英语复习教案：专题技能突破短文改错之通读全文纠正逻辑错误

学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精学必求其心得，业必贵于专精专题技能突破(21)短文改错之通读全文，纠正逻辑错误【技能讲解】通读全文，了解短文的大意，把握全篇的时态、人称、非谓语的主被动关系及行文逻辑。有时孤立的分析某个句子，其结构正确、语义通顺，无错可改，但如果联系上下文,便会发现该句中有不合逻辑的地方,需做出改正。典例剖析1。[2015·课标全国卷Ⅰ]WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere。［答案］think→thought考查时态。由was，hoped和wouldbe可知，此处叙述的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时。2．［2015·课标全国卷Ⅰ]Wemustfindwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.[答案］your→our或the考查代词。根据上下句语境，我们应该保护我们的环境,故改为our,也可用定冠词the来限定。3．［2015·浙江高考］Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising。Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundit.[答案]is→was考查时态.全文用的都是过去时，所以把is改为was。4．Infact，Idon’tliketogoanymore，soI’mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouwereme,wouldyoutalktohim？[答案］him→them考查代词.根据上下文及their一词可知，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them.5．Onaverage,thereare800tornadoesintheUSeachyear,causeabout80deathsand1,500injuries.［答案］cause→causing考查非谓语动词。causing作结果状语,表“自然而然的结果"用现在分词。技能演练短文改错（一）Amanhasbeenwaitingatthebusstop.Afterafewminuteslater,thebusarrivedanddidnotstop.Themanthoughtitwouldstopalittlefar,sohestartedrunningafterthebus.Fortunately,thebusneverstopped.Themankeptfollowthebusuntilhearrivedhome。Themanwasverygladthathecouldsavebitofmoney.Hehappilytoldhiswife,“Honey,todayIranafterthebusesuntilgettinghome。Ididn’thavetopaythefee.”Surprisingly，thewifeblamedher，“Youfool!Doyouknowhowmanyyoucouldsaveifyouranafterataxi？”答案:Amaneq\o(has，\s\do10(had)）beenwaitingatthebusstop。Afterafewminuteseq\o(later,＼),thebusarrivedeq\o（and,\s\do10（but)）didnotstop.Themanthoughtitwouldstopalittleeq\o(far，\s\do10(farther)），sohestartedrunningafterthebus。eq\o(Fortunately，\s\do10（Unfortunately）），thebusneverstopped。Themankepteq\o（follow,\s\do10(following))thebusuntilhearrivedhome.Themanwasverygladthathecouldsaveeq\o（∧,\s\do10（a）)bitofmoney。Hehappilytoldhiswife，“Honey，todayIranaftertheeq\o(buses,\s\do10（bus)）untilgettinghome.Ididn'thavetopaythefee。"Surprisingly，thewifeblamedeq\o(her，\s\do10（him）），“Youfool！Doyouknowhoweq\o(many，\s\do10(much))youcouldsaveifyouranafterataxi？"(二)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo。daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it'sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonthatwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited。Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautifully.Thetimepassesquickly。Eveningcame.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood。IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow。答案:LastweekmyparentsandItookaeq\o(two。days,\s\do10(two。day））triptoEmeiMountaininSichuan。Aseveryoneknows，it’seq\o(∧，\s\do10（a））famousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals。Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnooneq\o（that,\s\do10（when))wearrivedatthefootofthemountain。Thethreeofeq\o(them，\s\do10（us）)wereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain，wefedmonkeys，eq\o(visiting,\s\do10(visited)）templesandtoldstories。OnthewayupIwasbusytakingeq\o（picture，\s\do10（pictures)）sincethescenerywassoeq\o（beautifully,\s\do10（beautiful））。Thetimeeq\o(passes,\s\do10(passed))quickly。Eveningcame。Wespenttheni