2023年北京市初三二模英语试题汇编：材料作文

第1页/共1页2023北京初三二模英语汇编材料作文一、材料作文1．（2023·北京东城·统考二模）某英文网站正在开展以“________的一天”为题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请补全题目并用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈那天发生了什么，以及你的感悟。提示词语：meaningful,trip,showaround,experience,realize提示问题：Whathappenedthatday?Whatdidyoulearn?A(n)________Day________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023·北京西城·统考二模）假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号计划做主题为“TheMostBeautifulSeasoninBeijing”的系列推送。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你心目中北京最美的季节，并说明理由。提示词语：flowers,colorful,activity,weather提示问题：•What’sthemostbeautifulseasoninBeijing?•Whydoyouloveit?EachseasoninBeijinghasitsspecialbeauty._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2023·北京西城·统考二模）鼓励宛如融融春风，温暖着每个人的心灵。某英文网站正在开展主题为“ThePowerofEncouragement”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一次你受到鼓励的经历，并谈谈这次经历对你的影响。提示词语：improve,confident,effort,hope提示问题：•Whatwastheexperience?•Whathaveyoulearntfromit?

Everyoneneedstobeencouragednowandthen.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．（2023·北京海淀·二模）假如你是李华，某英文报社正在发起“为未来的自己画像”的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，畅想一下十年或二十年后你的样子，并简要介绍你将如何去遇见更好的自己。提示词语：work,personality,makeefforts,ensure(保证),meaningful提示问题：●Whatwillyoubelikeinthefuture?●Howareyougoingtoensureabetterfuture?I’llbequitedifferentfromwhatIamtodayinthefuture.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2023·北京海淀·二模）耳朵是通往心灵之路。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展以“倾听”为主题的交流活动。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，谈谈你在与人交流时是如何倾听他人的，以及你对倾听的理解。提示词语：smile，eyecontact(目光交流)，patient，respect，understand提示问题：●Whatdoyoudoasagoodlistener?●Whyisitimportanttobeagoodlistener?Listeningismorethanusingourears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2023·北京丰台·统考二模）初中生活已接近尾声，在这3年里，是否有这样一个人，在你迷茫时引领你一路前行，成为你学习的榜样。假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众平台计划做一期主题为“榜样人物”的系列推送。请你用英语写一篇文章，推荐你心中的一位榜样，并写明推荐理由。要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：admire,patient,facethedifficulty,encourage,advice提示问题：●Whoisyourrolemodel?●Whydoyouwanttorecommend(推荐)him/her?Everyonehasarolemodelinhisheart.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．（2023·北京丰台·统考二模）雨果曾经说过：“善是精神世界的阳光。”某英文网站正在开展以“友善”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一段你帮助他人的经历以及你的收获。要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：helpful,solve,cheersb.up,realise,support提示问题：●Whatexperiencecanyoushareabouthelpingothers?●Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?Theworldisbeautifulbecauseofkindness.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．（2023·北京顺义·统考二模）某英文网站正在开展以“学会学习”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习过程中运用了什么有效的学习方法，取得了什么效果。提示词语：takenotes,progress,successful提示问题：●Whateffectivelearningmethodsdoyouhave?●Whathaveyouachieved?Effectivelearningmethodscarhelpyouachievealot._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2023·北京石景山·统考二模）一分耕耘，一分收获。某英文网站正在开展以“Practicemakesperfect（熟能生巧）”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对该谚语的理解，并分享一次你在生活中践行它的经历。提示词语：workhard,result,improve,top提示问题：●What’syourunderstandingaboutthissaying?●Howdidyoudotoputitintopractice?Shareyourexperience.Haveyouheardaboutthesaying“Practicemakesperfect”?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．（2023·北京大兴·统考二模）某英文网站正在开展以“挑战”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在生活中是怎样应对挑战的，有哪些收获。提示词语：overcome,practice,effort,makeprogress提示问题：●Howdoyoufacechallengesinyourlife?

