Unit 1 This is me.-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年七年级上册英语单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）

第页Unit1Thisisme！单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度自荐信人物介绍（榜样、亲人、朋友、老师、同学等）本单元围绕“运用be动词的一般现在时来介绍自己”这一话题展开教学活动。主要介绍自己的姓名、职业、籍贯等信息，也可以根据需要介绍自己的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好和特长，学习描述人的方式。进行自我介绍的时候，必须采用第一人称，主语用I，文体是记叙文。内容要包括自己的姓名、年龄、籍贯、居住地、外貌、爱好等。注意不能遗漏要点，也不能把某一方面写得过多。常用写作句型：①Hi!I'm.../Mynameis②I'm...yearsold./I'ma...-year-oldgirl/boy.③I'minClass...,Grade....④I'mtall/short/pretty/small/Myhairis⑤Ilike…./Myhobbyis/I'mgoodat（以思维导图的形式呈现）【词汇积累】1.grade年级2.student学生3.classmate同班同学4.tallandslim又高又瘦5.livewithmyfamily与我的家人住在一起6.come/befrom来自7.Nicetomeetyou很高兴见到你【句式积累】※开头句1.Hi/Hello!你好!2.Goodmorning/afternoon!上午/下午好!3.Nicetomeet/seeyou!很高兴见到你(们)!※中间句1.Iam…/He/Sheis…我/他/她是……2.My/His/Hernameis…我/他/她的名字是……3.Iam/He/Sheisa/anChinese/Englishgirl/boy.我/他/她是一个中国/英国女孩/男孩。4.My/His/Hertelephone/QQnumberis...我的/他的/她的电话/QQ号码是……5.Myfriendis/comesfrom…我的朋友来自……※结尾句1.Thankyouverymuch!非常感谢你们!2.Doyouwanttomakefriendswithme?你想和我交朋友吗?【谚语积累】1.Isitnotajoytohavefriendscomingfromafar?有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎？2.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。【万能写作模板】ismy(介绍对象).He/Shewasborninandisfrom(人物出生背景).He/Sheismetersinheight,looking(外貌特征).He/Sheisgoodat(特长)andisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Whathe/sheimpressedmeis(重点描述).NeverwillIforgetthedaywhen(实例说明).Withouthis/herhelp,(总结事件).Thatishim/her,aand(总结人物特点).Ilikehim/herverymuch.假如你是鲍勃，请根据提示写一篇自我介绍。姓名 鲍勃(Bob)姓名 鲍勃(Bob)年龄 14来自 纽约(NewYork)现住地 南京就读学校 南京外国语学校(NanjingForeignLanguageSchool)特长 英语、数学喜欢的运动 跑步、游泳……个人品质 ······要求：1.语言通顺、准确，省略号部分须适当发挥；2.表格中所给要点须在文中表达齐全；3.词数:70左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Hello,everyone!MynameisBob.I'mafourteen-year-oldboy.IamfromNewYork.ButIliveinNanjingnowbecausebothmyparentsworkinNanjing.IstudyatNanjingForeignLanguageSchool.I'minClassOne,GradeSeven.IamgoodatEnglishandMaths.Afterschool,Ilikerunningandswimmingwithmyfriends.IoftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirEnglish,andtheyhelpmetolearnChinese.Allmyteachersandclassmatesarehelpfulandfriendly.Ilikethemverymuch.一、单项选择()1.—Hi,Millie!ThisismycousinAmy.—.A.Thankyou,Amy.B.AreyouAmy?C.Gladtomeetyou,Amy.D.Allright,Amy.()2.KittyisShanghai,butsheliveshergrandparentsLondonnow.A.from;in;withB.with;in;fromC.from;with;inD.in;at;in()3.—Wheremyglasses?—onthedesk.A.is;ItB.are;TheyC.is;It'sD.are;They're(

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.答案：1.livewithmyfamily2.isshort;wearsglasses3.areverynice4.slim;longhair5.allthelessons三、根据首字母提示补全短文。Therearetwonewstudentsinourschool.They1.cfromAmerica.TheyspeakEnglish.Their2.nareSandraandSally.Theyareofthesameageandtheylookthe3.s.Why?Becausetheyare4.tsisters.Buttheyhave5.dhobbies.SandralikessportsbutSallylikesreading.Nowtheylivewiththeir6.pinChina.Boththeirfatherandmotherteach7.Einourschool.TheysayweChineseare8.afriendlyandhelpful.Sotheyliketomake9.fwithusandlivein10.Cforlong.