中考英语解题技巧模板专题08 应用文之安慰信祝贺信开放性作文（写作答题模板）（解析版）

专题08应用文之安慰信，祝贺信，开放性作文题型概述｜模板构建｜真题试炼本节导航本节导航模板01安慰信模板02祝贺信模板03开放性作文识识中考·题型解读书面表达是中考的必考题型,它应符合以下要求。1.中心明确2.连续流畅3.语言得体(1)写作时应尽量避免使用冗长、复杂、易犯错误的句子,用简洁、精练的语句表达,做到言简意赅。(2)写作前把要表达的内容整理归纳,理清思路,做到条理分明,要点齐全,切忌逐词逐句按汉语方式翻译,生编硬造。(3)能清楚表达文章内容的前提下,尽量措辞,不时出现“闪光点”,这将为你的文章增光添彩。高分要求1.写出全部内容要点；2.语句流畅；基本无语法和词汇方面的错误，少数错误主要是由于较高级词汇或复杂结构所致；

3.词数达到要求；基本无单词拼写及标点错误。善善总结·模板构建答｜题｜步｜骤第一步：审题，列提纲第二步：1.根据提纲撰写文章2.检查文章，改正错误第三步：全文抄写于答题卡，不出现涂改。模｜板｜构｜建模板模板01安慰信Dear收信人，Ilearnedthat(写明来信原因)(对此事看法).Firstly,(安慰理由一).Secondly,(安慰理由二).Youalsoneed(提出建议).Youshould,and(具体做法)Ihopeyou(祝愿与期待).Yours,写信人参考词句单词upset沮丧的；view观点，看法；shame令人惋惜的事；shot射门；understanding;practise练习短语becauseof因为；wouldliketodosth.想做某事；sharewithsb.和某人分享；blameoneself责备自己；such….that…如此..….以至于.….；bebeatenby被..打败；tryone'sbest尽某人最大努力；feelsorryfordoing为做...感到抱歉；keepdoingsth.继续做某事；invite.to..邀请..去...；getwellpreparedfor为...作好准备句型There'snopointdoing.…做...是没有意义的。Firstly,.,secondly,.首先...，其次...『典型例题』假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：1.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不得出现真实的人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.LiHua【高分范文】DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.HereI'dliketosharewithyoumyviewsonthisgame.There'snopointblamingyourself.Firstly,ClassTwoissuchatopteamthatit'snotashametobebeatenbythem.Secondly,yougotthirtypointsthoughyoumissedthelastshot.Youtriedyourbest.Youalsoneedtheunderstandingofyourteammates.Youshouldtellyourteammatesyoufeelsorryforlosingthelastshot,andthatyouwillkeeppractisinghard.Ifpossible,invitethemtodinner.Ihopeyouwillsmileagain,andgetwellpreparedforthenextgame.Yours,LiHua参考译文亲爱的亨利:我知道你因为篮球比赛输了而感到难过和沮丧。在这里,我想和你分享一下我对这场比赛的看法。没有必要责怪你自己。首先,二班是如此顶级的队伍,被他们打败并不是一件令人惋惜的事。其次,虽然你最后一投没中,但你还是得到了30分。你已经尽力了。你还需要队友的理解。你应该告诉你的队友,你为失去最后一投而感到抱歉，并且你会继续努力练习。如果可能的话，邀请他们共进晚餐。我希望你能再次微笑，为下一场比赛作好准备。你的，李华解解真题·思维剖析一2019•湖南长沙假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。要求：（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】DearHenry,Ilearnedthatyouarefeelingsorryandupsetbecauseoflosingthebasketballgame.It'snoteasybeinginyoursituation,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.Anyway,don'tbetoohardonyourself.Youknow,basketballisaboutteameffort.It'sneverjustoneperson'sfault.Whatmattersisthatyoushouldlearnfromthegamesaswellasyourmistakes.Besides,youneedtothinkabouthowyoucandobetternexttime.Asawhole,teammatesshouldsupportandbelieveineachother.Whydon'tyousitdownandcommunicatewiththem?Andyoucouldpromisethatyouwillsparenoeffortstobetteryourskills.Ifallofyoupulltogether,you'resuretowinthenextone.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua二（2023·浙江温州·三模）假如你是李华，近日你收到英国笔友Joe的来信，他和你一样，也是一名九年级的学生，面对升学感到压力很大。