读后续写+告别阴霾：与妈妈散步的治愈之旅+讲义 高三上学期10月月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan’tsleep?Youalsocan’teat.Youcan’tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular“IsEmilystillalive”check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I’mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou’recomingwithme!”“Why?”Iprotested.“Becauseit’llmakeyoufeelbetter.”Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.IfeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricksIcouldn’trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leash(狗绳)inhandanddogatherside.Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.“I’mtired!It’sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?”“Notyet,”she’dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光焕发).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意14岁的“我”曾长期处于抑郁状态，对任何事都提不起兴趣，整日躺在床上。妈妈强行拉“我”出门遛狗。尽管“我”一开始极不情愿，但在散步过程中，妈妈热情地和遇到的人打招呼、聊天。整个行程对“我”来说有些无聊，“我”多次要求回家。然而回家后，这次散步却在“我”心中唤醒了一种新的感觉。五要素分析人物：“我”和妈妈。时间：一个温暖的三月周六。地点：从家出发，经过一些土路、大田野，到达哈尔西池塘，然后返回。起因：“我”因抑郁而萎靡不振，妈妈为了让“我”振作起来，拉“我”出门遛狗。经过：妈妈带着“我”和狗散步，沿途和路人交谈，“我”觉得旅程无聊，多次想回家。结果：回家后“我”有了新的感觉。几处伏笔及续写回应伏笔：妈妈说散步会让“我”感觉好一些。回应：回家后“我”有了新感觉，意识到散步有积极作用。伏笔：妈妈在散步过程中容光焕发、很快乐。回应：后来“我”主动要求带狗出门，也体会到了快乐。续写要点第一段情感线：从最初的抵触到回家后的微妙变化，有一种对新感觉的好奇和隐隐的期待。故事线：描述回家后的“我”身心上的变化，比如不再像之前那样消沉，开始有了积极生活的想法。第二段情感线：主动要求带狗出门体现出“我”心态的转变，从消极到积极，对出门散步充满热情。故事线：着重写这次出门“我”的不同表现，如主动和路人交流、欣赏周围风景，真正享受散步的过程。主旨升华句Sometimes,thesimplestactivities,likeawalkwithlovedones,canbethekeytounlockthedoorofourimprisonedsouls.Asmallstepoutofthecomfortzone,asreluctantasitmaybe,canleadustoanewworldfilledwithhopeandvitality.Inthejourneyoflife,it'softentheforceddetours,likethiswalk,thatbringusbacktothepathofhappiness.Thewarmthofthesunoutsideandthecompanyoffamilycanmelttheiceofdepressionwithinus,revealingthebeautifulselfbeneath.Wemayresistchange,butasshownbythiswalk,changecanbethecatalystforanewbeginningandanewoutlookonlife.写作示范第一篇Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Itwasasifatinysparkhadbeenlitinsideme.Inolongerfelttheheavygloomthathadcloudedmydays.Ilookedaroundmyroom,andforthefirsttimeinages,Inoticedthesunlightstreamingthroughthewindow,castingbeautifulpatternsonthefloor.Irealizedthattheoutsideworld,whichIhadshunned,hadsomuchtooffer.MaybeMomwasright.Maybegettingoutofmyself-madeprisonwasthefirststeptowardshealing.

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Shesmiledknowinglyandhandedmetheleash.AsIwalkedalongthefamiliarpaths,Ifeltasenseoffreedom.Igreetedeverypasser-bywithenthusiasm,andthistime,Ilingeredtoadmirethescenery.Thepondnolongerlookeddull;itwasabeautifulexpanseofwaterreflectingthesky.Iunderstoodthatlifehaditssimplejoys,andIwasdeterminedtoembracethem.第二篇Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.TherewasanewfoundenergywithinmethatIcouldn'tquiteexplain.Isatonmybed,thinkingaboutthewalk.Thefreshair,thepeoplewemet,andMom'shappyfaceallflashedthroughmymind.IfeltaconnectiontotheworldoutsidethatIhadn'tfeltinalongtime.Igotupanddecidedtocleanmyroom,ataskIhadneglectedforweeks.Itwasasifthewalkhadgivenmeanewperspectiveonlife.

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Shebeamedwithpride.Thistime,asIwalkedwiththedog,Ifeltasenseofpurpose.Istoppedtotalktoanelderlywomansittingonabench,sharingalaughwithher.Iwatchedtheducksswimminginthepondwithfascination.Irealizedthatthissimpleactofwalkingwasagift,awaytobreakfreefromthechainsofdepressionandembracelifeagain.【答案】Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Theheavinessthathadweighedmedownbeforeseemedtohavelifted,ifonlyslightly.Thesimpleactofbeingoutside,feelingthewarmthofthesun,andhearingthechirpingofbirdshadsparkedsomethinginsideme.Itwasaglimmerofhope,atinyrayoflightinthedarknessofmydepression.Irealizedthatmaybe,justmaybe,therewasstillsomethin