2025届高考英语二轮复习强化专练考点13书面表达概要写作含解析

考点13书面表达概要写作Writing1（2024·上海市大同中学高三期中）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownworsasfaraspossible.PedestriansonlyTheconceptoftraffic-freeshoppingareasgoesbackalongtime.DuringtheMiddleAges,traffic-freeshoppingareaswerebuilttoallowpeopletoshopincomfortand,moreimportantly,safety.Themodern,traffic-freeshoppingstreetwasborninEuropeinthe1960s,whenbothcitypopulationsandcarownershipincreasedrapidly.Dirtyexhaustfumesfromcarsandtherisksinvolvedincrossingtheroadwerebeginningtomakeshoppinganunpleasantanddangerousexperience.Manybelievedthetimewasrightforexperimentingwithcar-freestreets,andshoppingareasseemedthebestplacetostart.Atfirst,therewasresistancefromshopkeepers.Theybelievedthatsuchamovewouldbebadforbusiness.Theyarguedthatpeoplewouldavoidstreetsiftheywereunabletogettothemintheircars.WhenthefirststreetsinEuropewereclosedtotraffic,therewereevennoisydemonstrations,asmanyshopkeeperspredictedtheywouldlosecustomers.However,researchcarriedoutafterwardsinseveralEuropeancitiesrevealedsomeunexpectedstatistics.InMunich,CologneandHamburg,visitorstoshoppingareasincreasedby50percent.OnCopenhagen’smainshoppingstreet,shopkeepersreportedsalesincreasesof25-40percent.ShopkeepersinMinneapolis,USA,weresoimpressedwhentheylearntthisthattheyevenofferedtopayfortheconstructionandmaintenancecostsoftheirowntraffic-freestreets.Withthearrivalofthetraffic-freeshoppingstreet,manyshops,especiallythosesellingthingslikeclothes,foodandsmallerluxuryitems,prospered.Unfortunately,itwasn’tgoodnewsforeveryone,asshopssellingfurnitureandlargerelectricalappliancesactuallysawtheirsalesdrop.Manyofthesewereforcedtomoveelsewhere,awayfromthecitycentre.Todaytheyareacommonfeatureontheoutskirtsoftownsandcities,oftensituatedinout-of-townretailzoneswiththeirowncarparksandotherlocalfacilities.【答案】Theideaoftraffic-freeshoppingareasappearedlongago.Inthe1960s,themodern,pedestrianshoppingstreetcameintoexistenceforacleanerandsafershoppingenvironment.Atfirst,shopkeepersobjectedthatitwouldaffectbusiness.Actually,theidearesultedinbettersalesandgainedsupportlater.However,shopssellinglargeproductslostcustomersandhadtomovetooutskirts.【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，无交通的购物区在很久以前就出现了，步行街的出现追溯到20世纪60年头。起初步行街的概念遭到了很多店主的反对，认为会影响生意，但后来销售量的增长让他们变更了看法。但是售卖大型商品的商店不得不搬到了郊区。【详解】1.要点摘录①Theconceptoftraffic-freeshoppingareasgoesbackalongtime.②Themodern,traffic-freeshoppingstreetwasborninEuropeinthe1960s,whenbothcitypopulationsandcarownershipincreasedrapidly.③Dirtyexhaustfumesfromcarsandtherisksinvolvedincrossingtheroadwerebeginningtomakeshoppinganunpleasantanddangerousexperience.④Atfirst,therewasresistancefromshopkeepers.⑤Theybelievedthatsuchamovewouldbebadforbusiness.⑥InMunich,CologneandHamburg,visitorstoshoppingareasincreasedby50percent.⑦OnCopenhagen’smainshoppingstreet,shopkeepersreportedsalesincreasesof25-40percent.⑧Unfortunately,itwasn’tgoodnewsforeveryone,asshopssellingfurnitureandlargerelectricalappliancesactuallysawtheirsalesdrop.⑨Manyofthesewereforcedtomoveelsewhere,awayfromthecitycentre.