartyculture,socialschool

-例句：Theuniversityhadareputationasapartyschool,buthewasmore

focusedonacademics.

13.getactive

-近义短语：takeaction,becomeinvolved

-例句：Insteadoffeelingsorryforherself,shedecidedtogetactiveandpursue

otheroptions.

14.firstchoice

-近义短语：topchoice,preferredoption

-例句：Dukewasherfirstchoice,butshedidn'tgetin.

15.takeacake-decoratingcourse

-生词［学习蛋糕装饰课程

-近义短语：enrollinabakingcourse,takeaculinaryclass

-例句：Aftertherejection,shejokedabouttakingacake-decoratingcourse

insteadofgoingtocollege.

16.Theworldisn'tfair

-近义短语：Lifeisn'tfair,Thingsareunfair

-例句：Afterbeingrejected,hebitterlyremarked,nTheworldisn'tfair/

Iremainedbitteruntiloneday,myfathersatmedown.

原因状语,heaskedwhatwastroublingme宾从・Iopenedmyheartto

him,pouringoutmyfrustrationsabouttherejectionsandmyfearsforthefuture定

语.“IalwaysthoughtI'dgetintooneofthegoodschools,Dad宾从.NowIfeellikea

failure,likeI'mnotgoodenough.'1Afterlistening

,myfatherremindedmeofallmyaccomplishments心ecountless

projectsIhadexcelledin,theteamsIhadled,andtheawardsIhadearned红色定

从，黄色并列，形成排比感.Heconcluded

“Iunderstandhowpainfultheserejectionsfeel宾从，buttheyarenotareflectionof

yourworth.Iknowyouhavethestrengthtoovercomethischallenge,andIwillbe

heretosupportyoueverystepoftheway."

分词短语做原因状语,Ibegantoreassessmy

situation.Myfatherhelpedmerealizethatdwellingontherejections非谓语动词

短语做主语wouldonlyhindermefromreachingmyfullpotential.宾从True

successisnotdefinedbyprestige,butbyhowwerespondtolife's

challenges.Shiftingmymindsetfromself-pitytodetermination分词短语做伴随状

,IdecidedtoembracetheopportunitiesattheUniversity

ofMassachusetts,knowingmyjourneywouldbeshapedbymywillingnessto

grow.Witharene、within.,Idivedintomy

studies,joinedcampusorganizations,anddiscoverednewpassionsthatenrichedmy

lifeinways[Ihadneverimagined]定从套定从.Theinitialdisappointment

soon女ooewaytoanticipationandexcitement.Lookin

,Iamforevergratefultomyfather/brhisunwaveringsupportand

wisdom,whichhavebeeninvaluableinshapingtheperson[Iamtoday】定从套定从.

短语和生词

1.remainedbitter

-生词：依然苦涩

-近义短语：stayedresentful,continuedtofeelbitter

-修！I句：Heremainedbitteraboutthesituationforalongtime.

2.satmedown

-近义短语：talkedtomeprivately,hadaseriousconversationwithme

-快！J句：Mymothersatmedowntodiscussmyfutureplans.

3.openedmyheart

-生词：敞开心扉

-近义短语：sharedmyfeelings,confidedin

-例句：Sheopenedherhearttoherbestfriendaboutherstruggles.

4.pouredoutmyfrustrations

-近义短语：ventedmyfrustrations,expressedmyfrustrations

-例句：Hepouredouthisfrustrationsafterthedifficultweekatwork.

5.feellikeafailure

-生词：感觉像个失败者

-近义短语：thinkI'mafailure,believeI'vefailed

-快！]句：Afterlosingthegame,shefeltlikeafailure.

6.listeningattentively

-生词：专心聆听

-近义短语：payingcloseattention,listeningcarefully

-快！I句：Hewaslisteningattentivelytothespeaker'severyword.

7.painfulrejections

-近义短语：hurtfulrejections,difficultrejections

-例句：Thepainfulrejectionsfromuniversitiesmadehimdoubthisabilities.

8.reflectionofyourworth

-生词：你价值的反映

-近义短语：measureofyourvalue,indicationofyourworth

-例句：Thesesetbacksarenotareflectionofyourworthasaperson.

9.overcomethischallenge

-近义短语：getpastthisobstacle,conquerthisdifficulty

-例句：Heknewhehadthestrengthtoovercomethischallenge.

10.supportyoueverystepoftheway

-生词：全程支持你

-近义短语：bewithyouthroughout,helpyouthrougheverything

-例句：Filsupportyoueverystepoftheway,nomatterwhatyoudecide.

11.reassessmysituation

-近义短语：rethinkmyposition,reevaluatemysituation

-例句：Afterspeakingtohisfather,hebegantoreassesshissituation.

12.dwellingontherejections

-生词：纠结于拒绝

-近义短语：focusingontherejections,obsessingovertherejections

-例句：Dwellingontherejectionswon'thelpyoumoveforward.

13.reachingmyfullpotential

-生词：发挥我全部潜能

-近义短语：realizingmyfullpotential,achievingm