06Unit3Gettingalongwithothers(读后续写-动作描写2)(原卷版)

Unit3Gettingalongwithothers单元写作深度指导读后续写（动作描写2）(2021新课标I&II卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.【写作示例】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.Firstly,heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,askingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.Withallpreparationsdone,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.Paragraph1:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Eyesopened,thewomanheardaharmonious“HappyMother’sDay”fromhertwinkidswithhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeher.Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.【写作分析】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。【要点详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动

3.词汇激活行为类①帮助：help/assist②完成：finish/plete③拥抱：hug/embrace情绪类①高兴：happy/delighted②感动：moved/touched[高分句型1].Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2].Itwasnotonlythebreakfast,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.(固定短语notonly…but(also)和强调句型)读后续写高频动作描写词汇（二）▲动作的速度1.Itallhappenedsosuddenly.(突然地;意外地)2.Theskydarkenedabruptly.(突然地;意外地)3.Cathyworkedquicklyandmethodically.(利索地)4.Shemovedswiftlytotherescue.(迅速地;敏捷地)5.Hewalkedbrisklyalongthepathswinginghisrolledupumbrella.(轻快地;伶俐地)6.Theroadfellsharplytothesea.(急剧地)7.Unemploymentisrisingsteeply.(急剧地;大幅度地)8.Crimefiguresarerisingrapidly.(迅速地)9.Iwilldealwithitpromptlyandfairly.(迅速地;毫不迟疑)10.AlIlenquiriesweredealtwithasspeedilyaspossible.(快速地)11.Shehastilycookedupanexcuse.(匆忙地)12.Itwaslateandshewalkedhomehurriedly.(仓促地;匆忙地)13.We'llgetthereslowlybutsurely.(稳扎稳打地)14.Weshouldproceedwithitmethodicallybutnottooslowly.(有步骤地;有条不紊地)▲动作的频率1.Ineverknewthatyouhadatwinsister.(从未)2.IveryrarelyweararaincoatbecauseIspendmostofmytimeinacar.(难得;罕有)3.Sheseldom,ifever,goestothetheatre.(不常;难得)4.Weoccasionallymeetforadrinkafterwork.(偶尔;有时候)5.Modemsportsconnectwiththeeconomyminutely.(每时每刻地)6.Wearehourlyexpectingnewsfromtheclimbers.(每小时地;随时)7.Youcanpaymonthlyorannually.(每月／年)8.Thevictimwasstabledrepeatedlyinthechest.(反复地;多次地)9.Busesrunfrequentlybetweenthecityandtheairport.(频繁地)10.I'musuallyhomeby6o'clock.(通常地)11.Thefactorytypicallyproduces500chairsaweek.(通常;一般)12.Mothersroutinelylaybabiesontheirbackstosleep.(惯常地)13.Somanyofushabituallygossiporplain.(习惯地)14.WearemostlyoutonSundays.(通常地)15.Normallyawellbuiltman,hehadlostmorethan30pounds.(通常地)16.Igenerallygetupatsix(通常地)17.Ifhecan'thelp,thereisalwaysJohn.(总是)▲动作的进程1.Thecastlewasoriginallysurroundedbyatriplewall,onlyoneofwhichremains.(起初)2.Initiallythegovernmentwasunwillingtoacceptthedefeat.(最初;起初)3.Previouslyshehadverylittletimetoworkinherowngarden.(以前)4.NooneknowshowmanypeoplecurrentlysurftheNet.(目前)5.Thecrimeispresentlybeinginvestigatedbythepolice.(句中表现在:眼下)6.Presently,thedooropenedagainandthreemensteppedout.(句首表过去:不久)7.She'llbeherepresently.(句尾表将来:马上)8.I'llbereadyshortly.(马上)9.Thedriverwaskilledinstantly.