新高考英语｜读后续写素材积累之高分句式课件-2025届高三英语作文专项复习

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高分句式句型1：场景+情绪+面部描写（肢体动作）Seeing(Hearing/Thinkingof...)sb./sth,sb.feltastrong(anoverwhelming)senseof+情绪名词wellingupinsidesb.andsurgingthroughone'sbody,(withtearsof+情绪名词runningdownone'scheeks).看到(听到/想到…)某人/某物，某人感觉一股强烈的...情绪涌上心头并涌遍全身，（....的泪水从某人的脸上流下来了）。例：Seeingadarkfigureapproaching,Lilyfeltastrongsenseoffearwellingupinsideherandsurgingthroughherbody,withtearsofhopelessnessrunningdownhercheeks.【注：】最后的with结构还可以换成以下的肢体表达1)withhands+非谓语动词(shaking/waving/sweating/crossed交叉/clenched紧握/2)withlegs+非谓语动词(trembling/kicking/frozen静止/rootedtothespot一动不动）3)witheyes+非谓语动词（fixedon.../staringat...盯着/lockedon...锁住/lookingupanddown上下看/burningwithfire怒气冲冲/twinklingwithpleasure(excitement)闪耀喜悦、兴奋的光芒/widewithhorror(surprise)害怕、惊讶睁大眼睛）4)withhead+非谓语动词（drooping耷拉着/bent(bowed/lowered)头低着/helduphigh头抬得高高得/spinning头晕目眩/）5)withface+非谓语动词(turningpale变苍白/burninghot火辣辣的/litup面露喜色/forcingasmile勉强微笑/growingserious变严肃)句型1应用实例：1.看到他跳入(jumpinto)水中，我感到一股强烈的希望涌上心头并涌遍全身，激动的泪水从我的脸上留下。Seeinghimjumpingintowater,Ifeltastrongsenseofhopewellingupinsidemeandsurgingthroughmybody,withtearsofthrillstreamingdownmycheeks.2.听到他因运动员精神而被授予一个奖项，他感到一股强烈的激动之情涌上心头并涌遍全身，眼睛闪耀着喜悦的光芒。Hearinghewasawardedaprizeforhissportsmanship,hefeltastrongsenseofhopewellingupinsidehimandsurgingthroughhisbody,witheyessparklingwithjoy.3.想到她要一个人在这漆黑的森林度过一个晚上，她感到一股强烈的绝望与无助涌上心头并涌遍全身，脸变得苍白起来。Thinkingshewouldspendanightaloneinthisdarkforest,shefeltastrongsenseofdespairandhopelessnesswellingupinsideherandsurgingthroughherbody,withfaceturningpale.句型2：“as倒装+拟人修辞”惊艳到爆2.adj.+adj.assb/sth.be,sb.stilldidsth.asiftherewasaninnervoicetellingsb.thatsb.shoulddosth.=adj.+adj.assb.be,sb.stilldidsth.,doingsth(非谓语),withaninnervoicereminding/encouragingsb.(not)todosth.尽管既......又......，某人仍然做某事，(做某事)仿佛内心有个声音告诉/提醒/鼓励某人，（不）做某事（“面对困难”可用）例：Downcastandfrustrated,Daviddidnotgiveintothisraceasiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimthathecoulddowhateverhewanted.句型2应用实例1.尽管既艰难又有挑战性(challenging)，他仍然游向（swimtowards）我女儿，仿佛内心有个声音告诉他，他不应该放弃。Toughandchallengingasitwas,hestillswamtowardsmydaughter,asiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimnottogiveup.2.尽管既疲惫又失落，Mr.Ray依然相信能找到他丢失的车，仿佛内心有个声音告诉他，他要坚持下去。Exhaustedanddowncast,Mr.Raystillclungtothebeliefthathecouldfindhislostcarasiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimtokeepon.3.尽管断掉电子设备既艰难又煎熬，我依然努力克制自己的渴望，仿佛内心有个声音在鼓励我，“你可以做到的。”Arduousandtorturingasitwastoweanmyselffromelectronicdevices,Istilldoubledmyeffortstorefrainfrommyurgewithaninnervoiceencouragingme,“Youcandoit!”句型3表示“一.......就....”多样表达不会腻1)Awaveof+情绪名词tookholdofsb.themomentsb.didsth.某人一做某事，某种情绪占据了某人。(此处的themoment也可换成theinstant/theminute等）2）Hardlyhadsb.donesth.when....=Nosoonerhadsb.donesth.than...3)Upondoingsth.,sb.didsth.例：AwaveofsadnesstookholdofmethemomentIwasnotchosenfortheteam.句型3应用实例1.一看到他们返回岸边(theshore)，喜悦的情绪占据了我。ThemomentIsawtheirreturntotheshore,awaveofjoytookholdofme.2.他一打开房门，就看到一个为他精心准备的蛋糕映入眼帘，使他充满的感动与温暖，驱散了一天工作的疲惫感。Hardlyhadheopenedthedoorwhenhesawacarefullypreparedcakegreetinghiseyes,fillinghimwithgratitudeandwarmth,dispellingtirednessafteradayofwork.3.一得知被心仪的大学录取了，Tim迫不及待地跑回家与妈妈分享他的喜悦。Uponknowinghewasadmittedtohisidealuniversity,Timcouldn’twaittosharehisdelightwithhismom.句型4全部倒装呈现“百感交集”Atthatverymoment,withinone’sheartwasafeelingof+情绪名词A，mixedwithoverwhelming+情绪名词,makingsb....

