专题09写作-2021-2022学年六年级英语下学期期末考试好题汇编（牛津上海版）

专题09写作（教师版）No1上海外国语大学附属中学20202021学年六年级下学期期末V.Translation.10%（3’+3’+4’）71.一份传统的英式早餐包括香肠、培根、鸡蛋和吐司。________________【答案】AtraditionalEnglishbreakfastincludessausages,bacon,eggsandtoasts.【解析】【详解】“一份传统的英式早餐”atraditionalEnglishbreakfast；“包括”include；“香肠”sausages；“培根”bacon；“鸡蛋”eggs；“和”and；“吐司”toasts。陈述一般事实，用一般现在时，主语“atraditionalEnglishbreakfast”是单数，include用其第三人称单数形式includes。句子开头首字母大写。故填AtraditionalEnglishbreakfastincludessausages,bacon,eggsandtoasts.72.你母亲节的计划是什么？我打算周六上午和父母去爬山。________________【答案】What’syourplanforMother’sDay?IplantohikeinthemountainswithmyparentsonSaturdaymorning.【解析】【详解】“你母亲节的计划”yourplanforMother’sDay；“是什么”what’s；“我”I；“打算做某事”plantodosth.；“去爬山”hikeinthemountains；“和父母”withmyparents；“周六上午”onSaturdayafternoon。根据汉语意思可知要用一般现在时，I后用动词原形。故填What’syourplanforMother’sDay?IplantohikeinthemountainswithmyparentsonSaturdaymorning.

73.麦克（Mike）经常在快餐店点一大份色拉配希腊调料和一马克杯苏打水。________________【答案】MikeoftenordersalargesaladwithGreeksaladdressingandamugofsodawateratthesnackbar.【解析】【详解】麦克：Mike，作主语；经常：often；在快餐店：atthesnackbar，作地点状语，放在句末；点：order，作谓语，本句用一般现在时，主语是三单，所以order用其三单形式；一大份色拉配希腊调料：alargesaladwithGreeksaladdressing；和：and，这里表示并列关系；一马克杯：amugof；苏打水：sodawater。故填MikeoftenordersalargesaladwithGreeksaladdressingandamugofsodawateratthesnackbar.Writeatleast50wordsonthetopic“Protectforests”(以“保护森林”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：不得出现考生真实信息。)Suggestedideas:1.Whataretheforests?2.Whatcanwegetfromforests?3.Howcanweprotectforests?Protectforests【答案】ProtectforestsForestsareveryimportanttopeople.Theplantsintheforestshelptomaketheairfresherandcleaner.Theycanholdthewaterwhenitrains.Theycanalsohelptocontroltheclimate.Theygiveusmanyusefulthings.ButnowForestsarebeingsmallerandsmaller.Sohowcanweprotectthem?First,weshouldn’tcutdownthetrees.Second,weshouldsavetheuseofpaper.Last,weshouldplantmoretrees.Forestsareourgoodfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文，以“保护森林”为题，写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求给出了三点提示：1.森林是什么？2.我们丛森林里能得到什么？3.我们怎样保护森林？2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了森林的重要性，主要用到了一般现在时态，用到了第一人称和第三人称，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。3.高分亮点：短语：beimportantto；maketheairfresherandcleaner；helptocontroltheclimate；beesmallerandsmaller；cutdown；savetheuseofpaper句型：First,weshouldn’tcutdownthetrees.；Second,weshouldsavetheuseofpaper.Last,weshouldplantmoretrees.；Forestsareourgoodfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.（表示顺序的词：first…second…last…）No2上海市松江区20202021学年六年级下学期期末(B)Writing(写作）64.Writeatleast40wordsonthetopic“Myfavourite_________”.(请以“我最喜欢的__________”为题写一段话，不少于40个单词。注意：不得出现考生真实信息)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatisyourfavourite...?(city/season/festival/sport/book/animal......)2.Why?Giveatleast2reasons.(至少给出2个理由）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【64题答案】【答案】范文MyfavouriteanimalIlikedogs,becausetheyarehuman’sgoodfriends.Theycandomanyhelpfulthingstous.Forexample,aguidedogcanhelpandleadtheblindpeople.Sometimesdogscanhelptheirownerdosomework!Whenwearebored,wecantakethemforawalk,andwecanplaywiththem.Ithinkdogsarecute,clever,friendlyandhelpful.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是半命题作文。在写作时应符合文章主题；第一段写喜欢的东西是什么；第二段主要写喜欢他们的原因；第三段简单总结。写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述细节时，细节应符合文章要求，不可随意减少，可以有适当的补充；描述时应注意保证思路清晰。No3上海市嘉定区20202021学年六年级下学期期末VII.Writing(作文)(共10分)59.Writeatleast50wordsaboutthetopicTravellinginShanghai（以“上海的出行方式”为题，写一篇不少于50个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Suggestedquestions:1.Whatwastravellinginourcitylikeinthepast?2.Whatdoyouthinkoftravelinginourcitynowadays?3.Howwilltravellingbeintenyears?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【59题答案】【答案】[例文]TravellinginShanghaiInthepast,thereweren’talotofbuses,carsorundergroundinShanghai.Sopeoplespentalotoftimeontheirwaytoworkorschool.Nowadays,travellinginShanghaiisnotverydifficult.Peoplecangoaroundthecityindifferentwayssuchasunderground,lightrailortaxi.Perhapsintenyears,moreandmorepeoplewilldrivecarsthemselves.Inmyopinion,therewillbemoreundergroundstationsandflyoversbutfewertrafficjams.IbelievetravellinginShanghaiwillbemuchmoreconvenient.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题为话题作文，要求以“上海的出行方式”为主题写一篇短文，内容必须包括上海出行方式演变的过去、现在和未来。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第三人称，时态可采用过去时描述上海出行方式的历史、现在时描述上海出行方式的现状、将来时描述上海出行方式的前景展望。文章叙述按时间线“过去——现在——将来”展开，应做到条理清晰、层次分明，不要在文中出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。No4上海市奉贤区五校20202021学年六年级下学期期末XI.Writing.(共8分)62.Writeatleast60wordsabout“________is/areimportant”.(请以“________is/areimportant”为题)，写一篇不少于60字的文章。注意：文章中不得出现真实姓名，校名以及其他信息，否则不予评分。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【62题答案】【答案】参考范文：WaterisimportantAlmostthreequartersoftheEarthiswater.Weusewatertodrink,waterfloursandsoon.Butnowadaysalotofpeopleispollutingthewater,Ifthereisnowater,allthepeopleontheearthwilldie,soweshouldprotectthewater.Wecanprotectwaterbyfixingthedrippingtap.Wecanprotectwaterbynotwashingvegetablesorfruitsundertherunningtap.Let’sprotectwatertogether.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于提纲作文，议论文写作。题目要求以“________is/areimportant”为题写作，命题既有限制又给学生发挥空间。在写作时应承接短文开头，第一段总述对题目的解释；第二段阐明原因或者目的并结尾。2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来提出论点或主题；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述水重要的原因时要描写细致，条理清晰。No5上海市浦东新区十五校20202021学年六年级下学期期末VIII.Writing(共10分)60.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“______isimportanttous”usingthefollowingquestionsbelowforreference.(请根据提示问题，以“______对我们很重要”为题写一篇短文，不少于60词。)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatdoyouthinkisimportanttousinourlife?2.Whydoyouthinkso?3.Whatshouldwedotoprotectit?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60题答案】【答案】例文：HealthisimportanttousAsweallknow,healthisimportanttousall.Bothphysicalhealthandmentalhealthhavegreateffectsonourlives.Ontheonehand,goodlivinghabitsplayanimportantpartinourphysicalhealth.Weshouldkeepabalanceddietanddomoreexercise.Also,goingtobedearlyandgettingupearlymakesusmoreactive.Ontheotherhand,keepinginagoodmoodwillbringusmentalhealth.Havingsomehobbiescanhelpusfeelrelaxedandmakeourfreetimemoreinteresting.Weshouldsmileatourlife.What’smore,goodmoodscanhelpusfacedifficultiesinanactiveway.Withphysicalhealthandmentalhealth,wearesuretobehealthyandhappy.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要围绕“……对我们很重要”展开，首先把题目补充完整，之后根据题干中提示的要点进行写作，也可适当增加细节使文章更加流畅。2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和一般现在时为主。第一段引出健康对我们很重要；第二段说明健康重要的原因以及我们如何保持健康；最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，注意不要出现单词拼写和语法错误。No6上海市金山区九校20202021学年六年级下学期VIII.Writing(写话):(共9分)81.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”.(以“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点不占格。)1.WhatwilltravellinginShanghaibelikein2050?2.HowwillpeopletravelinShanghaiin2050?3.WhatdoyouthinkoftravellinginShanghaiin2050?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【81题答案】【答案】例文TravellinginShanghaiin2050NowadaysmanypeopleliketravellingbybusandundergroundinShanghai.Theyusuallyusetheirtransportationcardsbecauseitisconvenient.Iprefertotaketheundergroundbecauseitisfaster.Ithinktravellingwillbemucheasierin2050.Perhapstherewillbenobusesinthestreet.Therewillbemoreflyoversandtunnels.Peoplecangotootherplacesbyundergroundorlightrail.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingthechangesinShanghai.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“TravellinginShanghaiin2050”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文要分别介绍2050年在上海旅游将会是什么样子，2050年人们将如何在上海旅行以及你认为2050年去上海旅游怎么样。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。No7上海市浦东新区川沙中学南校2020年六年级下学期期末Ⅱ.Writing.60.Pleasewriteatleast50wordsonthetopic“water”usingthefollowingquestionsbelowforreference.（以“水”为题,写一段不少于50个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Suggestedquestions:1.Whatcanweusewatertodo?2.Whyshouldwesavewater?3.Howcanwesavewater?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60题答案】【答案】[例文]WaterWaterisveryimportantinourlife.Wedrinkiteverydayanduseittocookandwashthings.Withoutwaterpeoplecan’tlive.Ifthereisnowater,wewon’thaveanywatertodrink.Wewillalsohavenofoodtoeatbecausethereisnowatertowaterthecropsandvegetables.Nowwemuststopwastingthewater.First,weshouldremembertoturnoffthetap.Thiswillsavelotsofwater.Second,wecouldtakeashowerquickly.Third,whynotdrinkallthewaterbeforethrowingthebottlesaway?Itcanalsosavewater.Savingwaterisourdutyandwemustsaveeverydropofwater.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题作文，要求以“Water”为题写一篇关于节约水的文章。时态可用现在时，人称用第一人称。2.写作指导：文章可根据所给三个要点一个一段，最后再单独用一段来作结尾，结尾可以是呼吁或倡议读者节约用水。写作时题目所给要点必须全部包含在内，并且要做到层次分明，思路清晰，单词短语拼写无误。No8上海市浦东新区第四教育署2020年六年级下学期期末VIII.Writing(写作)60.Writeatlast50wordsonthetopic"Let'sprotect___________"(以"让我们保护_______"题写一篇不少于50个词的短文,要求意思明确、内容连贯,标点符号不占格):以下问题仅供参考:1.Whatdoyouwanttoprotect?2.Isitimportant?/Aretheyimportant?Why?3.Whatcanyoudotoprotectit/them?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【60题答案】【答案】例文Let'sprotectforestWeshouldprotectourforest,becauseitisveryimportanttous.First,wecangetalotofthingsfromit,suchaswoodandfruit.Second,theforestishometotheanimals.Finally,theforestisthepreciousresourcesontheearth.Ourforestisbeingdestroyed.Millionsoftreesarecutdowneveryyear.Ifwehavenotrees,theenvironmentwillbetrouble.Forexample,iftherearenotrees,wewillhavenotenoughoxygen.Anditwilldestroytheecosystem.Weshouldplantmoretreesinsteadofcuttingdown.Protectingforestistoprotectourselves.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，注意表达的顺序，意思要连贯，表达要清楚条理。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，写完后，注意查验，是否有漏写情况，有无语法、拼写错误及标点误用等。2.例文点评：这篇短文很好的完成题目要求，表达清楚条理连贯，具有逻辑性,，使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。3.高分亮点：(1)连词和短语：because；suchas；First,．．．Second,．．．Finally,．．．；Millionsof；if；insteadof等。(2)高分句型：①Weshouldprotectourforest,becauseitisveryimportanttous.because引导原因状语从句；②Ourforestisbeingdestroyed.现在进行时的被动语态，③iftherearenotrees,wewillhavenotenoughoxygen.if引导的条件状语从句；④Protectingforestistoprotectourselves.动名词作主语。No9上海市静安区育才初级中学2019年六年级下学期期末60.Writing（写话）：Writeatleast40wordsaboutthetopic“__________is/areimportant”.（以“________很重要”为题，写一篇不少于40个词的短文。标点不占格。）提示：你可以选择一个自然物（如水、树……）谈你认为它（它们）重要的原因（原因至少写两个）；表达时要注意名词的数。【答案】TreesareimportantAsweallknow,treeshavemanyuses,withtherapidgrowthofeconomy,thetreeshavebeemoreimportantinourlife.Ontheonehand,treesnotonlycancleantheatmosphereandotherbuilding,desk,table,paperswood,butalsomakingoxygen.Ontheotherhand，treescanpreventsoilbewashedawaybyheavyrains.Inhotsummer,itgivesusshadeandmakeourenvironmentmorebeautiful.Sowemustplantmoretreesandprotectforestsandpreventpeoplefromcuttingdownthetrees.【解析】【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。首先要选择一个自然物补全标题，然后介绍它重要的原因。表达时注意名词的数，用一般现在时。例文点评：这篇短文选择了自然物trees，介绍了树木重要的的四个方面：能制造氧气净化空气；提供木材原料；遮阴美化环境；防止水土流失。最后提出号召，让人们植树，保护森林。短文运用一般现在时，内容丰富，语言准确。高分亮点：短语：Asweallknow，Ontheonehand，Ontheotherhand，makeourenvironmentmorebeautiful，cutdown,prevent..from...,notonly…butalso…被动语态：treescanpreventsoilbewashedawaybyheavyrains.No10上海市浦东新区第四教育署20202021学年六年级下学期VIII.Writing（10分）60.Writeapassageofabout50wordsonthetopic“