（高考英语作文炼句）第34篇译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.很多雇主愿意为拥有研究生学习背景的职位候选人所贡献的有价值的技能以及深入的知识支付一大笔钱.Manyemployersarewillingto

shellout

(1.为……支付一大笔钱)extramoneyforthevaluableskillsand

in-depthknowledge

(2.深入的知识)thatjobcandidateswithapostgraduatebackground

bringtotheparty(3.贡献).

1-shellout

词典释义：shellout1.

为…花费一大笔钱

Ifyou

shelloutfor

something,youspendalotofmoneyonit.

【语域标签】：INFORMAL非正式•Youwon'thaveto

shelloutafortuneforit...你不必为它花一大笔钱.•IfI'mshellingoutafewhundredpounds,Idon'twantsomeonetellingmewhatIcanorcan'tdo.如果我要花费几百英镑,我不希望有人告诉我什么能做,什么不能做.

•...aninsurancepremiumwhichsavesyoufromhavingtoshellout

forrepairs...为你省去大笔维修费用的保险费

•Theveryfactthatyoushelledoutmoneytocomeandseeusisagoodsign.你舍得花钱来看我们,这正是个好迹象.

外刊例句：Thatmakesthemallthemorewillingto

shellout,iftheycanaffordit,on

expensiveboardingschoolswhichtheybelievewillenabletheirchildrento

concentratefullyontheirstudies.

()这使他们更愿意花大笔钱送孩子到昂贵的寄宿学校(前提得负担得起),他们认为这些学校能让孩子全心投入到学习中.

替换表达：spendafortune/payalargesumofmoney

2-in-depthknowledge

词典释义：in-depth['ɪn.depθ]

adjective

[beforenoun]

■donecarefullyandingreatdetail,ordiscoveringthe

realreasonswhichcausesomething

深入详尽的

•an

in-depth

report/interview/analysis深入的报告／采访／分析

外刊例句：Asanewlyqualifiedsocialworker,havingan

indepthknowledge

oftheorieswill

hopefullyallowmetohaveagreatersensitivitytotheneedsof

service-users,aswellasstopmefromtakinganythingatfacevalue.

()我作为一名合格的新晋社会福利工作者,若能深入了解理论知识,将能对服务对象的需求更敏感,以及不再轻信表面假象.

替换表达：deep/thorough/detailed/intimate/extensiveknowledge

3-bringtotheparty

词典释义：bringsthtotheparty

■toprovide

somethingaspartofanarrangement

贡献;提供…作为安排的一部分：•Sowhat'sCarter'sinvolvementinallofthis?What'she

bringingtothe

party?

那么卡特跟这一切有甚么牵连呢?他在为此做些甚么呢?

外刊例句：IfBritainexpectsaplaceatinternationaltoptables,we

willneedtobeclearwhatwe

bringto

theparty.

()若英国期望于国际社会中位居重要位置,那我们就得搞清楚我们能给国际社会作出什么贡献.

替换表达：contributeto

Q：bringtotheparty这个词组我查了好几个词典都没有,请问一下在哪里可以查到?A：bringto

theparty可以在剑桥词典上查到,剑桥词典在线版：http：///zhs/%E8%AF%8D%E5%85%B8/2.有些人错误地认为收入潜力要比个人爱好更为重要.考虑到普通人一生的工作时间至多45年,那些为了换取高工资而开始一个他们自己不喜欢的职业的人最终会感到精神空虚.Somepeopleincorrectlybelievethat

earningpotential

(1.收入潜力)ismoreimportantthanone's

personalpreferences(2.个人爱好).Giventhattheaverageperson's

workinglife

(3.一生的工作时间)spansupto45years,thosewho

embarkon

(4.开始)acareertheydislikeinexchangeforhighwageswillendupfeelingspirituallyempty.

1-earningpotential

词典释义：potentialUK

[pəʊ'ten.tʃəl]

US

[poʊ-]

noun

uncountable

IMPROVER

■someone'sorsomething'sabilitytodevelop,achieveor

succeed

潜力,潜能•Theregionhas

enormous

potential

foreconomicdevelopment.该地区经济发展潜力无穷.•Idon'tfeelI'm

achieving

my

full

potentialinmypresentjob.我觉得目前的工作没有完全发挥我的潜力.•[+

to

infinitive]Youhavethe

potential

to

reachthetopofyourprofession.你有潜力达到事业的顶峰.•Ithinkthisroomhasgotalotof

potential

(=couldbeverygoodifsomechangesweremadetoit).我觉得这个房间有很多改善空间.

外刊例句：Thescorecard’sagelimitstacksthedeckinthe

pharmacists’favour：whereas28-year-oldsurgeonsarepoorlypaidhospital

residents,28-year-oldpharmacistsareneartheirpeak

earningpotential.

()记录卡考察制度的年龄限制能给药剂师带来极大好处：当28岁的医生在医院领着微薄薪水时,同样年纪的药剂师接近其收入潜力的顶峰.

学生错误表达：(1)

Income/salary

potential点评：earningpotential是一个固定说法,不能写成income/salarypotential(2)

Revenuepotential点评：revenue一般指政府的税收或者公司的收益,不能用来指个人的收入.

2-personalpreferences

词典释义：preference

UK

['pref.ər.ənts]

US

['-ɚ-]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

ADVANCED

■whenyoulikesomethingorsomeonemorethananother

personorthing

偏爱;爱好;喜爱•Her

preference

is

for

comfortablerather

thanstylishclothes.她更注重衣服的舒适性,而非时髦的款式.•Ihavea

preference

for

sweetfoodover

spicy.比起辛辣食物我更喜欢甜食.•Choosingfurnitureislargelyamatterof

personal

preference.挑选家具主要是个人喜好的问题.•Itwouldbewrongtodiscriminateagainstacandidate

becauseoftheir

sexual

preference

(=thesexofthepeople

theyaresexuallyattractedto).出于应聘者的性倾向而对他们有所歧视是错误的.

外刊例句：Givingevidencetoaparliamentarycommittee,Chilcotsaid

"sofagovernment”,inwhichministerswerenotconsultedoncrucial

decisions,reachedahighpointunderBlair.ThisreflectedBlair’s

personalpreferences,hesaid.

()丘科特向议会委员会提交证据,指出"软政府”现象,即首相在处理重大问题时不向各部长咨询意见,于布莱尔任下达到顶峰.他认为,这反映了布莱尔的个人爱好.

学生错误表达：(1)

personal

hobbies点评：hobby是指业余爱好(anactivitythatyouenjoydoinginyourfreetime),但原文说的是做自己感兴趣的、喜欢的工作,所以用这个表达不对.(2)

personal

interest点评：personalinterest是指"与个人利害相关”,例如：Hemusthavenopersonalinterestintheoutcomeofthecase.他必须与此案的结果无任何个人关联.Personalinterest用在这里不合适.

3-workinglife

词典释义：working

lifenoun

PERSON

人

countable

■thepartofaperson'slifewhentheydoajoborareat

work

(一生的)工作时间,工作生涯•Hisentireworkinglifewasspentwiththesamefirm.他一生都在为同一家公司工作.

外刊例句：Lookingatthreehypotheticalpeople,bornindifferent

eras,theauthorsmapoutthescaleoftheproblemandwhatitmightmeanfor

a

workinglife.()该作者聚焦于三位生于不同区域的假设人物,描绘了这个问题的规模及其将对工作生涯有何影响.

学生错误表达：(1)

workingtime点评：workingtime是指"工作时间”,例如：Itsoonbecameapparentthatthe

workingtime

eachweekwouldbelimitedtoabouttwohours.这里应该改为workinglife

4-embarkon

词典释义：embarkUK

[ɪm'bɑ：k]

US

[-bɑ：rk]

formal

verb

intransitive

Phrasal

Verbs

embarkon/uponsth

■tostartsomethingneworimportant

开始,着手做(新的或重要的事情)•We're

embarking

uponanewprojectlaterthisyear.今年晚些时候我们会着手进行一个新企划.