●Whathaveyouachieved?Itisimportantforustofacechallengesinourlives.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2023·北京房山·统考二模）持之以恒是每一位青少年都应该具备的优秀品质。某英文网站正在开展以“OneThingIKeepDoing”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在学习或生活中一直坚持做的一件事情，你坚持这样做的理由，以及这样做给你带来了哪些影响和改变。提示词语：perseverance(坚持),reading,practice,knowledge提示问题：●Whatisthethingthatyoukeepdoing?●Whydoyoukeepdoingit?●Howdoesitmakeadifferencetoyou?Perseveranceisthequalitythateveryteenagershouldhave.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．（2023·北京门头沟·统考二模）随着科技的发展，互联网给我们带来了很多便利和好处，但沉溺网络也带来很多不良影响。某英文网站正在开展以“我和互联网”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你每天的上网时长，你上网都做些什么以及你对互联网的看法。提示词语：spend,searchfor,convenient,bebadfor,properly提示问题：●HowlongdoyousurftheInterneteveryday?●WhatdoyouoftendoontheInternet?●WhatdoyouthinkoftheInternet?TheInternetandMeWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,theInternethasbecomeamustinourlife.

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．（2023·北京昌平·统考二模）纸上得来终觉浅，绝知此事要躬行。在初中三年的学习与生活中，你一定习得了丰富的知识和技能。请你介绍一种知识或技能，并谈谈你是如何在生活中应用的。要求：根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计人总间数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：computer,helpful,design,webpage,successful提示问题：●Whatkindofknowledgeorskillhaveyoulearned?●Howdidyouputitintopracticeinyourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．（2023·北京燕山·统考二模）某英文网站开展以“Low-carbonLife(低碳生活)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你是怎样理解低碳生活的，并描述你在日常生活中实现低碳生活的具体做法。提示词语：protect,recycle,reduce,environment,energy提示问题：●Whatdoyouthinkoflow-carbonlife?●Whatdoyoudotohavealow-carbonlife?

参考答案1．例文AMeaningfulDayItwasbrightandsunnylastFriday.Iwentonaschooltriptoafarmwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmandweexperiencedwhatfarmersdointheirdailylives.Wewateredplants,fedanimalsandpickedvegetables.Thenwelearnedabouthowfoodisgrownandhowmuchhardworkgoesintogrowingit.ItwasameaningfuldaybecauseInotonlyexperiencedthenaturalworldfirst-handbutalsorealizedhowworkinghardbenefitsus.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点和题目部分已给出，考试应注意“要求”中先填入单词把题目补充完成，充实细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，简要介绍具体哪一天，引出重点介绍的一天的内容。第二步，具体阐述写作内容。“一天发生的事情和所感悟到的”等方面表明一天的有意义。第三步，书写结语，抒发情感。[亮点词汇]①meaningful有意义的②experienced经历③realized意识到[高分句型]①ItwasameaningfuldaybecauseInotonlyexperiencedthenaturalworldfirst-handbutalsorealizedhowworkinghardbenefitsus.（because引导的原因状语从句和how引导的宾语从句）2．参考范文：EachseasoninBeijinghasitsspecialbeauty.However,themostbeautifulseasoninmymindisspring.SpringinBeijingisthemostcolorfultimeofthewholeyear.Fromthefirstsightofgreenonthetrees,tothevibrantlycoloredflowers,thespiritofrenewalcanbefelteverywhere.Peoplealsorefreshthemselvesinspring.Aftersuchalongperiodofcoldweather,everyoneisexcitedaboutthenewseason.Peopledomoreoutdooractivitiessuchasflyingkites,climbingmountainsandsoon.Allinall,IthinkspringisthemostbeautifulseasoninBeijing.