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RevisionBook5Unit3FoodandCultureUsingLanguage(2)—ReadingforWritingUnit3FoodandcultureLearningobjectivesInthisperiod,youareexpectedto:figureoutthestructureofadescriptivewritingabouthealthyeating;realizetheimportanceofahealthydietandwriteapassageonhowtodevelopgoodeatinghabits.TheHealthPyramidWhatmakesupahealthydiet?What’stheruleforhealthyeating?Lead-incutdownonsweetdrinks,junkfoods…eatmorefruitandvegetablesupyourfibreintakeeatlessprocessedmeatNowlet’sreadapassagetolearnmoreabouthealthyeating.PredictLookatthetitleandpicturesandpredictwhatthepassageisabout.Whatisahealthydiet?Howcanweeathealthily?…Skimthepassageandunderlinethetopicsentences.12345
SlowEatingisGoodReducingSweetsisKeyTheRealKillerisSugarTheWayYouLookatFoodisMostImportantKeepitFreshandBalanced12345Findoutthesubheadingsofeachparagraph.
SummarizethemainideaConclusion(Para.5)Adviceonhealthyeating(Para.2-4)Introduceatopicoraphenomenon
(Para.1)ReadforthestructureTask1:Whatarethekeydetailsthatsupporteachpoint?A.Therealdriverofpoorhealthisnotsomuchfattyfood,asitissugar.Detail(s):HeartdiseaseisthenumberonekillerofAmericans.AndinAmerica,peoplewhoreceive25%oftheirdailycaloriesormorethroughsugararetwiceaslikelytodiefromheartdiseasethanpeoplewhoreceivelessthan10%aday.Para1:TheRealKillerisSugarGivedata(fromauthorities);MakeacomparisonReadfordetailedinformationB:Muchofthisextrasugarcomesfromsweetsandsweetdrinks.Detail(s):TheaverageAmericangets1/3ofhisorhersugarthroughsweetdrinksalone.Para2ReducingSweetsisKey
Givedata;QuoterecommendationsfromauthoritiesC:Youcankeephealthybyconsumingdifferentcategoriesoffreshfoods...ratherthanprocessedfoods.Detail(s)
:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fruitandvegetablesarefullofvitaminsandfibre.Processedfoodsoftencontainlessnutrition,andhavehigherquantitiesofsugar,salt,andfatthanfreshingredients.Para3MakeacomparisonPara4explanationexamplesWhat’sthefundamentalkeytohealthyeating?Eatslowly,regularlyandeatinmoderation(适量).Howdoesthewritersupporthiskeypoint?Para5Howdoyouunderstandit?consumedifferentcategoriesoffreshfoodsratherthan
processedfoodsformconsistenteatinghabitseatamodestamountoffoodcutdownondessertscutoutsweetdrinksSummaryeatslowlyhealthyeatinghabitsTask2Underlinethelinkingwordsinthepassagethatintroduceanotherwayofsayingwhatwasalreadymentionedintheprevioussentence.Para1Para2Para4WhatthismeansisthatPutmoresimplyInotherwordsTask3Circlethelinkingwordsinthepassagewhichshowthatcontrastingideasarebeingintroduced.Para3Para1Para5Para5Whileratherthanratherhowever论证逻辑LinkingwordsTointroduceanotherwayofsayingwhatwasalreadymentionedtoputmoresimply,inotherwords,whatthismeansisthat,thatis(tosay),toputthisinanotherway,insimplewords/terms,orrather(更确切地说)…Toshowthatcontrastingideasarebeingintroducedhowever,while,ratherthan,
rather,but,onthecontrary,instead,conversely,whereas(然而),ontheotherhand,unlike,nevertheless,otherwise,incontrast…Tolistoraddinformationbesides,also,inaddition,whatismore,moreover,furthermore…Togiveexampleforexample,forinstance,suchas,like…SummaryWriting
1.Compareyourowneatinghabitswiththeruleswritteninthetext.1)Doyouhavehealthyeatinghabits?2)Ifnot,whatcanyoudotogetridofthem?
2.Writeaboutyourowneatinghabits.BrainstormusefulexpressionsstructureListyoureatinghabits.Healthy?orunhealthy?...languagefeaturesIntroduction:aclearpoint/thesisBodyparagraph:topicsentence1+detailstopicsentence2+detailstopicsentence3+detailsConclusion:ashortsummarycaloriesnutritionahealthydietprocessedfoodconsistenteatinghabitsamodestamount...
Linkingwords:putmoresimply/inotherwords/ratherthan/however...Brainstorm:Howtowriteadescriptiveessayaboutyourowndiet?WritingAdvice:1.cutdownondessertsandcutoutsweetdrinks.2.consumefreshfoods3.havesomemeat,beansordairyproduct.4.keepabalanceddiet.5.eatslowly6.formconsistenteatinghabits7.eatamodestamountoffood.8.haveahealthyattitudetowardsfood.Suggestions1.Wecan/should/havetodo...2.Itisimportant/better/...todo...3.wehadbetterdo...4.Isuggest/recommendthatweshoulddo...Connectors:putmoresimply;beyondthis;besidesthis;inotherwords;inaddition;ratherthan......Useyournotestowriteyouressay.Youcanstartlikethis:Overall,IthinkIhavehealthy/unhealthyeatinghabits.AsforthethingsthatIamdoingright,...Still,Ishouldimprovemyeatinghabitsby...UsefulexpressionsExchangeyourdraftwithapartner.Usethischecklisttohelpyourevisethedraft.Thentakeyourdraftbackandreviseitusingyourpartner’scomments.
Doesthewriterusedetailstosupporteachpoint?
Doesthewriteruseproperlinkingwordstotietheessaytogether?
Hasthewriterreallythoughtabouthisorherdietcarefully?
Doesthewriterusevividwordstoaddstresstohisorherpoints?SampleWriting
Overall,IthinkIhavehealthyeatinghabits.AsforthethingsthatIamdoingright,Iameatingavarietyof/differentcategoriesofhealthyfoodsandtryingtoeatfreshfoodasmuchaspossible.Irarelyconsumesweetfoodsandprocessedfood,letalonejunkfood.
However,Idohavesomebadeatinghabits.TherearesomefoodsthatIshouldnoteattoomuchof.Forexample,riceandbreadarehealthy,buteatingtoomuchcancausemetogainweightandfeeltired.SoIshouldbecarecarefulwithhowmuchIconsume.ThesamegoesforthepancakesIbuyonthestreet.Theyaredelicious,buttheyarebynomeanshealthy.Therefore,IshouldbecarefulwithhowoftenIconsumethem.Inadditiontotheabove,Isometimesfindmyselftoobusyandforgettoeatoreattoofast,whichresultsinpoorhealth.Still,Ishouldimprovemybadeatinghabitsbyalwaystakingthetimetoeatslowly,evenifI’mbusy.
Tosumup,Inowbetterunderstandhowtoeatmorehealthilyandimprovemyfoodchoices.Iholdthefirmbeliefthat
healthyeatingstartswithhavingahealthyattitudetowardsfood.It’
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