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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onasnowynightinmidwinter,acouplewanderedalongaruralhighwayinOhio,seekingshelter.Thefather-to-bescannedtheroadsideforsomehomeorsomeinn,wherehisstrugglingcompanionmightrestsafelyforthenight.Helookedoveratherfrequently.Shelaboredalongwithoutcomplaint,herwaymadeheavierbythenewlifegrowinginsideher.Theyneededawarm,dryplacesafefromthebitterwind.Whenhertimecame,itmustnotbeoutherealongtheroadway.TheirnameswerenotMaryandJoseph,butPepperandCooper.Norweretheymanandwife,butratherapairofdogs.GusKiebel,acountywildlifeofficer,wasdrivinghomefromworkwhenhespottedthepairintheflashofhisheadlights.Curiousandconcerned,Guspulledoverandapproachedthedogs,whichmadenoefforttoescape.Theywerebothwearingcollarswithtags,sohebentdownandreadtheirnames-PepperandCooper-beforeattemptingtocallthenumberlisted.Thesnowfallwassothickthathisphonescreenbecametoowettoworkproperly,soGusdecidedtotakethedogsintohistruckforwarmth.Onceinside,thedogsquicklyclimbedontothepassengerseat,snugglingtogetherforcomfort.Gustookaphotoandsentittohiswife,Katie,beforecallingthenumberonthetagsagain.Amananswered,butwhenGusexplainedthathehadfoundthedogs,themanquickly,distancedhimselffromthesituation.“Igavethemaway,"hesaid.ItbecamecleartoGusthatthedogshadbeenabandoned.Nohomeforthedogsatallinthisworld!Guslookedoveratthem,theirlargeeyespleading.GuscalledKatie.“Youcannotputthembackoutinthesnowstorm,”shesaid.“Bringthemhome.”.TheKiebelspreparedabedforthedogsontheirwarmenclosedporch,alsosettingoutfoodandwater.Theexhaustedanimalslaytogether,CooperperiodicallyliftinghisheadtofussoverPepper.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————文章大意:在一个冬夜,怀孕的母狗Pepper和公狗Cooper在俄亥俄州乡村公路流浪,被野生动物官员GusKiebel发现。它们虽有项圈却遭主人遗弃,Gus与妻子Katie决定收留它们过夜并准备食物和床铺。文章围绕狗狗被发现后的遭遇及后续去向展开,体现出人与动物之间的温情故事。伏笔与回应:伏笔:狗狗在雪地中流浪且Pepper怀着孕。回应:Kiebel夫妇的收留和照顾为它们提供了暂时的避风港,后续送往收容所也着重关注了Pepper的孕期状况并给予特殊照顾。伏笔:狗狗戴着有信息的项圈。回应:Gus试图联系原主人,但原主人的遗弃态度促使Gus夫妇决定救助,也为收容所登记信息提供了便利。伏笔:Gus把狗狗带回家,妻子Katie表示支持。回应:为后续Kiebels夫妇持续关注狗狗在收容所的情况并最终决定收养埋下伏笔,体现他们的善良和对狗狗的关爱。伏笔:狗狗在卡车里依偎取暖。回应:表明它们渴望温暖与庇护,这使得Kiebels夫妇更坚定了帮助它们的决心,在收容所也努力为它们营造舒适环境。伏笔:Cooper对Pepper很照顾。回应:在收容所里这种相互陪伴的关系依旧明显,也让Kiebels夫妇看到它们之间深厚的情感,更不忍分离。续写要点:情感线:第一段从狗狗被带到收容所时的不安与对新环境的陌生感,到逐渐感受到工作人员善意后的平静;第二段从Kiebels夫妇探望时狗狗的兴奋与依赖,到最后被收养时的安心与幸福。故事线:第一段讲述Kiebels联系收容所送狗狗前往,收容所检查安置并登记信息;第二段描述Kiebels多次探望,狗狗反应热烈,最终Kiebels完成收养手续带狗狗回家。主旨升华句:Inthefaceofabandonment,alittlekindnesscanlightupthedarkestpath.(面对遗弃,一点善意能照亮最黑暗的道路。)Thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonloveandcompassion.(人与动物之间的纽带建立在爱与同情之上。)Rescuingtheforsakenisnotonlyanactofmercybutalsoagiftofhope.(拯救被遗弃者不仅是一种仁慈之举,也是一份希望的礼物。)Truekindnessneverfades;itenduresandtransformslives.(真正的善良永不褪色;它持久并改变生活。)Whenweopenourheartstothehomeless,wefindanewfamilymember.(当我们向无家可归者敞开心扉时,我们就找到了一个新的家庭成员。)写作示范一:Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.Theydrovethedogstotheshelter,wherethestaffgreetedthemwarmly.Afterhearingthestory,theshelterworkerscheckedPepperandCoopercarefully.Theyprovidedasoft,warmbedforPepper,especiallyconsideringherpregnancy.Cooperwasalsogivenacomfortablespacebesideher.TheKiebelsfilledoutformswiththeinformationfromthedogs'tags,hopingitmighthelpincasetheoriginalownerhadachangeofheart.Thedogsseemedabitwaryatfirstbutsoonrelaxedwiththegentlecoaxingoftheshelterstaff.
Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.Eachtimetheyentered,PepperandCooperwouldruntothem,tailswaggingwithexcitement.TheKiebelsspenthoursplayingwiththemandpettingthem.Astimepassed,itwasclearthatthedogshadbecomedeeplyattachedtotheKiebels.TheKiebelsrealizedtheycouldn'tletthesetwogo.So,theycompletedtheadoptionprocessandtookPepperandCooperhome,wheretheywouldbepartofthefamilyforever.写作示范二:Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.GuscarriedPepperandCooperintotheshelter.Thestaffimmediatelytookover,promisingtotakegoodcareofthem.TheygavePepperathoroughexaminationtoensurethehealthofherandherunbornpups.Cooperstayedcloseby,watchingprotectively.Theshelterputupposterswiththedogs'picturesandinformation,incasesomeonewaslookingforthem.TheKiebelsleftreluctantlybutknewtheywereingoodhands.
Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.Thedogs'eyeslitupwhentheysawtheKiebels.Theywouldjumpandbarkwithjoy.TheKiebelsbroughttreatsandtoys,makingthevisitsspecial.Afterseveralvisits,theKiebelsfeltanunbreakableconnection.TheydecidedtoadoptPepperandCooper.Onthedaytheytookthemhome,thedogsseemedtounderstandandnestledhappilyinthecar,readytostarttheirnewlifewiththeirlovingnewfamily.读后续写参考答案Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.“Bothofusarepassionatedoglovers,butkeepingthispairwasoutofthequestion-wealreadyhadafamilydog,”saidGus.Theythentookthedogstothesheltertodropthemoff-ono
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