请你给他写封回信，安慰他，参考所给信息，为他提出至少2条减压的建议。Howdoyourelievepressure?①talktoothers②dosomeexercise③askthepsychologyteacherforhelp……要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息；（2）词数：110词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJoe,Happytoreceiveyourletter,butI’msorrytohearthatyouhavetofacealotofpressure.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearJoe,Happytoreceiveyourletter,butI’msorrytohearthatyouhavetofacealotofpressure.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutit,andjusttakeiteasy.Asyourfriend,I’dliketoofferyousomesuggestionstohelpyourelieveyourpressure.First,youshouldlearntorelax.Ifyouarefeelingstressedout,youcantalktoothersfacetofaceorbychattingonQQorWeChat.Doingsomeexerciseregularlycanhelpyourelaxyourselfandbuildupyourbodyaswell.Secondly,it’sagoodideatoaskthepsychologyteacherforhelpwhenyouareunderpressure.Theteacherwillgiveyouhelpfuladvicesothatyoucaneasilyfindawayout.Ihopeyouwillfindmysuggestionshelpful.Yours,LiHua三（2022·辽宁沈阳·二模）假定你是李华，通过对话了解到你的好朋友Paul面对过去长时间的网课及将要到来的考试等问题，心理压力很大，请你给他写一封安慰信。内容包括：1、表示安慰问候；2、提供减轻压力的建议或办法；3、美好祝愿。要点：1、词数80—100：开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、作文中不要出现考生的真实校名和姓名。DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearPaul,Iknowyourproblemsandrecentsituationthroughthelastconversation.Facedwiththelongonlinecoursesinthepastandthecomingexams,youfeltalotofpressure.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.First,youshouldlearntorelaxyourself.Youcanlistentosomemusicordosomethingyoufeelcomfortable.Next,youshoulddosomesportseveryday.Sportscanmakeyoufeelrelaxed.Atlast,smileatyourselfeveryday.Ithelpsyoukeephappy.It’sverycommonthateveryonecanmeetdifficultiesinthelife.Ihopemysuggestionscangiveyousomehelp.Yours,LiHua四（2022·重庆·三模）中考在即，同学们都投入到紧张的初三复习备考中，但也有部分同学心浮气躁，焦虑不安。Lisa正有这样的烦恼，假设你是她的好朋友李华，请写一封信给她，安慰她并给出一些缓解焦虑和压力的建议。要点如下：1.正确看待考试和紧张的学习；2.规律作息、健康饮食、积极锻炼有助于保持良好学习状态；3.制定合理的复习计划；4.必要时可寻求他人帮助……要求：1.包含以上要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，语意连贯；3.不得出现真实的校名、班名和人名；4.80—120词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingalittlenervousaboutyourstudyandexams.Don’tbesoworried.I’mwritingtotellyousomegoodideastodealwithit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【高分范文】DearLisa,I’msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingalittlenervousaboutyourstudyandexams.Don’tbesoworried.I’mwritingtotellyousomegoodideastodealwithit.Firstofall,youshouldtreattheexaminationandnervousstudyproperly.Then,youhadbetterworkandrestregularly,haveahealthydietandexerciseactively,whichcanhelpyoukeepagoodstateofstudy.Besides,youcanmakeareasonablereviewplan.Ifnecessary,youcanaskothersforhelp.Ihopethesesuggestionscanhelpyou.Youcangetgoodgradesinthenextexamination.