答案1.come2.names3.same4.twin5.different6.parents7.English8.all9.friends10.China四、任务型阅读。JohnandDavidaregoodfriends.They'reinNo.5MiddleSchool.1.Johnlovesbasketball.Hehastwobasketballs,buthedoesn'toftenplaythem.HeonlylikestowatchthemonTV.Davidlovesping-pong.Healwaysplaysping-pongwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hehasfiveping-pongballsandthreeping-pongbats.2.3.SoheasksJohnforhelp.HeasksJohntoplaybasketballwithhim.Sotheygotothepark.4.AndJohnsaysit'sgreattoplaybasketballwithfriends.DavidsayshecanlearnalotfromJohn.Johnhastwodogsathome——DoudouandDongdong.Theyarecute.5.Sometimes,DavidhelpsJohnlookafterthedogs.根据短文内容，从短文后所给的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，使短文通顺连贯，其中有两项是多余选项。A.Theycanhaveagooddayinthepark.B.Davidwantstolearntoplaybasketball.C.Hethinksitisinterestingtoplayping-pong.D.Johnoftenplayswiththemafterschool.E.They'reinthesameclass,buttheylikedifferentsports.F.DavidisinNo.6MiddleSchool.G.Theyareindifferentschools.答案：1~5.ECBAD（一）假如你是阳光中学七5班的学生李华，你想参加学校英语俱乐部新一届主席（chairperson），写一篇英文演讲稿。WhatIamlike1.polite,kind,...2.speakEnglishwell3.begoodatorganizing（组织）activities4....WhatIdidinthepast1.organizeEnglishcompetitions（竞赛）2....WhatIwilldo1.askmorepeopletojointheclub2....要求：1.段落分明、语句通顺、意思连贯、书写规范；2.演讲稿内容须包括上表提及的要点，应有适当发挥；3.词数不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。Goodmorning,mydearfriends,MynameisLiHua.AndI’mfromClass5,Grade7._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍个人情况；第二步，具体介绍自己的经历；第三步，最后介绍自己当选之后的打算，并恳请能够当选成功。【答案】例文:Goodmorning,mydearfriends,MynameisLiHua.AndI’mfromClass5,Grade7.I’malwayspoliteandkind.Icareaboutothersandalwayshelppeopleinneed.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandI’mgoodatorganizingextracurricularactivities.Isucceededinorganizingsingingcompetitionlastweek.Iusedtocollectmoneyforchildreninpoorareas.MorestudentswanttojointheEnglishclub.IwanttohelptheclubmemberslearnEnglishwell.Ifyouchooseme,Iwillbeactive,creativeandserveyouwell.Pleasegivemeachance!Thankyou.[亮点词汇]①befrom来自②careabout关心③begoodat擅长[高分句型]①MyspokenEnglishisgoodandI’mgoodatorganizingextracurricularactivities.（and连接并列句）②Ifyouchooseme,Iwillbeactive,creativeandserveyouwell.（if引导的条件状语从句）（二）假如你是李明，想邀请好友Jane来你的新家，请根据表格里的要点，用英文给Jane写一封邀请信。新家地址位于市中心新家路线沿着人民路(RenminRoad)走，在第三个十字路口左转，右边有个邮局，就在邮局旁边的高楼里，住十二楼。人文环境小区很多花和树，每天能闻花香、听鸟几唱歌。邻居们友好善良，互相帮助解决各种问题，……（举一例）我的心情很幸运能住在这样一个小区：……（自拟一点）要求:1.内容必须包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥；2.要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑：3.注意格式，字数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）DearJane.Howareyou?NowIliveinmynewhomeandI’dliketoinviteyoutomyhome.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing【答案】DearJane，Howareyou？NowIliveinmynewhomeandI’dliketoinviteyoutomyhome．Iliveinthecentreofthecity.It’seasytofindmyhome.GoalongRenminRoadandturnleftatthethirdcrossing.Thereisapostofficeontheright.It’sinthetallbuildingnexttothepostoffice.Mynewhomeisonthetwelfthfloor.Therearemanyflowersandtreesinmyneighbourhood.Everyday,Icansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssing.Myneighboursarealsokindandhelpful.Theyoftenhelpeachothertosolveallkindsofproblems.Forexample,ifthereissomethingwrongwithyourcomputer,theywillbereadytohelpyou.Iamluckytoliveinaneighbourhoodlikethis．Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtimeatmyhome.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes！Yours,Li