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，文章需要回答提示中给出的两个问题，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出北京最美好的季节；第二步，介绍最美好的季节是什么，并描述北京的春天；第三步，介绍人们会在春天做什么；第四步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①beexcitedabout对……感到兴奋②thespiritof……的精神③outdooractivities户外运动[高分句型]Fromthefirstsightofgreenonthetrees,tothevibrantlycoloredflowers,thespiritofrenewalcanbefelteverywhere.（含有情态动词的被动语态）3．例文Everyoneneedstobeencouragednowandthen.WhenIwasinprimaryschool,Ihadabadgrade.Ihadtobeagoodyoungpioneer.Mycompositionwasverybad,andmyparentshadtochangealotofthingsforme.SinceIenteredthejuniorhighschool,mygradeshaveincreasedandmycompositionhasimprovedalot.GuesswhyIprogressedsoquicklyfrommiddleschool?Italldependsontheteacher’sencouragement.BecauseIgotA+foreverycompositionIsubmitted,whetherIwroteitwellornot.Andhealsowroteintheexercisebook“youhavemadeprogressandyouneedtoworkharder.”Andthatboostedmyconfidence.Myprogressdependsnotonlyontheteacherbutalsoonmyparents.IwassostubbornthatIwasalwaysbeatenbymyparents.Myhomeworkwasalwayslate.WhenIwasabouttotakethemidterm,mymothertoldmethatifIdidwellintheexam,shewouldawardmeMP4ortakemeouttoplay.Iwasveryhappy,andIworkedhard,gotagoodgrade,andwaspraisedbymyparents.Somyconfidencegrewstronger.Withoutencouragement,mygradeswouldnothaverisen.Withoutencouragement,mycompositionwillnotbewellwritten.Withoutencouragement,Iamnotconfident.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，简单引出话题“每个人都需要鼓励”；第二步，具体阐述写作步骤，介绍自己受到鼓励的经历；第三步，书写结语。谈谈这次经历对你的影响。[亮点词汇]①dependson取决于②boostedmyconfidence激发了我的自信心③wasaboutto将要做某事[高分句型]①IwassostubbornthatIwasalwaysbeatenbymyparents.（so...that...句型使用）②WhenIwasabouttotakethemidterm,mymothertoldmethatifIdidwellintheexam,shewouldawardmeMP4ortakemeouttoplay.（when引导的时间状语从句使用）4．例文：I’llbequitedifferentfromwhatIamtodayinthefuture.In10or20years,I’llbeworkingasanengineerforahigh-techcompany,leadingasimplebuthealthylifestyle,andbeingfullyinvolvedinvolunteerwork.Inordertorealizemydream,I’mgoingtoworktowardsmyshort-termandlong-termgoalsstepbystep.Foronething,I’mgoingtogivefullattentiontomystudiesfromnowonsothatIcangetintoagooduniversityandgetmydreamjob.Meanwhile,I’mgoingtodevelophealthylivinghabitsthatwillallowmetoenjoygoodhealthanddomyparttoprotecttheenvironment.I’llalsomakeitahabittodovolunteerworkforpeopleinneedandhelptomaketheworldabetterplace.Allinall,in10or20years,I’llbefollowingmydreampathandrealizingmyself-worth.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，结合提示问题和词语进行叙述，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。“开门见山”式写明未来自己所从事的职业；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细讲述为了实现自己的梦想，该如何去做；第三步，书写结语。表达自己坚定实现梦想的决心。[亮点词汇]①befullyinvolvedin充分参与②inorderto为了③stepbystep一步步地④allinall总而言之[高分句型]①Foronething,I’mgoingtogivefullattentiontomystudiesfromnowonsothatIcangetintoagooduniversityandgetmydreamjob.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）②Meanwhile,I’mgoingtodevelophealthylivinghabitsthatwillallowmetoenjoygoodhealthanddomyparttoprotecttheenvironment.（that引导的定语从句）5．