(立刻;当即)10.Thepointofmyquestionmaynotbeimmediatelyapparent.(立刻;马上)11.TellthemI'llbetheredirectly.(立刻;直接)12.Wineismadefromthejuiceoffreshlypickedgrapes.(刚刚;新近)13.Itisnotyourtalentsorabilities,butyourchoicesthatultimatelydecideyourfate.(最终)14.Thebilateralrelationshavebeendevelopinghealthilyandstablysincethetwocountriesestablisheddiplomatictiesin1992.(稳定地)15.Itisbeingincreasinglyclearthatthisproblemwillnotbeeasilysolved.(越来越····..;日益)16.Theweathergraduallyimproved.(逐渐地)17.Thepaingotprogressivelyworse.(逐渐地)18.Theyarrivedpromptlyattwoo'clock.(准时地;及时地)19.Thankheavenstheshipwaslateleaving!Haditleftpunctually,weshouldhavemissedit.(准时)20.Hemovedrestlesslyfromonefoottotheother.(不停地)21.Weworkedsolidlyforsixhours.(连续地)22.TheonlyquestioniswhetherIwillrelyonitconsistently.(一如既往地)23.Iadmiredhertimelesslybeautifulskin.(永恒地;永存地)24.Romanculturewasenduringlyfertilized.(耐久地;永久地)25.IbecamelastinglydevotedtowhatIcalled“adventures”concurrentlyplannedandacted.(持续地)26.HeandhisfamilyhavesettledpermanentlyintheStates.(永久地;时刻地)27.Isawhimstepforwardmomentarilybutthenhangback,nervouslymassaging(搓着)hishands.(片刻地;时刻地)28.HehadspokentoEmmaonlybriefly.(短暂地)29.ThenextroundoftalksistentativelyscheduledtobeginOctober21stinWashington.(临时地;暂时地)30.Weregretthisserviceistemporarilyunavailable.(暂时地)31.Igojoggingfairlyregularly.(定期地)32.Wewillrefreshthisinformationperiodicallytokeepoursystemupdated.(周期性地;定期地)33.Runningoutsideispotentiallydangerous,becauserooftilesandglassmayfallonyou.(潜在地;可能地)34.Stressinitselfisnotnecessarilyinjurious.(未必;不一定)▲动作的程度1.Iknewherslightly.(略微)2.Helookedfaintlyembarrassed.(微弱地;有点)3.Hefeltmildlysurprisedatwhatwehaddone.(轻微地)4.Hewasonlypartlyresponsiblefortheaccident.(一定程度上;部分地)5.Someeffortshavebeenmodestlysuccessful.(适度地)6.Howmuchmoneydoyouneedtodothejobproperly?(适当地;正确地)7.Thegovernmenthasbeenaccusedofnotrespondingappropriatelytotheneedsofthehomeless.(适当地;正确地)8.Thejourneytookapproximatelysevenhours.(大约)9.Theneedforsleepvariesconsiderablyfrompersontoperson.(非常;很;相当多地)10.Igojoggingfairlyregularly.(相当地)11.Thetwosetsoffiguresarenotsignificantlydifferent.(显著地;有重大意义地)12.Hepaused,apparentlylostinthought.(显然)13.Shewalkedslowlydowntheroad,evidentlyinpain.(显然)14.Sheexplainedeverythingveryclearly.(清楚地;显然)15.Hewasobviouslydrunk.(显然)16.Idistinctlyremembermocking(对·····嗤之以鼻)theidea.(明显地;清楚地)17.Ispecificallytoldyounottogonearthewater.(明确地)18.Iknowexactlyhowshefelt.(精确地;确切地)19.Themeetingstartsat2o'clockprecisely.(准确地;精确地)20.Thetaskwassaidtobemostlongandtiringbutequallyrewarding.(同样地)21.Thelecturewasnotparticularlyinteresting.(特别;尤其)22.Iwasnotfeelingespeciallyhappythatday.(特别;尤其)23.Shefounditextremelydifficulttogetajob.(极其)24.Beingtallcanmakeyoufeelincrediblyselfconfident.(极其)25.Doingthisseemstobeunbelievablydifficult.(难以置信地)26.Sheabsolutelyadoresyou.(极其)27.Theyintendedtoinvesthugelyinnewtechnology.(极其;巨大地)28.Iwasbroadlyinfavourofit.(大体上;基本上)29.I'vepletelyforgottenhername.