YoursFriend模板模板02祝贺信Dear收信人，Congratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!(开篇祝语，表示祝贺)Ithinkand(表达对此事的总体看法).Plus,Iamdyingto(表明自己的想法).Yousee,(支持想法的理由)Hopingyouwill(表达期望)Yours,写信人参考词句单词share分享；helpful有用的；progress进步短语inthefuture在将来；playimportantrolesin..在...当中扮演重要角色；bedyingtodosth.渴望做某事；suchas例如句型HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!我很高兴能分享你的好消息！『典型例题』假定你是李华，收到英国笔友Harry的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。To:Lihua2019@163.comFrom:Harry@hotmail.comDearLiHua,I'mgladtotellyouthatI'vejustwonthefirstplaceinarobot-makingcompetition.Iloverobots!Theybringmegreatfun.Whatdoyouthinkofrobots?Doyouwanttohaveyourownrobot?Why?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,Harry参考词汇：congratulation祝贺注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry,【高分范文】DearHarry,Congratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways,andinthefuture,theywillplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.Plus,Iamdyingtohavearobotofmyown.Icanhaveittotakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee,mygrandparentsareoldandcan'tmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking,cleaningthehouseandsoon.Hopingyouwillmakegreaterprogress.Yours,LiHua参考译文亲爱的哈利：恭喜！我很高兴能分享你的好消息！我认为机器人在很多方面都有帮助，在未来，它们将在我们的日常生活中扮演更重要的角色。另外，我很想拥有一个自己的机器人。当我们不在家时，可以用它来照顾我的祖父母。你看，我的祖父母年纪大了,行动不便。它可以帮助他们做一些家务,比如做饭、打扫房子等等。希望你能取得更大的进步。你的，李华解解真题·思维剖析一（2020·北京·三模）假如你是李华，在你的帮助和陪伴下交换生Peter即将完成为期一年的交换学习生活。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你真诚的祝贺，回忆你们共度的一年美好时光以及他的学习经历，并谈谈你从他身上学到了什么。提示词语：GreatWall,museum,culture,pronounce,practice提示问题：●WhydoyoucongratulatePeter?●Howdidyouspendthetimetogetherandhisstudyexperience?●Whathaveyoulearntfromhim?DearPeter,I’mveryhappythatyouwillfinishyourone-yearexchangestudylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishestoyou!Yours,LiHua【高分范文】DearPeter,I’mveryhappythatyouwillfinishyourone-yearexchangestudylife.Firstofall,IcongratulateyoubecauseyouhavemadebigprogressinstudyingChineseaswellinunderstandingourChinesehistoryandculture.Whenyoufirstcamehere,youweresoshyandafraidtomakemistakesintalkingwithothers.Luckily,wewereinthesamegroup.IhelpedyouwithyourChineseandyouhelpedmewithmyEnglish.InordertoimproveyourChinese,weclimbedtheGreatWallandvisitedmanymuseumstogether.Whatagreattimewehad!Withthehelpoftheteachersandyourself,youaremuchbraverandoutgoingnow.Meanwhile,youwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeakingcompetition.Istillrememberhowhappyyouwereatthatmoment!Atthesametime,Ilearnhowtokeepfightingtoachievethedreamsfromyou.Bestwishestoyou!

