【读后续写】Showering-概要写作课件分享-名师课件-胡坤林VIP

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HuTakingashower1.Readingforideas2.Organizingideas3.PresentingideasWhatisthetexttype?Whatdoestheauthortrytotellusaboutshowering?Howisitdiscovered?Howdoestheauthorrecommendustodointheend?SkimthepiecePara.1Takingashowerisrelaxing.Youcanhumasong,daydreamorthinkaboutnothing,leavingtherealworldbehindyou.Butdidyouknowthatshoweringcanalsobenefityourmind?ApieceofresearchbyScottKaufman,apsychologistfromYaleUniversityintheUSinterviewedover3,000peoplearoundtheworld.Itturnedoutthatnearlytwo-thirdsoftheintervieweessaidtheyhadexperiencednewideasintheshowerandweremorelikelytohavethemintheshowerthanatwork.

relaxingbenefityourmindButAbriefoutlinePara.1:__________________________Showeringcanbenefitourmind.What:Howdoestheauthorrecommendustodointheend?Para.5Showeringallowsustoenjoythecreativejuicesofourminds,whichmakesthebathroomanalternativewhereyougetyourinspiration.Sonexttimewhenyouconsiderwaystofreeyourmind,countitin.

alternativeinspirationcountitinSoAbriefoutlinePara.1:__________________________Para.5:__________________________ __________________________Showeringcanbenefitourmind.Showeringshouldbeconsideredifwetrytofreeourmind.What:How:Para.2:__________?______________Para.3:__________?______________Para.4:__________?______________?SoPara.2Sowhydoesasimpleshowerhavesuchmagicpower?Sciencecanexplainit.Showeringcanhelptoraiseourlevelofdopamine,ahormonecloselyrelatedtoourcreativity.“Peoplevaryintermsoftheirlevelofcreativityaccordingtotheactivityofdopamine”,explainedAliceFlaherty,arenownedAmericanneuroscientist.“Awarmshowercanmakethedopaminelevelriseandbringthe‘Aha!’momenttous.”

whyScienceraiseourlevelofdopaminecreativitySoPara.1:__________________________Para.5:__________________________ __________________________Para.2:Itcanraisethe________________________Showeringcanbenefitourmind.dopaminelevel.Showeringshouldbeconsideredifwetrytofreeourmind.What:1stevidence:How:AbriefoutlinewhySoPara.3Besidesthechemicalchanges,showeringmaygiveyouabreakfromwhatyoufeelyouhavebeen

stuckwith.Especiallywhenyouhavethoughthardalldayaboutaproblem,jumpingintotheshowercankeepyoufromtheoutsideworldsothatyoucanfocusonyourinnerfeelingsandmemories.Inthisway,accordingtoAmericanpsychologistShelleyCarson,authorofYourCreativeBrain,“ashoweringhourmayturnintoan‘incubationperiod’foryourideas”.

breakkeepyoufromtheoutsideworldfocusonyourinnerfeelingsandmemoriesincubationperiodBesidesespeciallyinthiswayPara.1:__________________________Para.5:__________________________ __________________________Para.2:Itcanraisethe________________________Para.3:____________________________________Showeringcanbenefitourmind.dopaminelevelShoweringshouldbeconsideredifwetrytofreeourmind.What:1stevidence:2ndevidence:How:“incubationperiod”forideasAbriefoutlineBesideswhySoPara.4Comparedwithsittinginfrontofacomputer,takingashowerissomethingwedolessfrequentlyinourdailylives.Whenshowering,wegetafreshexperiencewiththechangeoflocation,temperatureandhumidity.“Unexpectedexperiencescanleadtopositivechangesinthinking,”explainedKaufman.“Innewsurroundings,wetendtothinkfromanewpointofview”.

lessfrequentlythechangeoflocation,temperatureandhumiditynewsurroundingsPara.1:__________________________Para.5:__________________________ __________________________Para.2:Itcanraisethe________________________Para.3:____________________________________Para.4:____________________________________Showeringcanbenefitourmind.dopaminelevelShoweringshouldbeconsideredifwetrytofreeourmind.What:1stevidence:2ndevidence:3rdevidence:How:“incubationperiod”forideas“newandunexpectedsurroundings”AbriefoutlinewhyBesidesSobenefityourmindcountitinSowhyraiseourlevelofdopamineincubationperiodBesidesnewsurroundingsWhat:How:Doyoupresentthethemeofthearticlecorrectly?Doyouincludeonlytheimportantsupportingpoints?Doyouuseappropriatetransitionsforoverallcoherence?Isitconciseanddoyoupresentitwithabout60words?Doyouuseyourownwords?e.g.Showeringcanbenefityourmind.experiencenewideasintheshowerChecklist:bringthe‘Aha!’momenttousturnintoan‘incubationperiod’foryourideasleadtopositivechangesinthinking…thinkfromanewpointofviewenjoythecreativejuicesofourminds…getyourinspiration…freeyourmindSpelling,grammar,an