2024-2025学年新教材高中英语UNIT1TEENAGELIFE表达作文巧升格学案含解析新人教版必修第一册

UNIT1TEENAGELIFE建议信本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)——开宗明义，向对方陈述自己的观点(stateyouridea)。2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)。3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion)。[常用词块]beworriedabout担忧havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.做某事有困难sharesth.withsb.与某人共享某物followtheadvice遵从建议advise/recommendsb.todosth.建议某人做某事overcomethedifficulty克服困难[常用语句]★精彩开头1．I'msorryyouhavetroublein...2．Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3．Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...4．Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning...5．Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning...andIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.★正文佳句1．Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaif...2．Inmyopinion，itwouldbewiseto...3．Isuggestthatyoushould...4．Inmyopinion，you'dbetter...5．Iadviseyouto...6．IfIwereyou，Iwould...7．Whynot...？/Whydon'tyou...?8．Howabout...？/Whatabout...?★余味结尾1．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/tipspractical/useful/helpful.2．Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouinmoredetail.3．Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国挚友Jane的来信。她在信中说，她刚进入中学，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新挚友，因而心情低落。请你给她写一封回信，信的内容应包括如下要点：1．向Jane表示问候和劝慰。2．针对她的问题提出以下建议：(1)同学遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们；(2)放学后邀请同学一起参与活动；(3)其他建议。留意：1.词数80左右，可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯；2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly，LiHua【学生习作】DearJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.Infactyourclassmatesarealsonewstudentsandfacingthesameproblem，soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.①Youcandosomethingtochangethissituation.Firstly，helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.②Then，trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool，andthiswillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Finally，③inmyopinion，oftencommunicatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Yourstruly，LiHua[点评]1.句可加上定语从句构成复合句。2.句可由并列句改成复合句。3.可升级该短语。【升格作文】DearJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.Infactyourclassmatesarealsonewstudentsandfacingthesameproblem，soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandotochangethissituation.Firstly，helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.Then，trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool，whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Finally，asfarasIamconcerned，oftencommunicatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Yourstruly，LiHua为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART­TO­HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为“Worried”的同学的求助信。该同学在信中向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日简单发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容要点如下：1．表示理解并赐予劝慰；2．提出建议并说明理由。留意：1．词数80左右；2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3．信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：tempern．脾气；心情Hi“Worried”，I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie[参考范文]Hi“Worried”，I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonehasoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexer