读后续写练习+泳池挑战：意外蛙泳之困与突破之旅 课件 高考英语复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习泳池挑战：意外蛙泳之困与突破之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Ohno.CoachCaffertyjustsaidmyname.Forthatevent.Thetwo-hundred-metrebreaststroke(蛙泳)forthecomingmeet!Notthebackstroke(仰泳)Ihadwishedandpracticedforsolong!Beadsofsweatpoppedoutovermyupperlip.Morganpressedherelbowintomyside,tryingtooffermemoralsupport.Butitdidn’thelp.Mystomachsanktomykneeslikeabrickinwater.Morgantriedtoconvincemeitwouldbefine.“MaybeCoachhasmoreconfidenceinyouthanyouthink.OrmaybeCoachCaffertyjustwanttogivetherestalaughwhenIsinktothebottomofthepool,”Ithoughtdesperately.IwalkedtowardsCoachCaffertyandtoldheraboutmyinabilityandmydesiretoquitthisevent.ShefrownedandaskedifitwaswhatIreallywanted.4续写原文Ihesitated.Placingherhandonmyshoulder,shestartedsmilingandencouragedmetopushmyselfoutsideofmycomfortzone.Thefirstpracticewasadisaster.Ilostrhythmonmystrokes.Imessedupmyturns.Ievenhadtostopandcatchmybreathafewtimes.Ifelteveryonewaslaughingatmeandmystomachtwisted.HowcouldImakeitwithinjusttwoweeks?ButonceIdraggedmyselfoutofthewater,exhaustedandfrustrated,CoachCaffertythumbeduptome,sayingIdidreallywellandjustneededmoreconfidenceinmyselfandmoretimetopractice.5续写原文Onthewaybackhome,Morgancomfortedme,“Dear,justignoreothers.Raceagainstyourself.Countyourownstrokes.Provetoyourselfthatyoucandoit.”Withthesewordssaidtomealmosteveryday,beforeoraftereachpractice,somethinggraduallychanged:bothhowIswamthebreaststrokeandhowIfeltabouttheeventaswellasmyself.Themeetfinallycame.Iarrivedatthepoolhall,stillalittlebitworried.Aseacheventclickedclosertomine,mykneesshook.Ibitmylipandlookedoutovertheotherswimmers.Morganleanedforward.“Justswimyourrace.Remember,youcan!”6段首句Paragraph1:Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.Paragraph2:Therewasonly50meterstogo.

7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为中心展开，小汤姆是个调皮捣蛋、行为恶劣的九岁男孩，常捉弄他人。一天放学后，他看到一位衣着朴素但整洁的陌生人路过村子，便起了捉弄之心，悄悄从后面敲掉陌生人的帽子后跑开，再次靠近时被抓住又挣脱，接着还用石头砸陌生人，致使其头部受伤。随后小汤姆跑回家，却得知这位陌生人竟是离家多年、带着礼物徒步归来想给家人惊喜的叔叔。小汤姆此前的恶行让他此刻满心恐惧与后怕，他也必将为自己的所作所为付出代价并汲取教训。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.接着，两百米蛙泳比赛项目被宣布开始。我站在起跳台上，心砰砰直跳，紧张得几乎无法呼吸。回想起这段时间的训练，从最初的抗拒到后来逐渐适应，心中五味杂陈。周围的观众声浪仿佛被一层无形的屏障阻隔在外，我眼里只有眼前的泳池水道。深吸一口气，随着哨声响起，我纵身跃入水中，按照教练指导的节奏奋力划动双臂，努力克服内心的不安，一心只想在这场意外的蛙泳挑战中展现出自己最好的状态。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Therewasonly50meterstogo只剩下50米了。我的手臂已经酸痛不已，但脑海里只有一个信念：坚持。我能感觉到旁边选手的水花溅起带来的压力，但我告诉自己不要分心。此时，教练和摩根的鼓励话语在耳边回响，每一次划臂、蹬腿都倾注了我全部的力量。我咬紧牙关，拼尽最后一丝力气加速冲刺，眼睛紧紧盯着终点线，仿佛那是我跨越困境、证明自己成长与蜕变的唯一目标，无论结果如何，我都要为这段特殊的蛙泳经历画上一个无憾的句号。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thenthetwo-hundred-meterbreaststrokewasannounced.MyheartwaspoundingviolentlyasIstoodonthestartingblock.Icouldscarcelybreatheduetotheintensenervousness.Recallingthetrainingperiodfromtheinitialresistancetothegradualadaptation,acomplexmixofemotionswelledupwithinme.Thecheersofthesurroundingaudienceseemedtobeblockedbyaninvisiblebarrier.AllIcouldseewastheswimminglaneinfrontofme.Takingadeepbreath,Ileapedintothewaterwiththewhistle.Istrivedtopaddlemyarmswiththerhythminstructedbythecoach,tryingmybesttoovercometheinneruneasiness.Iwasonlyfocusedonpresentingmybestperformanceinthisunexpectedbreaststrokechallenge.14范文呈现Therewasonly50meterstogo.Myarmswerealreadyachingseverely,buttherewasonlyonebeliefinmymind:topersevere.Icouldsensethepressurefromthesplashesoftheadjacentswimmers,butItoldmyselfnottobedistracted.Atthismoment,thewordsofencouragementfromthecoachandMorganechoedinmyears.Everystrokeofmyarmsandkicksofmylegswasfilledwithallmystrength.Iclenchedmyteethandacceleratedwiththelastounceofmyenergyforthefinaldash.Myeyeswerefixedfirmlyonthefinishline,asifitwastheonlygoalformetocrossthedifficultiesandprovemygrowthandtransformation.Nomatterwhattheresultwouldbe,Iwasdeterminedtoendthisspecialbreaststrokeexperiencewithoutregrets.15升级版范文呈现Thenthetwo-hundred-meterbreaststrokewasannounced.Standingonthestartingblock,myheartpoundinglikeadrum,scarcelyabletodrawabreathduetotheoverwhelmingnervousness.Recallingthearduoustrainingjourney,whichwasfilledwithinitialreluctanceyetgradualadaptation,amedleyofemotionsfloodedmyheart.Thecheersoftheaudience,muffledasifbyaninvisiblecurtain,failedtodistractme.Withadeepbreath,Iplungedintothewaterfollowingtheshrillwhistle.Paddlingmyarmswiththerhythmtaughtbythecoach,Iendeavoredtoconquertheinnerturmoil.Itwasthisunexpectedbreaststrokeeventthatbecamemysolefocus.16升级版范文呈现Therewasmerely50metersleft.Myarms,achingasifonfire,stillcarriedtheunwaveringbeliefofperseverance.Thesplashesoftherivalswimmersbesideme,ratherthanintimidating,spurredmeon.ThewordsofencouragementfromthecoachandMorgan,constantlyringinginmyears,werethefuelofmyfinalspurt.Kickingandstrokingwithallmymight,myeyeslockedontothefinishline.