外刊例句：Itdidn’tbodeterriblywellforthesolocareerhewas

forcedto

embarkon

afterhis

burgeoningcelebritybegantoirkRoxyfrontmanBryanFerry.()他名望日渐增加,渐渐惹怒了Roxy乐队主唱布莱恩,随后不得已选择单飞,但其单飞生涯前景似乎不太妙.

替换表达：begin/enter/setabout

Q：preference作爱好解释,应该是不可数的,这里为什么用复数形式?A：preference可以做可数名词,也可以做不可数名词,当它表示"爱好”这一抽象概念时,它是不可数名词,当它表示"偏爱的事物,最喜爱的东西”时,是可数名词,例如：astudyofconsumer

preferences

消费者偏好调查,这里personalpreferences可以表示"各种兴趣爱好”.

3.对所做工作拥有强烈爱好的人更可能精通这份工作.例如,一个喜欢辩论、说理和分析的学生与其他仅仅是为了一份六位数的薪水而学习法律的人相比,能成为一名更好的律师.Peoplewho

haveapassionfor

(1.对……有强烈爱好)theworktheydoaremorelikelyto

excelat

(2.精通)it.Astudentwhoenjoysdebating,arguingandanalyzing,forinstance,would

makeabetterlawyer

(3.成为一名更好的律师)thansomeonewhostudieslawsimplytoearn

asix-figuresalary(4.一份六位数的薪水).

1-haveapassionfor

词典释义：passionapassionforsth

■anextremeinterestinorwishfordoingsomething,such

asahobby,activity,etc

对…的热爱,对…的强烈爱好•Antonhasa

consuming

passion

forscience

fiction.安东对科幻小说痴迷不已.

外刊例句：Theyareusuallyclean-cutandneatlydressed(thefacial

hairinthe"I'maMormon”adsisthankfullyatypical).Andthey

haveapassionfor

business.()他们通常整洁体面,着装得体.(其于"我是摩门教徒”广告中展露的胡须非比寻常,令人欣慰)而且他们对商业十分感兴趣.

替换表达：takeanavidinterestinsomething

学生错误表达：(1)

haveastrong

senseofinterest点评：搭配不当,senseof不能与interest搭配,这里可以改为haveastronginterestin(2)

bestrongly

interesting点评：interesting是指"某事物很有趣”,这里要改为bestronglyinterestedin

2-excelat

词典释义：excel

●○○○○1.VERB

动词

突出;擅长;胜过(他人)

Ifsomeone

excels

in

somethingor

excelsat

it,theyarevery

goodatdoingit.•Cainehasalwaysbeenanactorwho

excelsinirony...凯恩向来是个擅长讽刺的演员.

•Marywasabetterriderthaneitherofthemandshe

excelledatoutdoorsports...玛丽的骑术比他们俩都要好,而且她擅长户外运动.

•Academicallyhebeganto

excel...他开始在学术上超越他人.•IthinkKrishnan

excelled

himselfinalldepartmentsofhisgame.我认为克里舍南在比赛的各个环节都有超常的发挥.

外刊例句：UKuniversities

excel

at

attractingforeignstudents.They'renotsogoodatsendinghome

studentsabroad,andthat'saproblem.

()英国大学尤其擅于吸引外国学生.但他们在送本土学生到外国学习方面却做得不太好,这可是个问题.

替换表达：beproficientin/beskillfulat

3-makeabetterlawyer注意这里make是系动词,而且后跟的表语只能是名词.

词典释义：make[meɪk]

verb

(made,

made)

BEORBECOME

是／成为

IMPROVER

[Lonly+noun]

■tobeorbecome

something,usuallybyhavingthenecessarycharacteristics

(通常因有必需的特点而)成为,变为•Idon'tthinkhewillever

make

a(good)

lawyer.我认为他不能够当(好)律师.•He'sacompetentenoughofficer,butIdoubthe'llever

make

general.他是个很能干的军官,但我怀疑他能否成为将军.•It'sastorythatwould

make

agreatfilm.这是个能用来拍好电影的故事.•Shedecidedthebackroomwould

make

agood

study.她认为后面的房间很适合用作书房.

