全国新课标+读后续写+任务单- 高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

(2023年6月全国新课标I、Ⅱ卷读后续写)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest,Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.WritingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingoftheTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny,andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheekedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalf-dozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloudandsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin.Iwouldn’tcare.注意：

（1）续写词数应为150个左右；

（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Iwenttomyteacher’officeaftertheawardpresentation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.划关键（关键事、态度情感）：1）2）3）梳理各段：2.情节设计（据___________+___________）尾段：WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloudandsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.”Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin.Iwouldn’tcare.Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.Paragraph2:Iwenttomyteacher’officeaftertheawardpresentation.*情节设计（写大纲：十句五定）P1：Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.P2:Iwenttomyteacher’officeaftertheawardpresentation.①⑥②⑦③⑧④⑨⑤⑩3.写句子--翻译：1）2）3）Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.①news内容：令我惊讶的是，消息称我赢得了一等奖，三天后要参加颁奖典礼。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②我的反应：巨大的兴奋抓住了我，因为我发现我的努力得到了回报。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________****无灵主语：我开心：Iamhappy.·换主语：“开心（的情绪）抓住了我”·加介短：“一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我”·加并列：“开心与振奋（的情绪）抓住了我”·加副词：“即刻地，一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我”·加时间状从：“听到那好消息，一股开心（的情绪）即刻抓住了我”****无灵主语：_____________________________________________________________________Eg.听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。情绪n.固定动词sb.开心感激钦佩/赞赏狂怒悲伤害怕愧疚悔恨震惊不安/焦虑/压力Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.①(news说什么）：令我惊讶的是，据说我赢得了一等奖，颁奖典礼将在三天后举行。②（我的反应）：巨大的兴奋抓住了我，因为我发现我的努力得到了回报。③（我的心理活动）：这是我与Revere勤奋的马一起取得的甜蜜胜利。④（我参加award）：然后，没过多久，我就和其他参与者一起参加了颁奖典礼。⑤（award场景细节）：当我从主持人那里颁奖时，人群爆发了雷鸣般的掌声。⑤+1：舞台下站着我的社会研究老师，他疯狂用力拍手。感动，我知道我的成功归功于他。Paragraph2:Iwenttomyteacher’officeaftertheawardpresentation.⑥（互动）：我的老师在那里等着我，咧着嘴笑。我迫不及待地向他展示奖品，同时向他表示感谢。⑦（我问）：然后，我感到困惑和好奇，问他为什么坚持让我继续写作，并对我充满信心。⑧（他答）：看着我的眼睛，他真诚地解释道：“熟能生巧。而且你有写作的天赋。继续它吧！”⑨（我承诺）：受到他的话的启发，我答应坚持写作并创作更多作品。⑩（爱上写作）：通过比赛，写作，我曾经觉得艰难和痛苦的事情，逐渐成为我毕生的追求，这要归功于社会学老师的不屈不挠的鼓励。Paragraph1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________