新高考英语二轮复习题型归纳与变式演练专题31 读后续写02 情绪描写突破（解析版）

专题31读后续写02情绪描写突破（解析版）目录TOC\o"1-3"\h\u专题31读后续写02情绪描写突破（解析版） 1Part1思维导图 2Part2秘诀（一）：情感似人“手” 2Part3秘诀（二)：情感似对手 3Part4秘诀（三）：情感似压迫者 3Part5秘诀（四）：情感似动物 4Part6秘诀（五）：情感似光线 5Part7秘诀（六）：情感似重担 5Part8秘诀（七）：情感似液体 6Part9情绪描写微技能训练 7一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened） 7二：微技能二（表示感到兴奋thrilled） 9三：微技能三（表示感到悲伤sad） 10四：微技能四（表示感到开心happy） 11五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed） 15六：微技能六（表示感到生气angry） 16Part10模拟训练 191．（2022·山东潍坊·一模） 192．（2022·山东淄博·一模） 223．（2022·福建福州·模拟预测） 254．（2022·福建龙岩·一模） 285．（2022·福建厦门·二模） 316．（2022·广东汕头·一模） 347．读后续写模拟专练1 378．读后续写模拟专练2 41Part1思维导图Part2秘诀（一）：情感似人“手”人们常被情感掌控，受其制约。而中文中的“掌控”就是来源于“手掌”。于是，情感就可以比喻成一双无形的手，也就非常贴切了。我们发现：用于手的一些动作可以直接应用于某种情感。这类动作有：表示“抓住”类的动词：seize,grasp,grip,takeholdof表示“覆盖”：cover表示“撕成碎片”：tearintopieces我们来看下面几个例句：（1）Feargrippedherheart．她心中充满恐惧。（grip抓住）（2）Jealousyseizedher.她妒火中烧。（seize抓住）（3）Awildjoytookholdofher.她十分快乐。（4）Afeelingofpanicseizedher．她突然惊慌失措。（5）Anxietytoreherintopieces．她焦虑不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的过去式，表“撕扯”）（6）Angerandbitternesscovereduponmeforweeks．我好几周都沉浸在愤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名词形式）Part3秘诀（二)：情感似对手汉语里也有类似的说法：“我被什么情绪打败了”。将情感比喻为人的对手，那么人与情感之间的关系仿佛在比赛或斗争。但是汉语中，这种表达中情绪更多是负面情绪，而英文中，则没有这个限制。我们来看常见的动词有哪些？被情感对手“击败”。于是，动词通常是getthebetterof或者getthebestof（都表示“胜过”）。例如浙江2020年1月高考续写文本中就写到：Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.(他站起来，抱住爸爸妈妈，并露出笑容，努力不让情感控制他。)在这句里，就用到了getthebetterof的结构，表示“胜过”。我们再看几个例子：（1）Enthusiasmgetsthebetterofme．我太激动了。（enthusiasm热情）（2）Boredomoftengetsthebestofthem．他们常感到非常无聊．（boredom无聊）（3）Hiscuriositygotthebetterofhim．他异常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）Part4秘诀（三）：情感似压迫者我们可以控制情感，反过来，情感也可以变得强大，反客为主，成了统治者，压迫者，我们被情感控制。这是动词可以是：oppress压迫，甚至是deprive(表示剥夺，deprive通常与of搭配)，还可以是prey（捕猎，折磨）我们来看下面几个例句：（1）Worryingdeprivedhimofsleep．他焦虑万分，难以入睡。（2）Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech．我激动得什么话都说不出来。（3）Astonishmentandhorroroppressedher．她惊恐不安。（oppress压迫）（4）Angerandbitternesshadpreyeduponmecontinually．我感到愤怒和痛苦。（prey本意是“捕猎”，在这里引申为“折磨”。非常形象的表达，“愤怒”和“痛苦”像猎人一样，而“我”成了猎物，不就是我被这两种情绪折磨着吗？）Part5秘诀（四）：情感似动物情感也会有动物的一些特点，会悄无声息地“爬”到你身边，即用动词crawl／creep（爬），有时还会咬(gnaw)、吞噬(swallow/swallow)你。例如：（1）Happinesscrawlsuptothetipsofhisbrows．他喜上眉梢。（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）（2）Aslightfeelingoffearslowlycreptonhim．他慢慢感到一丝恐惧。（crept是creep过去式，意思是“爬”）（3）Self-doubtbegantognawawayatherconfidence.自我怀疑正在蚕食她的自信心。（4）Fearswallowedher.她非常惊恐。（字面意思是“恐惧吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）Part6秘诀（五）：情感似光线有人说：“积极的心态像太阳，照到哪里哪里亮；消极的心态像月亮，初一十五不一样。”所以说，情感和光线变化密切相关。