2025年英语四级写作高分技巧与实践训练

英语四级作文练习

一.记录图表作文描写常用句型及词汇：

l.Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram-,•

2.Thechart/graph/table/diagramshowsthat…

Asisshownin-*-;Accordingto',-;Ascanbeseenin-*-

3.Thischart/graph/table/diagramshowsagreat/sharp/sudden/slow/

rapid--"increase/drop...

4.Tomakeageneralization;onthewhole;inshort;inaword;in

summary;Tosumup;Asaresult;Asaconsequence;ingeneral/

generallyspeaking

5.表达增长、上升的词汇

动词：increase,rise,climb,goup,soar,skyrocket,

副词：sharply,remarkably,obviously,significantly,gradually,slowly

6.表达下降、减少的词汇decrease,drop,fall,godown,decline

7.表达持续不变的词汇leveloff;remainsteady/unchanged

8.表达倍数的词汇

double;triplethenumberof/thepercentageof;four/fivetimes

9.表达多少的词汇：alittle/much/alotmore/lessthan---,over---

二.英语四级作文类型

（一）记录图表型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowrite

acompositionbasedonthechartgivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

近五年留学人员回国人数一览

27.29

28s年2009«2010零20120n隼

万人新华社

参照范文

ThepastyearshavewitnessedamountingnumberofChinesescholars

returningfromoverseas.Asislivelyillustratedbythecolumnchart,

thenumberofreturneesclimbedfromamere69.3thousandintoover272.9

thousandin,atanannualincreaserateofaround50%.

Amultitudeoffactorsmayhaveledtothetendencyrevealedbythe

chart,butthefollowingarethecriticalonesfrommyperspective.First

andforemost,alongwiththedevelopmentofChineseeconomyandsociety,

thenumberofChinesestudyingabroadhasbeensoaringinthepastyears,

whichhasprovidedanexpandingbaseforthenumberofreturnees.Inthe

secondplace,thegovernmenthasenactedaseriesofpreferentialpolicies

toattractoverseasChinesescholarsbackhome.Lastbutnotleast,the

boomingeconomy,scienceandtechnologyinthiscountryhavegenerated

moreattractivejobopportunitiesforscholarsreturningfromoverseas.

Thewavesofreturneeswilldefinitelycontributetothisnation's

development,sincetheyhavebroughtbacknotonlyadvancedscienceand

technologybutalsopioneeringconceptsofeducationandmanagement.With

morescholarscomingbackfromoverseas,andwiththeconcertedefforts

ofthewholenation,wehavereasonstoexpectafasterrejuvenationof

thiscountry.

（二）图片评论式作文（图画作文）

对于图画作文，基本可以认为是我们小课时练习的“看图说话”。虽然题目不会给出提

纲，不过一般基本的写作思绪是固定的：描述图片、阐明观点、给出提议。

第一段，重点描述图画内容。这点在题干中也有强调（withabriefdescriptionofthe

picture）o对图画内容的描述可以饮用图画中人物的对话。简要描述即可，不用发散或挖

掘。也就意味着，实际上你若看不懂图画中的“核废物”之，其实没关系，也可以照抄。

第二段，阐明观点。而观点在题干中实际上给得很清晰：theimportanceofdoingsmall

thingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.这深入阐明仔细审清题干比看懂图画中的对

话更重要。阐明观点之后的思绪与一般的六级英语作文提纲型写作一致，如我们一般在课上

所提的，可以先举例阐明现象、然后再探讨导致现象的原因以及该现象也许导致的影响等；

还可结合数字、研究、名言等进行论证。

末段，除了总结观点外，一般还可以提出提议。这段的写法无论是图画、图表还是提

纲写作、甚至格言谚语型写作，都差异不大。

这阐明四、六级的出题思绪不再拘泥于老式的提纲写作，开始进行多种变化。我们也要

对对应的考法做好准备。

但无论哪种考法，最关键的仍然是：仔细审题、清晰思绪、不要出错。四级一贯会在写

作题干中包括重要信息甚至观点，因此审题必不可少；多种考法的文章展开方式、各段写法

有类似之处，我们要学会融会贯穿，以及文章只要没有犯语言错误，即便遣词造句不那么漂

亮，分数也不会低。

比起图表作文来，图画作文要更灵活，更富于变化。我们一定要多练习，以到达一看

到图画（含图中和图边文字）和提纲（有时有文章标题）就能有效地审题解题，构造出合

理的详细段落的目的。

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashort

essay.Youressayshouldstartwithabriefdescriptionofthepicture.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

PEOPLENOWADAYS

Thisisasatiricbuttrue—to—lifedrawing.Aswecanseeinit,a

manisdrowning,withonlyonearmabovewatergesturingforhelp.Those

standingonthebank,

however,insteadoflendingahelpinghand,arebusyphotographingwith

theirmobilephones,mostpossiblytakingthesceneasanother

eyeball-attractorontheInternet.

