读后续写-爱的陪伴：帮助失明妻子重拾生活信心+讲义 高三上学期第一次诊断性考试英语试题

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短文。Duetoamedicalmisdiagnosis(误诊),Susan,34,hadbeenleftsightless,andwassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtodependonwasherhusband,Mark.MarkwasanofficerandhelovedSusanwithallhisheart.Whenshefirstlosthersight,hewatchedhersinkintodespair.Hewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainconfidencetobecomeindependentandreturntohernormallifeagain.Buthowwouldhedothat?Susanusedtotakethebustowork,butnowshewastoofrightenedtofacethewholeworld.MarkdecidedtoconvinceSusantotakethebusagain.Perhapsonedayshecouldenjoyacitytourallbyherselforbuysomedailygroceryinthesupermarketthreestopsaway.Butshewasstillsomoodyandsensitive.Howwouldshereact?Oneday,Marksummoneduphiscourageandsaid“Honey,lifeshallmoveon,let’strytakingthebusasthefirststep,OK?”Justashepredicted,Susanwasscaredattheideaoftakingthebusonherown.“I’mblind!”sherespondedbitterly.“HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou’reabandoningme.”Mark’sheartbrokehearingthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanhewouldridethebuswithheruntilshegotthehangofit.Andthatwasexactlywhathappened.Forawholeweek,MarkaccompaniedSusanonthebus.Hetaughtherhowtorelyonherothersenses,specificallyherhearing,todeterminewhereshewasandhowtoadapttohernewenvironment.Hehelpedherbefriendthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Markencouragedheranddecidedtocontinuewatchingoutforheruntilshegotoffthebus,onlyinsecret.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意34岁的苏珊因医疗误诊失明，陷入黑暗、愤怒、沮丧和自怜的情绪中，丈夫马克全心全意地爱着她，决心帮助她重获自信、独立生活。马克想让苏珊重新乘坐公交，苏珊起初很抗拒，但马克陪伴她一周，教她利用其他感官适应公交出行。最终苏珊决定独自尝试，马克则在暗中守护。这篇文章展现了夫妻间深厚的情感以及面对困难时的相互扶持，体现了爱的力量能帮助人克服恐惧、重新拥抱生活。五要素分析人物：苏珊（失明的妻子）、马克（爱妻子的丈夫）环境：主要是公交站和公交车内等日常出行环境情节：苏珊失明后马克帮助她克服对独自乘坐公交的恐惧冲突：苏珊因失明而恐惧独自乘坐公交，与马克希望她独立的愿望产生冲突主题：爱与帮助能使人克服困难，重拾独立和自信伏笔与回应伏笔：马克决定暗中守护苏珊。回应：司机提到有个男人每次都跟着苏珊，让苏珊知道了马克默默的守护。伏笔：马克教苏珊依靠其他感官出行。回应：苏珊在独自乘坐公交时利用听力来判断行程。续写要点情感线：第一段：从苏珊独自乘车的紧张到成功下车后的自豪，再到得知马克守护后的感动。第二段：延续感动之情，同时体现苏珊对马克爱的更深理解和对未来生活的积极态度。故事线：第一段：苏珊顺利乘车、下车的过程以及和司机的对话引出马克的守护。第二段：苏珊在知道真相后的心理活动和对未来生活的展望。主旨升华句Loveislikealighthouseinthedark,guidingustoovercomedifficulties.（爱是黑暗中的灯塔，指引我们克服困难。）Truelovenotonlyaccompaniesbutalsoempowersustofacethechallengesoflife.（真爱不仅陪伴我们，还赋予我们力量去面对生活的挑战。）Thepoweroflovecanturnthemostdifficultjourneyintoabeautifuladventure.（爱的力量能把最艰难的旅程变成一场美丽的冒险。）Inthefaceofadversity,loveisthestrongestdrivingforceforustomoveforward.（在逆境面前，爱是我们前进的最强动力。）Lovegivesusthecouragetostepoutofthedarknessandembracethelightoflife.（爱给我们勇气走出黑暗，拥抱生命之光。）写作示范第一篇Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Shetookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhernerves.Asthebuspulledup,shegotonwithasenseofdetermination.Onthebus,shefocusedonthesoundsaroundher,theengine'srumble,theannouncements.Whenshegotoffatherstop,shefeltahugesenseofaccomplishment.Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriverreplied,“There'samanwho'sbeenfollowingyoueverytime.Hewatchesoveryoufromadistance.Youmustbeprecioustohim.”TearswelledupinSusan'seyes.SherealizedhowmuchMarklovedher.Fromthatdayon,shewasnolongerafraidoftheworld,forsheknewlovewasalwayswithher.第二篇Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Theworldaroundherwasasymphonyofsounds-thefootstepsofpassers-by,thehonkingofcars.Whenthebusarrived,shefeltherwayon.Duringtheride,sherememberedMark'swordsandfelthispresence.Whenshegotoff,shewasbeamingwithpride.Sheaskedthedriver,“WhydoyousaythatI’mverylucky?”Thedriversaid,“There'samanwho'sbeenshadowingyou.He'syourguardianangel.”Susanwasdeeplytouched.Inthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatlovewashereyesinthisdarkworld.WithMark'slove,shecouldconqueranyfearandembracelifeanew.Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Withthehelpofherwalkingstick,sheslowlymadeittothebusstop.Whenshewasstrugglingtogetonthebus,akidlentherahelpinghand.Somekindpassengersevenofferedtheirseatstoher.Shemanagedtositdown,sogratefulfortheassistanceofthewarm-heartedpeople.Shealsotriedtofeelthepositionoftheseatandpaidcloseattentiontotheannouncementsofthebusincaseshemissedherstop.Asshestoodupandwasabouttogetoffthe