⑩Todaytheyareacommonfeatureontheoutskirtsoftownsandcities,oftensituatedinout-of-townretailzoneswiththeirowncarparksandotherlocalfacilities.2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行重组，将第2、3个要点进行整合，将第4、5个要点进行整合，将6、7个要点进行整合，将第8、9、10个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Themodern,traffic-freeshoppingstreetforapleasedandsafeshoppingenvironment.Atthebeginning,shopkeepersresisteditwiththereasonthatitwillinfluencetheirbusiness.Shopssellingfurnitureandlargerelectricalappliancesactuallysawtheirsalesdrop,whichwereforcedtomovetooutskirtsoftownsandcitiesforitisconvenienttoparkcars.【点睛】[高分句型1]Inthe1960s,themodern,pedestrianshoppingstreetcameintoexistenceforacleanerandsafershoppingenvironment.（用for加两个名词短语的形式概括了第2、3个要点，简洁明白且概括精确）[高分句型2]Atfirst,shopkeepersobjectedthatitwouldaffectbusiness.（用that引导的宾语从句概括了起初店主们反对步行街的理由）[高分句型3]However,shopssellinglargeproductslostcustomersandhadtomovetooutskirts.（用however转折句表明此处与前文的对比关系）Writing2（2024·上海金山区·高三一模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.Willpeoplereducecarusein20years？Nowadays,theownershipofcarsisnolongerbeingrecognizedasasymbolofone’swealthandsocialposition.Trackingbacktothepastwhenonlytherichwerequalifiedtopossessprivatecars,wecouldn’thelpmarvelingatthehistoricchangesuchaconvenientinventionbroughttopeople’sdailylives.Nevertheless,theincreaseinthenumberofcarownersisspellingmanynegativeeffects.Theserisingproblemsalsocausesomepeopletopredictthattheuseofcarsmightbereducedintwodecades.Aboveall,theuseofcarsremarkablythreatensourenvironment,ifsuchatendencyisnotbroughtundercontrolintime,theEarthwillnolongerbeasuitableplaceforhumanstosurviveinthefuture.Peoplehavetofacetheconsequence.Itisarealityfromwhichnooneisabletoescape.Everyday,thousandsofprivatecarsareemittingtonsofexhaustedgasthatseriouslypollutestheair.Thecarbondioxideleadstotheworldwidegreenhouseeffect,whichcausesthesealeveltoriseandproducesnegativeimpactsonweather.Inaddition,moreenergyisbeingwastedbecauseoftheproductionofprivatecars.Inordertobuildaresource-conservingandenvironment-friendlysociety,peopleoughttoreducetheuseofcars.Infact,diversifiedmeasuresarebeingtakenbythegovernmenttolimittheuseofcars.Ifsuchatendencycontinues,theeffectwillbeshowninthenearfuture.Forexample,toreachthegoalofbuildingasafeandharmonioussociety,BeijingTrafficManagementBureauhasrestrictedregionaltrafficinrushhoursonworkingdays.Anumberofprivatecarsareprohibitedonno-driving-days.Last,theadvancementofpublictransportationsystemsalsohelpschangecarowners’wayoftravelling.Effortsarebeingmadetoconstructmoreagreeablenetworksofbuses,subways,trainsandairplanes.Inthemeanwhile,advancesintechnologymighthelpcutdownthecostoftravellinginpublicvehicles.【答案】Despiteitssymbolizationofwealthinthepastandgreatchangestopeople’slife,carshavecausedmanynegativeeffects.First,byemittinggreenhousegases,theythreatentheenvironment.Besides,energy-consumingcarsarenotsustainabletothesociety.Therefore,thegovernmenthastakenvariousmeasureslikerestrictions.Last,publictransportisagoodremedythankstothehigh-tech.(58words)【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了拥有汽车已不是财宝和社会地位的象征，有车一族数量的增加带来了很多负面影响，威逼着我们的环境，奢侈了更多的能源，并提出人们应当削减汽车的运用，通过政府实行措施，公共交通系统进步变更人们出行方式，技术进步降低乘坐公共交通成本等方法削减私家车的运用。【详解】1要点摘录①Trackingbacktothepastwhenonlytherichwerequalifiedtopossessprivatecars,wecouldn’thelpmarvelingatthehistoricchangesuchaconvenientinventionbroughttopeople’sdailylives.②Nevertheless,theincreaseinthenumberofcarownersisspellingmanynegativeeffects.