Exaggeratingasitmightbe,thephenomenonmirroredbythecartoon

isnotuncommoninmodernsociety.Actually,boththepictureand

instancesinreallifepointtothefactthatmanypeoplenowadaysignore

whattheyshoulddoduetotheuseofmobilephonesandtheInternet.It

nevertooraretoseesomepeopletakingpicturesofnewlyserveddishes

inarestaurantanduploadthemtotheirfriendcircleinWeChat.Nor

isittofindpeoplebusytakingphotosandupdatetheirmicroblogswhen

touring.Someevenfailtotakeproperactionsincaseofemergency,just

asthecrowdinthepicturedo.Theironlygoalseemstobeattracting

asmuchattentiononlineaspossible.

Suchbeingthecase,itishightimethatweponderedovertheproblem

andfiguredoutasolution.Amongallmeasures,Ibelieve,thecentral

oneshouldberesistingthetemptationofvanitybroughtalongbysuch

modernself-mediaasmicroblog,andcomingmorebacktolifeitself.

（三）提纲式作文

1.对立观点式

A.有人认为X是好事，赞成X,为何？

B.有人认为X是坏事，反对X,为何？

C.我的见解。

SomepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofdoingX.Theypointoutthefactthat

支持X的第一种原因。Theyalsoarguethat支持X的另一种原因。

However,otherpeoplestandonadifferentground.Theyconsideritharmfulto

doX.Theyfirmlypointoutthat反对X的第——种理由。Anexamplecangivethedetails

ofthisargument:一种例子。

Thereissometruthinbotharguments.ButIthinktheadvantagesofXoverweigh

thedisadvantages.Inadditiontotheabove-mentionednegativeeffectsitmight

bringabout,XalsomayX的有一种害处。

2.批驳观点式

A.一种错误观点。

B.我不一样意。

Manypeoplearguethat错误观点。Bysayingthat,theymean对这个观点的深入

解释。Anexampletheyhavepresentedisthat——种例子。（Accordingtoasurvey

performedbyXonagroupofY,almost80%ofthem赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个

错误观点的影响）。

Theremightbesomeelementoftruthinthesepeople,sbelief.Butifweconsider

itindepth,wewillfeelnoreservationtoconcludethat与错误观点相反的观点。

Thereareanumberofreasonsbehindmybelief.（如下参照辩论文的议论文写法）。

3.社会问题（现象）式

A.一种社会问题或者现象。

B.产生的原因

C.对社会和我们生活的影响

D.怎样杜绝。（假如是问题的话）

E.前景的预测。

Nowadays,thereexistsanincreasinglyserioussocial/economic/environmental

problem.（Xhasincreasinglybecomeacommonconcernofthepublic）.Accordingto

asurvey,调查内容阐明这种现象的状况（或者是一种例子）。

Thereareacoupleofreasonsboomingthisproblem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论

式议论文的写法。

Xhascausedsubstantialimpactonthesocietyandourdailylife,whichhas

beenarticulated（体现）inthefollowingaspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法。

AdozenofmeasuresaresupposedtotaketopreventXfrombringingusmoreharm.

参照辩论式议论文的写法。

Basedontheabovediscussions,Icaneasilyforecastthatmoreandmorepeople

will......

（四）对立观点型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositionofatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200wordsaccording

tothefollowinginformation:

Currently,anumberofschoolsallowstudentstogradetheirteachers

andevendecideiftheteacherscanteachonornot.Thishasgivenrise

toaheateddebate,withsomeapprovingofthepraticeandothersstrongly

opposedtoit.Nowdiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.

（五）观点认同型

Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteashort

essayentitledMyViewonPlasticSurgery.Inyouressayyoushouldclearly

stateyourviewandsupportyourviewwithappropriatereasonsorexamples.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

（六）处理问题型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashort

essayentitledCollegeStudentsPlayingTruant.Inyouressayyourshould

probeintothecausesofandthesolutiontotheproblem.Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

（七）名言警句型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritea

compositiononthetopicACurseCanBeaBlessinginDisguise.Youshould

writeatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

（八）书信型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealetter

ofcomplaintaccordingtothefollowingsituation:Youboughtanair

conditionerinSunApplianceandhaditinstalledtheotherday,butyou

foundthatthefanmadetoomuchnoisewhenthemachineoperated.You

demandthestoretosendarepresentativetocheckitup.

Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Do

notsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead.You

donotneedtowritetheaddress.

（九）读后感型

Directions:ReadthestoryinChinesebelow,andthenwritea

compositionunderthetitleof“TheGoalofLife”.Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsbutnomorethan200words.Yourcompositionshouldbebased

onthestoryandthefollowingoutline.

1）Whathaveyoulearnedfromthestory?

2）ffhatisthegoalofyourlife?Ifyouhaveachievedthegoalofyour

life,whatwouldyoudo?

目标

在英国有一位残疾青年，他双腿走起路来很困难，却凭着坚强的信念和毅力

发明了一次又一次的壮举：他19岁时登上了世界最高峰珠穆朗玛峰;21岁时登上

了阿尔卑斯山；22岁时登上了乞力马扎罗山，28岁前他登上了世界上所有著名的

高山。然而，就在28岁这一年他自杀了。本来在他11岁时，他父母在攀登乞力马

扎罗山时不幸遭遇雪崩双双遇难。他的父母临行前给他留下了遗嘱，但愿他能象

父母同样，登上世界上所有著名的高山。这位残疾青年把父母的遗嘱作为他人生

奋斗的目的，当实现所有目的的时候，他感到前所未有的无奈和绝望。他留下遗

言：“如今，功成名就的我感到无事可做了，我没有了新的目的……”

（十）给主题句型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowrite

acompositionaboutGOODMANNERSin3paragraphs.Youaregiventhefirst

sentenceofeachparagraphandarerequiredtodevelopitsideasin

completingtheparagraph.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomore

than200words.

1.Goodmannersmeangoodbehaviorinsocialintercourse.

2.Aselfishmancanneverpossessgoodmanners.

3.Thenhowtolearngoodmanners?

（十一）其他类型

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowrite

acompositionofatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200wordsonthetopic

^VolunteeringActivities“andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline

below:

1.越来越多的人从事志愿者工作

2.志愿者工作的意义和/或存在的问题

3.我个人的经历或打算

参照范文

（一）图表型

ThepastyearshavewitnessedamountingnumberofChinesescholars

returningfromoverseas.Asislivelyillustratedbythecolumnchart,

thenumberofreturneesclimbedfromamere69.3thousandintoover272.9

thousandin,atanannualincreaserateof

Amultitudeoffactorsmayhaveledtothetendencyrevealedbythechart,

butthefollowingarethecriticalonesfrommyperspective.Firstand

foremost,alongwiththedevelopmentofChineseeconomyandsociety,the

numberofChinesestudyingabroadhasbeensoaringinthepastyears,which

hasprovidedanexpandingbaseforthenumberofreturnees.Inthesecond

place,thegovernmenthasenactedaseriesofpreferentialpoliciesto

attractoverseasChinesescholarsbackhome.Lastbutnotleast,the

boomingeconomy,scienceandtechnologyinthiscountryhavegenerated

moreattractivejobopportunitesforscholarsreturningfromoverseas.

Thewavesofreturneeswilldefinitelycontributetothisnation's

development,sincetheyhavebroughtbacknotonlyadvancedscienceand

technologybutalsopioneeringconceptsofeducationandmanagement.With

morescholarscomingbackfromoverseas,andwiththeconcertedefforts

ofthewholenation,wehavereasonstoexpectafasterrejuvenationof

thiscountry.

（二）图画型

Thisisasatiricbuttrue—to—lifedrawing.Aswecanseeinit,a

manisdrowning,withonlyonearmabovewatergesturingforhelp.Those

standingonthebank,however,insteadoflendingahelpinghand,arebusy

photographingwiththeirmobilephones,mostpossiblytakingthescene

asanothereyeball-attractorontheInternet.

Exaggeratingasitmightbe,thephenomenonmirroredbythecartoon

isnotuncommoninmodernsociety.Actually,boththepictureand

instancesinreallifepointtothefactthatmanypeoplenowadaysignore

whattheyshoulddoduetotheuseofmobilephonesandtheInternet.It

nevertooraretoseesomepeopletakingpicturesofnewlyserveddishes

inarestaurantanduploadthemtotheirfriendcircleinWeChat.Nor

isittofindpeoplebusytakingphotosandupdatetheirmicroblogswhen

touring.Someevenfailtotakeproperactionsincaseofemergency,just

asthecrowdinthepicturedo.Theironlygoalseemstobeattracting

asmuchattentiononlineaspossible.

Suchbeingthecase,itishightimethatweponderedovertheproblem

andfiguredoutasolution.Amongallmeasures,Ibelieve,thecentral

oneshouldberesistingthetemptationofvanitybroughtalongbysuch

modernself-mediaasmicroblog,andcomingmorebacktolifeitself.