例文：Listeningismorethanusingourears.Beingagoodlistenerrequirespatience,respectandanencouragingattitude.WhenIlistentoothers,Ialwayslistenpatientlytoeverywordthespeakerhastosay,andItrymybesttomakesureIunderstandthespeaker.What’smore,Ibelieveit’simpolitetointerruptothers,soIalwaysletothersfinishfirst.IfIneedtosaysomething,Isayitwithasmile.Inaddition,Ikeepeyecontactwiththespeakertoshowmyrespect,noddingfromtimetotimetoletthespeakerknowIlikewhathe/shesays.Beingagoodlistenerisofgreatimportance.Ontheonehand,listeningisthekeytoeffectivecommunication.Ontheotherhand,goodlisteningensuresgoodrelationshipswithothers.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：这是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：必须包含提示中的内容，不要遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题，说明你对倾听的理解；第二步，谈谈你在与人交流时是如何倾听他人的；第三步，总述倾听的重要性。[亮点词汇]①listento听②makesure确保③fromtimetotime不时地[高分句型]①WhenIlistentoothers,Ialwayslistenpatientlytoeverywordthespeakerhastosay,andItrymybesttomakesureIunderstandthespeaker.（when引导的时间状语从句）②IfIneedtosaysomething,Isayitwithasmile.（if引导的条件状语从句）③Ontheonehand,listeningisthekeytoeffectivecommunication.（动名词作主语）6．例文Everyonehasarolemodelinhisheart.ThepersonIadmiremostisthemonitorofmyclass.Hespendsmuchtimeandenergyonstudy.Heisalwaysactiveinclassandfinisheshishomeworkontime,sohecangetgoodgrades.Heisthoughttobehelpfulandselflessbecauseheiswillingtosharehislearningexperiencewithus.Heisalsocaringandunderstanding.WheneverIfeelupset,helistenstomepatientlyandputhimselfinmyshoes.WhenImeetproblems,heencouragesmetofacethedifficultiesandhelpsmefindthesolutions.Withhishelpandguidance,Ibettermyselflittlebylittle.Iamproudtohavesuchawonderfulfriend.Heistherolemodelinmyheart.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文要求介绍自己的榜样，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，先承接短文开头，介绍自己的榜样是谁；第二步，具体介绍为什么他是你的榜样；第三步，介绍榜样对自己的影响。[亮点词汇]①spendtimeonsth花时间做某事②encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事[高分句型]①Heisalwaysactiveinclassandfinisheshishomeworkontime,sohecangetgoodgrades.（so连接两个句子）②WheneverIfeelupset,helistenstomepatientlyandputhimselfinmyshoes.（时间状语从句）7．例文Theworldisbeautifulbecauseofkindness.Whenyoureachouttothoseinneed,youcanalsofeelgood.MyfriendJaneusedtobeashygirl.Inordertohelpherbecomemoreconfident,IencouragedhertotakepartinanEnglishcompetition.Inpreparing,Ihelpedhercorrectthemistakesinherspeech.Duringpractice,sheoftenforgotthewordsbecauseofnervousness.ThenIdidmybesttocheerherupwhenshewasabouttogiveup.Igavehersomeadviceonhowtoperformwell.Ialsolistenedtoherspeechoverandoveragainuntilwefeltsatisfied.Intheend,shefinishedthespeechcontestexcellently.ShethankedmebecauseshethoughtIwastheonewhomadeherbetter.Fromthisexperience,IrealisedthatanactofkindnesscangivepeoplestrengthandIcanalsoperfectmyselfintheprocessofhelpingothers.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据题干中的提示问题分享一段你帮助他人的经历以及你的收获，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题；第二步，详细介绍自己帮助他人的经历；第三步，介绍自己的收获。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②becauseof因为③doone’sbesttodosth.尽某人最大的努力做某事[高分句型]①Inordertohelpherbecomemoreconfident,IencouragedhertotakepartinanEnglishcompetition.(动词不定式作目的状语)②ShethankedmebecauseshethoughtIwastheonewhomadeherbetter.(because引导的原因状语从句以及who引导的定语从句)8．例文：Effectivelearningmethodscarhelpyouachievealot.