Welcome Unit -【同步写作课】高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第一册）

必修第一册WelcomeUnit单元写作指导与演练WriteaStudentProfile单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇学生简介。学生简介是个人简介的一种。内容包括人物的姓名、年龄、经历、特长、爱好等。根据写作的目的，也可以包括来自哪里，自己的愿望以及自己的联系方式等。写作时要要根据文章的要求和要表达的主题，灵活掌握，分清主次，突出重点。常用表达1．Mynameis...2.Iam...yearsold.3．Iliveat.../comefrom...4．Ilike...5．I’minterestedin...6.IwishIcan...7．Ifyou...，getintouchwithmeby...单元话题真题展示高考链接学生简介2023年全国甲卷人物介绍在高考应用文中可以涉及到的话题有：自荐信；推荐信；求职信；人物介绍征文等。Usewhatyouhavelearnttowriteyourownstudentprofile.你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍自己。介绍的内容主要为姓名、年龄、性别、年级，学校，性格，喜欢的课程，学习风格，爱好，未来的计划和梦想等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1.能用合适的词汇和句子介绍自己；2.能正确使用动词的时态；3.尽量使自己的句子多样化；4.能正确使用涉及到人物介绍的专用名词。学习目的：在平时的生活中我们常常需要向别人介绍自己或他人。而根据高考的特点，人物介绍是应用文写作的重点话题之一。当然，人物介绍不仅仅介绍自己，也会涉及到介绍他人。内容表述结构设计name,age,grade,schoolMynameisLiHua,andI’maGrade10studentatYinzhouSeniorSchool.可以将简单信息合并。personalityquietandveryeasy-going...可以根据情况有不同的表述；可以句式拓展。favouritesubjectsChinese...不仅要写出最喜欢的科目，最好用复合句写出喜欢的理由。hobbiescalligraphy...要对爱好进行进一步的说明。futureplansanddreamstobeawriter可以有多种句式。【小试牛刀】MynameisLiHua,andI’maGrade10studentatYinzhouSeniorSchool.I’mquietandveryeasy-going.Iamgettingalongwellwithallmyteachersandfriends.MyfavouritesubjectisChinese,becauseIfindChinesecharactersfascinating,andIlovetowritethecharactersusingcalligraphy.Infact,Ispendalotofmyfreetimepractisingit.WhenI’mnotstudyingorpractisingcalligraphy,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Iwishtobeawriterinthefuture.精彩妙词外表性格兴趣爱好tall高大的short矮小的slender苗条的muscular肌肉发达的lean苗条的petite娇小的heavyset魁梧的well-built结实的athletic健壮的elegant优雅的graceful优美的delicate纤巧的fair-skinned白皙的tanned晒黑的olive-skinned橄榄色肤色的pale苍白的rosy-cheeked脸颊红润的sun-kissed受阳光照射的wrinkled有皱纹的youthful年轻的weathered经风雨洗礼的bald秃头的thick-haired浓密的friendly友好的outgoing外向的introverted内向的confident自信的humble谦逊的arrogant傲慢的optimistic乐观的pessimistic悲观的ambitious有抱负的lazy懒惰的energetic精力充沛的creative有创造力的analytical善于分析的impulsive冲动的patient耐心的impatient不耐烦的caring关心他人的selfish自私的generous慷慨的stingy吝啬的honest诚实的dishonest不诚实的reliable可靠的reading阅读painting绘画playingmusicalinstruments弹奏乐器singing唱歌dancing跳舞cooking烹饪baking烘焙gardening园艺photography摄影hiking徒步旅行cycling骑自行车swimming游泳jogging慢跑playingsports打运动playingvideogames玩电子游戏collectingstamps收集邮票collectingcoins收集硬币birdwatching观鸟diycrafts手工艺sewing缝纫knitting针织woodworking木工wavy-haired卷发的straight-haired直发的curly-haired卷发的frizzy-haired卷曲多毛的balding发际线后退的crew-cut平头发型的ponytailed扎马尾辫的well-groomed打扮得体的messy凌乱的neat整洁的scruffy不整洁的clean-shaven未留胡须的bearded有胡须的mustached有小胡子的unreliable不可靠的compassionate有同情心的cold-hearted冷酷无情的empathetic有共鸣的stubborn固执的flexible灵活的determined决心的indecisive优柔寡断的adventurous喜欢冒险的cautious谨慎的carefree无忧无虑的anxious焦虑的confident有自信的insecure不安全的easygoing随和的serious严肃的playful爱玩耍的writing写作traveling旅行camping露营fishing钓鱼playingboardgames玩桌游playingchess下棋playingcardgames玩纸牌游戏yoga瑜伽meditation冥想playingpuzzles玩解谜游戏astronomy天文学modelbuilding模型制作playingwithpets和宠物玩耍listeningtomusic听音乐watchingmovies看电影gardening园艺calligraphy书法rockclimbing攀岩经典靓句Hewasborninapoorfamily.