③Everyday,thousandsofprivatecarsareemittingtonsofexhaustedgasthatseriouslypollutestheair.④Inaddition,moreenergyisbeingwastedbecauseoftheproductionofprivatecars.⑤Infact,diversifiedmeasuresarebeingtakenbythegovernmenttolimittheuseofcars.⑥Inthemeanwhile,advancesintechnologymighthelpcutdownthecostoftravellinginpublicvehicles.2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组；将3、4两个要点进行整合；将5、6两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Despiteitssymbolizationofwealthinthepastandgreatchangestopeople’slife,carshavecausedmanynegativeeffects.Byemittinggreenhousegases,theythreatentheenvironment.Energy-consumingcarsarenotsustainabletothesociety.thegovernmenthastakenvariousmeasureslikerestrictions.publictransportisagoodremedythankstothehigh-tech.【点睛】[高分句型1]Despiteitssymbolizationofwealthinthepastandgreatchangestopeople’slife,carshavecausedmanynegativeeffects.运用介词“Despite+名词”表示“即使”，对原文第一段进行了概括。表达高级。[高分句型2]：Byemittinggreenhousegases,theythreatentheenvironment.用介词短语作方式状语对其次段的大量运用私家车造成空气污染的消极影响进行了概括，表达特别高级。Writing3（2024·上海浦东新区·高三一模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.SolvingtheProblemofE-WasteOneoftheproblemsdamagingourplanetisthenumberofthingswethrowaway.Amorerecentadditiontothelistofthingswechuckawayise-waste-electronicitemsthatarebrokenandnotrecycled.Tonnesoftelevisions,phones,andotherelectronicequipmentarediscardedchieflybecausewelacktheskillstorepairthem.Fortunately,nowsolutionsarebeingfoundtogivee-wasteanewlife.There'sagrowingtrendforrepaireventsandclubswhichcouldbepartofasolutiontothegrowingamountofelectricalandelectronicjunk.ARestartProjectinLondon,isonethatmanyfoundaroundtheworld.Oneofitsvolunteers,FrancescoCalo,saidthat"thisprojectallowsyoutoreducewaste,extendthelifeofobjects,andithelpspeoplewhocannotaffordtogetridofitemsthathavedevelopedafault.Asmanyelectricalitemscontainvaluablemetals,anotherideaise-wastemining.AnexperimentattheUniversityofNewSouthWalesinvolvesextractingthesematerialsfromelectronicappliances.It'sthoughtthatdoingthiscouldbemoreprofitablethantraditionalmining.Theseprojectsmaketotalsense---collectionsofe-wasteforrecyclingaredepressingorevendecreasing"accordingtoRuedigerKuehr,oftheUnitedNationsUniversity.Andincountrieswherethereisnolaws,muchofitjustgetsdumped.However,theEuropeanUnion,forexample,istryingtotackletheproblembyinsistingmanufacturershavetomakeapplianceslonger-lastingandwillhavetosupplysparepartsformachinesforupto10years.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Oneoftheproblemsdestroyingourplanetisthestuffwethrowaway,especiallybrokenandnotrecycledelectronicitems.Fortunately,peoplearefindingsolutionstogivee-wasteanewlife.Repaireventsaswellasclubcouldbeofhelp,ande-wasteminingisalsoanewwaytodealwiththeproblemofe-waste.Besides,thereareevenlawsinsistingmanufacturersmakeapplianceslonger-lastinginsomecountries.