Ming（三）假如你是Judy，班级要推荐本学期最佳学生奖（BestStudentAward）得主，现有两位候选人，请根据以下要点选择你认为更合适的一位人选，用英文写一封推荐信，并简述理由。姓名WendyJohn学习◆她学习刻苦，擅长语文，文章写得好；◆他各门功课成绩优异，尤其擅长地理；爱好◆兴趣广泛，……；◆养了一只猫，……；◆热爱运动，……；◆喜欢给大家讲一些令人惊奇的事情，……；能力◆做事认真细致，计划周全；◆是学校的一名志愿者，……；◆思维敏捷，学东西快；◆擅长使用电脑，……；品格◆待人友善，……；◆乐于助人、勇敢，……； 要求：1.所写内容只能选择一位人选进行推荐，并简述理由；2.词数80左右，注意推荐信的格式；3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；4.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearSir/Madam,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,Judy[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，根据要点选择你认为更合适的一位人选；第二步，按照表格提示简述你推荐他/她的原因。【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,IamwritingtorecommendWendyfortheBestStudentAwardthisterm.Becauseintermsofstudy,shestudieshard,andsheisgoodatChineseandwriteswell.Besides,shehasmanywideinterests,suchascollectingstamps,playingvolleyball.Sheisveryloving,andshekeepsacat.Inaddition,sheworkscarefullyandhasacomprehensiveplan.What’smore,sheisavolunteerattheschoolandoftenhelpscleanuptherubbish.Atthesametime,sheiskindtoothersandoftenhelpspeopleinneed.Yoursfaithfully,Judy[亮点词汇]①intermsof就……而言②suchas比如③inaddition此外④atthesametime同时[高分句型]①IamwritingtorecommendWendyfortheBestStudentAwardthisterm.（动词不定式表目的）②Atthesametime,sheiskindtoothersandoftenhelpspeopleinneed.（and连接两个并列结构）（四）假如你是李明，想邀请好友Jane来你的新家，请根据表格里的要点，用英文给Jane写一封邀请信。要求:1.内容必须包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥；2.要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑：3.注意格式，字数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）DearJane.Howareyou?NowIliveinmynewhomeandI’dliketoinviteyoutomyhome._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiMing[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，是书信的形式；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点细节，也要注意补充的内容符合逻辑和主题。[写作步骤]第一步，根据要点提示的顺序展开描写，从介绍新家地址引入；第二步，具体阐述路线和人文环境，按照要点提示，并适当补充邻居互相帮助的例子；第三步，书写自己的心情，表示对新家的喜爱。【答案】DearJane，Howareyou？NowIliveinmynewhomeandI’dliketoinviteyoutomyhome．Iliveinthecentreofthecity.It’seasytofindmyhome.GoalongRenminRoadandturnleftatthethirdcrossing.Thereisapostofficeontheright.It’sinthetallbuildingnexttothepostoffice.Mynewhomeisonthetwelfthfloor.Therearemanyflowersandtreesinmyneighbourhood.Everyday,Icansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssing.Myneighborsarealsokindandhelpful.Theyoftenhelpeachothertosolveallkindsofproblems.Forexample,ifthereissomethingwrongwithyourcomputer,theywillbereadytohelpyou.Iamluckytoliveinaneighbourhoodlikethis．Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtimeatmyhome.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyou!Bestwishes！Yours,Li

