（高考英语作文炼句）第39篇译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.面试时求职者在仪表上一定要特别谨慎,因为第一印象确实很重要.Candidatesshould

takeparticularcarewith

(1.对……特别谨慎)theirappearancewhentheyattendaninterviewbecause,

firstimpressionsdocount(2.第一印象确实很重要).

takeparticularcarewith词典释义：particular3.ADJ

形容词

格外的;特别的;尤其的

Youcanuse

particular

toemphasize

thatsomethingisgreaterormoreintensethanusual.•Particularemphasiswillbeplacedonorallanguage

training.将会特别强调口语训练.

6.

takecareover/withsth

tospendalotoftimeandeffort

makingsurethatsomethingisperfect讲究某事物,注意某事物：•Paulalwaystakes

greatcareoverhisappearance.保罗一向很注意自己的外表.

外刊例句：Travellersshould

takeparticularcarewith

foodandwater.Ifdrinkingwateris

notfromaknownsafesourcethenitisbestavoidedormadesafebyboiling

orpurifying.

()旅游者应该格外关注食物和水的安全.如果无法从确保安全的水源取水喝,那么最好就别喝这些水,或者是烧开或净化它们,从而喝得安全.

替换表达：payspecialattentionto/beverycarefulwith

2-firstimpressionsdocount

词典释义：impression

UK

[ɪmˈpreʃ(ə)n]

US

noun

[countable]

[singular

impression

plural

impressions]

★★★

1.

anopinionorfeeling

thatyouhaveaboutsomeoneorsomethingyouhaveseenbutdonotknowvery

well

have/gettheimpression

(that)：

Ihavethe

impressionthatshe’sverygood

atherjob.

firstimpressions

(=opinionsthatyouformimmediately,before

thinkingthoroughly)：

Thereportseemstobebasedentirelyonfirstimpressions.

count[kaʊnt]

verb

HAVEVALUE

有价值

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

■tohavevalueor

importance;to

matter

有价值;很重要;要紧

•I'vealwaysbelievedthathappiness

counts

morethanmoney.我一直认为幸福比金钱更重要.•Myopiniondoesn't

count

for

anything

aroundhere(=noonevaluesmyopinion).我的看法在这里丝毫不受重视.

外刊例句：Theoldadagethat"firstimpressionscount”seemstobetrue.

()俗语有云,"第一印象很重要”,看来所言非虚.

学生错误表达：(1)

firstimpressionreallycounts/matters点评："第一印象”应该是first

impressions,不能写成firstimpression,这里应该改为firstimpressionscount/matter(2)thefirstimpressionsareveryimportant点评："第一印象”的固定说法是first

impressions,不能说thefirstimpressions

Q：这个句子可不可以用cannottoo再怎样都不为过来写呢?请老师写一个正确的句子,可以吗?A：can’tbetoo这个结构一般只能用在can’tbetoocareful这个短语里面,含义是"越小心越好”,例如：You

can'tbetoocarefulwhenayoungchildisnearwater.孩子在水边时,还是越小心越好.

2.很多雇主现在提供企业内部培训项目,并且要求所有的新员工都参加.如果这些培训班是被合理设计的,那么新员工会更加容易融入职场.Manyemployersnowprovide

in-housetrainingprograms(1.企业内部培训项目)andrequireallnewemployeestoattendthoseclasses.Iftheclassesareproperlydesigned,thenewemployeewillfinditmucheasierto

fitintotheworkplace(2.融入职场).

1-in-housetrainingprograms

词典释义：in-house[ˌɪn'haʊs]

adjective

adverb

■Somethingthatisdonein-houseisdonewithinan

organizationorbusinessbyitsemployeesratherthanbyotherpeople

在组织内部(的);在机构内部(的)•an

in-house

trainingscheme内部训练计划•Allouradvertisingmaterialisdesigned

in-house.我们所有的广告材料都是由内部设计的.

外刊例句：Butsincethepurgingof

in-housetraining

departmentsinthe1980s,theyhavemoreoften

contractedoutthegeneral-skillswork.

()然而,公司自上世纪80年代对内部培训部门进行清洗过后,一直惯于把一般的技术工作外包出去.

学生错误表达：Corporateinternaltrainingprograms点评：没有corporateinternaltrainingprograms的说法,这里应该改为in-housetraining

programs

2-fitintotheworkplace

词典释义：21.PHRASAL

VERB

短语动词

融入;与…相处融洽(或和谐)

If

you

fitinto

aparticulargroup,youseemtobelongtherebecauseyouare

similartotheotherpeopleinit.

【语法信息】：VPn(notpron)•It'shardtoseehowhewould

fit

into

theteam.很难看出他将如何融入这支队伍.