他出生于一个贫穷的家庭。Theanimalsbecomehisdevotedaudience.这些动物成了他忠实的听众。Heisreadytohelpthose(whoare)introuble.他乐于帮助那些处于困境的人。Hehasturnedtomanyfamouspeopleforadvice.他向很多名人请教,征求建议。Hereceivedalmostnoschooleducationatall.他几乎没有接受一点儿学校教育。Hehasdevotedhimselfto/hasbeendevotedtomusic.他全身心地投入到音乐中。I’measy-goingandgetalongwellwithpeoplearoundme.我很随和，和周围的人相处得很好。Helovesanimals,suchasthehensandgeeseinhiscourtyard.他喜爱动物,比如,他院子里的鸡和鹅。ImakethebestofthetimeavailabletospeakEnglishandIcanspeakitfluently.我会充分利用可用的时间说英语，而且我能说得很流利。One-yearexperienceofstudyingabroadmakesmeanexcellentEnglishspeaker.一年的留学经历使我的英语口语很好。Iusedtobeavolunteerandlookedaftertheoldpeopleinanursinghomeonweekends.我曾经是一名志愿者，周末在疗养院照顾老人。IbelievemyexperienceandfluentoralEnglishwillbeagreathelpformeindoingtheworkwell.我相信我的经验和流利的英语口语将对我做好这项工作有很大帮助。IamgoodinspokenEnglishandIhaveconfidencetocommunicatewiththeaudiencewellinEnglish.我的英语口语很好，我有信心用英语与观众进行良好的沟通。IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandgetonwellwithkids,whichwillenablemetobeaqualifiedteacher.我英语很好，和孩子们相处得很好，这将使我成为一名合格的老师。Asapersonthatisgoodatcommunication,IgraduallysetupasocialcircleinwhichIhavegroupsoffriends.作为一个善于沟通的人，我逐渐建立了一个社交圈，在这个圈子里我有一群朋友。AsaconfidentandhumorousstudentwithagiftforEnglish,IcanspeakEnglishfluentlyandgetalongwellwithothers.作为一个自信、幽默、有英语天赋的学生，我能说一口流利的英语，与他人相处融洽。Inaddition,myoutstandingcommunicationskillsandstrongsenseofresponsibilitywillenablemecompetentforforthisjob.此外，我出色的沟通能力和强烈的责任感将使我能够胜任这份工作。AsanseniormarketingmajorinFudanUniversity,IhavenotonlyachievedexcellentacademicperformancewithGPA4.5(outof5)andCET-6580(outof600),butalsohadrichinternshipexperienceasanassistantofmarketingmanagerinsomebigfamouscompaniessuchasIBMandDell.作为复旦大学市场营销专业的一名大四学生，我不仅取得了GPA4.5（满分5分）和CET-6580（满分600分）的优异成绩，而且在IBM、Dell等知名大公司担任营销经理助理有着丰富的实习经验。假如你叫李华，正在向英国剑桥大学(CambridgeUniversity)提出入学申请。在校方需要的相关材料中，你要准备一份个人简历。现在，请你根据下表信息，写一份个人简历。姓名李华年龄17性别男国籍中国住址浙江省宁波市中山大街6号电话号码0574－88165888电子邮箱LiHua1388@163.com个人简介1.在宁波第一中学读书；2.性格外向，对新事物很好奇，喜欢探索大自然；3.思考将来的发展，想成为一名设计师；4.为提高英语水平，想到剑桥大学学习。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头已给出，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题1．文体：记叙文。2．时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3．人称：由于是个人简历，所以人称应该以第一人称为主。谋篇第一段：基本情况介绍，包括姓名、性别、住址等。第二段：介绍自己的特长、阅历等。第三段：告诉别人自己的联系方式。