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111wordTimeflyfast.IthasbeenmorethantendaysinceIenteredmynewschool.IliveonthiscompusthatI’vegottocomeacrossmanyexcellentstudentswhichcomefromalloverthecity.Westudyandspendtimetogether.Evenwell,I’vemadefriendswithsomeofthem.What’smore,withthehelpofourtirelessteachers,I’vecometorealizetheimportantofmakingastudyplantomanagemytimewise,previewingthelessonsbeforeadvanceandreviewingafterwards.Althoughawayfrommyparents,butI’vedevelopedmyabilityofliveindependentlybytakinggoodcareofmyself.第一句:fly改为flies/day改为days第二句:that改为where/which改为who或者that第四句:well改为better第五句:important改为importance/wise改为wisely/before改为an第六句:去掉but/live改为living115wordLendidn’tfeelwellthatmorning.Hewashotbutalittlesick.Hefeelsgreatpaininhishead.Buthewenttothehospitalandstayedthereforthreedays.Beforeleavethehospital,Lengothisorderfromthedoctor.Currently,he’stryingtofollowit.Lenhastoloseweightandexerciseregular.Inthemorning,Lenhastowalkonemile.Hecan’thavehisusuallychickenoreggsforbreakfast.Forlunch,hecan’torderFrenchfrieshelovessomuch.Fordinner,hehastoeatfishandvegetables.Havingbeenobeyedalltheorders,Lenhaveimprovedhislifealot.第一句:but改为and/feel改为felt第二句:But改为So第三句:leave改为leaving/order改为orders第四句:it改为them第五句:regular改为regularly第七句:usually改为usual第十句:去掉been/have改为has103wordIliveinthemountainsandI’mluckilytoliveherebecausetherearealotofactivitytodo.InsummerIalwaysgowalkingorswimminginthelakewhileinwinterIchoosetogoski.Wehavemountainbikesthatwesometimesusethemtoo.Ifit’sverycold,myfriends,LiPengandWangKun,andIalsostayedindoors,playingcomputergamesandwatchingTV.Therefore,wegooutsidesoontorelaxoureyes.AsfarasIamconcerned,it’smuchgoodtobeoutdoorstogetfreshairandexercise,whichmakeusleadahealthyandsatisfiedlife.第一句:luckily改为lucky/activity改为activities第二句:ski改为skiing第三句:them去掉第四句:stayed改为stay/and改为or第五句:Therefore改为However第六句:good改为better/make改为makes/satisfied改为satisfying或者satisfactory111wordI’mterriblesorrytoknowthatyou’reupsetandIcanwellunderstandyourfeelings.I’dliketosharemyexperiencewithyou.Asteenagerlikeyou,I’mputintothesamesituationthatmyparentsignoremeduetobusywork.Onthisoccasion,haveabadmoodisnormal.But,toomanycomplainttendtobroadenthegapbetweenyouandyourparents.Soyouareexpectedtostartpositivetalkwithyourparents,includingwhatyouareconcernedaboutandwhatyoudesirefor,oraskhimforcompanyaswell.Ididhopemysuggestionswillbeofgreathelpful.第一句:terrible改为terribly第二句:teenager前加a/that改为where第三句:have改为having第四句:But改为However/complaint改为complaints第五句:talk改为talks/or改为and第六句:did改为do/helpful改为help111wordI’mLiHua,oneofyourclassmates.Learnedthatyoufailtoadaptyourselftotheschoollifehere,Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerelycomforttoyou.Inadditional,I’dliketoprovideyousomeconstructivesuggestions.Ontheonehand,youcantrycommunicatingwithusmoretosharewithusyourconcernaswellasjoys.Ontheotherhand,itmustbeofmuchhelpifyoucanjoinusinourvariousactivities,thatyoucanexperienceChineselifemoreandexploreChineseculturemore.Beforefinishmyletter,Iamdelightfultoinviteyoutomybirthdaypartyinnextweek.Let’senjoyourselftogether!第一句:Learned改为Le
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