外刊例句：A

robotwithadefinedpresenceinthehousemight

makeabetterintermediary.()存在感十足的机器人或许能更好地充当家里的调解人.

替换表达：becomeabetterlawyer

4-asix-figuresalary

词典释义：six-figure

adjectiveonlybeforenoun

1.usedtodescribeanumberthatis100,000ormore,especiallyanamountof

money〔尤指钱〕六位数的：•asix-figuresum一笔六位数的钱•asix-figure

salary六位数的薪金

外刊例句：Michelle,a28-year-oldtechworkerwhoearns

asix-figuresalary

atadatascience

startupsaidheronlychanceofbuyingahomewouldbeifshecombinedincome

withapartner.

()米切尔今年28岁,是位于数据科技公司的技术人员,年薪达六位数.她说,若想买房可得找位伴侣一起来才行.

Q：老师,可以这样ismorelikelytobeabetterlawyerthan同时用两个比较级吗?A：这里并不是两个比较级结构,这里只有more…than这一个比较级,这个比较级与islikelytodosomething这一固定表达结合就变成了is

morelikelytobeabetterlawyerthan…

4.在取得研究生学位的过程中,学生会有更多机会去缩小和确定他们的兴趣和职业目标.这样,比起在职场中探索道路的本科学位持有者,他们有能力去更好地专注以及理解他们的专业领域.Intheprocessofearningapostgraduatedegree,studentshavemoreopportunitytonarrowanddefinetheirinterestsand

careerobjectives(1.职场目标).Thiscan

empower

(2.使有能力做……)themwithagreaterfocusandabetterunderstandingoftheirfieldthanundergraduatedegreeholderswhostruggleto

findtheirway

(3.探索道路)intheworkingworld.

1-careerobjectives

词典释义：objective[əb'dʒek.tɪv]

noun

countable

IMPROVER

■somethingwhichyouplantodoorachieve

目标;目的•Her

main/prime

objective

nowissimplyto

stayinpower.她现在的主要目标就是继续掌权.•Canthesalesforce

achieve/meet

itsfinancial

objectives?

销售人员能否完成财务目标?

外刊例句：First,clarifyyour

career

objectives

byidentifyingwhatyouaregoodatandwhatyouenjoy;you

canthenbuilduponthistothriveinyourcareer.()首先,你得通过弄清楚你擅长什么和喜欢什么来让你的职业生涯目标清晰起来,然后你就可以凭此在工作中如鱼得水.

替换表达：careeraims/careergoals

学生错误表达：(1)

career

targets点评：没有careertargets的说法,这里应该改为careeraims/goals/objectives

2-empower

词典释义：empowerUK

[ɪm'paʊər]

US

[-'paʊr]

verb

transitive

■togivesomeoneofficialauthorityorthefreedomtodo

something

给(某人)做…的权力;授权;使自主•[+

to

infinitive]Thisamendment

empowers

thepresident

to

declareanemergencyforawiderangeofreasons.这一修正案授权总统可在一系列情形下宣布进入紧急状态.•Thefirststepin

empowering

thepoorestsections

ofsocietyismakingsuretheyvote.帮助社会最贫困阶层掌握自己命运的第一步就是要确保他们能够参加投票.

外刊例句：Asystemto

empower

employeestocreatetheirowndevelopmentprojects,itwaspioneeredinthe

early1990sbyOticon,aDanishhearing-aidmaker.()让员工能设计自身发展计划的制度首创于上世纪90年代的丹麦助听器制作公司Oticon.

替换表达：enablesbtodosth

3-findone’sway

词典释义：findone's

way

phrasal

1.

a.

：

tomake

one'swaybysearching,inquiry,ortrialanderror

：

managetoreach

somedestination