(彻底地)30.Ientirelyagreewithyou.(完全地)31.I'mnottotallyconvincedthatheknowswhatheisdoing.(完全地)32.Ifullyunderstandyourmotives.(完全地)33.Shetookthejobpurelyandsimplyforthemoney.(仅仅地;完全地)34.Webecamethebestoffriendsandheinfluencedmedeeply.(极其;深刻地)35.Histeachersthinkveryhighlyofhim.(非常;很高地)36.Thecarisinremarkablygoodconditionforitsage.(极其;显著地)37.Despitethepositivenews,hesaidtherateofdeforestationremainedalarminglyhighinmanycountries.(极其;让人担忧地)38.VeryrarelyhaveIseensuchastrikinglybeautifulwoman!(醒目地;斐然可观地)39.Sheismadlyinlovewithhim.(极端地;疯狂地)40.Theylaughedandsangheartily.(尽情地;极为)41.Theywantedtowinsobadly.(非常;在很大程度上)42.Weareprofoundlyaffectedbywhathappenstousinchildhood.(深刻地;彻底地)43.Hewassurprisedtofindhisroomthoroughlycleanedandeverythingarrangedinperfectorder.(彻底地;认真仔细地)44.He'sten.He'sfantasticallyimaginative,buttoocasual.(极其)45.Iwasbeginningtofeelamazinglysleepy.(出奇地)46.Howunimaginablypalelifewithouthopewouldbe!(难以想象地)47.Myexperiencetellsmethathoweverspectacularlyyougetyourheartbroken,eventuallyit'sokay.(壮观地;令人吃惊地)48.Ifeltastonishinglycalminmyplacebythecaptain.(令人惊讶地;惊人地)49.Theweatherwassurprisinglywarmandsunny.(惊人地;出人意外地)50.Thetheatrewaspracticallyempty.(几乎;差不多)51.Menareridiculouslypigheaded(死脑筋)andstubborn.(可笑地;荒谬地)52.Thepaintingsweresoldforabsurdlyhighprices.(荒谬地;荒唐地)53.Istillbelievethatpeoplearefundamentallygood.(从根本上说)54.IcannotadequatelyexpresshowsorryIamforwhatIhavedone.(充分地;足够地)55.Heisadmirablysuitedforthejob.(非常;极好地)56.I'mawfullysorryaboutthatproblemtheotherday,(非常;恶劣地)57.Heisproudofhisabilitytorememberthingsaccurately.(精确地)58.Ilistroughlymyworkasfollows,(粗略地)59.Thecausesofthephenomenonarestillinpletelyunderstood.(不完全地)60.Lifeinthecityisinparablybetterforchildrenthanlifeinthecountry.(无比地;无敌地)61.Husbandandwifeweresimilarlysuccessfulintheirchosencareers.(相似地)62.Hisanalysisofurbanuseofagriculturallandhasbeenprovedessentiallycorrect.(本质上;大体上)63.Educationisvitallyimportantforthecountry'sfuture.(极其)64.Inarrowlymissedacyclistwhowobbledintomypath.(狭窄地;勉强地)65.Anotablyshort,silverhairedman,heplaysbasketballwithhisstaffseveraltimesaweek.(尤其;显著地)66.Althoughthecarisbasicallysound,Iwasworriedaboutcertainareas.(基本上;总的说来)67.Thedifficultyliesprimarilyinthefactthatthefibercoreisrelativelysmall.(首要地;主要地)68.IliketothinkI'mrelativelyeasytogetalongwith.(相对地)69.Fortunately,theweatherthatwinterwasreasonablymild.(尚可;过得去;适度地)70.Thingsaremovingpainfullyslowly.(非常地)71.Myparentsloveme,butnotexcessively.(过分地;过度地)72.ShewasseveralinchestallerthanIwas,andunnaturallyblond.(异常地)73.Afteraweekofeffort,whenIsuccessfullyskippedforthefirsttimeIwasmorethanindescribablyhappy!(不可名状地;难以形容地)74.Elainefeltunaccountablyshyforonce.(不可解释地;莫名其妙地)75.Supposeyougotothebestrestaurantintownwithyourwealthyfriends.Toyou,thefoodisunimaginablygood.(超乎想像地)76.Withthehelpofhisfriendsandhisunbelievablytremendouspatienceandeffort,hemadeit.(难以置信地)77.Iamnot,Ihope,unreasonablynaive.(不合理地;离谱地)78.Hisresponsibilitiespressheavilyuponhim.