2024年中考英语热点突破训练书面表达之热点话题类三含解析

书面表达之热点话题类青少年是祖国将来的建设者，为了实现宏大的中国梦，应当不断地补充正能量(positiveenergy)。正能量包括以下几个方面：品德＂正能量＂：酷爱祖国(motherland)，关爱他人，爱护环境…学业＂正能量＂：好学上进，成为有用的人才(anableman)健康＂正能量＂：熬炼身体，远离垃圾食品，生活习惯健康要求：依据以上提示，就如何补充正能量写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的看法，可以适当发挥，不少于80词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Youngpeoplearethebuildersofthemotherland’sfuture.InordertoachievethegreatChinesedream,weshouldaddmorepositiveenergy.Firstly,weshouldloveourmotherland,careforothers,andprotecttheenvironment.Secondly,ifwewanttomakeprogress,weshouldworkhard.Whenwegrowup,wecanbecomeablemen.Atlast,tokeephealthy,wemuststayawayfromjunkfood.Wemusthavehealthyeatingdiet,wecandomoreexercise.【名师点评】这篇短文主要介绍三方面的内容。我们要留意内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和精确性及上下文的连贯性。【写作亮点】这篇短文基本覆盖了全部内容要点；应用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇；句子通顺、表达清晰，没有语言错误；书写工整；字数符合要求。达到了预期的写作目的。为了弘扬中华传统文化，你校即将实行＂中华传统文化·大家谈＂的演讲竞赛，你准备参与竞赛，请依据以下内容提示，写一篇演讲稿，介绍广州的传统文化——逛花街。时间春节前夕地点各区不同，最传统的是西湖路花市活动1.赏花、买花2.吃传统小吃3.欣赏传统灯饰感受与家人挚友一起、增进感情……（至少一点）对传统文化的看法……（至少一点）要求：1.词数80字左右（开头已给出，不计入词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。3.参考词汇：灯笼lanternGuangzhouisabeautifulcitywhichisfulloftraditionalculture.VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Guangzhouisabeautifulcitywhichisfulloftraditionalculture.VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.PeopleinGuangzhouliketovisittheFlowerMarketbeforetheSpringFestival.Differentdistricthasdifferentplaces.ThemostfamousFlowerMarketliesinXihuRoad.Youcanenjoydifferentkindsofflowersthere.Ifyoulike,youcanalsobuysome.Besidesflowers,youwillalsotastealotoftraditionalsnacks.Alongthestreet,youcanalsoenjoythebeautyofdifferenttraditionallanternsandlights.IlikevisitingtheFlowerMarketbecauseitisagoodwayforpeopletogettogetherandcommunicatewitheachother.Whenyouarethere,youwillhaveastrongfeelingthattheNewYeariscoming.Chinahasmuchtraditionalculture.It’sourdutytospread/introduceourtraditionalculturetotheworldandletthemlearnmoreaboutChina.【名师点评】1.题干解读：本题要求介绍广州的传统文化——逛花街，是表格式作文。作者开宗明义点出话题VisitingtheFlowerMarketisoneofthetraditionsinGuangzhou；然后从时间、地点和活动三个方面介绍逛花街的传统习俗；最终介绍自己的感受和对传统文化的看法。2.例文点评：这篇习作是＂总分总＂结构。用其次和第一人称绽开论述，时态是一般现在时；短文开篇点题，内容充溢，连接自然，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点：短语：fullof,oneof,differentkindsof,liketodo,SpringFestival,alotoftraditionalsnacks,gettogether,communicatewith,eachother,inaword,letsb.dosth.句型：It’sourdutytospread/introduceourtraditionalculturetotheworldandletthemlearnmoreaboutChina.（固定句型）Ifyoulike,youcanalsobuysome.（条件状语从句）IlikevisitingtheFlowerMarketbecauseitisagoodwayforpeopletogettogetherandcommunicatewitheachother.（缘由状语从句）Whenyouarethere,youwillhaveastrongfeelingthattheNewYeariscoming.（复合时间状语从句结构）假如你独创的＂飞行单车＂在学校科技节中获奖，被举荐参与一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的独创，内容包括下图中1—4项。＂飞行单车＂＂飞行单车＂1.外观：两个轮子，两只翅膀2.用途：行驶于地面和空中、可拍照、能对话3.特点：速度快、运用太阳能、环保4.改进安排（1~2点）留意：（1）参考词汇：轮子wheel太阳能solarpower（2）词数80左右（文章的开头己给出，不计入词数）。（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Myinventionisaflyingbike....________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Myinventionisaflyingbike．Itisfast，convenientandgreen!Theflyingbikehastwowheelsandtwowings．Ithasatopspeedof300km/h.Youcangotofartherplacesinashortertime．