读后续写练习+雇主误多给了保姆女孩工资女孩主动归还感动了雇主 高三英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习雇主误多给了保姆女孩工资，女孩主动归还感动了雇主1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Annatookherfirstbaby-sittingjobinPeterSmith’sandplayedgameswithPeter’sthreechildrenuntilthebedtime.Mr.Smithpraisedherforthegreatwork.AfterMrs.Smithhadpressedthemoneyintoherhand,Annadidn’tevenlookatthemoneyandthenwalkedoutofthehouse.She’dexpectedtendollars.Nowshesawthatitwasaone-hundred-dollarbill!Annaimaginedherparents’faceswhenshehandedthemtheonehundreddollars.Thingshadn’tbeeneasyforAnna’sfamilysinceAnna’sdadhadlosthisengineeringjobayearago.Therehadbeennonewclothesormoviesinthelastyear.TheynolongerwentouttoeatonFridays.Annadidn’treallymind,aslongasherfamilywastogether.Butnowshecouldhelp.Onehundreddollars!Thatwasenoughtofillthecarwithgasortobuyabagofgroceries.4续写原文HerexcitementfadedasshewonderedifMrs.Smithrealizedhowmuchmoneyshehadgivenher.Couldshehavemadeamistake?AnnafeltbadassherememberedthatMrs.Smithhadsimplypulledthemoneyfromherpursewithoutlookingatit.Annathought,“MaybeMrs.Smithmeanttogivemetheone-hundred-dollarbill.Baby-sittingthreechildrenisalotofwork.”SoonAnnarememberedthattheSmithsdidn’tseemtohavemuchmoney,either.But,shesilentlyarguedwithherself.“Theygavemethemoney.Ididn’tstealit.”Shefoundherparentsinthelivingroom.Annatookadeepbreathandtoldthemwhathadhappened.“Iwantedtogivethemoneytoyoutohelpoutthefamily,butIthinkMrs.Smithmadeamistake.”Shecontinued.“I’mgoingtogiveitbacktoher.”Dadsettledhisbighandonhershoulder.“Youjustgaveusthebestgift,Anna.”Momkissedher.“We’reproudofyou,sweetheart.”5段首句Para1：Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.Para2：Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章以人物为线索展开，讲述安娜在给史密斯夫妇看孩子之后史密斯太太给了她一百块钱报酬。回家之后她很矛盾，一方面在想是否是史密斯太太拿错了，一方面又想可能是她的劳动应该值这么多，并且这些钱能帮助家里改善一下生活，但她最终还是跟父母讲了这件事，说她觉得是史密斯太太给多了报酬，她要还给人家，她的父母听完之后很为她骄傲。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.由第一段首句内容“第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。”可知，第一段可描写安娜说完来意之后史密斯太太的反应。10续写思路分析Para2：Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.由第二段首句内容“史密斯太太打开钱包，数了十美元。”可知，第二段可描写史密斯太太为安娜的诚实所感动，付了报酬并且决定继续让她帮忙看孩子。11续写素材续写素材询问——事实——感动——继续雇用——开心——感悟12续写素材续写素材行为类①开始：starttodo/begintodo②回家：gobackhome/returnhome③需要：need/want情绪类①吃惊：surprised/amazed②对……感到骄傲：beproudof/takepridein13续写素材续写素材[高分句型1].Ididn’tknowwherethatmoneyhadgone!（由where引导的宾语从句作know的宾语）[高分句型2].Imadeamistakeofgivingyoutheonehundreddollars,butyouaresuchanhonestandkindgirlthatyoudidnotkeepit.（such…that结构的结果状语从句）[高分句型3].Whenshegavehermotherthetendollars,thebestgiftforher,shefeltveryproudbecauseshethoughtshedidagreatajob.（when引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；省略that的宾语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Thenextmorning,AnnawenttoMrs.Smith’shouseagain.“Ithinkyouoverpaidmelastnight,”shesaidandhandedtheone-hundred-dollarbilltoher.Mrs.Smithlookedsurprised.“Ididn’tknowwherethatmoneyhadgone!IknewthatIhadputitinmypurse.Thenthismorning,Icouldn’tfindit.”Shestartedtocry.“It’sthelastpaymentforsomethingmyhusbandneeded.Imadeamistakeofgivingyoutheonehundreddollars,butyouaresuchanhonestandkindgirlthatyoudidnotkeepit.”16范文呈现Mrs.Smithopenedherpurseandcountedouttendollars.“Ihopeyou’llbaby-sitforusagain.Ourchildrenthinkyou’rethebestbaby-sitterthey’veeverhad,andsodoI.Ithinktheywillbeproudofhavingsuchagreatsistertobaby-sitthem!”Annasaidyesandwentbackhomehappily.Whenshegavehermotherthetendollars,thebestgiftforher,shefeltveryproudbecauseshethoughtshedidagreatajob.17范文译文第二天早上，安娜又去了史密斯太太家。“我想你昨晚给我的钱太多了，”她说，然后把那张一百美元的钞票递给了她。史密斯太太看起来很惊讶。“我不知道那些钱去哪里了！我知道我把它放在钱包里了。然后今天早上，我找不到了。”她开始哭了。“这是我丈夫需要的东西的最后一笔付款。我给你一百美元是个错误，但你是个诚实善良的女孩，没有留着。”史密斯太太打开钱包，数出十美