例句：Atthatverymoment,withinmyheartwasafeelingofgratitude,mixedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,makingmeunabletoutteranyword.句型4应用实例1.在那一刻，我的内心充满不安，夹杂着一丝悔意，使我站在原地一动不动。Atthatverymoment,withinmyheartwasafeelingofanxiety，mixedwithoverwhelmingregret,makingmefrozenonthespot.2.在那一刻，Peter内心充满了惊讶之情，夹杂着极大的激动之情，使他进入到了奇幻的世界。Atthatverymoment,withinPeter’sheartwasafeelingofamazement，mixedwithoverwhelmingtremendousthrill,makinghimintoawonderland.3.在那一刻，Linda的内心充满的愤怒，夹杂着无以言表的羞愧之情，使她不敢面对家人。Atthatverymoment,withinLinda’sheartwasafeelingofanger，mixedwithoverwhelminginexpressibleshame,makingherunabletofaceherfamily.句型5witness无灵主句“说”变化时间+witnessedone’sprogress/growth/changes,from...to...时间见证....的变化/成长，从....到(此句型十分适用于“人与动物”话题，如描述“动物的改变”)例：Thefollowingdaywitnessedthelittlecat’sprogress,fromaweakpoorcreturetakenhomebymetoalivelyandenergeticsoldier.句型5应用实例1.接下来的几周见证了这个麻雀的变化，从一开始毫无生命力的双眼到现在的眼里充满好奇，从耷拉的翅膀到时不时的振翅。Thefollowingweekswitnessedthissparrow’sprogress/growth/changes,frominitiallifelesseyestoeyesfilledwithcuriosity,fromdroopingwingstooccassionaldeterminedfluttering.2.接下来的几个月见证Lucy的变化，从对队友的冷漠和无视到热情地融入到这个集体中来，从一言不发到无话不说。ThenextmonthswitnessedLucy’sprogress/growth/changes,frombeingindifferenttoherteammatestoherenthusiasmaboutfittinginwiththisteam,frombeingsilenttobeingeagertoshareeverything.3.接下来的几天见证了我们关系的转折点，从相互之间的敌对与对抗到形影不离。Thedaysaheadwitnessedaturningpointofourrelationship,frombeinghostiletoeachotherandconfrontationtobeinginseparable.句型6矛盾心理，左右为难sb.sankintoaninnerconflictbetween...