（三）对立观点型

IsItUptoStudentstoEvaluateTeachers?

Thepastfewyearshavewitnessedamountingnumberofuniversities

allowingstudentstoevaluatetheirteachersandevendecideiftheycan

stayontheirpositionsornot.Tothispractice,people'sattitudes

differconsiderably.Someapplauditwarmlywhereasotherscriticizeand

evencondemnitharshly.

Proponentsofthepracticemaylistthefollowingreasons.Inthe

firstplace,theyassertthatstudentsarethepeoplewhoknowthemost

clearlyabouttheteachingperformanceofateacher,sotheyshouldhave

thesayinevaluatinghimorher.Inthesecondplace,theycontendthat

studentshavepaidfortheireducation,sotheyhavetherighttodecide

whichteachershouldbeemployed.

Opponents,however,pointoutthatitisdangeroustoleavetherightto

studentstoevaluateteachers.Foronething,studentsmaynotknowwhat

oughttobetaughtandhowitshouldbetaught;theymayonlyjudgea

teacheraccordingtohistemperandevenaccentorappearance.Foranother,

inordertopleasestudents,someteachersmayresorttosomeimproper

means.

Personally,Ibelievethatbothviewsarejustifiable,andweshould

achieveabalancebetweenthembyemployingtheevaluatingapproachin

areasonableandbeneficialway.Tobespecific,studentsshouldbe

allowedtoevaluatetheirteachers,buttheymaynotbetheonly

decision-makerintheteachersfate.

(或Personally,Ithinkthatbothsideshavesomethingright.Actually,

lotterygamesshouldbeviewedasatwo-edgedsword,whichpresentsus

withbothbenefitsandtroubles.Butweshouldnotgiveupeatingforfear

ofchoking.Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,istomaximizetheiradvantages

andeliminatetheirunhealthyside-effects.Orinotherwords,weshould

furtherdeveloplotterygamesandexertpropersupervisionoverthemso

thattheycanbenefitusinabetterway.)

(四)观点认同型

MyViewonPlasticSurgery

Thepastfewyearshavewitnessedamountingnumberofpeople

undergoingplasticsurgery.Tothispractice,people'sattitudesdiffer

considerably.Someapplauditwarmlywhereasotherscriticizeandeven

condemnitharshly.Personally,Iamopposedtoplasticsurgery,andI

basemypositiononthefollowingreasons.

Inthefirstplace,Ideemthatphysicalappearancesarealwaysof

lessgreatimportancethaninnerbeautyandpracticalability.Inthe

secondplace,Iamdefinitelyopposedtotheconceptthatthereisan

establishednormofbeauty.Instead,Iholdthatbeauty,eveninthe

physicalsense,manifestsitselfinvariedways.Lastbutnotleast,as

iswellknown,plasticsurgerycanbeverydangerous,resultinginsome

irreversibleinjuries.

Indeed,therearesomeindividualswhohaveachievedsuccessintheir

careerorlifewiththehelpofplasticsurgery,butitmustbepointed

outthattheybelongtotheabsoluteminorityandthattheirsuccess

dependsfarmorethantheirimprovedphysicalappearance.

Takingintoconsiderationalltheabove-mentioned,wemaysafelycome

totheconclusionthatplasticsurgeryisdefinitelyunnecessaryfor

normalpeople.Weshouldfocusmoreonourinnerworldandtrytoattract

otherswithourpersonalityandintelligence.

（五）处理问题型

CollegeStudentsPlayingTruant

Thepastfewyearshavewitnessedamountingnumberofcollege

studentsplayingtruant.Takingalookaround,onecanfindexamplestoo

manytoenumerate.Sometimes,evenlessthanhalfofthestudentsina

classattendthelecture..

Anumberoffactorsmayberesponsibleforthisphenomenon.Personally,

upwiththefollowingones.Inthefirstplace,thereexistfaultswith

thearrangementofcurriculum.Inotherwords,somecoursesareirrelevant,

orfarbeyondorbelowstudents.Inthesecondplace,someteachersare

responsibleforthephenomenon.Theirteachingisfarfromattractiveor

efficient.Lastly,thereexistreasonsonthepartofstudents,manyof

whomhavebecomerestlessundertheinfluenceofsomesocialtrends.Ican

comeThisphenomenonisdefinitelyunhealthyandrequiresremedying.

Naturally,measuresshouldbetakeninthethreeaspectsmentionedabove.