遣词造句【核心词汇】1．高中生aseniorhighschoolstudent2．性格坚强haveastrongcharacter3.充满好奇心becuriousabouteverything4．探索大自然explorenature5．与……联系getintouchwith6．盼望lookforwardto【连词成句】1．我是个外向的男孩，性格坚强。(主系表结构＋and＋主谓宾结构)I’manoutgoingboyandIhaveastrongcharacter.2．我想成为一名设计师。我想到欧洲去学习设计。Iwanttobeadesigner.IwanttostudyinEurope.3．为了实现我的梦想，如果可能的话，我想到剑桥大学学习。(inordertodo...；if引导的条件状语从句)Inordertorealizemydream,IwouldliketostudyinCambridgeUniversityifitispossible.【句式升级】1．用含有with的介词词组改写句1。I’manoutgoingboywithastrongcharacter.2．将两个句子合并。Iwanttobeadesigner，soIwanttostudydesigninginEurope.3．用省略形式改写句3。Inordertorealizemydream,IwouldliketostudyinCambridgeUniversityifpossible.组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。MynameisLiHua，aseniorhighschoolstudentof17.Iliveat16ZhongshanStreet，Ningbo，China.I’manoutgoingboywithastrongpersonality.IlikeexploringnatureandIamalsoamemberoftheHikingExpeditionteamofourschool.Iwanttobeadesigner，soIwanttostudydesigninginEurope.Inordertorealizemydream,IwouldliketostudyinCambridgeUniversityifpossible.IfyouthinkIcangetthechance，pleasegetintouchwithmebygivingmeaphonecall(0574－88165888)orsendingane­mailtoLiHua1388@163.com.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.1.假设你叫李华，看到网上有一个针对高中生暑期的夏令营，你想报名参加。请你写一份邮件，报名参加这个夏令营。内容包括：你对夏令营对认识。你的自我介绍。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】IamLihua,aChinesestudent.Impressedbyyouradvertisementpostedontheinternet,Iamwritingtoapplytoparticipateinit.Thissummercampwhichaimstohelphighschoolstudentsdeveloptheirinterpersonalskillsandtheindependentlivingabilityissuretobenefittheapplicants.AsaconfidentandhumorousstudentwithagiftforEnglish,IcanspeakEnglishfluentlyandgetalongwellwithothers.Moreover,takingpartinthiscampcanalsobeaneffectivewayformetointroduceChineseculturetostudentsallovertheworld.Ican’tputmygratitudeinwordsifyoucantakemeintoconsideration.Thankyou!Lookingforwardtoyourearliestrely!YoursLiHua2.你校学生会准备办一期主题为“GreatWomen”的英语墙报。请你根据所给提示，写一篇英语短文介绍美国著名女作家海伦·凯勒(HelenKeller)。简况1880年出生于美国，1968年去世主要经历19个月因病丧失视力、听力及语言能力；7岁时在老师AnneSullivan的帮助下学会了读、写和讲话；24岁时以优异成绩毕业于Radcliffe学院。主要成就著作有TheStoryofMyLife等；倾注毕生精力为全世界的盲人和聋哑人服务。注意：1．词数80左右。2．参考词汇：thedeafmute聋哑人________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】HelenKeller,whowasbornin1880anddiedin1968,wasoneofthemostwell-knownAmericanwomenwriters.Itwasapityofherthatanillnesstookawayherabilitytohear,seeandtalkat19months.Whenshewas7,AnneSullivancametoteachhertoread,writeandtalk.HelengraduatedfromRadcliffeCollegewithhonorswhenshewas17.HelenwrotesomeexcellentbookslikeTheStoryofMyLife.Duringherlife,shedevotedherselftoworkingfortheblindandthedeafmute.Herstoryencouragesmanypeopletofacedifficultybravely.3.你校英文报将推出“GreatPeople"专栏，现面向全校学生征文。