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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhatGoesAroundComesAroundOnedaysomethingwaswrongwiththecarofanoldladyfromSt.Louis.Shewastrappedonthesideoftheroadinthedimlight.Noonehadstoppedtohelpforthelasthourorso.Thenamanlookingpoorandhungrypulledupinfrontofhercarandgotout.Hecouldseethatshewasfrightened,standingoutthereinthecold.Hesaid,“I'mheretohelpyou,ma'am.Whynotwaitinthecarwhereit'swarm?Bytheway,mynameisBryanAnderson.”Bryancrawled(蜷缩)underthecarlookingforaplacetoputthejack(千斤顶),skinninghisfingersatimeortwo.Soonhewasabletochangethetire.Buthegotdirtyandhishandshurt.Theoldladytoldhimshealreadyimaginedalltheawfulthingsthatcouldhavehappenedifhehadnotstopped.Shecouldn'tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraidandaskedhowmuchsheowedhim.Bryanjustsmiledandtoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethatpersontheassistancetheyneeded.Bryanadded,“Andthinkofme.”Heneverthoughttwiceaboutbeingpaid.Hehadlivedhiswholelifethatway.Thentheoldladystartedhercaranddroveoff.Afewmilesdowntheroadtheoldladysawasmalldirty—lookingrestaurant.Shewentinandorderedasimplemealpricedat5.Thewaitresswastogivebirthtoherbabyinamonthbutshewasstillbusyclearingtables,fillingsugarbowlsandservingpeople.Obviouslyshemusthavelivedahardlife.AtthatmomentsherememberedBryan.Afterfinishingthemeal,theoldladypaidforherfoodwithone100bill.Thewaitresstookoverthemoney,saying“Thanks”politelyandtoldhertowaitamomentforthechange.注意:1.续写词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意一位来自圣路易斯的老太太汽车出故障被困路边,许久无人帮忙。这时一个看似贫穷饥饿的男子布莱恩・安德森停下来帮助她。布莱恩在换轮胎时弄伤了手还弄脏了自己,老太太感激不已并询问报酬,布莱恩表示希望她下次向需要帮助的人伸出援手。老太太开车离开后在几英里外的一家小餐馆用餐,看到怀孕仍在忙碌的女服务员,想起了布莱恩。用餐后,老太太用100美元付5美元的餐费。伏笔与续写回应伏笔:布莱恩帮助老太太却不求回报,只希望她将善意传递下去。续写中老太太给女服务员100美元并留下纸条,回应了传递善意的伏笔,让爱心延续。伏笔:对女服务员艰难生活的描述。续写中老太太的善举将改善女服务员当下的困境,体现对弱者的关怀,使情节连贯。续写要点第一段情感线:惊讶与感动。女服务员去收银台找零钱回来发现老太太离开且留了纸条,会感到惊讶,明白纸条内容后会被深深感动。故事线:描述女服务员的行动和心理变化,从正常找零到发现老太太离开的疑惑,再到读纸条后的触动。续写示范:Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Butwhenshereturned,theoldladywasgone.Instead,therewasanote.Readingit,shewasdeeplytouched.Tearswelledupinhereyesassherealizedthekindnessshehadjustreceivedandtheresponsibilityitcarried.第二段情感线:决心与温暖。女服务员被老太太的行为打动,决心将这份善意传递,内心充满温暖,也让读者感受到爱的力量。故事线:讲述女服务员在感动之余决定要向老太太学习,在今后生活中帮助他人,使爱心的链条延续。续写示范:Shedecidedthatshewouldfollowtheoldlady'sexample.Whenshesawsomeoneinneedinthefuture,shewouldofferhelpwithouthesitation.Thisactofkindnessfilledherheartwithwarmthandhope,knowingthatlovecouldbepassedonlikethis.情感线从老太太的感激、布莱恩的善良无私,到女服务员的惊讶、感动,再到她决心传递善意的温暖,情感真挚且层层递进,让读者感受到人性之善的传递。情感变化推动故事发展,使读者更关注善举的延续和影响。故事线故事围绕老太太汽车故障被救展开,通过布莱恩的帮助、老太太的感恩与传递善意,到女服务员受到触动,情节完整、逻辑清晰。每个环节紧密相连,突出了爱心传递、善有善报这一主题。主旨升华句"Kindnessisatorchthat,whenpassedon,canlightupcountlesslivesinthedarkestoftimes."(善良是一支火炬,当它被传递时,可以在最黑暗的时刻照亮无数生命。)"Inthecycleofgivingandreceiving,lovemultiplies,creatingaworldfilledwithhopeandcompassion."(在给予和接受的循环中,爱成倍增加,创造一个充满希望和同情的世界。)"Asingleactofkindnesscansetoffachainreaction,warmingheartsfarbeyondwhatwecanimagine."(一个小小的善举可以引发连锁反应,温暖的心灵远远超出我们的想象。)"Thestoryshowsthatwhenwehelpothersselflessly,weplantseedsoflovethatgrowandbloomintheheartsofmany."(这个故事表明,当我们无私地帮助别人时,我们种下了爱的种子,它们在许多人的心中生长和绽放。)"Thechainofkindnesshasnoend,asitlinksonehearttoanother,buildingabridgeovertheriverofhardship."(善良的链条没有尽头,因为它将一颗心与另一颗心相连,在苦难之河上架起一座桥梁。)写作示范范文一Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Whenshecameback,shesawonlyanemptyseat.Shewaspuzzleduntilshenoticedthenote.Readingit,shewasovercomewithemotion.Sheknewshewouldcherishthismomentandpayitforwardwhenshecould.Later,whenacustomerdroppedhiswallet,shereturneditwithasmile,justliketheoldladydidforher.Shefeltasenseoffulfillmentasshesawthegratitudeinthecustomer'seyes.范文二Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Buttheoldladyhaddisappeared.Therewasanotethatsaidtopassonthekindness.Thewaitresswasdeeplymoved.Shethoughtaboutherowndifficultsituationandhowthisactofkindnesswaslikearayofsunshine.Fromthenon,shealwaystriedtobeextrakindtothecustomers.Whenahomelessmancametothedoor,shegavehimawarmmeal,keepingthechainoflovegoingstrong.范文三Thewaitresswenttothecashier'scountertogetthechange.Tohersurprise,theoldladywasgone.Therewasanotewhichtoldherthestoryofkindnessandaskedhertocontinuethecycle.Tearsfilledhereyes.Shemadeuphermindtobekindtoeverycustomer.Oneday,anewmotherwithababywasshortonmoney.Thewaitressp

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