Itcanrunonlandandflyintheair．Ifyoushout"fly"thebikewillturnintoaplanein30seconds．Thenyoucanflyintheair．Youwillbeasfreeasabird．Itcantakephotos，too．Insteadofpetrol,thebikeusessolarpower，soitwillnotpollutetheair．Iwilladdaseatbehinditsothatitcancarrytwopersons.Myinventionwillhelppeopleliveabetterlifeinthefuture．建设平安校内是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应当珍惜自己的生命，更应当留意自己的人身平安。假如你是LiHua，并担当校学生会主席，请你就平安问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封平安倡议书。包括以下要点：1）不带管制刀具到学校；2）不打架；3）上学放学的途中应当留意交通平安；4）遇紧急状况，马上报告警察或老师。5）……参考词汇：管制的：restricted；紧急状况：emergency写作要求：1）用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。2）可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3）严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。Dearstudents,Asyouknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】Dearstudents,Asyouknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives.Inmyopinion,followingthesesafetyrulescanmakeusliveinpeace.Firstly,wemustn’tbringrestrictedknivesorthingstoourschoolbecausethesethingsmaycauseseriousproblems.Secondly,weshouldbefriendlytootherssofightingisstronglybanned.And,itisnecessaryforustopayattentiontothetrafficonourwaytoschoolorhome.Furthermore,mindthestepswhenyouaregoingdownthestairs.Don’tplaywithothersatthattime.Lastbutnottheleast,ifwemeetsomeemergency,wemustcallforhelpfromthepoliceorourteachers.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.YoursLiHua【名师点评】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文，文章需运用书信格式写作。在文章开头应当写出写作目的，并引出下文；其次段具体讲解并描述自己的观点；第三段总结自己的观点。2.例文点评：例文采纳三段式；时态运用的是一般现在时；作者对于自己的观点阐述特别完整，而且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：asyouknow;inmyopinion;firstly;secondly;furthermore;Lastbutnottheleast;Inaword句型：itisnecessaryforsb.todosth.对某人来说做某事是必要的Weshoulddosth.我们应当做某事今日是星期天，你以＂环境爱护＂为主题，与老师和同学们一起绽开了一系列的活动。请你依据此活动，写一篇70词左右的日记。要点包括：1．动身时间和地点：上午8:00；校门口；2．目的地：苏州市旁边的一个小镇；3．交通工具：校车；4.活动内容：捡垃圾、塑料袋，打扫街道，种树、种花；5．返回时间：下午6点。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】对于话题作文，句子要达意、完整、语法正确、合乎习惯，特殊是句式，谓语动词的形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出准确反映内容要求的句子。写作时要留意人称和时态，留意供应的观点、材料，要留意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的连接和过渡。要忠实于材料，不必扩展过多，留意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，肯定不能写错句。【参考范文】SundayJune3,2024FineTodayIwasveryexcitedbecauseIdidalotofthingswithmyteachersandclassmatestoprotectourenvironment.Wemetattheschoolgateat8:00inthemorning.WewenttoasmalltownnearSuzhouinourschoolbus.Wecollectedlitterandpickedupplasticbags.Wecleanedthedirtystreets.Thenweplantedmanytreesandflowers.Atsixwecamebackhome.Ifeltverytiredbuthappy.共享单车(bike-sharing)被誉为中国现代新四大独创之一。如今厦门的大街小巷也随处可见共享单车的身影。请你依据表格内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及运用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。DevelopmentFirstusedinHolland,1965introducedinChinain2007beenpopularsince2024InstructionscantheQRcode(二维码)unlockthesmartlockpaythebillOpinionhealthy,...blocking(堵塞)theway,...要求：1.必需包含所提示信息，字数100词左右；2.意思清晰，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中运用真实姓名、校名及提示信息之外的地名。提示词：sharedbikes共享的自行车________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇给材料作文。要求依据表格中所给出的内容，简要介绍共享单车的发展及运用方法，并表达一下你自己对共享单车的看法。文章时态主要用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称主要是第一、第三人称