(在很大程度上;沉重地)79.Iamacutelyawareofthedifficultiesweface.(极其;强烈地)80.Ifanything,swimmingwillappealtohermoststrongly.(强烈地;强有力地)▲动作的角度1.Thericherwehavebeematerially,thepoorerwehavebeemorallyandspiritually.(物质上)(道德上)(精神上)2.Wemusthealourselvesemotionallyandspiritually.(情绪上)3.PhysicallyImightnothavebeenoverseasbutmentallyandspirituallyIwaswiththem.(身体上)(心理上)4.Shewasphysicallydelicate(孱弱)andpsychologicallyunstable.(心理上)5.Hefailedtoshineacademically.(在学术方面)6.Lifeforthesuccessfuldoctorcanbeemotionallyandfinanciallyrewarding.(在经济上)7.Afivedayweekbenefitsmorethanindividuallyandeconomically.(在经济上)8.Mariabentherheadinstinctivelytoavoidbeingrecognized.(本能地)9.Todaywasmybirthday.Iwasofficiallyeighteenyearsold.(正式地;官方地)10.Theschoolislegallyresponsibleforyourchild'ssafety.(法律上;合法地)11.Thefactorywasunlawfullybuiltonapieceoflandwhichbelongstoanearbyschool.(非法地;不正当地)12.Theoretically,thepriceissupposedtobemarkedontheshelf.(理论上;照理说)13.Ithinktheydevelopedtheirideasstepbysteplogically.(逻辑上;符合逻辑地)14.Characteristically,heworkedhardattheassignment.(典型地;有代表性地)他一如既往地认真完成分派的任务.15.Hewastypicallymodestabouthisachievements.(典型地;果然)16.Youngpeopleshouldknowhowtowriteclearlyandreasonstatistically.(统计上地)17.Itsatisfiestheuser'srequirementsbothfunctionallyandemotionally.(功能上地)18.Technically,thetwosideshavebeeninastateofwareversince1949.(技术上;严格说来)19.Ifchildrencan'tthink,read,writeandpute,theycannotadapttechnologically.(技术上地;科技地)20.Iwouldpayextraformoreenvironmentallyfriendlycarsandfuel.(有关环境方面)21.Theresponsibilitynaturallyfellonourshoulders.(天然地;顺理成章地)22.Notunnaturally,Iwantedtoknowwheremydaughterhadbeenallnight.(很自然)23.Thecrimewasnotpoliticallymotivated.(政治地;政党地)24.Mywatchshowsthetimedigitally.(以数字形式地)25.Topsupermarketsaretobanmanygeneticallymodifiedfoods.(基因地;从遗传学角度)26.YoucanpaybillsovertheInternet.Additionally,youcancheckyourbalanceororderstatements.(此外)27.Theagencywillmaketravelarrangementsforyou.Alternatively,youcanorganizeyourowntransport.(或者)28.Iwanttospeaktoeachmemberofthegroupindividually.(分别地;独特地)29.Washthewhiteclothestogetherandtheblueoneseparately.(单独地;分别地)30.Itakeeverythingtoopersonally.(亲自地;就个人而言)31.ThereisonlyoneChinaintheworld.Thisisafactwhichisuniversallyrecognizedbytheinternationalmunity.(普遍地)32.Thesongisbeingwidelypopular.(广泛地)33.Itisveryimportantforustoverballyplimentandencourageoneanother.(言词上;口头地)34.Allcandidatesmustfirstofallbeorallyexamined,(口头地;口服地)35.We'lldiscussthemattermoreconcretelynexttime.Ihopeeveryonewouldmakesomepreparations.(具体地)36.Hedescribedhisideaabstractly,withoutanyillustrativeexamples.(抽象地;理论上地)37.Hehasspentseveralminutestellingaboutthatviewpointdetailedly.(详细地;逐条地)读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Patwasthenewkidintown.Herdadgotanewjob,sotheyhadtomovefromtheiroldhome,school,friendsandeverythinginSouthAmericatothisnewcity.Nowtheyweretotalstrangershere.Summervacationwentbywhiletheyunpacked,arrangedfurnitureandadjustedtothenewcity.Schoolwasapproaching.Patdreadedit.Shewasnotanoutgoingperson,somakingfriendswasnoteasyforthisshyandquietgirl.Shewasfilledwithfearsandworries.Shethought,“WouldImakefriends?WouldIfitin?WouldIsurviveatallinthisstrangenewworld?”Butthereshewas,preparingforanewschoolfullofstrangers.Herecameherfirstdayinthenewschool.Shearrivedatschoolontime,foundherclassroomandseatedherself.EverythingwasgoingwelluntilthefirstclasswhenPat’steacheraskedhertointroduceherselfinfrontofthewholeclass.Shehadpreparedforitthedaybefore,sosheshouldhavedoneitwell.Butwhensheutteredthefirstsentence,thewholeclassburstoutlaughingandbegantowhisper.ItwasthenthatPatrealizedshetalkedwithaverystrangeaccentwhichwasdifferentfromthelocals.Blushingwithembarrassment,shefinishedherintroductionquicklyandsattherealldaylongwithouttalkingwithothers.Afterschool,Patcamehomecrying,“It’sanawfulday.Allofthemaredisagreeable.Ihatethem.”Afterknowingwhathadhappenedintheschool,Pat’smothergentlyhuggedherandfortedher,“Hatredcanhurtbothothersandyourself.Honey,trytobehappy.”Inordertocheerherup,Pat’smothersuggested,“HowabouthavingapartythisSaturday?Wehaven’thadanypartysincewearrivedhere.”PartyissuchanappealingeventforkidslikePat.Rightaway,shestoppedcryingandlookedathermotherexcitedly,“Ohyes!Icecream!Cake!Red,redballoons!”“Andfriends?”momaskedgently.Hearingthis,Patsobbedagain,“Ihaven’tgotanyfriendshere.Nothingbutenemies.”注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。“Ifso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”Pat’smomsmiled.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.__________________________________________________________________________【写作分析】Step1获取语篇信息1.故事发展线索:开一个让“敌人”参加的派对→帕特妈妈的建议和解释→帕特明白妈妈的意思→帕特所有的同学都来参加聚会→关系终于融洽→感悟2.情感发展线索:茫然(刚搬新家)→纠结(不愿意开派对)→赞同(决定开派对)→高兴(同学们都来参加派对)Step2合理推测走向1.针对续写段首1:“Ifso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”Pat’smomsmiled.设问:(1)WouldPataccepthermother’ssuggestion?(2)HowdidPat’smotherpersuadehertoaccepttheadvice?(3)WhatwouldPatdo?推测:续写的第一段首句讲的是帕特的妈妈的建议,让她开一个由她的“敌人”参加的派对。接着应该写她的妈妈如何说服她接受这一建议的,她对妈妈的建议有何想法,决定如何做。2.针对续写段首2:OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.设问:(1)WhatdidPatandhermotherpreparefortheparty?(2)Whathappenedduringtheparty?(3)Whatwastheresultoftheparty?推测:续写的第二段首句讲的是星期六所有同学都来帕特家参加派对。接着应该写帕特和她的妈妈为派对进行的布置和安排,派对上同学们融洽相处的过程,最后写对此事件的感悟:朋友间应当相互理解。Step3打造合规词句1.帕特困惑地看着妈妈,想知道“敌人”的聚会怎么可能有趣。Patlookedathermotherinconfusion,wonderinghowanenemypartycouldpossiblybefun.

2.帕特琢磨着妈妈的话,意识到也许有另一种方式来处理她的处境,一种关于理解和宽恕的方式。Patponderedoverhermother’swords,realizingthatmaybetherewasadifferentwaytoapproachhersituation,onethatinvolvedunderstandingandforgiveness.

3.后院装饰着五颜六色的装饰品,空气中充满了笑声和兴奋。Thebackyardwasadornedwithcolorfuldecorations,andtheairwasfilledwithlaughterandexcitement.

4.随着时间的推移,帕特观察到她的同学们彼此之间的互动,慢慢地意识到他们并不像她最初想象的那样不友好。Asthedayprogressed,Patobservedherclassmatesinteractingwithoneanother,slowlyrealizingthattheywerenotasdisagreeableasshehadinitiallythought.

