辽宁高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

建议信

1.假定你是李华，你的朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结

果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提

示，请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。

1.认真计划好自己的时间；

2.不要放弃自己的爱好，但也不要忘记学习；

3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加

当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物

合适。请你根据下列要点回复，并表示感激。

1.感谢他尽己所能去帮助残疾儿童；

2.说明自己决定和他一起去；

3.建议送些水果或儿童书籍等，并说明理由。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.假定你是李华，你的朋友尼克近来沉迷于游戏《王者荣耀》(KingofGlory)不能自拔,

你在得知此事后非常担忧。请你给他写一封信予以劝说，要点如下：

1.你对他的担心；

2.游戏的危害；

3.摆脱游戏的办法。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearNick,

Yourssincerely

LiHua

4.假设你是李华。你的英国笔友John写信告诉你近日他沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到了很大

的影响，他十分焦虑。请你根据以下要点提示，给他写一份回信，建议他养成良好的生活习

惯。

1.改变生活习惯，合理安排时间。

2.经常锻炼，增强体质。

注意：

1、词数80左右；

2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearJohn,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

5.假如你是李华，你在网上获悉“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试(the“ChineseBridge”

ChineseProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents)将在下个月当地电视台举办。

你的外国朋友Frank正在大学学习中文，你建议他去试一试，并表示可以提供帮助。

报名时间：5月20日截止；报名地点：所在大学的学生会。

注意：1.词数80左右

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearFrank,

Yours,

LiHua

6.假如你是李华，你校将在校内给老师安排自愿接种新冠疫苗活动，请写信通知你的外教

David,内容包括：

L时间和地点；

2.注意事项；

3.建议参加。

参考词汇：疫苗：vaccine；接种疫苗：getvaccinated

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

7.假设你是李华，有外国友人到你校参观，想了解你们英语学习的情况。请你代表学校用

英语发言，要点如下：

1.表示欢迎并简要介绍学校情况；

2.说明英语学习情况（课堂、活动等）；

3.征求对方学好英语的建议。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dearfriends,

Welcometoourschool!

Thafsall.Thankyou.

8.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说，他在自学英语时，发现汉字的读音很难掌握。

请你给他回信，内容包括：

1.表示理解

2.提出建议

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearJohn,

Yours,

LiHua

9.假定你是李华，你校将开展音乐选修课课程。即将来校学习的英国交换生Peter不知如

何选择，请你给他写信提供建议，内容包括：

1.选修课种类介绍。

2.你的建议及理由。

参考词汇：选修课：optionalcourse民乐folkmusic

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearPeter,

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

10.假定你是李华，你和你的同学决定要在紧张的学习之余，为高三生活拍摄英文纪录片。

请你给外教MissEvans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导，内容包括：

1.告知拍摄的具体计划与内容；

2.请她编写英文字幕；

3.询问对拍摄的建议。

注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：字幕subtitle；纪录片documentary

DearMissEvans,

Yours,

LiHua

1.DearSimon,

Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomeworkIthink

you'dbetterplanyourdaycarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomework

youhavetodo.Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.

Don'tgiveupyourhobbybutdonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Youshouldkeepabalance

betweenstudyandbobby.

Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou

Yburssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写信给自己的沉迷于篮球而忽略学习的朋友

Simon一些建议。

【详解】词汇积累

感谢：thankyou/thanks/Ireallyappreciateit

足够的：enough=adequate

建议：suggestion=advice

有价值的：beofvalue=bevaluable

句式拓展

简单句变为复合句

原句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework

拓展句：Yousayyoudon'thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework,whichbothersyourecently.

【点睛】[高分句型1].Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.

（运用了it充当形式主语的固定结构，和省略that的定语从句）

[高分句型2]Thiswillgiveyouanideaofhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.

（运用了定语从句）

2.DearDavid,

I'mgratefulthatyouwanttohelpthedisabledchildren.Readingyouremail,I'msomoved

thatI'vedecidedtoseethedisabledchildrenonChildren'sDaywithyou.

Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,ifsreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.I'dliketo

recommendsendingthechildrensomefruitsorsomebooks.Ontheonehand,fruitsaregoodfor

children'shealth,anditisalsoconvenienttocarry.Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allof

them,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.