外刊例句：ButinatypicallycringeworthyBrent-like

way,thecharactershowshistruecoloursbylistingaseriesofridiculous

reasonswhycandidateswithdisabilitieswouldnot

fitintotheworkplace,suchasrestrictedgrowth,blindnessor

deafness.

()该角色列出了一系列伤残候选人为何不能融入职场的原因,比如成长受限、看不到或者是听不懂等,而这就让其本色尽显,尽管是以标准的布伦特时尴尬方式呈现.

替换表达：integrateintotheworkplace

3.大公司的市场份额更大、市值更高,因此它们在财政上更加稳健,不容易受到经济变化影响.这意味着大公司相比小公司能提供更好的福利待遇和工作稳定性.小公司通常运作资金更少,更有可能通过裁员来应对市场低迷.Alargecompanyhasbetter

marketshare

(1.市场份额)andmarketvalue,soitisfinanciallymorerobust,andnotasvulnerabletochangesintheeconomy.Thismeansalargecompanycanprovidebetter

welfarepackages

(2.福利待遇)andjobsecuritythanasmallercompany,whichtypically

operatesonfarlesscapital

(3.运作资金更少)andismorelikelytofirestaff

inresponseto

(4.应对)areducedmarket.

1-marketshare

词典释义：market

sharenoun

uncountable

■thenumberofthingsthatacompanysellscomparedwith

thenumberofthingsofthesametypethatothercompaniessell

市场占有率(一家公司所销售产品数量较之其他公司所销售同类产品数量的比)•Thecompanyhas

increased

itsmarketshare.公司的市场占有率提高了.

外刊例句：GENERAL

MOTORShassufferedasteadydeclineinitsAmerican

marketshare

fordecadesnow.()通用汽车的美国市场份额在过去数十年来一直下滑.

学生错误表达：(1)marketshares点评：要指某一个公司的市场份额应该说market

share,而不能说marketshares,例如我们只能说Alargecompanyhasbettermarketshare,而不能说Alargecompanyhasbettermarketshares(2)marketproportion/shareinthemarket点评：这里应该改为固定说法market

share

2-welfarepackages

词典释义：welfareUK

['wel.feər]

US

[-fer]

noun

uncountable

HELP

帮助

IMPROVER

■helpgiven,especiallybythestateoranorganization,

topeoplewhoneedit,especiallybecausetheydonothaveenoughmoney

福利救济;社会福利•Thisnationalfundpaysfor

welfare

benefits

suchasunemploymentandsicknesspay.此项国家基金提供多项福利救济,例如失业和医疗等.•UKAfterhermonth'ssickleave,shewassummonedtosee

thecompany's

welfare

officer.她休了一个月病假之后,公司的福利主管召见了她.

package

ADVANCED

■arelatedgroupofthingswhentheyareofferedtogetherasasingleunit

一(整)套•Thecomputercomeswitha

software

package.电脑附带一套套装软体.•The

aid

package

forthe

earthquake-hitareawillincludeemergencyfoodandmedicalsupplies.地震灾区的救援物品将包括应急食品和医疗用品.

外刊例句："Wecelebratesecondworldwarveteransateveryopportunity.Just

likeanyotherNigeriansoldierwhodiesserving,theirchildrenhavebeen

awardedscholarshipsandother

welfare

packages,”saidspokespersonRabeAbubakar.()发言人拉比说,"我们一有机会就举行二战老兵的纪念活动,这就像尼日利亚士兵殉职之后,其孩子可以获得奖学金和社会福利一样.”

替换表达：welfarebenefits

学生错误表达：(1)wealthbenefit点评：没有wealthbenefit的说法,应该改为welfarebenefits/welfarepackages(2)socialbenefit点评：socialbenefit是指"社会效益”,它不可以用来指企业为员工提供的福利.(3)interest点评：interest是指"利益”,它一般用在beintheinterestsof

somebody/something这一短语中,不可以用来指企业为员工提供的福利.

3-farlesscapital

词典释义：farUK

[fɑ：r]

US

[fɑ：r]

adverb

(farther,farthestor

further,furthest)

AMOUNT

数量

ESSENTIAL

■verymuch

非常;远远;大大

•Thiscaris

far

better

thanouroldone.这辆车比我们那辆旧的好多了.•Itcost

far

more

(money)thanIcould

afford.这花费远远超出了我的承受能力.•Heloseshistemper

far

too

often.他太爱发脾气了.•I'd

far

rather/sooner

gotothetheatrethan

watchavideo.我宁可去剧院看戏也不看录影.

capitalUK

['kæp.ɪ.təl]

US

[-tˌəl]

noun

MONEY

钱

ADVANCED

uncountable

■moneyandpossessions,especiallyalargeamountofmoneyusedforproducingmore

wealth

orforstartinganewbusiness

资本,资金;本钱

•Sheleavesher

capital

untouchedinthebank

andlivesofftheinterest.她不动用银行里的本金,靠利息生活.•We've

put

£20000

capital

into

thebusiness,butwe'reunlikelytoseeanyreturnforafew

years.我们在生意上投入了两万英镑,但很可能在几年内都看不到任何回报.

