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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。IchewedonmypencilasIwalkedbackandforthacrossmybedroom.WhatwasIgoingtodo?ItwasbadenoughthatIwasthenewkid.ButnowIwassuretogetlaughedatbymyclassmates.Howcouldmyfirsthomeworkbesuchadisaster?“MynameisAnna,andthissummerI...”Istopped.HowcouldIstandinfrontofmyclassandsaythatI’dspenttheentiresummerhandlingsomethingthatmostpeopledon’tevenliketotalkabout?Poop(粪便).I’dspentthreemonthsshoveling(铲),collecting,andanalyzingcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.ItriedtothinkofadifferentadventureIcouldshare.MaybeIcouldsayI’dspentthesummerontheWeatherControlTeampreventingfloods.“Timefordinner,”mymomcalled.Iwalkedslowlydownthestairsandslidintomychair.“You’vebeeninyourroomsinceyoucamehomefromschool,”Momsaid.“Whatareyouworkingon?”Isighed.“IhavetotelltheclasswhatIdidthissummer.”Myyoungerbrother,Seymour,begantolaughuncontrollably.“Noonewillwanttositnexttoyouaftertheyhearyouwerecoveredincowpoopallsummer!”“OK,that’senough,Seymour,”Dadsaid.“Anna,”saidMom,puttinggreenbeansinabowl,“beproudoftheworkwedidthissummer.Ourplanetwouldbeinsadshapewithoutscientistslikeyourgrandfather.”It’struethatmygrandfatherdoesimportantwork.Hedevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel.Usingthepoopisnoweasy,economical,andenvironmentallysafe.“Iknow,Mom,”Isaid,staringatmymeatloaf.“Butit’snotexactlysomethingpeoplewanttohearaboutbeforelunch.”ThatnightIdreamedaboutmoresplendidadventures:cavedivinginMexico,hikingthroughtheAmazonrainforest...Atschoolthenextday,Ibentovermydesk,listeningtoeachkidspeak.Mypalmsweresweaty,andtheknot(结)inmystomachgrewtighter.“AndthatwasmyjourneytoMountEverest,”EmberAdamssaid,finishingherreport.Shebowedandlookherseat.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意安娜作为转校生,迎来了第一项作业——在全班同学面前讲述自己暑假的经历。然而,她的暑假是在祖父母的农场里处理牛粪,这让她觉得难以启齿,担心会因此被同学嘲笑。她试图编造其他冒险经历,但内心又很纠结。回家后与家人的交流,让她陷入更深的苦恼。第二天在课堂上,听着同学们讲述各自精彩的暑假旅程,她愈发紧张,故事在此处续写,展现她如何克服内心障碍完成讲述,以及同学们对此的反应,突出勇敢做自己、真实往往能带来意外收获的主题。故事分析伏笔与回应:伏笔:安娜是新同学,担心被嘲笑,为她对讲述牛粪经历的担忧做铺垫。
回应:她起初想编造其他经历,体现内心的不安,但最终还是选择如实讲述,展现了成长,同学们后来友好的反应也缓解了她的担忧,使故事从紧张走向温暖。伏笔:安娜提到自己暑假在农场处理牛粪这一特殊经历,与其他同学可能的精彩暑假形成对比。
回应:在她讲述后,同学们却对此感兴趣,打破了她原本的担忧,突出了真实经历也能被认可的主题,改变了故事的走向。伏笔:妈妈鼓励安娜为暑假工作感到自豪,因为祖父的工作很重要,这为安娜最终决定如实讲述提供了心理支持。
回应:安娜在课堂上想起妈妈的话,勇敢站出来,呼应了前文家人的鼓励,推动情节发展。伏笔:弟弟Seymour的嘲笑,加重了安娜的心理负担和对被同学嘲笑的恐惧。
回应:而同学们后来积极友好的态度与弟弟的嘲笑形成反差,进一步凸显了安娜克服内心障碍后的释然和成长,强化了故事的情感变化。伏笔:安娜前一晚梦到各种精彩冒险,反映出她内心对拥有一个令人羡慕的暑假经历的渴望,以及对自己真实经历的不自信。