Anyway,whateverpresentsyouchoose,you'llbeappreciatedbythosedisabledchildren.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David是你校的一名交换

生，六一儿童节期间他准备参加当地帮助残疾儿童的志愿者活动，他想给一些残疾儿童送一

些礼物，发来邮件询问什么礼物合适。请你根据题干中提供的要点进行回复，并表示感激。

【详解】1.词汇积累

礼物：present—•gift

感激的：gratefill-thankful

对...有好处：begoodfbubenefit

无论什么：whatever=^-nomatterwhat

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy.Therefore,

booksmayalsobeagoodchoice.

拓展句：Ontheotherhand,disabledastheyare,allofthem,Ithink,areeagertostudy,sobooks

mayalsobeagoodchoice.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Readingyouremail,TmsomovedthatFvedecidedtoseethedisabled

childrenonChildren'sDaywithyou.（运用了现在分词及so...that句型）

[高分句型2]Astowhatpresentsarethebestchoice,ifsreallyamatterofpersonalpreference.（i§

用了what引导的宾语从句）

3.DearPeter,

I'msorrytohearthatyouareaddictedtoKingofGlory.Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesis

notonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomakesyouisolatedfromtherealworld.

Ithinkyoucantryotherthingstodistractyourattention.Forexample,youcanplay

basketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcanimproveyourfitnessandstrengthenyour

friendship.It'salsoagoodchoicetocommunicatewithyourparentsandfriends,sharingyour

happinessandsorrow.Besides,youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyourspare

time.

Longingforgoodnewsfromyou!

Yourssincerely

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给外国朋友尼克写封信，陈述沉迷游戏的坏处，

然后提出一些建议，帮他远离游戏。

【详解】1.词汇积累

健康：health—fitness

力口强：deepen一strengthen

扩大：widen一broaden

对...有害：bebadfor=beharmfulto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime.

拓展句：Youcanreadsomebookstobroadenyourhorizoninyoursparetime,whosecontent

interestsyousomuchthatgamesareoutofyourmind.

【点睛】[高分句型1]youcanplaybasketballorothersportswithyourfriends,whichcan

improveyourfitnessandstrengthenyourfriendship.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Spendingtoomuchtimeongamesisnotonlyharmfultoyourhealthbutalsomake

youisolatedfromtherealworld.（运用了动名词短语作主语，notonly...butalso…引导的并列

句）

4.DearJohn,

I'msorrytohearthatyou'readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehadabadinfluenceon

yourhealth.Knowingyouworryaboutitverymuch,I'mwillingtogiveyousomeadvice.

Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,suchas

gettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.Besides,you

shoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputer

gamesandformahealthylifestyle.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John写一份回信，就他沉迷于电

脑游戏使健康受到了很大的影响，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。

【详解】1.词汇积累

影响：effect—influence

增强：buildup—>strengthen

摆脱：getoutof—getridof

期待：expect一lookforwardto

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,youshoulddoexerciseregularlytostrengthenyourbody.

拓展句：Besides,itisimportantthatyoushoulddoregularexercisetostrengthenyourbody.

【点睛】[高分句型1]I'msorrytohearthatyou'readdictedtocomputergameswhichhavehada

badinfluenceonyourhealth.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作hear的宾语和由which引导的

定语从句）

[高分句型2]Firstly,youshouldchangeyourlivinghabitsandarrangeyourtimereasonably,such

asgettingupandgoingtobedataspecifictimesothatyoucanformagoodhabit.（运用了由so

that连接的结果状语从句）

[高分句型3]Idohopethatyoucangetridofcomputergamesandformahealthylifestyle.（运

用了由that引导的宾语从句作hope的宾语）

5.Onepossibleversion:

DearFrank,

IreadontheInternetthatthefirstroundof"ChineseBridge^^ChineseProficiency

CompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents-annotedinternationalChinesecompetitionwillbe

heldinthelocaltelevisionstationnextmonth.

IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwell

youhavelearnedChinese.Ifyouwouldliketotry,youarerequiredtogototheStudentsUnionto

signup.Don'thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.AndthelastthingIwanttoremind

youofisthedeadline-March31st.