我们也有这种生活体验在sunny(晴朗)的天气，人们会感到开朗高兴，情感像光一样散发（radiate）与传播（spreadacross），而在cloudy(阴云密布)或者dark(光线晦暗)则让人心情阻塞、郁闷不快。例如：（1）Joyshonefromhisbrow．他喜上眉梢。（2）Happinessradiatesfromherface.荣光换发。（radiate发散，发光）（3）Smilespreadacrosshisface.他满脸笑容。当然还有用“人或物”作主语的（4）Shehasbeeninadarkmoodthisweek．她这周心情一直不好。（adarkmood用黑暗来形容心情mood，当然是“心情不好”。）（5）Hisfacecloudedoverwhenheheardthenews．听了这个消息，他满脸愁云。（这个句子把云cloud这个名词当做动词用，over覆盖，cloudover这个词组把“乌云密布”这种形象就表现出来了）Part7秘诀（六）：情感似重担在中文中，我们有时候说某种负面情绪的时候，可以这么表达“很压抑，压得我喘不过气来”，这里的“压”显示出，在描写情感时候，赋予它重量感。英文也是如此：忧虑、悲伤、愤怒等消极情感犹如重担bearon(压在⋯上面)，需要人们carry(承受),而这些情感负担的unburden(卸去)、lose(失去)则会让人感到轻松、获得解脱。例如：（1）Griefbearsheavilyonher．她承受着悲伤的巨大压力。还有以“人”作主语的：Hewasburdenedwithworries他心事重重。（burden装在，负重。非常有意思是，在汉语中，“心事重重”中的“重”是一个多音字，也读zhong,“负重”的“重”。）（3）Themanagercarriedhisanger．经理怒火冲冲。（4）AfterIlostmytemper，Ifeltlighter．发脾气之后，我感到轻松多了。（lostmytemper字面意思好像是“失去了脾气”，其实就是情绪失控，发脾气）（5）Unburdeningherselfofherangergaveherasenseofrelief．释放了怒火后，她感到一种解脱。（第二个例子中提到了burden装在，负重，加上了否定前缀un，意思为“卸去负担”）Part8秘诀（七）：情感似液体在汉语中，如果用一个成语来形容两个人感情很好，我们可以用“水乳交融”，水和乳都是液体。同样的道理，在英语中，情感也常常被比作液体。常见的名词有：波纹（ripple）或wave(波浪)或flood(洪流)，常见的动词有：涌出（wellup），surge(涌动)甚至sweep(冲；卷)，有时fill／brim/takepossessionof(注满／盛满/占满)容器，有时overflow／well(漫出／溢出)容器，在高温下甚至会boil(沸腾).我们来看下面的例句：（1）Panicsurgedupwithinhim．他惶恐不安。（surge涌起，字面的意思是“恐惧在他身体里涌起”）（2）Theterriblescenefilledherwithfear．恐怖的场景使她十分害怕。（3）Awaveofpanicsweptoverher．一阵惊恐袭上她的心头。（4）Thelonelinessandgriefcomesinwaves.阵阵孤独与痛苦袭上心头。当然还有用“人”做主语的：（1）Hisheartisoverflowingwithjoy．他满怀喜悦。（2）Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme．我感到怒火中烧。（字面意思是：“愤怒”已经“boil沸腾了”）（3）Hewasbrimmingwithsorrowwhenshelefthim．她离开他时，他满怀悲伤。（brim是“边缘”的意思，作动词表示“溢出”。悲伤这种情绪从内心溢出来了。）现在我们把学到的表达用到作文中，我们用的是2020年新高考全国卷，即山东卷。讲述的是：卖爆米花方法救助穷人的故事。【情境一】Mrs.Meredith听了孩子们“卖爆米花”的主意之后，感到很满意，为孩子们的善良机智而骄傲。我们可以这样写：AwaveofsatisfactionandpridesurgedupinsideMrs.MeredithasJohnexplainedhisidea.当约翰解释他的想法时，梅雷迪思太太心中涌起了一股满足感和自豪感。(这句话就把骄傲与满足之感比喻成液体)【情境二】当John找到贫困小男孩Bernard，并向他说了帮助他赚钱的主意之后，Bernard十分感动。AfterBernardlearnedaboutJohn’sidea,gratitudeobviouslygotthebetterofthispoorboy,andmoistenedhiseyes.在伯纳得知约翰的想法后，非常感动，他的眼睛湿润了。（这句话里，把感激比喻成对手，Bernard忍不住感动而流泪。）Part9情绪描写微技能训练一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened）表示害怕的词/词组：frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one’skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;例句：当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.2.1）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)2）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)3）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.(被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)【高分情绪描写句子】①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.

②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...

④Shewaschokedbyfear.

⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.

⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.

⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).

⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

【补充：情绪描写之哭】cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one’seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtear例句：他哽咽欲哭。Alumpcametohisthroat.她的双眼哭得通。Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的眼里满含泪水。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来。Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.Oliver独自一人在房间里流下了孤独伤心的泪水。Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears．Wilbur哭着直到睡着。Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.二：微技能二（表示感到兴奋thrilled）例句：当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.1)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激动得两眼放光）2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.(激动得心砰砰跳)3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awideexcitementtookholdofher.(兴奋不能自已)三：微技能三（表示感到悲伤sad）例句：一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.2.1）Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(心痛，眼泪直流)2）Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.(悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)3）Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)【高分情绪描写句子】①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.

③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.

④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.

⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.

⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.

⑧Afrown(皱眉)nowstoodonhisface.

⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.

⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.四：微技能四（表示感到开心happy）例句：当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.2.1)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.(非常开心)2)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)3)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hiseyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.(欢欣雀跃)【高分情绪描写句子】①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.⑥Awildgaiety(快乐)tookholdofher.⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.【描述喜乐心情的常用词】1.难以形容的开心：indescribablywildjoy

2.极为感动：beoverwhelminglymoved3.几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4.既兴奋又开心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5.激发某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6.显示出极大的意愿：showagreaterreadiness7.被强烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8.心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9.振作精神：keepupone·sspirits10.满意的表情：asatisfiedlook11.对...感到满意：becontentwith12.对...很高兴：bedelightedat13.为成功而欣喜：beexcited/thrilledwithjoyatthesuccess14.被...场面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15.被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16.因...而高兴：bejoyfulover/about17.喜爱，对...着迷:bekeenon

18.快乐至极：beoverwhelmedwith19.高兴地跳起来：dance/jumpforjoy20.欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21.—个令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22.过一个愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23.心满意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24.对...感到非常高兴：overjoyedat/todo【描述喜乐心情的常用句】Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.

他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.(ripplen.波纹；涟漪vt.扩散全身)一阵激动声穿过他们。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.（linger继续逗留）笑声在房间里萦绕。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.

他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。⑥Awildgaiety（快乐）tookholdofher.

一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteady

smile.

令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。

⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.

我欣喜若狂。

⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.

我高兴得难以形容。

⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。

⑪Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.

她的笑容照亮了整个房间。

⑫Sheshedtearsofjoy.

她高兴得流下了眼泪。

⑬Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.

她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。⑭Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.

她洋溢着幸福。

⑮Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.(flushv.发红）

她激动得满脸通红。细节描述的万能小技巧：可以把这些词和so/such.+adj./nthat...句型连用或者用with+n.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激动得两眼放光）3.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.