Foronething,itisimperativethattheschoolperfectitsarrangement

ofcourses.Foranother,teachersshouldbeconstantlyurgedtoimprove

theirwork.Lastbutnotleast,studentsshouldbewarnedagainstsome

vicioustrendsinsocietyandconcentrateontheirstudy.Onlywiththese

measurestakencanweexpectasolutionoftheproblem.

（六）名言警句型

ACurseCanBeaBlessinginDisguise

Afamoussayinggoesthat“Acursecanbeablessingindisguise”.

Simpleasthesayingis,itsmeaningisprofoundandthought-provoking.

Evidently,itismeanttotellusthatunfavorableconditionscanoneday

provetobefavorableonesantthatweshouldnotbeindulgedindepression

afterwehavemetsetbacks.

Actually,historyaboundswithexamplestoprovethissaying.Taking

alookaround,wecanalsofindexamplestoomanytoenumerate.HereI

canthinkofnobetterillustrationoftheproverbthantheexperience

ofmyown.Thoughperformingwellenoughinthecollegeentranceexam,

Iwasonlyprovidedwiththeopportunitytoenrollinasecond-class

university.However,Ididnotlosemyheart.Instead,Ifoundthe

remotenessandquietnessofthecampusafavorableconditionformystudy.

IntermsofEnglish,IhavepassedCET-4withahighscore.NowIbelieve

IcandothesamewithmyCET-6.

Bringingwhathasbeendiscussedintoaconclusion,wemaysaythat

acursecanalsoturnintoablessing.So,oneshouldnotindulgehimself

inbitternessandcomplaintafterhemeetssetbacks.Whathereallyhas

todoistoseekopportunitiesandturnadversitiesintofavorable

conditions.Inaword,weshouldtrulyunderstandtheprofoundmeaning

oftheproverbandtaketherightactionsinourlifeand

workinthefuture.

(七)书信型

December14th,

DearSirorMadam,

I'mwritingtolodgethecomplaintaboutthepoorqualityofanair

conditionerthatIpurchasedfromSunApplianceCompany.

Franklyspeaking,SunAppliancehasalwaysbeenmyfavorite.On

December4th,,Iboughttheairconditioner(serialnumber12345)from

oneofyourchainstores.Themachineoperatedwellatfirst,buttendays

later,therewasafaultthatbotheredme,thatis,thefanmadesomuch

noisethatIcouldnotsleepwellatnight.Worsestill,theheatingsystem

didn'tworkwellandthemachinebegantoleakrecently.Itspoorquality

ruinedalmostallmypreviousimpressiontowardyourproducts.

Istronglysuggestthatarepairmanshouldbesenttomyhomewithout

delay.Iwonderifyoucouldfindouttheexactcauseoftheproblemas

soonaspossible.Ifyoucan't,IamafraidthatIwillrequestforfull

amountofrefundoranewairconditioner.

Iwouldappreciateallyourassistanceinthismatter.Ifyouhave

anyquestions,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme.Lookforwardtoyour

reply.

YoursSincerely,

LiMing

（八）读后感型

TheGoalofLife

Astorygoesthatadisabledyoungmanmanagedtoreachthepeakof

everyfamoushighmountainintheworldbeforehewas28.Hedidallthis

justashisparentstoldhimtodointheirwill.Buttheyoungman

committedsuicideintheendandhislastwordswere:"nowIhavenothing

todowithallmygoalsachievedandmyfamewellestablished.Ihaveno

newgoals.”

Simpleasthedrawingis,themessageitconveysisprofoundand

far-reaching.Evidently,itismeanttorevealthefactthat,first,one

shouldhaveagrandidealandassociateitwiththeneedsofsociety,and

secondly,oneshouldhavehisownpursuitsandshouldnotfollowothers

blindly.

Thestoryisespeciallyinstructivewhenwethinkofsimilar

happeningsaroundus.Somepeople,aftermakingafortune,feelemptyand

peopledothesamebecausetheyareinlackofloftyidealsandareonly

driftingwiththetide.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwouldliketodevotemyselftoanycause

thatisbeneficialtomankind.Myshort-termgoalistolearnabout

environmentalprotectionandfindajobinthisfield.AndIbelievethis

isameaningfulandusefulcareer.Itisworthmylife-longefforts.I

willkeepfindingandattainingnewgoalsinthisfield.

（九）给主题句型

GoodManners

Goodmannersmeangoodbehaviorinsocialintercourse.Forpeopleto

liveinharmony,thereshouldbesomecommonrulestoobeyinsociety.

Good-manneredindividualspayadequaterespectfortheserules.For

instance,theywouldnotsmokeortalktooloudlywhileeatingina

restaurant;norw