回应:但在课堂上,她最终还是选择面对真实的自己,与梦境形成对比,突出了面对现实、接纳自我的重要性,升华了故事的主题。续写要点:第一段:“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.Annawalkedtothefrontoftheclass,herhandstremblingslightly.Shetookadeepbreathandbegantospeak,hervoiceabitshakyatfirst.Shetoldtheclassaboutthelongdaysonthefarm,howshehadhelpedcollectthecowpoopandtheprocesshergrandfatherhaddevelopedtoturnitintofuel.Asshespoke,shenoticedsomeofthestudentslookingatherwithinterest,whichgaveherthecouragetocontinue.Shefinishedbysayingthateventhoughitwasn'taglamorousadventure,itwasimportantworkthatshewasproudtobeapartof.第二段:Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.EmberAdamscameupandsaid,"Anna,thatwasreallyinteresting.Ihadnoideapoopcouldbeusedlikethat!"Otherschimedin,askingmorequestionsabouttheprocessandthefarm.Annawassurprisedbuthappytoanswertheirquestions.Sherealizedthatbeinghonestaboutherexperiencehadbeentherightchoice.Fromthatdayon,shewasnolongertheshynewkid,butsomeonewithauniqueandvaluablestorytoshare.Sheevenmadeafewfriendswhowereinterestedinlearningmoreabouthergrandfather'swork.情感线:安娜起初因新环境和特殊暑假经历而感到自卑、焦虑和恐惧被嘲笑;在家人的不同态度下,内心纠结挣扎;课堂上准备讲述时极度紧张;讲述过程中逐渐因同学们的反应而感到意外和欣慰;课后被同学们接纳和认可,变得自信和开心,情感变化丰富,体现了从自我封闭到勇敢面对、收获友谊和自信的过程,突出了真实和勇敢的力量。故事线:安娜作为新同学,面对讲述暑假经历的作业感到困扰。回忆暑假在农场处理牛粪的经历,想编造其他故事。回家与家人交流,妈妈鼓励,弟弟嘲笑。课堂上听同学们讲述精彩经历,自己愈发紧张。轮到安娜讲述,她如实说出暑假经历。续写部分,课后同学们友好询问,安娜融入集体。主旨升华句:Truecourageisnotabouthavingthemostexcitingstorytotell,butaboutbeinghonestandproudofwhoyouareandwhatyoudo.(真正的勇气不是拥有最精彩的故事可讲,而是对自己和自己所做的事诚实且自豪。)Inaworldthatoftenvaluestheextraordinary,itistheauthenticityofourordinaryexperiencesthatcantrulyconnectuswithothers.(在一个常常看重非凡之事的世界里,正是我们平凡经历的真实性才能真正将我们与他人联系起来。)Don'tbeafraidtoshowyourtrueself,foritisinouruniquenessthatwefindacceptanceandfriendship.(不要害怕展现真实的自己,因为正是我们的独特之处让我们获得接纳和友谊。)Thethingswemaythinkareembarrassingoruninterestingcanoftenbecomethemostvaluableandrespectedpartsofourliveswhenwesharethemwithanopenheart.(那些我们认为令人尴尬或无趣的事情,当我们敞开心扉分享时,往往会成为我们生活中最有价值和最受尊重的部分。)Embracingourtrueselves,eventhepartswearehesitanttoreveal,isthefirststeptowardsbuildingmeaningfulrelationshipsandaconfidentlife.(接纳真实的自己,即使是那些我们犹豫是否要展现的部分,是建立有意义的人际关系和自信生活的第一步。)写作示范第一篇
“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.
Annawalkedtothefrontoftheclass,herheartpoundinglikeadrum.Sheglancedatherclassmates,tookadeepbreath,andbegan."Thissummer,Iwasonmygrandparents'farm.Iknowitdoesn'tsoundasexcitingasclimbingEverestorexploringtheAmazon,butIwaspartofsomethingimportant.Wewereworkingonturningcowpoopintofuel.It'snoteasywork,andit'snotalwayspleasant,butit'shelpingourenvironment.I'mproudtohavebeenapartofit,evenifit'salittledifferent."Asshefinished,shesawsomeclassmateslookingsurprised,butnotinabadway.Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.
EmberAdamswasthefirsttospeak."Anna,that'samazing!Ineverthoughtaboutpoopbeingusefullikethat.Canyoutellusmore?"Othersgatheredaround,noddinginagreement.Annafeltasenseofreliefandpride.Sheansweredtheirquestions,andsoontheywereallchattingandlaughing.Thatday,Annalearnedthatbeingtruetoherselfwasbetterthananymade-upadventure.Shemadenewfriendsandfoundanewconfidenceinsharingheruniquestory.第二篇
“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.
Withsweatypalmsandaracingheart,Annamadeherwaytothefront.Shestartedquietly,"Ispentmysummeronafarm.Weweredealingwithcowpoop.Itmightseemgross,butmygrandfatherhasfoundawaytomakeitintofuel.It'sabigdealforourplanet."Asshespoke,shenoticedtheclasswaslisteningintently.Theirexpressionswerenotofdisgustbutofcuriosity.Thisgaveherthestrengthtocontinue,andshedescribedtheprocessinmoredetail.Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.
AboynamedTomsaid,"Anna,that'sreallycool.Iwanttolearnmoreabouthowitworks."Severalothersjoinedin,askingquestionsandsharingtheirthoughts.Annawasoverjoyed.Sherealizedthatherfearofbeinglaughedatwasunfounded.Fromthatmomenton,shewasnolongertheoutsider.Shehadsharedsomethingrealandvaluable,andinreturn,gainedacceptanceandfriendship.Thisexperiencetaughtherthatbeingtruetoherselfwasalwaysthebestchoice.第三篇
“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.
Annasteppedforward,tryingtosteadyhernerves.Sheclearedherthroatandsaid,"Thissummer,Iwasknee-deepincowpoop.Soundsawful,right?Butitwasforagreatcause.Mygrandfatherisascientist,andhe'sfoundawaytouseittomakefuel.It'scleanandhelpstheenvironment."Shesawafewraisedeyebrowsbutalsosomesmiles.Shecontinued,explaininghowtheycollectedandprocessedthepoop.Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.
EmberAdamscameupandsaid,"Anna,you'resobravetosharethat.It'sreallyinteresting!"Otherscomplimentedheronheruniqueexperience.Theyaskediftheycouldvisitthefarmsomeday.Annawasamazed.Shehadexpectedridiculebutinsteadfoundinterestandkindness.Thischangedherperspectiveonbeingthenewkid.Shenowknewthatbeingherselfwasthekeytofittinginandmakingfriends.第四篇
“It’syourturn,Anna,”theteachersaid.
Annawalkedtothepodium,herlegsfeelinglikejelly.Shelookedattheclassandbegan,"Iknowyouallhadexcitingsummers,butminewasonafarm,handlingcowpoop.Mygrandfatherhasdevelopedarevolutionarywaytoturnitintofuel.It'snotaglamorousjob,butit'smeaningful."Asshetalked,shesawtheclass'sattentionwasfullyonher.Theirfacesshowedamixofsurpriseandintrigue.Afterclass,someofmyclassmatesapproachedme.
Oneofthegirlssaid,"Anna,that'ssocool.Ineverthoughtaboutpoopbeingsoimportant."Theothersnoddedandaskedformoredetails.Annawasdelighted.Shehadovercomeherfearandfoundthatherunusualsummerexperiencehadmadeherstandoutinapositiveway.Shebegantofeellikeshebelonged,andshewasproudofwhatsheandhergrandfatherhadaccomplished.Thisexperiencetaughtherthatbeingdifferentwasnotsomethingtobeashamedofbutrathersomethingtoembrace.参考答案“It’syourturn,Anna.”theteachersaid.Itookadeepbreath,slowlyrosefromtheseatanddraggedmylegstowardstheplatform.Handstrembling.Ibeganmynarrative.“MynameisAnna,andthissummerIdidsomethingunusual.Canyoumakeaguess?”Outofcuriosity,mynewclassmatesofferedmevariousresponses,butnoneofthemhitthespot.Urgedbymynewfriends,Iunfoldedthetaleofmyuniquesummerexperience—dealingwithcowpooponmygrandparents’farm.Theinstantthetwowords“cowpoop”escapedmylips,whispersfromtheclasscameintomyears.Iclearedmythroatandcontinued,“ButI’mproudofwhatIdid.”ThenIexplainedhowmygrandfatherdevelopedaneasywaytousepoopasasourceoffuel,makingusingthepoopeasy,economicalandenvironmentallysafe.Suddenly,thewholeroomfell
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