Yours,LiHua二（2018·北京海淀·一模）假如你是李华，在你的帮助下，交换生Tom在中文演讲比赛中获得了一等奖。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你的真诚祝贺，回忆他比赛时的表现，以及你从他身上学到了什么。提示词语：win，prize，speechcompetition，pronounce，practice提示问题：WhydoyoucongratulateTom?Whatmadehimsuccessfulinthecompetition?Whatcanyoulearnfromhim?【高分范文】DearTom,IamveryhappytoknowthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcompetition,soI’mwritingtocongratulateyouonyourwonderfulperformance.YoudidagoodjobintheChinesespeechcompetition.Youpronouncedreallywellduringyourspeechandyourvoicewasbeautiful.Youspokesofluentlythatweallfeltproudofyou.What’smore,weweresurprisedatyourrichandmeaningfulcontents.Asyourbestfriend,Iknowyoutriedyourbestforthecompetition.Youkeptpracticingyourspeecheverydayinordertomakeitbetter.Iknowitisimportanttokeepontryingandnevertogiveup.IhopeIcanbesuccessfullikeyouonedayinthefuture.Yours,LiHua模板模板03开放性作文Dear收信人，I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Beingyourclosefriend,Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasabout(沟通事项)withyou.Firstandforemost,(做法一).Inthesecondplace,(做法二).Lastbutbynomeansleast,ifIwereyou,Iwould(做法三).Inaddition,(再次补充做法).IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,写信人参考词句单词require要求；extremely非常；crucial重要的；significance重要性；awareness意识短语begladtodosth.乐于做某事；besupposedtodosth.应该做某事；handin上交；bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事；remindsb.ofsth.提醒某人某事；inaddition另外句型Lastbutbynomeansleast.…最后但并非最不重要的是.…….『典型例题』假如你是李华，你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动，倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报，你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他海报上交的时间，并分享你设计海报的一些想法。提示词语：design;safetyrule;careful;protect;picture提示问题：·Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?【高分范文】DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Asitisrequired,youaresupposedtohandintheposterbeforenextFriday.Beingyourclosefriend,Iamextremelywillingtosharesomeideasaboutdesigningtheposterwithyou.Firstandforemost,thebasicsafetyrulesareofgreatimportance,whichshouldbeincludedinyourposter.Inthesecondplace,followingthesafetyrulesissomeaningfulandcrucialthatyouhadbetterremindyourreadersofitssignificanceandadvisethemtobecarefulbothinandoutofschool.Lastbutbynomeansleast,ifIwereyou,Iwouldaddafewsuggestionsaboutsafetyawareness,consideringthatbettersafethansorry.Inaddition,itisagoodideaforyoutodrawafewpicturesonyourpostersoastomakeitmorelivelyandacceptable.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHua参考译文亲爱的彼得:很高兴收到你的邮件。按照要求，你应该在下周五之前上交海报。作为你的好朋友,我非常愿意和你分享一些设计海报的想法。首先,基本的安全规则是非常重要的,应该包含在你的海报里。第二,遵循安全规则很有意义也很重要，你最好提醒你的读者它的重要性，并建议他们在学校内外都要小心。最后但绝不是最不重要的，如果我是你，我会补充一些关于安全意识的建议，考虑到安全总比遗憾好。另外，在你的海报上画一些图片是一个好主意，这样可以使它更生动也更容易被接受。如果还有什么我能帮忙的,请告诉我。你的，李华解解真题·思维剖析一（九年级上·湖南永州·期末）开放性作文根据要求，写一篇发言稿。将发言稿写在答题卡开放性作文空白处。班会课上，我们讨论了习近平主席的话：“有梦想，有机会，有奋斗，一切美好的东西都能够创造出来。”先阅读下面的范文，然后模仿范文，请你以“MyDream”为题写一篇100词左右的英语发言稿。注意：1.演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.完全照抄范文不给分。提示如下:1.我的梦想：有意义的事情或职业（自由确定）2.梦想产生的原因3.如何实现梦想MyDreamDearteachersandfriendsI’mhappytobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening.【高分范文】DearteachersandfriendsI’mhappytobeheretosharemydreamwithyou.Lifeisofgreatvaluetoallofus.Wecanonlyliveonce.It’snecessaryforourlivestohaveadream.MydreamistobeawriterwhenIgrowup.MyfavoritewriterisJaneAusten,whowritesPrideandPrejudice.HerbooksaresoperfectthatIreadthemagainandagainandnevergettired.HowIwanttobeagreatwriterlikeJaneAusten!Ihopetomakemylifemoremeaningfulinthisway.Inordertomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldspendmylimitedlifecarefully.It’simportanttoreadalargenumberofgreatbooksandpracticewritingfromtimetotime.IbelieveIcanmakemydreamcometrueoneday.I’mlookingforwardtothecomingofthatday!That’sallform