请你用英语写一篇短文介绍中国近代伟大的民主革命先行者——孙中山(SunYat-sen)先生。1866年出生，1925年去世年轻时从医，后因不满清政府，于1905年联合(unite)其它党派奋起反抗；武昌起义(WuchangUprising)后建立中华民国，于1912年任第一位总统；不久后辞职，致力于推行三民主义。注意：词数80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】SunYat-sen,whowasbornin1866anddiedin1925,wasconsideredasanoutstandingChinesepoliticalleader.Inhisyouth,hegaveupmedicineanddevotedhistimetoopposingtheQinggovernment.Heunitedmanypoliticalpartiesin1905andcametopowerin1912afterthefamousWuchangUprising.However,beforelong,hechosetoresignasthePresidentoftheChineseRepublicanddevotedhimselftohisthreeprinciples.SunYat-senmadegreatachievementsinliberatingtheChinesepeopleandwillliveoninourmindsandheartsforever.4.学校计划举行一次英语作文比赛，主题是“TheGreatPersonIAdmireMost”。请选择一位你最崇敬的伟大人物(艺术家、音乐家、文学家等)，写一篇英语作文，需包含以下信息：1.对该人物进行简单介绍；2.喜欢该人物的理由；3.从该人物身上得到的启示。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Everyonehashisorhermodeltolearnfrom.TodayI’dliketointroduceHelenKeller,anordinarybutgreatwomanIadmiremost.Shelosthersightwhenshewasthreeinanaccident.Butsheovercamealotofunimaginabledifficultiestolearnlanguages,andeventuallyshemastered8differentlanguagesandfinishedherbookThreeDaystoSee.IadmireHelenKellerforheroptimismandperseverance.Disabledasshewas,shedidn’tlosehopeforlife.Instead,shewaseagertolearn.Despiteallthedifficulties,shedidn’tgiveuphalfway.Thebookshewroteisthebestproofofherunrelentingefforts.ThestoryofHelenKellerhasagreatinfluenceonme.WheneverIwanttoquit,theimageofHelenKellerwillflashintomymind.Iseemtohearhersaying,“Alittlemoreeffort,andyouwillachieveyourgoal.”Inspiredbyher,Icometorealizethemeaningofthesaying“Nothingisimpossibleforapersonwithperseverance”.5.你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请你以“最难忘的老师”为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.人物介绍；2.难忘的原因。注意：写作词数应为80左右。ThemostunforgettableteacherTherearemanyunforgettablepeoplearoundus.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】ThemostunforgettableteacherTherearemanyunforgettablepeoplearoundus.ButformethemostunforgettableoneismyEnglishteacher,Mr.Liu.Whatimpressedmemostishisgreatqualities.Hehasgivenusthegreatestgiftagoodteacheroffers—anawakeningofapassionforlearning.HehasledustothebeautyoftheEnglishlanguage.Furthermore,Ihavebeenattractedbyhislivelywit.Irememberthatwestudentsalwaysanticipatedhisclasswithgreateagernessbecausehislecturesarehumorouslydelivered.AlthoughitisnearlyfiveyearssinceIattendedhislastclass,heisthetalkofourclassmates,andhewillstayinmyheartforever.【链接高考—经典诵读】（2023高考全国甲卷）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物简介及事迹；2.意义或启示。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏1】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’s