2024年高考英语新课标1卷读后续写课件高考英语一轮复习作文专项

2024年高考英语新课标I/II卷读后续写阅读材料：抓故事线/情感线第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSeptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninViennajust30minutesbeforethedepartureofthelastbustoPrague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankwithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadn'theardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.到Vienna，再巴士去Prague开会，但即将迟到抓故事线/情感线——人---事---情---理Tip:WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhatseemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueue(队列)stillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andlookedatmewithabigsmileonhisface."Wemadeit,"hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.司机听不懂巴士站名，司机求助朋友，明了。准时到巴士站，再排队上车抓故事线/情感线——人---事---情---理Tip:Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意：（1）续写词数应为150个左右；（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._______________________________________Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised._______________________________________Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedtowardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.There,attheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”钱包没钱，卡刷不了，取钱机坏了，大巴车马上要开走了。抓故事线/情感线——人---事---情---理Tip:前文概述：本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲的是作者赶着去坐大巴参加一个会议，花了很长时间打车去大巴地点，终于抵达后发现钱包里没现金，无法支付给出租车司机。作者去提款机那里取钱，但是机器出故障了，于是就跟司机约定过几天再给他。最终，作者如期赴约还钱。

歌颂善良真诚，信任他人，诚实守信和爱心传递的美好品德，从而形成正确的世界观、人生观和价值观。文章主题：2.设置问题驱动，合理发展情节Q1.HowdidIfeelaboutthesituationandexplaintheurgency?Q2.Whatwasmysolutionandpromise?Q3.Howdidgunterreacttomysuggestion?角色的定位是什么？尾端已知情节是什么？和主要情节的联系是什么？设置问题驱动，合理发展情节落脚点是什么？是否和前文有呼应？可以拥有惊喜吗？Para.1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Para.2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Q1.WhatdidIdowhenImetgunter?Q2.HowdidGunterfeel?Q3.WhatdidIlearnfromtheincident?Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.情节设计(十句五定)Gunter反应难以置信，问怎么办？我请求延迟支付解释末班车&参加会议

Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.我问其电话号码承诺回电和付款Gunter思考同意留电话号码我感动冲向巴士Gunter到巴士站接我我感谢他,告知会议顺利在去机场路上到机场我付两次费用,给小费被拒结局：我再次被其善意感动升华：

传播善意的决心…事件及过程发展类写作审题认真梳理关键信息已知情节人物特征思路梳理总结抓故事线/情感线——人---事---情---理伏笔（暗线）3.激活话题词汇，细化行为情感2.设置问题驱动，合理发展情节

2024高考全国一卷二卷·读后续写:官方范文Para1:IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Flashinghimanotherapologeticsmile,Ibeggedhimforadelayedpayment.“IfImissthislastbustoPrague,I'llbelatefortheconferencewhichissoimportantthatIcan'taffordtomissit!”Iexplained.“MayIhaveyourphonenumber?IwillcallyouandreturnthemoneyIoweyou.IpromiseIwillkeepmywordoryoukeepmywatch!”Iadded,handinghimmywatchaswellasmybusinesscard.Gunteracceptedmybusinesscardbutrejectedmywatch.Hewrotedownhisphonenumberandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir."AfeelingofgratitudewashedovermeasIheardhiswords.Givinghimafirmhandshake,Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthebus,andjumpedontoitjustbeforeitsdeparture.Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Hepickedmeupatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore.Beamingawarmsmileathim,IgavehimabighugthemomentIsawhim.Wechattedhappilyonthewaytotheairport.Itoldhimthatthankstohisgenerosityandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.Whenhestoppedhistaxioutsidetheairport,Ipaidhimforthe“doublecarride",backandforthfromtheairporttothebusstation,togetherwithageneroustipthatheturneddown.IalsogavehimanattractivesouvenirIhadboughtatPrague,whichheacceptedwithdelight.Webecamegoodfriendsandkeptintouchwitheachotherregularly.Ifeltblessedtohavesuchawarm-heartedfriendlikeGunter.

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Helookedatmeindisbelief,askingmewhattodo.Givinghimanotherapologeticsmile,IaskedhimforadelayinpaymentandpromisedtocallhimandpayhimbackthemoneyIowedhim.Tomysurprise,Gunterwrotedownhisphonenumberwithouthesitationandgaveittome.“Justkeepyourpromise,Sir.”Afeelingofgratitudewashedoverme.Igavehimafirmhandshake,jumpedoutofthecarandmadeamaddashforthebusandjumpedontoitjustbeforeitleft.范文1：范文2：

IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Iexplainedtohimtheurgencyofcatchingthebus,emphasizingthatotherwiseIwouldbeforcedtostayovernightandbuyanewticketthenextmorning.Ultimately,IsuggestedthatIreturntoViennain4daysandpayhimthen,withanadditional10eurosasagestureofmygratitudeifit‘sOKwithhim.Followinganuncomfortablepause,hesimplynodded,saying,“Iagreeto

thisarrangementandtrustyou."Ithankedhimwiththebiggestsmile,andweexchangedcontactinformationbeforeIgotonthebus.

Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Wemetatthebusstationwherehehaddroppedmeofffourdaysbefore,anduponourarrival,wehuggedeachotherlikelonglostfriends.Itoldhimthatthankstohiskindnessandtimelyhelp,everythinghadgonesmoothly.WhenIgavehimtheextra€101hadpromised.hedidn'taccept."BuymeabeernexttimeyouareinVienna,"hesaidwithawarmsmile.Thenwepartedwayswithafirmhandshakeandapromisetokeepintouch.Gunter'skindnesshadturnedapotentiallydisastrouseveningintoamemorablestoryIwouldcherishforyearstocome.

范文3：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Thoughembarrassedandreluctant,Iforcedmyselftoraiseupmyheadandlookedintohiseyessincerely,“IknowGunterwe'vejustmet,butIamgoingtobebackinViennain4daystime.CoulditbeOKwithyoutopayyouthemoneyafter4days?I'lladdanextra10eurosforyourdelay."ItfollowedanuncomfortablepauseasIanalyzedGunter’sfaceforhisreaction.Thentheimpossiblehappened.Henoddedhisheadsimply.‘It’scool.Iacceptthissolutionandtrustyou.Givemethenameofyourhotelandwecanmeetthere.”Igavehimthenameofmyhotelandweexchangephonenumbers.Iboardedthebusandgavehimabighugewavetomynewestfriend.

Para2:Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledG