Module+6+写作课 外研版英语九年级下册

Module6Eatingtogether---巧记妙叙，

留住美好学习目标：1.能用记叙文写作方法来描述一件特别的用餐经历。2.学会迁移教材中记叙文写作方法完成本模块的写作任务。WritingTask

Describeaspecialmealyouhaveeaten.Thinkabout:□whenandwhereyouateit.□whoyouwerewith

□whythemealwasspecial□whathappenedduringthemeal□whathappenedattheendofthemeal□whatthenicestthingabouttheexperiencewasNarration记叙文妙不可言

选材新颖独特灵活组织结构描写细致入微细节详略得当

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九下M6U2

Eatingtogether

Duringamealinthewest,youuseknivesandforksmostofthetime,althoughyoucanuseyourfingerstoeatchickenwingsorhamburgers.Youwillbeinvitedtoserveyourselfwithfood,theladiesbeforethegentlemen.

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九上M2U2

Publicholidays

WestillcelebrateThanksgivingDaywithatraditionaldinner.Thekitchenisalwaysthemostcrowdedroominourhousebeacuseweallhelppreparethefood.Welaythetable,andthenbeforewebegindinner,myfathergivesthanksforthefood,soweremmemberwhywecelebratethefestival.Weusuallyeattoomuch,butitisonlyonceayear!Weoftentalkalotandtellstoriesafterdinneraswell.Whenitisallover,everyonehelpswashthedishes.

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写作技巧八上M11U2

WayoflifeIwenttomyEngland,IenjoyedmystayandInoticedsomethinginteresting.

开门见山点题

八下M9U2FriendshipWhenIwasthirteenyearsold,agirlgavemeanimportantgift.Itwasasmile.

Itwastheearlyautumnofmyfirstyearatanewschool.

直扣主题交代时间地点人物

八下M10U2Ontheradio“Howoldareyou?”Theradiomanagerlookeddownatme.“Fifteen.”Isaid.

倒叙

九上M4U2

HomealoneAsaboy,likeallotherboys,Iwantedtobeaman.Butmyparentsdideverythingforme.Actually,theymanagedeveryminuteofmylife.IbecamesoboredwiththeirordersthatIwishedtheywouldleavemealone.

写作背景介绍心理描写开卷之初，让人一见而惊

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There are various activities in the college, such as hiking, gathering, competitions and so on. and what impresses me most is my experience of being a cook.Thelifeisfulloftheamazingthings.Istillremembertheluckyday.Ithappenedon...

WhenIwastenyearsold,oneSundayafternoon,thisismyfirsttimetomakefoodformyparents.Whenitcametosixo'clockatnight,thestoryofarichlesssontookplace.

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写作技巧

八下M9U2Friendship

Ibelievethattheworldiswhatyouthinkitis.Ifyouthinkyouarelonely,youmightalwaysbealone.Mysuggestionisthatsmileattheworldanditwillsmileback.

表明积极观点

紧扣主题

九上M1U2WondersoftheworldIremainedbythecanyonforabouthalfanhour,andIaskedmyself,“IstheGrandCanyonthegreatestwonderofthenaturalworld?”Icertainlyknowtheanswer.Whatdoyouthink?

真情实感

读者意识

九上M4U2HomealoneThenIrealisedbeinghomealonewasnotalwaysprefect.

情感真挚

紧扣主题1.那些美妙的时刻触动了我的心，我永远不会忘记。

仿句练习TheamazingmomentstouchmyheartandIwillneverforgetit.

2.通过和父母们做一些家务活，我可以更好的了解他们。3.第一次和我的朋友做食物是如此有趣，我将永远记住它_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThefirsttimetomakefoodwithmyfriendsissointerestingthatIwillrememberitforever.________________________________________________________________________________________Icangetabetterunderstandingofmyparentsbydoingsomechoreswiththem.

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写作技巧八下M9U2FriendshipEverytimeIheardtheotherstudentstalkingandlaughing,Ifeltevenmorelonely.SuddenlyIfelttouchofsomethingbrightandfriendly.Itmademefeelhappy,livelyandwarm.心理描写

Atthatmoment,agirlenteredtheclassroom.Ididn'tknowwhoshewas.Shepassedmeandthenturnedback.Shelookedatmeand,withoutaword,smiled.

详略得当九上M4U2HomealoneAssoonasIgothomefromschoolthefirstday,Ihappilythrewmyschoolbagonthesofaandatelotsofsnacks.ThenextmorningIwokeuplate.Ihadtohurrytoschoolwithoutbreakfast,butIwasstilllate.Ievendroppedmyfather’scupwhenIwascooking!Ifoundmyselfsobadatsimplecookingdishes.

动作描写心理描写lovelyIstillrememberthetimewhenwespentinalovelyrestaurant.Whenwecameintoit,wewereshockedatthewarmeatingenvironment.Afterorderingsomefood,myfatherandIcouldn’twaittoshowourgiftstomymother.Shesaidthatconcertticketandthisbeautifulsilkdressarebothherfavoritebecausesheislongingforthem.Duringthedinnertime,wegaveourbestwishestoher.Iclearlyrememberedthehappysmileonherface.Attheendofthemeal,weallsurroundedthetable,tastingthedeliciousbirthdaycake.Themealendedupwithahappyatmospherethatnight.小试牛刀