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解决各种问题[高分句型]①It’seasytofindmyhome.（itis+adj+todosth的句型，表示做某事如何）②Ifthereissomethingwrongwithyourcomputer,theywillbereadytohelpyou.（if引导的条件状语从句，时态为“主将从现”）（五）你校英文校刊《英语园地》正在进行主题为“Myfriend”的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文向校刊投稿。要点：NameAmyAge13yearsoldLookstall...GotoschoolonfootFavouritesubject...HobbysportsMyfriendAmyHi,everyone!Iamhappyinmynewschool.Today,I’dliketotellyouaboutAmy._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThisismyfriendAmyandwewillalwaysbefriends.[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Amy的年龄和外貌；第二步，介绍她上学的方式以及最喜欢的科目；第三步，最后介绍她的爱好。【答案】例文MyfriendAmyHi,everyone!Iamhappyinmynewschool.Today,I’dliketotellyouaboutAmy.Amyismybestfriend.Sheis13yearsold.Sheistallandslimandwearsapairofglasses.Herhomeisnotfarawayfromherschool.Soshelikesgoingtoschoolonfoot.Inaddition,Shelikesallthesubjects.Besides,shelikesplayingvolleyball.Sheisintheschoolvolleyballteam.ShepractisesonMondayandWednesdayafternoon.Herdreamistobeateacherbecauseshelikestobewithchildrenandshethinksitisinteresting.Ihopeherdreamcometrue.ThisismyfriendAmyandwewillalwaysbefriends.[亮点词汇]①farawayfrom远离②inaddition此外③cometrue实现[高分句型]Herdreamistobeateacherbecauseshelikestobewithchildrenandshethinksitisinteresting.（动词不定式作表语；because引导的原因状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）（一）（2023·宿迁·期末统考）1．一年的初中生活，我们会遇到一些志同道合的朋友，与他们相识、相知，我们的言谈举止、兴趣爱好甚至性格品行等都或多或少都受到他们的影响。朋友做的事，我们会去关注：朋友觉得有趣的事，我们会去尝试。假如你是Daniel，请根据表格内容提示，以“Mybestfriend”为题，向大家介绍你的好朋友Andy，并谈谈你对他的了解。简介 个人基本情况介绍兴趣爱好 喜欢小动物，……(举例说明)喜欢户外活动，……(举例说明)个人能力 思维敏捷，……擅长体育运动，……品行事迹 ……(典型事例说明)感想 ……要求:1.所写内容必须包括表格提示的所有要点，可适当发挥。2.词数:80词左右。3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Mybestfriend_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MybestfriendHi,mynameisDaniel.Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisAndy.Heis12yearsold.HeisastudentofClass4,Grade7.Heistallandfat.Hehasshortblackhair.Heenjoyscampingverymuch.Healsolikescats.Hehasaquickmindandisgoodatvarioussports,suchasswimmingandplayingbasketball.Heiskindandpolite.Heiswillingtolistentoourproblemsandofferhishelp.IliketoplaywithAndybecausehealwayshelpsmealot.（二）（2023·江苏淮安·期末统考）为了深入贯彻落实党的二十大精神及全国两会精神，引导少先队员听党话，跟党走，树立少先队员见贤思齐，崇德向善的榜样，共青团淮安市委、市教育局、市少工委联合举办了2023淮安市”十佳少先队员”活动（Top10YoungPioneers）。假如你是Jack，请根据下列要点，完成一封推荐信。1.你想推荐Tom获得本学期的是”十佳少先队员”（Top10YoungPioneers）；2.他热爱打篮球，身体健康；3.他做事考虑周到，各项事务安排得井井有条；4.他善良有爱；5.他五岁时开始学习弹钢琴，经常去敬老院为老人们演奏；6.我们都认为……

（不少于2点）注意：1.推荐信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.词数80—100左右。DearSir,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,Jack【答案】例文DearSir,IwouldliketorecommendTomasthisterm’sTop10YoungPioneers.Helovesplayingbasketballandhasahealthybody.What’smore,heisveryconsiderateandheoftenplanseverythingwell.Heisverykindandloving.Whensomeoneneedshelp,healwaystrieshisbesttohelpthem.Hestartedlearningtoplaythepianoattheageoffiveandheoftengoestoanursinghometoplayfortheelderly.WeallthinkTomisaverygoodstu