2025版高考英语总复习高考语法与写作专题14-5建议信教学案外研版

PAGEPAGE1第五讲建议信[技巧点拨]建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议，以便让对方接受自己的想法、主见并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。[写作模板][经典考题](2024·天津卷)假设你是晨光中学的机器人爱好小组组长李津，你的美国挚友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你准备邀请他加入你的团队，参与即将于7月底在天津实行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请依据以下提示代表爱好小组给他写一封电子邮件。1．竞赛的时间、地点；2．邀请他的缘由；3．训练安排将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。留意：1.词数不少于100；2．可适当加入细微环节，使内容充溢、行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris，Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiJin[满分范文]Dear_Chris，①I_have_good_news_to_tell_you.②TherewillbeamonthbeforetheendofJuly,whentheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheldinmycity,Tianjin.③Withmygreatenthusiasmaboutroboticsandmyprogress,I'mmadeheadofateamdevotedtothecompetition.④Whenwe'remakingpreparationsfortheevent,itoccurredtomethatyouoncetookaprizeinasimilarcompetition.⑤Therefore,itcan'tbebetterifyoucanjoinmyteamandshowyourtalent.⑥Meanwhile,attachedtothise－mailisatrainingplanIhaveworkedoutformyteam,whichIhopeyou'llreadandmakesomesuggestions.⑦Afterall,youhavelotsofpracticaltrickswhichwillbeofgreatusetous.I'm_looking_forward_to_your_reply.Yours，Li_Jin[阅卷评析]①开篇点题。③enthusiasm是高级词汇，体现了作者扎实的语言功底。⑥句中运用了非限制性定语，大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。⑦高级短语afterall和beofgreatusetosb.的正确运用为文章锦上添花。[增分靓句]1．文章开头佳句集锦①Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求看法，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。②I'msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublewith/indoing...atthemoment.得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感缺憾。③I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhow...特别兴奋收到你的来信，在信中，关于如何……你向我征求看法。2．表达建议部分佳句集锦①Herearesometips/advice/suggestions.这里有一些建议。②Youmay/mightaswelldo...你不防做……③Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议3．文章结尾佳句集锦①Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously.我信任你会仔细考虑我的建议的。②Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.我希望这些建议/看法对你来说有用/有帮助。③Inmyopinion/Personally/AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.在我看来，实行如下行动是明智的。[热点押题](2024·江西南昌月考)假定你是李华。你的笔友晓东是某学校一名高一学生。最近他来信说不知道如何学好中学英语，感到苦恼。请你给他写一封回信，提出你的建议。建议内容如下：1．尽力用英语沟通，不要怕犯错误。2．坚持每天早晚朗读英语。3．多读英文报纸，看英文电影。留意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细微环节，使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearXiaoDong，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours，LiHua[答案]Dear_Xiao_Dong，I'msorryyouarehavingtroubleinlearningEnglishinseniorhighschool.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Firstly,whynottrytocommunicatewithothersinEnglish?Ifyoudoso,youwillfeelconfidentgradually.Also,don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakesbecauseeveryonemakesmistakes.Secondly,youshouldkeeponreadingaloudEnglishsentenceseverymorningandevening.Thatway,you'lllearnmanyim