(激动得心砰砰跳)4.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awideexcitementtookholdofher.

(兴奋不能自已)当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebaby

wereontopoftheworld.

(非常开心)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamed(堆满笑容)andhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,

hedancedwithjoyandsweetness.(欢欣雀跃)【感动】①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动,我们……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...

泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed）例句：她感到非常羞愧。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Shefeltashamed.2:1)Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.(脸上滚烫)2)Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.(血液涌上脸颊)3)Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.(快哭了)六：微技能六（表示感到生气angry）表示生气的词/词组：feel/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm(sayangrily);

sth.makessb’sbloodboil(sthmakessbextremelyangry);claspone’shands;clenchone’sfists/teeth;speechless例句：Sheldon感到非常生气。1、大家可以先尝试用概括描述，先将意思表达清楚。2、请你在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Sheldonfeltveryangry.2:1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(冲出房间；狠狠摔门)2)Boilingwithrage,Sheldonshookhisfistatme.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)3)Filledwithfury,Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword.(充满愤怒；说不出话)【情感描写积累】Hereyes

twinkledwithmerriment.

她高兴得双眸闪闪发亮。Mack

wentintoraptures

and

burstintolaughter.麦克欣喜若狂，大笑起来。Arippleoflaughter

wentthroughthecrowd.

人群中传来一阵笑声Lily's

laughterlingered

intheroomforalongtime.

丽丽的笑声萦绕在房间里久久不能散去。Herhandswere

tremblingwithexcitement

assheopenedtheletter.当她打开信时，她的手激动得发抖。Afterheardthis

satisfactory

outcome,

Steve

felt

asenseofjoy

and

happinesssurgingthrough

him.在听到这个令人满意的结果后，史蒂夫感到一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。Overwhelmedwith

gaiety,

he

jumpedupandranexcitedlyaroundthe

tree.他欣喜若狂，跳起来并绕着那棵大树跑了几圈。Inhisexcitement

hecouldn'trememberhername.他兴奋得甚至把他自己的名字都给忘了。Rose

felt

blissful

asif

she

wasinpossessionofeverything.罗丝感到很幸福，好像她拥有了全世界一样。Shewas

carriedaway

bypleasure.她被快乐冲昏了头脑。Inodded,witha

bigsmilespreadingacross

mycheek.

我点点头，脸上露出灿烂的笑容。She

couldn't

concealtheexcitement

andrushedhome

totellher

motherthegood

news.她掩饰不住兴奋，急忙回家告诉母亲这个好消息。Sheisalways

readytohelp

othersinneedandalways

wears

shiningsmileonherface,

somanyclassmatesarewillingtomakefriendswith

her.她总是乐于助人并且脸上总是挂着灿烂的笑容，因此很多同学都愿意和她交朋友。I'm

over

themoon.

我太开心了Itiseasyto

inferthat

heis

inrapture

through

his

bigsmile.

从他那灿烂的笑容很容易推断出他是兴高采烈的。Hewokeupthatmorningwith

afeelingofexcitement.他一起床就感到很兴奋。Her

excitementgrew

asthedayoftheweddingcamenearer.随着结婚的日子越来越近，她越来越兴奋。Iam

overflowingwith

happiness.我洋溢着幸福。Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewould

spreadover

Mom'sface.每次我们提到旅途中的趣事，妈妈的脸上就会浮现出愉快的笑容Asuddenwaveofjoy

sweptoverher.一阵喜悦突然涌上她的心头。Shegazedupathim,

glowingwithhappiness.她抬头看着他，脸上洋溢着幸福的光芒。Thechildrenwere

filledwithexcitement

atthethoughtofvisitingDisneyland.孩子们一想到要去迪斯尼乐园就兴奋不已。Myheartis

assweetashoney.我的心甜的像蜜一样。Pleasurewelledup

insideherheart.她心中涌起喜悦。Amusement

gleamedinhiseyes.他眼中流露出愉快的深情.Mother's

eyes

flash

across

the

surprise,

open

smile

ripples.

母亲的眼里闪过惊喜，笑容荡漾开。Shecomeuptome,withasmile

shininglikeadiamond.她带着灿烂的笑容走到我面前。【高分情绪描写句子】Iwasseizedbyanger.

②Hewasfumingwithrage.

③Hisangerboiledover.

④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.

⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.

⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.

⑨Heflaredupattheword.

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.Part10模拟训练（2022·山东潍坊·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文AGIFTFORGRANDPASummervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthegrandparents’eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefuntheyhadwithgrandparents.Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.BehindthepropertywastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,shoutingexcitedly“Grandpa,weareback!”Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhisstrengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandmaexplainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn’tstanduponhisownforever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly(倔强地),“Ican!”Certainly,hewasstuckinhisboyishway.Mumandgrandparentswerehappytomeetagainafteralongtime.Theysattogetherandchattedaboutwhathappenedrecently.Thebrothersweresoonboredwithadultconversation,wentoutandwanderedintotheforest.Talltreesstretcheduptotheheavenswithlargebranchescrossingeachother,whileyoungonesrosestraightlikesoldiers.Grandpawasonceagreatexplorerfullofwisdom.Hecouldtellwherethebirdscamefromonlybytheircallsandsongs.Thetrees,birds,lizards,lotsofbugs...HowmanymerrymomentstheyspentwithGrandpainthekingdom!ButnowGrandpacouldn'tgetup.Thismadethemworried.“We’dthinkoutawaytocheerhimup.”Jacksaid.“Grandpaisabirdlover,andwecancatchhimabird.”Berlinsuggested.“Buthehatesbirdsbeingcaged!”Jackshookhishead.ThenabrightideacametoJack’smind.“Whynotmakeacane(拐杖)outofayoungtree!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.Jacksaid,“Whatkindoftreeshouldwepickforthewalkingstick?”Berlinthoughtforamomentandsaid,“Ithinkweshouldchooseastraighttree,sonoknotswillscratchgrandpa’shands.”Jacknoddedhisheadinagreement.Theyfoundastraighttreeandsettowork.Theycutthetreedown,andwithaknifetheytookthebarkoff.Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.Theythoughtgrandpawouldloveit.

JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.Whengrandpatookthecane,hishandsshookwithjoy,thinking,“Thisismadebymygrandsonsthemselves.Howpreciousitis!”Jacksaid,“Grandpa,wehopethiscanewillhelpyoustandupandcomewithustoexplorethewoods.”Grandpasmiledanddecidedtogiveitatrysoasnottomakehisgrandchildrendisappointed.Heheldthecaneinhisrighthandandthearmofhischairinhislefthand.Hestoodupwithstrengthonhislegs.Everyonewassurprisedandexcitedtoseegrandpastandup.Atthatmoment,Jacknoticedatearcomingfromthecornerofhisgrandfather’seye.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了暑假即将来临，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他们却发现爷爷站不起来了，兄弟俩走进了森林，杰克突然想到了一个好主意，就是给爷爷做一根手杖。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“柏林认为这是个好主意。”可知，第一段可描写兄弟俩怎么做手杖。②由第二段首句内容“杰克和伯林把手杖递给爷爷。”可知，第二段可描写爷爷拿到手杖后的反应。2.续写线索：拿工具——做手杖——爷爷尝试站起来——众人反应3.词汇激活行为类①拿：get/fetch②砍下：cutdown/chopdown③站起来：standup/risetoone’sfeet情绪类①高兴：joy/delight②兴奋的：excited/thrilled【点睛】[高分句型1]Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.(由when引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.(由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句)（2022·山东淄博·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。TheChristmasSpiritStrikesAgainIalwaysdreamedofmakingabigsurpriseofalifetime.Thankstoalittledetermination,someluck,andageneroushelpingofChristmasSpirit,mydreambecameareality.MyfamilyisCanadian,althoughmysistermoveddowntoAustraliaafewyearsagotostudy.ShewasgraduatingjustbeforeChristmas,butduetomyownscholarlyschedulebackhome,Iwouldbeunabletomakeitdownintimeforhergraduation.Shewasunderstandablydisappointed,andIfeltguiltythatIwasn’tabletobethereforheronthisspecialoccasions.WhileIwastalkingtomyprofessortheweekbeforemysister’sgraduation,shecommented,“Well,ifyouwanttogo,justgoahead!"Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Inearlyjumpedforjoy.“Justmakesureyougetpermissionfromadministrator(行政主管)，”sheadded.Myheartsank.Theadministrationatmyschoolwasinfamousfordenyinganysortoftime-offrequests.Ialmostdidn’tbotherasking,becauseIknewitwouldbeawasteoftime.Butsomethinginmedecidedtotry,justincase.MaybeitwasthehopethattheChristmasSpiritwouldsomehowaffectstheadministratoratthistimeofyear.WhenIreturnedhometocheckthereplyinmyinbox,Isteeledmyselffordisappointment.Iheldmybreath,openedthee-mail,andstartedtoread.Andre-read,justtomakesureI’dunderstood.Approval?Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Immediately,Icalledtheairline.Unexpectedly,evenduringthebusyChristmasseason,Iwasabletochangemytickettoarrivethedaybeforemysister’sgraduation.Withnewsthisfantastic,Iwasburstingtotellmysister.But,fingersonthedial((拨号盘),Ipaused.Wouldn’titbemuchmorefantasticifIcouldsurpriseher?Whatastateofshockshewouldbein!Slowlyagreatideacametomymind.Idecidedamuchmoredramaticarrivalthanjustaringofthedoorbell.WhatifIcouldn’tarriveinabox?Istartedtoplot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：Paragraph1:Istartedtoplot.Then,agreatideaoccurredtome:gettingdeliveredinaboxtomysister’shouse!IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.IfranticallystartedGooglingmailcompanies.Fortunately,IcameacrossamailcompanynamedCouriersPleaseandtomygreatamazementtheirmanageragreedtohelpmetofulfillmydream!Thenextday,theyfoundaboxbigenoughformetohidein.TheChristmasSpiritstrikesagain!(86词)Paragraph2:I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.Theyannouncedtheyhadadeliveryforher.Whentheboxwasopenedandshesawmesittinginsidesmilingupather,mysisterwasatacompletelossforwordsandburstintotears.Iwouldneverforgetthelookonherface.Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.SoneverunderestimatethepoweroftheChristmasSpirit(85词）【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即将毕业，作者想请假去参加她的毕业典礼，作者忐忑地向自己的学校请假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批准了，作者订好了机票，想要给姐姐一个惊喜。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我开始策划。”可知，第一段可描写作者的计划。②由第二段首句内容“我躲在大箱子里，听见邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者的姐姐看到作者时的反应。2.续写线索：想到好主意——联系邮件公司——打开箱子——感想3.词汇激活行为类①想到：occurtosb./strikesb.②偶然遇见：comeacross/runinto③打开：open/unfold④突然哭起来：burstintotears/burstoutcrying情绪类①疯狂地：frantically/insanely【点睛】[高分句型1]IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that)[高分句型2]Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句)（2022·福建福州·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,andwhatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycle.ButIknewthatmyfamilycouldn’taffordone,soIsettledforabedsidetablewithlockabledrawers,asafeplacetokeepmyprivatestuff.Wewenttothecharityshopwherewefoundanolddarkone.Itdidn’tlooktoocool,butIthoughtthatIwouldpaintittomakeitlookbetter.Afterwetookithome,Iwasgettingreadytopaintit.WhenIpulledthedrawersout.Ifeltsomethingstucktotheback.Ireachedinalltheway,andguesswhat?Asealedbagwithsomepapersinit.WhenIopenedthebag,Irealizedthatthepaperswereofficialdocuments.And,wrappedinthemwereabunchoftenandtwentydollarbills!Talkaboutfindingatreasure!Andonmybirthday!“Isthissomekindofjoke?”Isaidaloud.I