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Saragazedthoughtfullyatherparentswhileholdingaletter.ShewasacceptedtopursuetheElectricalEngineeringdegreeprogrammeatUniversityPertanianMalaysia.Allherhardworkandsacrificeshadpaidoff.Butsheknew,beingtheeldestof6siblings,herfamilycouldnotaffordtopaytheuniversityentrancefees.Herfatherwasonlyasettlerworkingonapalmoilestate.Thoughshewasdeterminedtodeclinetheoffer,SarawenttovisitMs.Changwiththeletter.Ms.ChangwasoneofthemostdedicatedteachersthatSaraknew.Fromahumblebeginning,shesupportedherselfattheTeachers’TrainingCollegebyteachingtuition.Sosheunderstoodhowhardpoorstudentsstruggledtocontinuetheirstudy.Foryears,notonlydidshebringreferencebookstothestudents,butsheoftentookthemoutforlunchandassuredthemtheywouldsucceedinlife.“CongratulationsSara,Iamsoproudofyou,"Ms.Changsaidexcitedly.“ButI'mafraidIhavetorejecttheoffer,becausemyfamilyisunabletobearthecostofenrollingmethere,"Sararepliedinalowtone.Ms.Changlookedatherintentlyandtoldhernottoworryaboutfinance.Therewouldalwaysbeaway.Afewdayslater,whenSarawashesitatingaboutdecliningtheoffer,herhighschoolprincipal,Mr.Salim,calledhertohisoffice.Toherastonishment,Mr.Salimhandedheranenvelope,inwhichSarasawalargesumofcash.Itwasmorethanwhatsheneeded.ButwhenSaraaskedMr.Salimwherethemoneywasfrom,hejusttoldherthatthepersonwantedtoremainanonymous(匿名的).Withthemoneyinthecnvelope,Sarabecameafreshmanoftheuniversity.Onemonthlater,shereceivedanothersumofmoney.Shecalledherfather,“Dad,youdon'thavetosendmoneytome.Icanmanageonmyown."Herfatherwasstunned,“ButIdidn't."Fromthenon,Sarareceivedthesamesumofmoneyeverymonth.“Whoisthekindsoulthatismakingallthiscontribution?"shewasalwayswondering.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Sara被马来西亚博特拉大学电气工程专业录取,但因家庭贫困打算拒绝。老师Ms.Chang鼓励她别担心费用。之后高中校长Mr.Salim给了她一个装有足够学费的信封,捐款人匿名。Sara入学后每月都收到一笔钱,她以为是父亲给的,但父亲否认。Sara一直好奇这位好心人的身份。五要素分析人物:Sara、Ms.Chang、Mr.Salim和Sara的父亲。时间:从Sara收到大学录取通知开始,持续到她大学毕业。地点:学校、校长办公室和大学。起因:Sara家庭贫困,无力支付大学学费。经过:老师鼓励,校长给她匿名捐款,大学期间持续收到钱。结果:Sara顺利上大学但不知捐款人是谁。几处伏笔及续写回应伏笔:捐款人匿名。回应:后文揭示是Ms.Chang。伏笔:Sara对捐款人身份的好奇。回应:最终找到答案。续写要点第一段情感线:充满感激和急切想知道恩人身份的心情。故事线:Sara以优异成绩毕业,决定寻找恩人,回到母校向校长询问捐款人信息。第二段情感线:感动、崇敬,为Ms.Chang的善举所震撼。故事线:Sara来到Ms.Chang家,表达深深的感激,领悟到善良和助人的力量。主旨升华句Truekindnessislikealighthouse,guidingthoseinthedarkseaofdifficultytowardshope.Theactofgiving,evenanonymously,cancreateripplesofchangeinsomeone'slifejourney.Aselflessdonorisanangelindisguise,bringingthelightofopportunitytotheneedy.Inthefaceofhardship,thekindnessofstrangerscanbethemostpowerfuldrivingforceforsuccess.Thebeautyofaltruismliesinitsabilitytotransformliveswithoutexpectinganythinginreturn.写作示范第一篇TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.Withexcellentgrades,shewasfilledwithgratitudetowardstheunknownbenefactor.ShereturnedtoherhighschoolandfoundMr.Salim.Shetoldhimthatshewantedtothankthepersonwhohadchangedherlife.Mr.Salimsmiledandfinallyrevealedtheaddressofthekind-heartedperson.
WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.Herheartwaspoundingwithemotion.WhenMs.Changopenedthedoor,Sara'seyeswelledupwithtears.ShethrewherselfintoMs.Chang'sarmsandthankedherprofusely.SherealizedthatMs.Chang'skindnesshadbeenthewindbeneathherwingsallthistime.第二篇TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.Shehadasuccessfulcollegecareer,allthankstotheanonymousdonor.Shecouldn'twaittofindoutwhoitwas.Sherushedtotheprincipal'soffice.Mr.Salimsawhercomingandknewwhatshewanted.Hehandedherapieceofpaperwithanaddressonit.
WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.Shefeltamixtureofexcitementandnervousness.Assheknockedonthedoor,herhandswereshaking.WhenMs.Changappeared,Saraburstintotearsandsaid,"Thankyouforbelievinginmeandchangingmylife."Itwasamomentofpureemotionandrealizationofthepowerofkindness.范文:TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.ThankstothatanonymousSamaritan,shewasabletoaccomplishhercollegeeducationwithoutdistraction.Tryasshemay,shecouldneverfigureoutwhowasthekindsoul.“Mr.Salimmusthavehiddensomethingfromme,"thedoubtechoedconstantlyinhermind.SaravisitedMr.Salimimmediatelyshewenthometown.“Please,Mr.Salim,tellmewhosentmethemoney."sheaskedearnestly.Theprincipal
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