热点12理想2020-2021学年中考英语最具热度话题作文（教师版）

热点12理想理想无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活增添了希望。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：理想。【预测题目】（一）每个人都有自己理想中的工作，一切工作都有其意义。你理想中的工作是什么呢？现我市某微信公众平台正在举办"Mydreamjob"的主题演讲比赛。请根据思维导图写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你理想的工作。要求：1.短文需包括思维导图中所给出的所有提示，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于80，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.正确灵活的用准时态；4.文中不能出现与你自己相关的真实信息。MydreamjobWhatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?Whydoyouwanttodothat?Howareyougoingtodothat?Whenareyougoingtostart?Whereareyougoingtowork?MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis"Mydreamjob".____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】MydreamjobGoodmorning,everyone.Todaythetopicofmyspeechis“Mydreamjob”.Everyonehashisowndreamjobandeachjobhasitsmeaning.Ialsohavemydreamjob.IwanttobeateacherwhenIgrowup.Ithinkteachersaregreat.Ontheonehand,theyteachtheirstudentsmuchknowledge.Ontheotherhand,theycanlearnsomethingnewfromtheirstudentswhileteaching.What’smore,Ithinkteacherscanbeforeveryoungbyteachingandplayingwithkids.SoIthinkthisjobismeaningful.Tomakemydreametrue,I’mgoingtostudyhardandlearnsomethingabouteducation.I’mgoingtostartwhenIfinishmyhighschoolandcollegefirst.IamgoingtoworkinJiujiang.Becauseit’smyhometownandIloveit.IbelieveI’llrealizemydream—tobeateacher.Thanksforyourlistening.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己理想中的工作是什么，为什么选择这份工作，将怎样实现梦想，什么时间开始以及在哪里开始这份理想的工作。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时为主，讲述自己理想中的工作以及选择的原因叙述完整，条理清晰。（二）根据中英文提示写一段话。要求：意思连贯、符合逻辑，字数不少于60词。人生如船，梦想是帆。英语课上，同学们以“MyDreamJob”为题展开讨论，畅想自己理想的职业。请你根据以下提示，向学校广播站投稿，说说自己理想的职业及理由，告诉老师和同学们，你打算如何实现自己的理想。提示词语：discussion,difficult,decide,knowledge,improve,

MyDreamJob____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wehadadiscussioninourclassroomlastmonth.Thetopicis,“Whatisyourdreamjob?”Everybodyhashisdream.Somewanttobeteachers,otherswanttobescientists.Mydreamistobeeadoctor.Myfriendsaskedmewhy.Itoldthemmystory.WhenIwasasmallboy,Iwasveryweak.OnceIwasterriblyill.Ihadahighfever.Myparentssentmetothenearbyhospital,butthedoctorscoulddonothingforme.Thenmyparentsheardtherewasaverygooddoctorinanothertown.Theytookmethere.Iwassaved.Agooddoctorcansavepeople’slives.Fromthenon,Idecidedtobeeadoctor.Iknowitisnoteasytobeadoctor.ButIamdeterminedtostudyhard.Iamsuremydreamwilletrue.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。（一）为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的l00名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“Whatdoyouwanttobewhenyougrowup?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“thedreamjobs”为主题的报告．并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。(报告开头语已给出．不计人作文总词数。)TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals(理想),wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschool.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheDreamJobsInordertohelpusformgoodideals,wemadeasurveyamong100studentsinourschoollastweek.Herearetheresults.Mostofthestudentswanttohebusinessmen,becausetheywanttoberichandbuywhattheyneedinthefuture.Morestudentsaredreamingofbeingdoctors,becausetheyareproudofsavingthesickpeople.Andbeinggoodteachersissomestudents’dream.Theythinkit’sapleasuretomakestudentslearnmorefromthem.Differentstudentshavedifferentideals.Asforme,Iwanttobeapoliceman,andmakeoursocietymuchsafer.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。（二）最近，你在校200名学生中做了一项关于“你的理想职业”的调查，请你就调查结果写一份报告，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈你的理想职业和理由。理想职业所占比率理由你的理想职业及理由老师超过30%善于与孩子打交道，爱教书……园艺工大约25%让城市更美厨师22%喜欢吃，为别人做健康美食注意：短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；你的理想职业及理由至少各一条；词数：80—100；(4)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇：园艺工gardenerRecentlyIhavedoneasurveyaboutstudents'dreamjobsinourschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently_I_have_done_a_survey_about_students'_dream_jobs_in_our_school.Morethan30%ofthestudentswanttobeteachersbecausetheythinktheyaregoodwithkidsandtheyloveteaching.About25%ofthemexpecttobegardeners.Theywanttoplayaroleinmakingthecitiesmoreandmorebeautiful.It'sinterestingtosee22%ofthemaregoingtobecooks.Thereasonsforthisarethattheyenjoyeatingandwanttocookdeliciousandhealthyfoodforothers.Asforme,I'dliketobeawriterbecauseIfallinlovewithreadingandwanttosharemywonderfulstorieswithothers.【详解】本文属于材料作文，写一个关于“你的理想职业”的调查报告及你的理想职业以及理由。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如morethan,begoodwith,expectto,playarole,thereasonfor,asfor,wouldliketo,fallinlovewith,sharesthwithsb。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（三）根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。文章必须包括表格内容，并适当发挥。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。初中三年的学习和生活即将结束。你一定对未来的生活充满向往。将来你理想的职业是什么？假如你是周杰，想参加英语校刊组织的“我理想的职业”征文活动。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇征文稿。

