【真题汇编】2021-2022年上海小升初英语真题-06书面表达（含参考范文）

【真题汇编】2021-2022年上海小升初英语真题-书面表达2021年一、命题作文1．以“Awayfromfires”为题写话，至少于6句话，三种句型。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．以“Myhome”为题写作，要求不少于6句话，至少三种句型。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．以“Avisittothemuseum”为题，简洁描述一个你参观过的博物馆。要求三种以上的句型，至少8句话。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．以“Changesinourschool”为题，简洁描述学校的变化。要求三种以上的句型，至少8句话。Changesinourschool____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Writeatleast6sentencesonthetopic“Lookingforwardtomynewschoollife”.(以“展望我的新校内生活”为题写话，要求含有3种以上不同句型，至少8句。)Lookingforwardtomynewschoollife_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．提示：你的伴侣在今日上午给你打了一个电话，约你下午一起去上海博物馆参观，请你就这件事给你家长写一张便条，说明你将和谁一起去干什么事，什么时候回来，会回家吃晚餐吗等等状况。Anoteto___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二、提纲作文7．（1）Pleasewriteabout“AFire”（2）请在文章中涉及以下的问题：Wheredoesthefirestart?Whyisthefiredangerous?Whatmustwedoforfiresafety?(请写出两条)Whatshouldwedoifwemeetafire?(请写出两条)（3）行文流畅,用词语法正确。留意句子间的连接，避开句子的排列。不少于40词。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．写作训练。依据提示，写一写Peter的度假方案，不少于5句。WheretogoWhenGotherebyHowlongStayinHangzhoutomorrowtrainthreedaysahotel____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．范文：AwayfromfiresFirecanburndownalotoftrees.Itcanhurtpeopletoo.Wemustbecarefulwithfire.Wemustn’tsmokeintheforest.Wemustn’tplaynearfiresathome.Wemustn’tplaywithmatchesathome.Wemustkeepawayfromfires.Whenwearecaughtinafire,don'tbenervous.Weshouldrunawayfromfiresquickly.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍一下怎样远离火。然后再阐述在森林和在家不能做的事情。留意文章用can，must，mustn’t等情态动词并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：fire火；can可以；must必需；careful当心；smoke吸烟；play玩耍；playwithmatches玩火柴；keepawayfrom远离；don't不要；should应当；参考句型：Firecan...；Itcan...；Wemust...；Wemustn’t...；Whenweare...don't...；Weshould...；【点睛】2．范文：MyhomeIhaveabeautifulhome.Itisbigandclean.Inmyhome,therearetwobedrooms,alivingroom,astudy,abathroomandakitchen.Myfatheroftenstaysinthelivingroom.HelikestowatchTVthere.Mymotheroftencooksinthekitchen.Shecooksverywell.Ioftendomyhomeworkinthestudy.Therearemanybooksinmystudy.Ilikereadingverymuch.Thisismyhome.Ifeelsowarmathome.Ilovemyhome.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用therebe句型来介绍自己的家。然后再阐述家人在家经常做的事情。留意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：home家；beautiful秀丽的；bigandclean又大又洁净；bedroom卧房；study书房；bathroom浴室；kitchen厨房；watchTV看电视；cook烹饪；dohomework做家庭作业；warm暖和的；参考句型：Ihave...；Itis...；Inmyhome,thereare...；Myfatheroften...；Helikes...；Mymotheroften...；Ioften...；Thisis...；【点睛】3．例文：Lastweekendourteacherledourclasstovisitamuseum.Wegatheredinfrontoftheschoolgateandleftourschoolat8.30a.m.bybus.Ittookabouttwentyminutesforustoreachthemuseum.Oncewereachedthemuseumweboughttheentranceticketandenteredthemuseum.Wesawalotofoldthingandgetmoreinformationbylisteningtotheguideandwatchingthevideos.Weleftthemuseumaround5.00p.m.Wefeltsotiredbutweweresohappyandexcitedtolearnmorething

inthemuseum.【详解】题干解读：这是个命题作文，应当说明动身地时间，交通方式，做了哪些活动，返回时间及感受，留意文章为一般过去时态并要符合句子数量要求。参考词汇与句型：参考单词：led带领，gathered集合，reached到达，bought买，excited兴奋的参考句型：Wesaw...；Wefelt...；【点睛】【点睛】4．范文：ChangesinourschoolIhavebeeninthisschoolforfiveyears.Inthepastfiveyears,quiteafewchangeshavetakenplacehere.Ononesideoftheroad,thereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,therewasaplaygroundthreeyearsago,butnowstandsanothernewbuilding-ourlibrary.Theplaygroundisnowinthefrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedmanytreesinandaroundourschool.Ithinkourschoolismuchmorebeautifulthanbefore.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以Changesinourschool，介绍学校的变化。时态应用一般过去时和一般现在时，进行变化对比。留意不要少于8句号。2.参考词汇与句型：参考词汇：inthepast在过去；change变化；classroombuilding教学楼；playground操场；infrontof在前面；plant种植。参考句型：Inthepast,….butnow…；Therewas…；Thereis…5．例文LookingforwardtomynewschoollifeI'mlookingforwardtomymiddleschoollife.ThenIwillbeindependentbecauseIwillbeawayfrommyparents.I'malsolookingforwardtomakingnewfriends.Wewillplaybasketballonournewplayground.Wewilleattogetherinschooldininghall.Atthattime,Icanmakesomedecisionsbymyself.SoIwillbeexcitedandhappy.I’malsolookingforwardtoseeingmynewteachers.Iwillstudyharderinmynewlife.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以Lookingforwardtomynewschoollife为题写一篇作文，该题是一个命题作文。时态要用一般将来时，写写对新的校内生活的展望，要求含有3种以上不同句型，至少8句。2.参考词汇及句型：参考词汇：newschoollife新的学校生活，lookforwardto期望，independent独立的，makenewfriends交新伴侣参考句型：I'mlookingforwardto…；Iwillbe…；Ican…【点睛】6．范文：AnotetomyparentsDearmumanddad,IamgoingtovisitthemuseumwithmyfriendMikethisafternoon.SoIwillcomehomelaterthanthatonusual.ThenIwon’teatdinnerathome,wewilleatoutside.Don’tworry!Icantakecareofmyself.Iwillcomebackassoonaspossible.yourdaughter【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称给家长写一张便条，说明你将和谁一起去干什么事，什么时候回来，会回家吃晚餐吗等等状况。用一般将来时，留意人称、时态。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：museum博物馆，usual通常的，dinner晚餐，myself我自己。参考句型：Iamgoingto...；Iwill...；Ican...。【点睛】7．范文：FirestartedinShangqiu.Fireisverydangerous.Itcanmakeabigdisaster.Itmaydestroyourhome.Wemustn’tplaywithfire.Wemustusefirecorrectly.Whenwemeetafire,firstweshouldkeepcalm.Thencall119.Weshouldescapefromthefireorderly.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称和第三人称写火的起源，火的危急以及我们面对大火应当做的事情。留意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。2.参考词汇与句型：参考单词：dangerous危急的；disaster灾难；correctly正确的；calm冷静的；escape逃跑；orderly有序的参考句型：Firestarted...；Fireis...；Itmay...；Wemustn’t...；Weshould...【点睛】8．范文：PeterisgoingtoHangzhoutomorrow.Heisgoingtherebytrain.HewillstayinHangzhouorthreedays.Hewillstayinasmallbutcleanhotel.HewillwalkaroundtheWestLake.Hewillgoshoppingtoo.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求依据表格写一写Peter的度假方案。由于是方案，因此文章需要用一般将来时表述，留意表格中内容都需要提及。2.参考单词与句型：参考单词：begoingto将要，tomorrow明天，stayin待在，train火车，hotel旅馆，theWestLake西湖参考句型：Peterisgoingto…；Hewill…；He….byt