【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，破坏人类地球环境的问题之一是我们扔掉的东西太多了。近年来，在我们扔掉的东西清单上又增加了一项——坏了、无法回收的电子产品。本文介绍一些用来处理电子垃圾问题的新方法。【详解】1要点摘录①Oneoftheproblemsdamagingourplanetisthenumberofthingswethrowaway..②nowsolutionsarebeingfoundtogivee-wasteanewlife.③There'sagrowingtrendforrepaireventsandclubswhichcouldbepartofasolutiontothegrowingamountofelectricalandelectronicjunk.④Asmanyelectricalitemscontainvaluablemetals,anotherideaise-wastemining.⑤theEuropeanUnion,forexample,istryingtotackletheproblembyinsistingmanufacturershavetomakeapplianceslonger-lasting2.缜密构思将第1、3两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Oneoftheproblemsdestroyingourplanetisthestuffwethrowaway,especiallybrokenandnotrecycledelectronicitems.Fortunately,Peoplearefindingsolutionstogivee-wasteanewlife.Repaireventsaswellasclubcouldbeofhelp,ande-wasteminingisalsoanewwaystodealwiththeproblemofe-waste.Besides,thereareevenlawsinsistingmanufacturersmakeapplianceslonger-lastinginsomecountries.【点睛】[高分句型1]Oneoftheproblemsdestroyingourplanetisthestuffwethrowaway,especiallybrokenandnotrecycledelectronicitems.运用一个定语从句对原文第一段进行了概括。[高分句型2]：Repaireventsaswellasclubcouldbeofhelp,ande-wasteminingisalsoanewwaytodealwiththeproblemofe-waste.用并列句对三四段内容进行概括。Writing4（2024·上海杨浦区·高三期末）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.WhatIsZeroWaste?Thegoalofthe“zerowaste”movementistogetridofallwastefromproducts.“Zerowaste”meansusingeverypartofaproduct.Today,thezerowasteideacanbefoundeverywherefromfoodtofashion.Creatingazerowasterestaurantisachallenge.Itisverydifficulttouseeverypartofproduceandleavenothingbehind.Creatingasoupfromunusedingredientsisapopularwaytouseupextrafooditems.Otherwaysaremoreadvanced.Somerestaurantsusecoffeegrounds（咖啡渣）toflavordishes.Somecooksalsocrushshrimpshellsandreusetheminsauces.Whileit’schallenging,zerowasterestaurantsappeartobeontherise.Inthefashionindustry,zerowasteisn’tanewidea.Butintoday’sworldoffastfashion,zerowasteisgrowingmorepopular.Usually,cuttingclothcreateslotsofwaste.Inzerowastefashion,designerstrytoavoidthis.Onewaytodosoisbyaddingtheseextrapiecesofclothtothefinaldesign.Anotherwayistodesignclothingwithoutwastefulcuts.Beyondrestaurantsandfashion,therearemanyotherpossibilitiesforzerowasteproducts.Allrestaurantsneedutensils（器皿）.Bakey’sisacompanythatisdevelopingedible（可食用的）utensils.Afterusingthem,youcaneatthem!Theirspoonsaremadeofflourandcomeinallkindsofflavors.Whilethesespoonsarenothardenoughtocutmeat,theyareperfectforricedishes.Meanwhile,AirNewZealandisexperimentingwithediblecoffeecupsthataremadebythecompanyTwice.Theyhavealreadyintroducedalineofflavoredcups.Afteryoufinishyourcoffee,youeatthecup,justlikeacookie!Whetherproductsaremadetobeedibleorreusable,hopefullythemovementwillhelpreducewasteallovertheworld.【答案】Zerowastemeanseliminatingallthewastesfromaproductandthemovementisgainingpopularity.Somerestaurantsareusingcreativewaystouseunusedingredientsorfoodleftovers.Fashiondesignerseitheravoidunnecessarilycuttingclothorfindingnewusesforextracuts.Besides,Manycompaniesarecreatingedibleproductsespeciallyutensils.Hopefully,zerowastecampaigncanhelpreducewasteworldwide.【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章讲解并描述了什么是零奢侈。零奢侈意味着从一个产品中消退全部的奢侈，这个运动越来越流行。一些餐馆正在创建性地运用未运用的配料或食物残羹剩饭。时装设计师要么避开不必要的裁剪布料，要么找寻额外布料的新用途。此外，很多公司正在创建食用产品，特殊是餐具。希望零奢侈运动可以帮助削减全球的废物。【详解】1要点摘录1）“Zerowaste”meansusingeverypartofaproduct.Today,thezerowasteideacanbefoundeverywherefromfoodtofashion.2）Somerestaurantsusecoffeegrounds（咖啡渣）toflavordishes.Somecooksalsocrushshrimpshellsandreusetheminsauces.Whileit’schallenging,zerowasterestaurantsappeartobeontherise.3）Onewaytodosoisbyaddingtheseextrapiecesofclothtothefinaldesign.Anotherwayistodesignclothingwithoutwastefulcuts.4）Beyondrestaurantsandfashion,therearemanyotherpossibilitiesforzerowasteproducts.5）Whetherproductsaremadetobeedibleorreusable,hopefullythemovementwillhelpreducewasteallovertheworld.2.缜密构思将第1、2、3、4、5五个要点分别概括。3.遣词造句Zerowastemeanseliminatingallthewastesfromaproductandthemovementisgainingpopularity.Somerestaurantsareusingcreativewaystouseunusedingredientsorfoodleftovers.Fashiondesignerseitheravoidunnecessarilycuttingclothorfindingnewusesforextracuts.Besides,Manycompaniesarecreatingedibleproductsespeciallyutensils.Hopefully,zerowastecampaigncanhelpreducewasteworldwide.【点睛】[高分句型1]Somerestaurantsareusingcreativewaystouseunusedingredientsorfoodleftovers.运用动词不定式作定语修饰way，对其次段进行概括。[高分句型2]：Fashiondesignerseitheravoidunnecessarilycuttingclothorfindingnewusesforextracuts.用avoid加动名词作宾语，用either…or连接并列成分，对第三段进行概括，表达特别高级。Writing5（2024·华东师范高校附属东昌中学高三月考）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.Thegreatestrecentsocialchangeshavebeeninthelivesofwomen.Duringthetwentiethcenturytherehasbeenaremarkableshorteningoftheproportionofawoman'slifespentincaringforthechildren.Awomanmarryingattheendofthenineteenthcenturywouldprobablyhavebeeninhermiddletwentiesandwouldbelikelytohavesevenoreightchildren,ofwhomfourorfivelivedtilltheywerefiveyearsold.Bythetimetheyoungestwasfifteen,themotherwouldhavebeeninherearlyfiftiesandwouldexpecttoliveafurthertwentyyears,duringwhichcustom,opportunityandhealthmadeitunusualforhertogetpaidwork.Todaywomenmarryyoungerandhavefewerchildren.Usuallyawoman’syoungestchildwillbefifteenwhensheisforty-fiveyearsandislikelytotakepaidworkuntilretirementatsixty.Evenwhileshehasthecareofchildren,herworkislightenedbyhouseholdappliancesandconveniencefoods.Thisimportantchangeinwoman’slife-patternhasonlyrecentlybeguntohaveitsfulleffectonwomen’seconomicposition.Evenafewyearsagomostgirlsleftschoolatthefirstopportunity,andmostofthemtookafull-timejob.However,whentheymarried,theyusuallyleftworkatonceandneverreturnedtoit.Todaytheschoolleavingageissixteen,manygirlsstayatschoolafterthatage,andthoughwomentendtomarryyounger,moremarriedwomenstayatworkatleastuntilshortlybeforetheirfirstchildisborn.Verymanymoreafterwardsreturntofull-or-part-timework.Suchchangeshaveledtoanewrelationshipinmarriage,withthehusbandacceptingagreatershareofthedutiesandsatisfactionsoffamilylife,andwithbothhusbandandwifesharingmoreequallyinprovidingthemoney,andrunningthehome,accordingtotheabilitiesandinterestsofeachofthem.【答案】Women'sliveshavechangedgreatly,becausetheymarryyounger,havefewerchildrentocarefor,andhavemoderntechnologytohelpthem,whichmakesitpossibleforthemtogetbacktowork.Thisresultsinwomen'sriseinfamilyeconomicpositiontoshareequallythedutiesofsupportingfamilyandchoreswiththeirhusbands.【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，妇女的生活发生了巨大的变更，因为她们结婚更早，须要照看的孩子更少，现代技术帮助她们，这使她们有可能回到工作岗位。这导致了女性在家庭经济地位的提高，与丈夫同等分担家庭和家务。【详解】1要点摘录①Thegreatestrecentsocialchangeshavebeeninthelivesofwomen.②Todaywomenmarryyoungerandhavefewerchildren.③Evenwhileshehasthecareofchildren,herworkislightenedbyhouseholdappliancesandconveniencefoods.④Thisimportantchangeinwomanslife-patternhasonlyrecentlybeguntohaveitsfulleffectonwomenseconomicposition.⑤Verymanymoreafterwardsreturntofull-or-part-timework.⑥Suchchangeshaveledtoanewrelationshipinmarriage,withthehusbandacceptingagreatershareofthedutiesandsatisfactionsoffamilylife,andwithbothhusbandandwifesharingmoreequallyinprovidingthemoney,andrunningthehome,accordingtotheabilitiesandinterestsofeachofthem.2.缜密构思分别将第1、2、3两个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点重组并与第6个要点进行精简整合。3.遣词造句Women'sliveshavechangedgreatly,becausetheymarryyounger,havefewerchildrentocarefor,andhavemoderntechnologytohelpthem,whichmakesitpossibleforthemtogetbacktowork.Thisresultsinwomen'sriseinfamilyeconomicpositiontoshareequallythedutiesofsupportingfamilyandchoreswiththeirhusbands.【点睛】[高分句型1]Women'sliveshavechangedgreatly,becausetheymarryyounger,havefewerchildrentocarefor,andhavemoderntechnologytohelpthem,whichmakesitpossibleforthemtogetbacktowork.运用一个困难的主从复食句对原文第一段进行了概括。其中有because引导缘由状语从句，和which引导的非限制性定语从句等困难句式。[高分句型2]：Thisresultsinwomen'sriseinfamilyeconomicpositiontoshareequallythedutiesofsupportingfamilyandchoreswiththeirhusbands.本句运用了动词不定式，对其次段进行了概括，表达精准、高级。Writing6（2024·上海嘉定区·高三一模）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.TaiChiCanReduceFallsinOldPeopleOldpeoplewhotookpartinastructuredprogrammeofTaiChifoundthattheirbalanceandphysicalstrengthimproved,reducingtheriskoffalls,accordingtoapaperinthelatestJournalofAdvancedNursing.Researchersstudiedagroupoffall-prone(易摔跤的)adults,withanaverageageof78,livinginresidentialcare.29peopleundertooka12-weekTaiChiprogrammeandtheother30formedthenon-exercisecontrolgroup.Theexerciseprogrammeconsistedof10minutesofwarming-upexercises,20minutesofSun-styleTaiChimovementand5minutesofcoolingdownexercises.Duringtheexercise,traditionalinstrumentalmusicwasused.Ithelpedthegroupmaintainslowandcontinuousmovementsandprovideacomfortingeffect.Bothgroupsunderwentaseriesoftestsbeforeandafterthe12-weekexerciseprogramme.Theymeasuredtheirmusclestrength,balanceandconfidenceinavoidingfalls.Researchersanalyzedthedataandcomparedthemwiththoseofthenon-exercisecontrolgroup.Theyfoundthatthephysicalfitnessoftheexercisegroupshowedsignificantimprovement,withstrongerkneeandanklemuscles,improvedflexibilityandbetterbalance.TaiChi,anancientChinesemartialart(武术),consistsofaseriesofslow,gentle,continuousmovements.Itisparticularlysuitableforoldpeopleasithelpsthemtodevelopstrongermusclesandbetterbalanceandconcentration.“Ourstudyshowsthatlow-intensityexercisesuchasTaiChihasgreatpotentialforhealthpromotion.Itcanhelpoldpeopletoavoidfallsbydevelopingtheirbalance,musclestrengthandconfidence,”saysProfessorSong.“Webelievethatregularexerciseshouldbeafundamentalpartofcaringforoldpeoplelivingbothinthecommunityandinresidentialcare.”【答案】AstructuredTaiChiprogramcanhelpoldpeopleavoidfalls.Researchersdivided59fall-proneadultsaged78onaverageintotwogroups.Theexercisegroupreceiving12-weekTaiChiprogramsshowedremarkableimprovementinmuscles,flexibilityandbalancecomparedwiththenon-exercisegroup.ResearcherssuggestoldpeopleshouldpracticeTaiChitopromotehealth.【分析】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，练习太极拳可以帮助老年人避开跌倒。在一项探讨中，探讨人员将平均年龄为78岁的老人分为两组，一组参与为期12周的太极拳熬炼，另一组不参与。探讨结果表明，参与太极拳熬炼的那一组在肌肉、柔韧性和平衡方面有显著改善。探讨人员建议老年人应当练习太极来促进健康。【详解】1.要点摘录①OldpeoplewhotookpartinastructuredprogrammeofTaiChifoundthattheirbalanceandphysicalstrengthimproved,reducingtheriskoffalls.