自我介绍

姓名、年龄、性格……

理想的职业及原因

如：老师、医生、篮球运动员等…

为了实现自己的理想，你打算怎么做

提示词语：studyhard;knowledge;makeprogress;growup;inthefuture____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MynameisZhouJie.I’mafifteenyearoldmiddleschoolstudent.I’magenerousgirl/boyandIhavelotsofgoodfriends.Everyonehashisdream.MyidealjobistobeadoctorwhenIgrowup.Ithinkdoctorsarekindandhelpful,theylovetheirpatientsasmuchaspossibleandhelpthemoutofdanger.Inordertomakemydreametrue,Iwillstudyhardandgetmoreknowledge.What’smore,I’mgoingtodomoreexercisestokeepmeber.Tobeadoctorisreallygreat.Ithinkmydreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一篇介绍自己理想的职业的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。考点：提纲类作文点评：做英语书面表达时，要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改，我想一定会写出满意的文章来。（四）6．IWantto提示：理想是希望的灯，照亮我们美好的前程；理想是闪亮的星，指引我们奔向黎明。播撒理想的种子，让你的青春绿意盎然。请以“IWantto”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的理想是什么，你打算怎样实现你的理想。要求：请将题目补充完整；语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；3、文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeanEnglishteacherinthefuture

Iwanttobeateacherinthefuture,becauseIthinkteacherisagoodjob.Myteachersareverygood.Someofthemaregentle,butsomeofthemarenot.ButIthinktheyallcareforstudentsverymuch.Iwanttobeagoodteacherlikethem.IthinkIwillbestricttomystudentsintheclass.Butafterclass,Iwanttobetheirfriendandhelptheminstudyandlife.Besides,itcanhelpmetokeepayounghearttostaywithyoungstudents.Imustworkhardformydream.【解析】本文要求叙述你的理想是什么，你打算怎样实现你的理想，对于学生来说，所以句子的主语用第一人称，句子的时态用一般现在时或一般将来时，所写的句子应该用一些高级词汇及句式，不要使用汉语式的英语，短文用了一些短语和句式，如：carefor关心；helpsbtodosth帮助某人做某事；staywithsb和某人呆在一起；workhardfor为……而努力学习。用了because引导的原因状语从句；that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。（一）理想是人生的指路灯,中学生常谈论自已未来的理想职业,有人想成为工程师,有人想成为科学家,有人想成为演员……请你以"Iwanttobea/an…"为题,写一篇英语短文,讲述你的理想职业,以及你选择这个职业的原因和你将如何实现这个理想.要求:1.条理消晰,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范,80词左右;2.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名,可适当增加细节描写.3.用适当的词汇将题目补充完整.Iwanttobea/an______.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IwanttobeateacherIwanttobeateacher.（点题）Doyouknowwhy?Becausewecanlearnallkindsofknowledgewiththehelpoftheteachers.Whenweareintrouble,teachersalwaystakegoodcareofus.【高分句型一】Theydomanythingsforusasourparentsdo.Wealllikethemverymuch.（想当老师的原因）HowcanImakemydreametrue?First,Imusttrymybesttostudyhardatallsubjects.Second,Iwillreadmorebooks,suchasEnglish,history,scienceandsoon.Inaddition,Iwillgetintoagooduniversity.（怎样实现梦想）IbelievemydreamcanetrueifIputmyheartintoit.【高分句型二】（愿望）【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。本文介绍了自己的理想是做一名老师，文中围绕选择这个职业的原因及如何实现这个理想而展开描述。2.例文点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般将来时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，语句表达通顺。3.高分亮点：短语：introuble处于困境中；takegoodcareof好好照顾；withthehelpof在……的帮助下；tryone’sbesttodosth尽某人最大努力做某事；suchas例如。

句子：Whenweareintrouble,teachersalwaystakegoodcareofus句中when引导的是时间状语从句，IbelievemydreamcanetrueifIputmyheartintoit句中if引导的是条件状语从句。（二）每个人都梦想未来有一份理想的职业，请根据下面表格的内容，补充自己的理想的职业，并以DreamJobs为题，写一篇70词左右的文章。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。一定要写自己的理想的职业哦！）People

What

Why

How

Ann

adancer

candancewell

takemoredancinglessons

Jim

anastronaut

flytootherplanets

exerciseeveryday

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Everyonehashisorherowndreamjob.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DreamjobsEveryonehashisorherowndreamjob.Annwantstobeadancerbecauseshecandancewell.Sheisgoingtotakemoredancinglessons.Jimwantstobeanastronautbecausehewantstoflytootherplanets.Heisgoingtoexerciseeveryday.Sohecanbestrong.Iwanttobea/an...BecauseI....Iamgoingto....Ifyouworkhard,yourdreamwilletrueoneday.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。（三）假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。写作要点：1.班会的主题：我的理想2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.Thethemeofitwas“MyIdeal”.Ourmonitorhostedthemeeting.Duringit,allofustookanactivepartinthediscussionandsharedouropinionswitheachother.ZhaoYongisgoingtobeabravepoliceman.Hehopestohelppeopleindanger.ZhangHongwantstobeavolunteer,shewillhelppeopleinneedespeciallythedisabledandthehomeless.Mydreamistobeanexcellentdoctor,Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.Torealizeourideals,Ihavesomeopinions.Firstly,wemusttrytoworkharderfromnowonandlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会的情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。2.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。3.高分亮点：短语：hostthemeeting；takeanactivepartin；indanger；ameaningfuljob；fromnowon；learnfrom。句型：①Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.②Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.③Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullype