01选择性Unit2Onwardsandupwards写一次经历(原卷版)

Unit2Onwardsandupwards单元写作深度指导写一次经历单元话题考题展示写一次经历（2024新高考1、2）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.本单元的写作目标是“写一次经历”,以写人、叙事为主,属于记叙文写作。写作时要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件,可使用典型的“总一分一总”三段式结构。一、篇章结构1.开头:介绍这次经历发生的背景;2.主体:具体介绍这次经历;3.结尾:介绍自己对这次经历的感受。二.注意事项1.正常使用时态，通常使用过去范畴的时态。2.常用第一人称。3.重视上下文的衔接，用好过渡词。考向分析与应对策略whenwherewho）、事件（what）、原因（）、结果（how）。此外，叙述事件时还应注意以下几点：1.文章更加客观。本写作应使用第一人称，可穿插个人的感受以突出“难忘”这一特点。2.感受往往用过去时；强调对现在或以后的影响可以用现在时或将来时。‌‌“写一次经历”,以写人、叙事为主,属于记叙文写作。写作时要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、事件,可使用典型的“总一分一总”三段式结构。1.开头:介绍这次经历发生的背景;2.主体:具体介绍这次经历;3.结尾:介绍自己对这次经历的感受。I.话题词汇1.独自玩耍playalone2.开心的delighted3.降临descendupon4.带某人回家takesbhome5.匆忙inahurry6.从那以后fromthenon7.处于困难中introuble/need8.感激appreciativeof9.遭到某人拒绝receiveone’srejection10.难堪的,尴尬的embarrassed11.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的delightful12.友谊;友好交往panionship13.心烦意乱的,烦恼的upset14.然而,不过nevertheless15.坚持不懈persevereII.话题句式开头:简要叙述发生的事情1.Asscheduled,the...tookplaceat...in...,lasting2hours.按计划,……于……(时间)在.…(地点)举行,历时两个小时。2.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...有一次我被邀请去……但后来发生的事让我觉得…主体:事件过程1.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...起初我以为……但结果是……这让我觉得……2.OnlywhenIwastoldthat...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.只有当我被告知……时我才开始意识到我犯了一个多么愚蠢的错误。结尾:事件结果1.Throughthismeaningful...activity,welearnedsomethingthatcan'tbelearnedinclass.通过这次有意义的……活动,我们学到了在课堂上学不到的东西。2.Theactivitymadeushaveabetterunderstandingofthemeaningof...这次活动让我们更好地了解……的意义。III.模版框架1.Generalintroduction2.Difficulties3.Solution4.Lessonsandfeelings假定你是李华,曾经在一所聋哑学校做过助教,请根据以下要点用英文写一篇关于你的助教经历的文章。1.一位对生活失去信心的失聪女孩Jean在你的帮助下重拾生活信心;2.当时你遇到的最大困难是沟通障碍;3.你是如何克服困难的?你从中学到了什么?注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作分析】[总体布局]写一次经历主题叙述一次助教经历体裁记叙文布局第一段概述助教经历第二段遇到的困难及解决办法第三段你的收获人称以第一人称为主时态以一般过去时态何一般现在时态为主[句子整理]用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.________________adj.难堪的,尴尬的2.________________adj.令人愉快的,讨人喜欢的3.________________n.友谊;友好交往4.________________adj.心烦意乱的,烦恼的5.________________adv.然而,不过6.________________v.坚持不懈Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一部分:概述助教经历(1)Onthewhole,helpingJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis_____________________(一次愉快的经历).第二部分:遇到的困难及解决办法(2)Thebiggestdifficulty_________________________(我面对的)wasthemunicationbarriers.(3)First,Iadvisedherto____________________________________(鼓起勇气)toconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadof_________________________________(逃避它们).(4)Furthermore,Imadeeveryeffortto____________________________(建立友谊及互相的信任)withher.(5)Eventually,whatmatteredmostwasto______________________(坚持我正在做的事情).第三部分:你的收获(6)WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreally_________________________(有助于我们的成功).答案(1)adelightfulexperience(2)thatIfaced(3)gathercourage;escapingfromthem(4)establishpanionshipandmutualtrust(5)persevereinwhatIwasdoing(6)contributetooursuccess2.句式升级(7)用it作形式主语改写句(1)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(8)将句(2)改为强调句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[衔接成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2024赣州市适应性考试（二模）应用文分享你的一次劳动经历与感受。假定你是李华，你校有一个劳动实践基地，你和同学们非常喜欢去基地参加劳动实践。请你写一封email给你的英国笔友Bob，分享你的一次劳动经历与感受。内容包括：

1.劳动经历；2.劳动感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________实战演练2一、单句翻译1.我忘不了发生在我六岁左右的一件事情。____________________________________________________________________________________________我在大雨中迷路了，这让我非常紧张。____________________________________________________________________________________________我站在那里，不知道做什么。____________________________________________________________________________________________看到我站在雨里哭，她把我送回了家。____________________________________________________________________________________________这是我遇到的最可怕的事情。____________________________________________________________________________________________二、语篇翻译MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivityandit’sverymeaningful.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Allofustriedourbesttoworkhardandhelpedeachother.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,becausewehavelearnedalotfromit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.书面表达假设你是李华，得知你的新西兰笔友Mike

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Mike写一封信，分享自己近期做志愿者的一次经历。内容包括：1.志愿者经历；2.你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua(2024新高考1、2）假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）写作词数应为80个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua(2023届成都高三零诊）假设你是Tom,请根据以下提示讲述你和父亲一起爬山的经历。1.去年暑假我和父亲早晨出发去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨来,我们全身被淋湿了，又冷又累;3.我开始抱怨,想要放弃;4.父亲给予我鼓励和温暖;5.最终我们成功到达山顶,欣赏了美景。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________