②Researchersstudiedagroupoffall-prone(易摔跤的)adults,withanaverageageof78,livinginresidentialcare.③29peopleundertooka12-weekTaiChiprogrammeandtheother30formedthenon-exercisecontrolgroup.④Theyfoundthatthephysicalfitnessoftheexercisegroupshowedsignificantimprovement,withstrongerkneeandanklemuscles,improvedflexibilityandbetterbalance.⑤Ourstudyshowsthatlow-intensityexercisesuchasTaiChihasgreatpotentialforhealthpromotion.⑥Webelievethatregularexerciseshouldbeafundamentalpartofcaringforoldpeoplelivingbothinthecommunityandinresidentialcare.2.缜密构思将第1、4两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合，第5、6两个要点进行整合3.遣词造句①AstructuredTaiChiprogramcanhelpoldpeopleavoidfalls.②Researchersdivided59fall-proneadultsaged78onaverageintotwogroups.③Theexercisegroupreceiving12-weekTaiChiprogramsshowedremarkableimprovementinmuscles,flexibilityandbalancecomparedwiththenon-exercisegroup.④ResearcherssuggestoldpeopleshouldpracticeTaiChitopromotehealth.【点睛】[高分句型1]Theexercisegroupreceiving12-weekTaiChiprogramsshowedremarkableimprovementinmuscles,flexibilityandbalancecomparedwiththenon-exercisegroup.合理运用了非谓语动词，运用现在分词receiving12-weekTaiChiprograms作定语修饰group，对原文第三段内容进行了概括。[高分句型2]ResearcherssuggestoldpeopleshouldpracticeTaiChitopromotehealth.运用一个that引导的宾语从句（that省略）对原文第四段内容进行了概括。Writing7（2024·上海市建平中学高三期中）Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomorethan60words.UseyourownwordsasfaraspossibleIsrentingclothesgreenerthanbuyingthem?Clothingrentalisahotnewindustryandretailersaredemandingtogetonboardinhopesofattractinggreenshoppers.Butisrentingfashionactuallymoreenvironmentally-friendlythanbuyingit,andifso,howmuchmore?JournalistandauthorElizabethClineinvestigatedthisquestionandconcludedthatit’snotassustainableasitseems.Takeshipping,forexample,whichhastogotwowaysifanitemisrented—receivingandreturning.Clinewritesthatconsumertransportationhasthesecondlargestcarbonfootprintofourcollectivefashionhabitaftermanufacturing.Shewrites,“Anitemorderedonlineandthenreturnedcansendout20kilogramsofcarboneachway,andincreasesupto50kilogramsforrushshipping.Bycomparison,thecarbonimpactofapairofjeanspurchasedfromaphysicalstoreandwashedandwornathomeis33.4kilograms,accordingtoa2015studybyLevi’s.”Thenthere’stheburdenofwashing,whichhastohappenforeveryitemwhenit’sreturned,regardlessofwhetherornotitwasworn.Formostrentalservices,thisusuallymeansdrycleaning,ahighimpactandpollutingprocess.AlltherentalservicesthatClinelookedintohavereplacedperchloroethylene(氯乙烯),acarcinogenic(致癌的)airpollutantthatisstillusedby70percentofUSdrycleaners,withhydrocarbonalternatives,althoughthesearen’tgreateither.Lastly,Clinefearsthatrentalserviceswillincreaseourappetiteforfastfashion,simplybecauseit’ssoeasilyaccessible.There’ssomethingcalled“sharewashing”thatmakespeopleengageinmorewastefulbehaviorspreciselybecauseaproductorserviceissharedandthusisregardedasmoreeco-friendly.Uberisoneexampleofthis,advertisedas“awaytoshareridesandlimitcarownership.”andyet“ithasbeenproventodiscouragewalking,bicycling,andpublictransportationuse.”Rentingclothesisstillpreferabletobuyingthemcheapandthrowingtheminthedustbinafterafewwears,butweshouldn’tlettheavailabilityoftheseservicesmakeustoosatisfied.There’sanevenbetterstep—andthat’swearingwhatisalreadyinthecloset.【答案】Despitearisingmarketforrentingclothes,someresearch