Maysuccesswaituponyourefforts.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友Frank写封信，建议他参加下个月

当地电视台举办的“汉语桥”世界大学生中文比赛初试（the“ChineseBridge^^Chinese

ProficiencyCompetitionforForeignCollegeStudents）。

【详解】1.词汇积累

举办：hold—host

尝试：try—attempt

杰出的：outstanding^-splendid

提醒某人某事：remindsb.ofsth.=remindsb.todosth.

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.Ithinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhowwell

youhavelearnedChinese.

拓展句：IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudyingChineseinthe

university.SoIthinkthisisagoodchanceforyoutoshowyourlanguagecompetence,andhow

wellyouhavelearnedChinese.

【点睛】[高分句型1]IknowyouareanoutstandingChineselearner,andyouarestudying

Chineseintheuniversity.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Don'thesitatetofindmyhelpwheneveryouneed.（运用了祈使句及whenever引导

的让步状语从句）

6.Possibleversionsone:

DearDavid,

Bymeansofthisletter,Fdliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.

Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbeaCOVID-19

vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool'sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyoucanbrowse

relevantinformation.Onceyou'vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtips

shouldbeborneinyourmind:checkupifyou'reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30

minutesaftergettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.

Istronglysuggestyouseekvaccination,whichnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.

Yours,

LiHua

Possibleversionstwo:

DearDavid,

I'mwritingtoinformyouoftheCOVID-19vaccinationarrangementofourschool.

Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou'reallergictothevaccine.

Ifnot,thencheckwiththeprovidertomakesureyoubringanyneededdocuments.Aftergetting

theinjection,it'srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyoudonothavea

concerningreaction.

Istronglyadviseyoutoseekvaccination.Thisnotonlyprotectsyou,butthosearoundyou.

Sincerely,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写信通知外教David学校给老师安排自愿接种

新冠疫苗的活动。

【详解】范文1

1.词汇积累

通过：through一bymeansof

公开/通知：announcer-release

决定：decidetodo—makeupyourmindtodo

t己住：remember一bearsthinyourmind

排除/删I除：cutout—exclude

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Bymeansofthisletter,I'dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangementofourschool.

拓展句：NowI'mwritingthisletter,inwhichI'dliketotellyouarecentvaccinationarrangement

ofourschool.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Accordingtoannouncementreleasedbyschoolcommission,therewillbea

COVID-19vaccinationlastingfrom1stto5thofMayatschool?sclinic,fromwhosewebsiteyou

canbrowserelevantinformation.（该句中whosewebsiteyoucanbrowserelevant

information”运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句。）

[高分句型2]Onceyou'vemadeupyourmindtogetvaccinated,thesefollowingtipsshouldbe

borneinyourmind:checkupifyou'reallergictothevaccine;stayatthesitefor30minutesafter

gettingtheshotandalcoholshouldbeexcludedfromyourdietsincethen.（该句中“Onceyou've

madeupyourmindtogetvaccinated"为"once（一旦）”引导的时间状语从句。）

范文2

1.词汇积累

通知：notice—infbrmsb.ofsth

弄清楚：findout—•figureout

建议：suggest^-recommend

停留：stay—remain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,anditwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.

拓展句：Thevaccinationistotallyoptional,whichwilllastfromnextMondaytoFridayatschool

clinic.

[高分句型1]

Butbeforegettingvaccinated,youhavetofigureoutwhetheryou'reallergictothevaccine.（该

句中“whetheryou'reallergictothevaccine”为whether引导的宾语从句。）

[高分句型2]

Aftergettingtheinjection,it'srecommendedtoremainatthesitefor30minutestomakesureyou

donothaveaconcerningreaction.（该句中使用了"it”作为形式主语，构成"it'srecommendedto

do”结构，真正主语为动词不定式“toremainatthesitefor30minutes"。）

7.Dearfriends,

Welcometoourschool!Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool,which

coversanareaofabout200,000squaremeters.Thereareabout300teachingstaffandover3000

studentsinourschool.

WehaveoneEnglishclasseachdayfromMondaytoFriday.EveryThursdayafternoon,we

cangototheEnglishComer,talkingfreelyinEnglish.Eachsemester,weholdoneEnglishdebate

andoneEnglishspeechcontest.WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish,butwewould

appreciateitifyoucouldgiveussomevaluableadvice.

That'sall.Thankyou.