外刊例句：

HesaidthiswillmeanthatAMPwillneed

farlesscapital

torunitsbusiness

thaninthepastbecauseofregulationsthatmean£100investedin

unit-linkedproductsmustbesupportedby£4ofregulatorycapital.

()他说,这将意味着,AMP的运营成本要远比以前低,因为新规规定：每投资100英镑到人寿保险相关产品就可获得4英镑的规定金额援助.

学生错误表达：(1)lessworkingcapital点评：没有workingcapital的说法,这里要改成operatesonfarlesscapital(2)havelessflowingcash点评：没有flowingcash的用法(只有cashflow),这里要改为operatesonfarless

capital

4-inresponseto

词典释义：response

re·sponse/

rɪˈspɑns

;

rɪˈspɔns

/noun

1.C,Usomethingthatisdoneasareactiontosomethingthathashappenedor

beensaid反应;响应：

[+

to

]•thepublic's

responsetoourappealforhelp公众对我们求助呼吁的反应in

responsetosth•Thelawwaspassed

inresponsetopublicpressure.这条法规是迫于公众压力而通过的.

外刊例句：DonaldTrumptookaimattheDodd-Frankreformsoffinancialservices,whichweredrawnup

inresponseto

the2008crisis.

()特朗普把矛头指向Dodd—Frank金融服务业改革计划.该计划出台于2008年,用于应对当时的金融危机.

替换表达：tocopewith/todealwith

Q：Thismeansalargecompanycanprovidebetterwelfarepackagesandjobsecuritythanasmallercompany,

whichtypicallyoperatesonfarlesscapitalandismorelikelytofirestaff

inresponseto

areducedmarket.请问魏老师,句中有than,那么jobsecurity是否需要换成形容词词组,然后用比较级修饰.谢谢A：不用,句子还原后其实是providebetter

welfarepackagesand(better)jobsecuritythan…jobsecurity已经有better修饰了.

Q：notasvulnerabletochanges,这里是不是应该有个比较对象呢asvulnerableas...,to的后面不应该是原型吗,为什么这里用的是changes?A：这里是省略,隐含了与小公司比较的意思,句子还原后是notasvulnerabletochanges(assmallcompanies);changes在这里是名词,而不是动词.

Q：morefinanciallyrobust还是financiallymorerobust呢?A：这里用morefinanciallyrobust或者financiallymorerobust都可以.

Q：这般staff应该用staffs?A：staff是复数名词,不能说staffs

4.不管兼职工作是有趣还是无趣,或者学生在商业活动中成败与否,仅仅是学生拥有一份工作经验这一个事实就会让他们毕业后在找全职工作时派上用场.Regardlessofwhetherapart-timejobprovesinterestingordull,orwhetherstudentssucceedorfailinabusinessventure,

themerefactof(1.仅仅是……这一个事实)havingworkexperiencewill

comeinhandy

(2.派上用场)whentheyseek

afull-timejob(3.全职工作)aftergraduation.

1-themerefactof

词典释义：mereUK

[mɪər]

US

[mɪr]

adjective

[beforenoun]

IMPROVER

■usedtoemphasizethatsomethingisnotlargeorimportant

只不过的,仅仅的•Theplanecrashed

mere

minutesaftertake-off.飞机起飞后仅仅几分钟就坠毁了.•Itcosta

mere

twentydollars.那只需花费20美元.•The

mere

thought

ofitmakesmeill.一想起它就让我不舒服.

2.usedtoemphasizethatsomethingwhichis

smallornotextremehasabigeffectorisimportant极小的;极不重要的〔用于表示某物虽小或微不足道,却有很大的影响或重要性〕：•Themerestlittle

noisemakeshimnervous.一丁点的声音也会使他紧张.•Themerethought

offoodmadeherfeelsick.一想到食物她就恶心.•Themerefactthat

thetalksarecontinuingisapositivesign.会谈仍在继续,单这一点就是个好的征兆.

外刊例句：Butsoisthefactthat,inBritain,even

politiciansoftheleftdeploretheapparentconsequencesofeconomic

inequalityratherthan

themerefact

of

it.()但事实就是,在英国,即使是左翼政客都会谴责经济不平衡带来的明显后果,而非仅仅认为这只是一个事实.

2-comeinhandy

词典释义：c