5.帕特妈妈关于“敌人参加的派对”的想法变成了一个转折点,敌人变成了熟人,熟人变成了朋友,理解的种子也播下了。Pat’smom’sideaofan“enemyparty”turnedouttobeaturningpoint,whereenemiesbecameacquaintances,acquaintancesturnedintofriends,andtheseedsofunderstandingweresown.

Step4衔接过渡成篇“Ifso,let’shaveanenemyparty.Ithinkitwouldbeinteresting,”Pat’smomsmiled.Patlookedathermotherinconfusion,wonderinghowanenemypartycouldpossiblybefun.Buthermothercontinued,“Inviteyourclassmates,includingthosewholaughedatyoutoday.Maybetheyjustneedachancetogettoknowyoubetterandrealizethatyoucanbefriends.It’sanopportunitytobreakdownthewallsandbuildbridges.”Patponderedoverhermother’swords,realizingthatmaybetherewasadifferentwaytoapproachhersituation,onethatinvolvedunderstandingandforgiveness.OnSaturday,itwassunny,andallofPat’sclassmatescametotheparty.Thebackyardwasadornedwithcolorfuldecorations,andtheairwasfilledwithlaughterandexcitement.Asthedayprogressed,Patobservedherclassmatesinteractingwithoneanother,slowlyrealizingthattheywerenotasdisagreeableasshehadinitiallythought.Conversationssparked,smileswereexchanged,andbarriersbegantocrumble.Pat’smom’sideaofan“enemyparty”turnedouttobeaturningpoint,whereenemiesbecameacquaintances,acquaintancesturnedintofriends,andtheseedsofunderstandingweresown.一、语段描写根据以下情境,使用表示“惊讶、羞愧”的情绪及相关动作描写词汇和句式,写一篇80词左右的短文。情境提示:你的同桌Lily期中考试成绩位居班级第十名,你感到很惊讶,因为她以前学习成绩不好,你认为她可能考试作弊了。同学们也惊讶地看着她。后来你了解到Lily在家熬夜学习,弥补功课,充分利用时间复习备考。你对你的行为感到羞愧。二、读后续写（2025·河南安阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onedayinthe1990s,Iwashelpingmybrothermovefromateachingjobaftercollege.Hewasdrivinghislittlepickuptruckpullingatrailer(拖车)andIwasdrivingmyoldlittleFordstationcar,packedwithhisthings.ItwasaSunday.Iwasdrivingalong.Allofasudden,mycarjustdied.Nowarning,nothing.IstoppedatthesideofacountryhighwayandwaitedformybrothertorealizeIwasn’tbehindhimanymoreandturnaround.Afterabout20minutes,hedidreturntofindme.However,neitherofusknewmuchaboutcars.Afterwaitingforwhatseemedtobeacentury,aman,introducinghimselfasJerry,cameoutofnowhere,tookonelookattheengineandsaid,“Timingbelt.”Wehadaskedaboutgettingthecarpulled30milestotheclosestlargetownonthephone,onlytofindthatitwasgoingtobeanexpensiverepair,eveniftheenginewasOK.Justatthismoment,Jerrysawthedifficultsituation.Hesawtwopoorkidsintheirearly20sstrugglingwithlife,andhesaid,“Well,it’sSunday.Nothing’sgoingtobeopen.ItellyouwhatIwilldo.Mynextdoorneighborisarepairman.Let’spushthecardowntohisrepairshopandwe’llseewhatwecando.”SowedidexactlyasJerrytoldus.Jerry’sneighborcalledhisfriendattheautopartsstore,whichwasclosedonSunday.Hedidafavorandgotthepartsneeded,drivingthem30milesouttotherepairshop.Andwesataround,tellingourstoriesonthewaywhilethecarwasbeingfixed.Therepairman’sson,akidofabout9or10,washangingaround.Aftersomechatting,welearnedthathewasextremelyboredasnooneplayedwithhim.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Theboybadlydesiredsomeonetohelpbuildatreehouseinthewoods.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whenwewentbacktotherepairshop,thecarhadbeenallfixed.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2024·湖北·一模）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnMondaymorningIworemyfavouritedresstoschoolforthefirsttimesinceIhadstartedatEdisonMiddleSchool.Isaidgoodmorningtoourheadm