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生代表学校向外国友人介绍英语学习情况，并征

求学好英语的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

简要介绍：introducebriefly一giveyouabriefintroduction

占地：hasanareao—coversanareaof

学期：term一semester

感激：begratefUl一appreciate

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：EveryThursdayafternoon,wecangototheEnglishComer,talkingfreelyinEnglish.

拓展句：Inorderthatwecanapplywhatwe'velearnedinclasstoourdailylife,wecangotothe

EnglishComereveryThursday,talkingfreelyinEnglish.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Ifeelhonoredtogiveyouabriefintroductionofourschool,whichcovers

anareaofabout200,000squaremeters.（运用了which弓|导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]WehavebeentryingourbesttolearnEnglish,butwewouldappreciateitifyou

couldgiveussomevaluableadvice.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

8.Onepossibleversion:

DearJohn,

KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn'tmatter.

Afterall,ifsdifficultforforeignerstograspit.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreat

help.

Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossa

challengingChinesecharacter.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningapps

areincreasingpopularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucan

acquirethepronunciation.

IknowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.Itis

welcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友John回信，对学习汉字读音很难

掌握表示理解并提出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量一般将来时。

结构：总分法。总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内

容。

要求：

1.表示理解；

2.提出建议。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

havetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation;itdoesn'tmatter;practicalapproaches;referto

XinhuaDictionary;someChineselearningapps;makemuchprogress

第三步：连词成句

1.KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkitdoesn'tmatter.

2.Afterall,ifsdifficultforforeignerstograspit.

3.However,somepracticalapproachesareofgreathelp.

4.Obviously,itishighlyrecommendedtorefertoXinhuaDictionarywhenyoucomeacrossa

challengingChinesecharacter.

5.Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasingpopularwith

Chineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethepronunciation.

6.1knowforsurethatyouwillmakemuchprogressinlearningChinesepronunciation.

7.Itiswelcometowritetomewhenyouareintrouble.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second...Andthen,Finally,Intheend,At

last（供参考）

2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,not

only...but（also）,including,（供参考）

3.表转折对比关系：However

4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult（供参考）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛"高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhavetroublelearningtheChinesepronunciation,Ithinkit

doesn'tmatter.（运用了现在分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Then,withmobilephonescatchingon,someChineselearningappsareincreasing

popularwithChineselearnersbecausetheyaresohandyandquickthatyoucanacquirethe

pronunciation4运用了with的独立主格结构）

9.DearPeter,

Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingto

makesomesuggestions.

Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playing

instrumentsandsoon.ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthat

youchoosefolkmusic.Inclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.Inaddition,youwillenjoy

musicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments,whichisagoodwaytolearnaboutChinese

culture.Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.

Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua

【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求给交换生Peter关于如何选择音乐选修课课程提

出建议。

【详解】第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法

第一部分是文章的开头段，说明写邮件的原因；第二部分是支持段，关于如何选择音乐选修

课课程提出建议；第三部分是结尾段，希望建议对对方有用。

要求：

1.说明写信的原因：关于如何选择音乐选修课课程给Peter提出建议

2.提出具体的建议：

①选修课种类介绍：民族音乐、合唱、乐器演奏

②建议选择民族音乐：学唱民族歌曲，欣赏民族乐曲

3.希望建议对对方有帮助

第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

wonder；makesomesuggestions；playinstruments；beinterestedin；folkmusic；enjoymusic

pieces；playwith；traditionalinstrument；learnabout；afeastforone9sears；behelpfulto

第三步：连词成句

(1)Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingto

makesomesuggestions.

(2)Therearevariousmusicoptionalcoursesinourschool,includingfolkmusic,choir,playing

instrumentsandsoon.

(3)ConsideringthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolk

music.

(4)Intheclass,youcanlearntosingfolksongs.

(5)Youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtraditionalinstruments.

(6)ItisagoodwaytolearnaboutChineseculture.

(7)Ithinktheywillbeafeastforyourears.

(8)Sincerelyhopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.

提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

表递进关系：inaddition

【点睛】[高分句型1]

Learningthatyouarewonderingwhichmusicoptionalcoursestochoose,Iamwritingtomake

somesuggestions.

(现在分词作状语)

[高分句型2]

Itissuggestedthatyouchoosefolkmusic,(it作形式主语)

[高分句型3]

Youwillenjoymusicpiecesplayedwithtradi