2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英语作文解析与范文（下篇）

2024年新高考Ⅰ卷英语作文解析与范文（下篇）1【2024·新高考Ⅰ卷】第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondsought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.

Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.

JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.

Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised. 【原文速递】HOWIMETGUNTER,THEBESTTAXIDRIVERINVIENNA&AUSTRIA

WhoisGunter?

Idon’tknowhissurnameorwhathisfavouritecolourisbutIcantellyouthismuch:heisthenicest,thebesttaxidriveryouwillfindinViennaandmaybeAustria.

ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.

Ihadbeenflyingto

Vienna

from

Malta

enrouteto

Prague.

Theflighthadbeendelayedthanksto

ahurricane

inMalta.‘ItneverrainsinGozoorMalta.Itisalwayssunnyandbright!’

IwasreliablyinformedbymyanonGozitantaxidriveraswelefttheapartmentforMaltaLuqaairport.Iwassadtoleave.WespokeallthingsGozitantillboardingthecruiseferrytoMalta.Wemarvelledabouteverything:fromtheirdelicioussoftgoatscheesetothedreamybeautyoftheiridyllicmediterraneancoastine.

30minuteslater,asthecarrolledoutofthebellyoftheferryheretractedhisearlierstatementandreleasedamodifiedversion.

‘WehaveonebigstormeveryyearinMalta.Otherwise,itisalwayssunnyandbright’

hetriedtoreassureme,asourcabventuredforth,intoagapingholeofinfinitedarkness.

Justminutesbefore,thesunwasblazing.Piercing,blueskieswithnotaspeckofacloudinsight.

Inamatterofminutes,theskyturnedfromcobaltbluetoslategreytocharcoalblack.Thestormpickedupquickly.Spinninglongyarnsofdustandrustyautumnleaves,alustywindsnarled,swirledominouslyaroundourcar.Thencameafewriproaringburstsoflighteningfollowedbyadelugeofwater.Rain,rainlikeIhaveneverseenrainbefore.Weslipped,slidedthroughverticalcolumnsofwaterforafewnervousminutes.Almostzerovisibility.Thenlikeasaintlyapparition,MaltaLuqaairportcameintoview.Iwishedmyanonymoustaxidriverthebestofluckandgavehimageneroustip.Isilentlymutteredaprayerinhisanonymousnameashisneoncabsignfadedintothemistydistance.

Iconsenttoreceivingemailsandpersonalizedads.

TheAirMaltaladiesatthecheckindeskweresmilinghappilyasIarrivedbedraggled,waterdrippingfrommyforehead.Ifmemoryservesmeright,onmiserabledreichdayslikethisinScotland,grownwomenweepandrage.

‘Itmakesussohappywhentherainse.Wenevergetrainyousee!’myhappy,smileycheckingirlexplainedtome,asIaskedherwhatwasthesecretbehindhersmile.

Thenshehastilyadded,‘Oh.Btw.Yourflighthasbeendelayedbyanhour.’

andthenhandedovermyboardingpasswhichInervouslyaccepted.

Ihadlefta2hourbufferbetweenmyflightlandingin

Vienna

andmy

StudentAgencyBus

departureto

Prague.

Iwaitedattheannouncedgateofdeparture.Raisedmyheadevery2minutesforthenexthourlookingatthemonitor.Inbetween,Ipushedmyfaceagainsttheperspiringwindows,peeringthroughtheincessantbandsofrain,wonderingwhenmyAirMaltaflighttoarrive.

Eventuallymyflightdidarrive.Hourand45minuteslate,AirMaltaflight514leftforVienna.

Flightwasnottoobumpy.Itoucheddownin

Vienna

just15minutesbeforemybusdeparture.Inervouslywaitedattheluggagecarousel,hopingmyluggagewouldarriveontime.Foronce,IpraytotheeLordofluggageandconveyorbelts,pleasedelivermyrucksackbeforeeveryone’sluggage.Buthellno.Itarrivedpromptlyat7pmintheoversizedluggagecarousel.It’stimetostartusingasuitcaselikenormalpeople.

ItwasthelastbustoPrague.

Thesensiblethingtodoatthispointwouldhavebeentotakeiteasy.FindacheapbedforthenightandtakethefirstbustomorrowtoVienna.

Butguesswhat.ThisKash,BudgetTravellerdudeisanobstinate,stubbornmule.Hehasmissedtwoflightsthisyearandisinnomoodtomissanotherconnection.Momenthegotthebackpack,heranlikenutstothebusterminal.

Picturethis.AnAsian(almostskinhead)guywithbeardandablackbackpackrunningthroughacrowdedairterminal.Youcanimaginehowmanypeoplewerestaringatmewithaveryconcernedlook.

Thebushadleftamatterof8minutesago

buttherewasmassoftaxisswellingtherank.

SuddenlyIhadthismadcapideaofhoppingonacabandcatchingthe

StudentAgencyBus

atthebusstationinPraguewhereinroughly25minutesitwouldbepickingupafewmorepassengers.

Ihoppedinwithnosecondthoughtintothefirstcabontherank.

That’swhen,ImetGunter.

AfterexchangingbriefpleasantriesItriedtoexplaintohimwhereIwasgoing.

‘CityCentre.

Schoncool.Thatwillbe€30’

hegruntedtohiminthestrongestAustrianaccentyoucanimagine.

Yikes.MybustickettoPraguecostedme€25.

Hehadn’theardofthebusstation(Florenc)fromwherethe

StudentAgencyBus

leftfrom.Imentionedittohimafewtimes.Maybeitwasmypronunciation?Hekeptonshakinghishead.

ItriedmybestAustrianaccent.WhichisprobablyaGermanaccent.WhichisprobablynotaGermanaccent.YouknowHerrFlickfromAlloAllo?Somethinglikehisaccent.Whichconfusedhimfurther.

Lookingathisperplexedlook,anauseatingfeelingsweepsoverme.

Thatfeelinginlifewhencircumstancesmacksyouintheface.Yetstill,youfeelnumb,thatslightlysurrealoutofbodysensationthatyoucan’tbelievethat

THISSOMETIMESAMAZING,SOMETIMESCRAZYTHINGCALLEDLIFE

ishappeningtoyou.

Again.Misadventurewasmybestfriend.

Phoneafriend?

Gunterputsonhisreadingglassesandmanagestofishouthisdinkylittlephone.

Afterananimateddiscussionthatlasted5minutesbutfeelslikeaneternity,Gunterputshisphonedownandnodshisheadreassuringly.

‘Iknowwherezeebassstationiznow.’

Asonewaveofpanicsubsided,anothernaggingissuereareditshead.

Ihadzerocashinmywallet.

IwasdoubtfulthathiscardmachinewouldacceptmyPortuguesebankcard.

Thetensionlevelsrising,werolledintothedarkwetemptystreetsofthecity.

Vienna

waslikethisabandonedghosttownfromazombiemovie.Alllitupandpretty,butnotasoulinsight.GunterwasproddingawayathisGPS,utteringnumerousprofanitiesatit,tryingtofigureoutthebestroutetothebusstation.

Thetrafficlightswereconspiringagainstme,turningredateverystreetweturnedinto.

Finally,withjust2minutestosparewerolledintothebusstationtoseethefamiliarbrightyellowoutershellofthe

StudentAgencyBus.

Thankfully,therewasahugequeuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.

Gunterparksthecarbehindthecoachandthenlooksatmewithabigsmileonhisface.

‘Wemadeit.’

IhaveacrocodilesmileasIfishoutmybankcard.

Suddenly,Gunter’ssmilecreasesintoagrimace.

‘Izoonotthinkmymachinewillacceptzeescard.’

Hetriesitthricebutsomehowthemachinewilljustnotplayalong.

Ifeelafewmoreknotsinmychestnow,mybreathheavyasIseeinfrontofmethebusqueuethinningout.

Gunterthenwaveshishandatsomeofthepeoplewaitinginthecrowdandhollerstothem,askingthemiftheyknewwherethenearestcashmachinewas.

Oneofthemyankstheirheadtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstationwhichisabout500yardsaway.

Thenwithoutmuchexplaining,bothmeandGunterleapoutofthecarandmakeamaddashtofindthiscashmachine.

AfterafewwrongturnswefinallyfindthemachineandIgleefullypopmycardin,onlytoreadthemessageattheATM

‘Outoforder.Sorry.’

Blooddrainsfrommyface.Gunter,pantingforbreath,shakeshishead.

Gameover.Fateseemedtobeconspiringagainstmetoday.

Inthedistance,Icantheluggagedoorofthebusclosing.Thelastremainingpassengersareabouttoboardthebus.IlooktowardsGunter.From:s:///meetgunterthebesttaxidriverinviennaaustria/【题目分析】A.已知故事梗概(Synopsis)：这个故事主要讲述了一位主人公因为航班延误，错过了前往布拉格的最后一班公共汽车。在焦急之中，他遇到了一位出租车司机——冈特。冈特尽管对公共汽车站的位置感到困惑,但他还是通过打询问朋友，最终成功地将主人公带到了汽车站。然而，在支付车费的时候，主人公发现自己身上没有现金，而银行卡又在提款机上无法使用。面对这种情况，主人公感到无助和焦虑。B.主要人物特点(Maincharacters)：1.主人公(“我”):一个行事匆忙的人，面对突发情况显得有些慌乱，但关键时刻还是保持冷静并尽力寻找解决办法。2.冈特(Gunter):一个乐于助人但稍显粗心的出租车司机，虽然对地点不熟悉，但愿意通过其他途径帮助乘客。C.冲突(Conflict)：故事的主要矛盾冲突在于主人公在急需赶往布拉格参加会议的情况下，遇到了一系列的不顺:航班延误、错过最后一班公共汽车、身上没有现金、银行卡无法使用。D.高潮(Climax)：高潮部分出现在主人公发现提款机故障，无法取出现金支付车费，而公共汽车排队的人越来越少，主人公感到无助和焦虑。续写情节构思(Plotting)E.社会价值观(Socialvalues)这篇文章的价值观主要体现在互助(如出租车司机Gunter通过联系朋友并询问信息，帮助“我”确认了正确的路线)与友情(后续写作中可以提到这次偶遇成了他们友谊的开始)、诚信、责任感(如承诺回到维也纳就打，还有欠钱还钱)与感恩(续中可写的在里再次感谢或见面时的赠送礼物、保持后续友谊等)。这些价值观不仅对于个人成长和成功具有重要意义，也对于构建和谐社会和推动社会进步具有积极作用。续写第一段：继首句，可写对方的表情反应(愤怒、抱怨、无奈，还是理解?)和语言、行动描写，最后应写我向Gunter承诺回到Vienna时再与他通话。这里有个细节需要注意,“我’怎么知道Gunter的的?这一点必须在第一段写作中做出描写，否则属于与后文第二段首句脱节（把握伏笔）。续写第二段：继首句，可写“我”和Gunter在里说了些什么，车费是否支付?怎么文付?Gunter是否最终接受?除了支付现金外，是否还需要表示额外的感谢，如拥抱、鲜花?通过这次经历，“我”可能会对自己的行为进行一些反思，比如是否应该更加谨慎地管理自己的出行计划，或者是否应该更加冷静地应对突发情况。同时,“我”也可能会从这次经历中学到一些宝贵的人生经验，以确保不会再遇到类似的问题。在故事的最后,“我”也可能会在维也纳再次遇到冈特。他们可能会进行一次面对面愉快的交谈，分享彼此的经历和感受。这次相遇可能会成为他们友谊的开始，也可能会成为“我”人生中一段难忘的回忆，引发“我”的一系列感悟。【情节构思】要点1：读后续写致力于解决问题，读透原文要想方设法解决问题要点2：“312”构思法：3个衔接句1个主题句2个过渡句要点3：运用文章中的伏笔 I

met

Gunter

onacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember(第一句就交代故事的人物、时间).IhadplannedtoflytoVienna(维也纳，奥地利首都)andtakeabustoPrague(布拉格（前捷克斯洛伐克首都）)foraconference(故事发生的背景、地点).Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague(故事矛盾冲突的起因).ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingand

jumpedintothefirsttaxi

ontherankwithoutasecondsought.9月的一个寒冷、潮湿、令人难忘的夜晚，我遇到了冈特。我原计划飞往维也纳，然后乘公共汽车去布拉格参加一个会议。由于一场大风暴，我的航班延误了一个半小时。我在去布拉格的最后一班公共汽车出发前30分钟在维也纳着陆。下飞机的那一刻，我疯狂地穿过机场大楼，跳上了第一辆出租车，没有人找我。ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthat

lastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.(故事矛盾一及解决)(Gunter人物性格的刻画，耐心)那是我遇到冈特的时候。我告诉他我要去哪里，但他说他没听说过汽车站。我觉得我的发音有问题，所以我又慢慢地解释了一遍，但他看起来仍然很困惑。当我正要放弃的时候，冈特拿出他的小，给一个朋友打了。在似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈讨论之后，冈特放下，启动了汽车。Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."'Wemadeit,"hesaid.(Gunter人物性格的刻画，尽心尽力)最后，在只剩下两分钟的时间里，我们驶入了汽车站。谢天谢地，还有很长的队伍等着上车。冈特把出租车停在公共汽车后面，转过身来，脸上带着灿烂的笑容看着我。“我们成功了，”他说。JustthenIrealisedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet(故事矛盾二).IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthe

cardmachinejustdidnotplayalong(问题解决不成功).AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.(故事矛盾三)就在这时，我意识到我的钱包里没有现金。当我掏出我的葡萄牙银行卡时，我向他露出了歉意的微笑。他试了好几次，但卡片机就是不起作用。当我看到排队的公共汽车越来越少时，一种无助感涌上心头。Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:"Outoforder.Sorry."(问题解决不成功)这时，冈特指着汽车站的候车大厅。入口处有一台提款机。我跳下车，疯狂地跑向机器，把我的卡片放了进去，却看到提示：“抱歉，机器故障！”续写思路示例：Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.情节1:Gunter说没关系，钱先欠着，你赶紧上车，等你回来的时候再给。情节2:我听了之后非常感动，我要了Gunter的并答应等我回来我会打给他。情节3:我赶紧跑过去车站，在公交车开走前成功登上了车(故事矛盾三解决)，我从车窗看出去，向Gunter招手再见。Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.情节1:我和Gunter约在之前的那个busstation见面，我们在附近找了一个咖啡馆，我请他喝了咖啡，聊了各自的生活(我也可以聊conference相关的内容)。情节2:当我们准备离开的时候，我把打的士的钱给他，他却拒绝了我，并说我遵守了承诺，也请我喝了咖啡，非常乐意帮助我。情节3:我们相互告别，去机场的路上，我再次回忆这次旅程，Gunter的帮助让那个夜晚充满了温情和感动。【例文展现】例文1（推荐范文）：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.【衔接1】Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.【过渡1】Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.

“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I’llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan’taffordtomissit!”

Iexplained.

“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”

Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.

“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”

AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.【衔接2】Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.【衔接3】Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.【过渡2】Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentIsawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe

“doublecarride”,backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.IhadnochoicebuttogivehimanattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.【主题1】Inthisway,webecamegoodfriendsandkeptintouchwitheachotherregularly.IfeltblessedtohavesuchawarmheartedfriendlikeGunterwhohasaheartofgold.

例文2：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.

Uponsharingthenews,Iquicklyloweredmyhead,notdaringtolookhimin

the

eyes.Stillweigheddownbythefrustrationandembarrassment,Iwasatalosswhattodonext.

Just

at

my

wit’s

end,Gunter’svoicebrokethesilence,“Yourbusisgoingtodepart！Forgetthetaxifee！YoucantakeitasatokenofkindnessoftheViennacity!”

IlookedupandfoundGunter’seyesshiningwithsincerity.Deeplytouched,IpromisedtocallGuntertopayhimbackandthenhurriedlydashedtothebus.Four