and...sb.wastornbetween...and...one’semotionsswungbetween...and...以上句型均可用来人物内心处于矛盾当中，在两件事中犹豫不决。例：Shesankintoaninnerconflictbetweenherloveofdancingandherfearofperforminginpublic。她内心充满矛盾，既热爱舞蹈又害怕公开表演。

句型6应用实例

他内心充满矛盾，在坚持自己的飞行员梦与父亲的期待之间产生冲突。Hesankintoaninnerconflictbetweenstickingtohisdreamofbeingapilot

andhisfather’sexpectation.

Cindy在选择帮助需要帮助的人与花时间在自己的兴趣上矛盾着。Cindywastornbetweenhelpingothersinneedandspendingtimeonherowninterest.句型7“否定+比较”凸显文章主题nothingwasmore+形容词thansth.,constantlyremindingsb.ofthesignificanceof...

此句型可用于“某物”在文章中起到警示、提醒等作用，来彰显文章主题。

例：Nothingwasmoreimportantthisbrokenvase,remindinghimofthesignificanceofbeinganhonestboy.没有什么比这个破碎的花瓶更重要了，它提醒着他做一个诚实的男孩的重要性。句型7应用实例在他的卧室里，没有什么比这三颗巧克力更引人注目的了，时刻提醒着他诚实的重要性。Inhisbedroom,nothingwasmorestrikingthanthethreechocolates,constantlyremindinghimofthesignificanceofbeinghonest.在他心里，没有什么比这个损坏的手表更具有教育意义的了，时刻提醒着他耐心的重要性。Nothingwasmoreeducationalthanthisbrokenwatch,constantlyremindinghimofthesignificanceofpatience.

没有什么比这个这张纸条更令人动容的了，时刻提醒着Peter善良的重要性。Nothingwasmoretouchingthanthisnote,constantlyremindingPeterofthesignificanceofkindness。句型8情绪转变这样说更生动情绪1+情绪2werereplacedby/gavewayto/translatedinto/wereconvertedinto

情绪3+情绪4

上述短语均可表达情绪的转变，如：Hissadnessanddisappointmentwerereplacedby/gavewayto/translatedinto/wereconvertedinto

joyandexcitement.句型8应用实例在得知自己被选为篮球队队员后，他最初失望和挫败的情绪转变成了欣喜和自豪。Aftertheknowledgethathewaschosenbythebasketballteam,hisinitialdisappointmentandfrustrationwasreplacedbyjoyandpride.狂怒不安的熊步步逼近，我们紧张担心的情绪转变成了恐惧与绝望。Withtheragingbearapproaching,ourtensionandconcerngavewaytofearanddespair.

直升机的轰鸣声响彻天空，简一开始的焦虑与害怕转变成了喜悦和激动。Therumbleofthehelicopterbrokethesky.Jane’sanxietyandfearatthebiginningwereconvertedintodelightandthrill.句型9期望变失望怎么写whatawaitedsb.wasAratherthanB,throwingsb.intoastateof...等待某人的是A不是B，使某人陷入了.....的状态

此句型用于说明某人期待的事情与自己的预期不符，从而使其陷入消极的情绪当中，如：Whatawaitedhimwasdisapprovalratherthandad’sunderstanding,throwinghimintoastateofdisappointment.句型9应用实例然而,等待我的不是妈妈热心的支持，而是她失望的眼神，使我陷入了悲伤的境地。Whatawaitedmewasmom’sdisappointinglookratherthanhersupport,throwingmeintoastateofsadness.等待他的不是老师的肯定而是批评，使他陷入了自我怀疑的境地。Whatawaitedhimwascritisimratherthanhisteacher’srecognition,throwinghimintoastateofself-doubt.

等待他的不是大家的鼓励而是一阵嘲笑，使他陷入了绝望的境地。

Whatawaitedhimwaseveryone’steaserathertha