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetouseeffectivelearningmethods.IhavetriedmanywaystoincreasemyefficiencysinceIwasamiddleschoolstudent.Beforethebeginningofaday,IalwaysthinkaboutmygoalsandmakealistofthingsIneedtodo.Then,Iorganizemyto-dolisttomakeaneffectiveplanfortheday.Ialwaysspendtimedoingimportanttasksfirstandmakegooduseoftherestofthetime.Bymanagingmytimewell,Ihavemadeprogress.Iusuallyfinishmyhomeworkontimeandstillhavetimetorelaxmyself.Effectivelearningmethodshavehelpedmebesuccessfulinvariousareasofmylife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题中给出的关键信息，结合提示词谈谈你在学习过程中运用了什么有效的学习方法。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，说明有效的学习方法的重要性；第二步，介绍自己有哪些有效的学习方法；第三步，谈谈自己通过有效学习取得了什么成效。[亮点词汇]①thinkabout考虑，思考②to-dolist待办事项清单③makegooduseof好好利用④ontime准时[高分句型]①IhavetriedmanywaystoincreasemyefficiencysinceIwasamiddleschoolstudent.（since引导时间状语从句）②Beforethebeginningofaday,IalwaysthinkaboutmygoalsandmakealistofthingsIneedtodo.（things后接省略that的定语从句）9．例文：Haveyouheardaboutthesaying“Practicemakesperfect”?Inmyunderstanding,ittellsusthatifyouwanttodosomethingwell,youshouldworkhardandpracticemore,oryoucan’tgetaprefectresult.WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotthatgoodatEnglish.Inordertoimproveit,ImadefulluseofeveryminutetoreadEnglishnovels,listentoEnglishsongs,orwriteEnglishdiaries.Ipracticedsohardthatoneyearlater,myEnglishwasatthetopinmyclass.Yousee,practicedoesmakeperfect.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为材料作文；②时态：一般过去时为主，综合运用各种时态；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍自己对于“熟能生巧”这句谚语的理解；第二步，阐述自己在生活中践行该谚语的经历。[亮点词汇]①begoodat擅长②inorderto为了③makefulluseof充分利用[高分句型]①WhenIwasinGrade7,IwasnotthatgoodatEnglish.（when引导时间状语从句）②Ipracticedsohardthatoneyearlater,myEnglishwasatthetopinmyclass.（so…that…引导结果状语从句）10．例文：Itisimportantforustofacechallengesinourlives.WhenourEnglishfestivalwascoming,Itriedmybesttotakepartinaspeechcompetitionandgaveaspeechinfrontofallthestudents.ItwassuchabigchallengeformebecauseIwastooshytotalkinpublic.Irealizeditwasagoodchancetoovercomemyshyness.Ipracticedmyspeechathomeoverandoveragain.Ialsoaskedmyparentsforhelp.Thankstomyeffort,Iwonthefirstprize.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedthatfacingchallengesisagoodwaytoimprovemyself.Aslongaswefacethembravely,wewillgetmorethanwhatwehaveexpectedandmakegreatprogress.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：讲述经历时态以“一般过去时”为主，讲述感悟时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏从挑战中获得的感悟，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，阐述自己的挑战事件，主要围绕事件“在演讲比赛中挑战自我”，挑战内容“自己过于害羞”以及最终结果“获得比赛第一名”进行展开；第二步，表达自己的感悟，“勇敢面对挑战是提升自我的方式”。[亮点词汇]①triedmybesttotakepartinaspeechcompetition尽我所能去参加演讲比赛②wastooshytotalkinpublic太害羞而不能公开演讲③agoodwaytoimprovemyself一个提升自己的好方法④makegreatprogress取得巨大进步[高分句型]①WhenourEnglishfestivalwascoming,Itriedmybesttotakepartinaspeechcompetitionandgaveaspeechinfrontofallthestudents.（when引导时间状语从句）②ItwassuchabigchallengeformebecauseIwastooshytotalkinpublic.（because引导原因状语从句）③Aslongaswefacethembravely,wewillgetmorethanwhatwehaveexpectedandmakegreatprogress.（aslongas引导条件状语从句，what引导宾语从句）11．例文Perseveranceistheq