高考冲刺600分英语培优计划之写作满分“5优化”专项增分训练优化点三第1课时

eq\a\vs4\al([专项增分训练])请适当增加细节，以使下面的作文丰满起来A[题目要求](2018·福州市质检)假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Lucy在当地的一所孔子学院(ConfuciusInstitute)学习。你刚获悉她在学院举办的中文诗词(poetry)比赛中荣获一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并希望她有机会来中国深造。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[考生作文]DearLucy，I'mpleasedtolearnyou'vejustwonthefirstprizeintheChinesepoetrypetitionheldinyourinstitute.I'mwritingtooffermycongratulationstoyou.IknowyouloveChineseculture,andnowyou'restudyinginalocalConfuciusInstitute.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetoetoChinaforfurtherstudy.WishyougreaterprogressinthestudyofChinesepoetry.Yours，LiHua[我来丰富]请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式参考范文：DearLucy，I'mpleasedtolearnyou'vejustwonthefirstprizeintheChinesepoetrypetitionheldinyourinstitute.I'mwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.ItcameasnosurprisetomebecauseIknowyouloveChineseculture,especiallyChinesepoetry,andyou'vebeenstudyinginalocalConfuciusInstituteforyears.I'msoproudtoseeallyoureffortshavepaidoff.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetoetoChinaforfurtherstudyinthenearfutureandhaveabetterunderstandingofmycountry.WishyougreaterprogressinthestudyofChinesepoetry.Yours，LiHuaB[题目要求](2018·河北省“五个一名校联盟”质检)假如你是班长李华，明年即将毕业。最近发现班里的一些同学为了提高成绩经常熬夜，并且不注意饮食。针对这些现象，请你给某英语报社写信投稿说明以上情况，并谈谈自己的看法。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearEditor，Yours，LiHua[考生作文]DearEditor，Iamahighschoolstudentwhowillgraduatenextyear.RecentlyIhavefoundthatsomestudentsinourclassstudyharderthanbefore.Theyoftenstayuplatestudying,andpaynoattentiontotheirdiet,whichdoesharmtotheirhealth.Inmyopinion,thoughweareundertheheavypressureofstudy,weshouldtrytoeatproperlyandgetenoughrest.Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfitandstudywell.Yours，LiHua[我来丰富]请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式参考范文：DearEditor，Iamahighschoolstudentwhowillgraduatenextyear.AsastudentinSeniorThree,Ihavefoundthatalmostallofthestudentsinourclassstudyharderthanbefore.Someevenstudylateintothenight,eatingsnacksanddrinkingCoca­Cola,whichisbadfortheirhealth.Inthemorning,duetostayinguplate,somestudentshavetogotoschoolhurriedlywithoutbreakfast,whichsurelydoesharmtotheirhealth.Inmyopinion,