高考英语复习读后续写练习+举办派对帮助感化女儿学校的小恶霸+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习举办派对，帮助感化女儿学校的”小恶霸“1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thereareallkindsofenemies,andoneoftheartsoflivingistolearntotellthemapart.Butconsiderthekindwhonevermeanttobeanenemyatall,anddoesn’twanttobeanenemy,really.He’snotmadatyou;he’smadattheworld,andifyouarewanderingaroundonhislonelybattlefield,yougetshot,whichisnotmeantforyouatall.4续写原文Letmetellyouaboutoneofthem.Shewasthedark-eyeddaughterofourtownbarber:abig,stormyGinaLollobrigida.Yearsago,IbroughtmytwolittlegirlshomefromSouthAmericaandputtheminschooldowntheroad.TheytalkedaverypeculiarlanguagethatwasneitherEnglishnorSpanish,andtheirclassmatesgavethemahardtime.EspeciallyGina,whowasolderandtheringleader(元凶)oftheterrorofthetinykids.Shehadanairofangerwithherfieryeyes,whichseemedtopiercethroughanyonewhodaredtocrossherpath.Herwordswerehurtful,andeveninmomentsofsilence,thetensionsurroundingherwasevident,likeathickwallbuiltbetweenherandtherestoftheworld.Whenmydaughtersweremisunderstoodandteasedbecauseofanunfamiliarlanguage,Ginaprovedtobethemosttroublesomeamongallthestudents,dominatingtheyoungerchildrenandcausingchaoswhenevershepleased.5续写原文PatandPeggycamehomecryingalmosteveryday,soIdecidedtocheerthemup.“Let’shaveaparty,”Isaid.Pat’sandPeggy’stearsdriedmagically.Rightawaytheygotcreative:“Icecream!Cake,bigredballoons!”“Andfriends?”Isaid.Thetearsstartedagain.“Wehaven’tgotanyfriends,”Patcried.Peggyhowled,“Nothingbutenemies.”ThenIhadoneofmyrareinspirations.“Let’shaveanenemyparty.Let’sinviteallyourenemies–andwe’llfillthemupwithicecreamandcakeandgivethemredballoonstotakehome.LittlePatandPeggyexchangedknowinglooks,andoneofthemsaidinSpanish,“QuépassaalViejo?”(“Whatiswrongwithdad?”)6段首句Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.

Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，文章主要讲述了几年前作者带着两个女儿搬家，她们到了新学校，新学校的同学不是很友好，特别是吉娜，一个脾气不好的小恶霸，经常随心所欲地制造混乱。女儿们受到同学们的嘲笑，很难过，经常哭着回家。作者看到这种情况，决定通过举办一个“敌对聚会”来解决。这事一个化敌为友的故事，这其中的经历更是让作者受益良多。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.由第一段首句内容“事实证明，“敌对派对”取得了疯狂而愉快的成功。”可知，第一段可描写派对的成功气氛，作者的感悟，吉娜的反应以及女儿们的改变，变得快乐并且自信，与同学们成了朋友。11续写思路分析Para2：AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.

由第二段首句内容“这次聚会的另一个好处是，吉娜在聚会结束后似乎变了一个人。”可知，第二段可描写通过活动吉娜的改变，吉娜感谢帕特邀请自己参加派对，以及作者的感悟。12续写思路分析派对气氛——关系融洽——派对成功——女儿们快乐并自信——成为朋友——吉娜改变——感激——感悟13续写素材续写素材行为类①超出：exceed/gobeyond②参加：engagein/involvein/takepartin③讨厌：hate/dislike/befedupwith情绪类①高兴：withdelight/delightedly/gladly/joyfully②困惑：inconfusion/confused/puzzled14续写素材续写素材[高分句型1]Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.（运用了固定句型itseemedthat，who引导定语从句，that引导宾语从句，it作形式宾语）[高分句型2]Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.（运用了全部倒装，过去分词作状语，that引导定语从句）15Part3范文呈现16范文呈现Itturnedoutthatthe“EnemyParty”wasamad,merrysuccess.Theeventexceededourexpectationsaslaughterfilledtheairandjoyradiatedfromeverycorner.Itseemedthattheangelswhohavethespecialjobofwatchingoverchildren’spartiesmusthaveseentoitthateveryoneinvolvedhadfun,andthebesttimewashadbythebiggestenemy,Gina,whorolledonthefloorandshriekedwithdelight.Andalltheother“enemies”alsoshedtheirenmityandembracedthesheerblissofthemoment.Asaresult,PatandPeggynevercamehomecryingfromschoolanymore.Instead,theyeffortlesslymingledwiththeirclassmates,engaginginplayfulconversationsandschoolactivitieswithinfectiousenthusiasm.Gonewastheirself-pity,replacedbyanewfoundconfidencethatradiatedfromwithin.17范文呈现AnotherbonusofthepartywasthatGinaseemedadifferentpersonafterwards.Thebiggestenemyandformerbullyhadturnedintomydaughters’staunchestchampionsandshewouldneverliftafingeragainstanyoneorthreatenthelittlekids.Theotherday,Gian

askedPatinconfusion,“Whydidyouinvitemetothepartyinthefirstplace?”“Youlikeicecream,cakeandbigredballoons,justlikeanyothergirl.Right?”Patsmiled.Gina’sexpressionsoftened,sharingarevelationwithPat,“Butdoyouknowsomething?Nobodyeveraskedmetoapartybefore.”WhathadhappenedtoGinamademethink:Arethe“Ginas”leftoutbecausetheyareenemies,ordotheybecomeenemiesbecausetheyareleftout?Manytheoriesexist,butwhenyouloveyour“enemies”anddogoodtothosewhohateyou,miraclescanhappen.18范文译文事实证明，“敌人党”取得了疯狂而快乐的成功。活动超出了我们的预期，空气中充满了笑声，欢乐从每个角落散发出来。似乎那些专门负责照看儿童聚会的天使们一定确保所有参与者都玩得开心，而最好的时光是由最大的敌人吉娜度过的，她在地板上滚来滚去，高兴地尖叫起来。所有其他“敌人”也摆脱了敌意，拥抱了当下的纯粹幸福。结果，帕特和佩吉再也没有哭着放学回家。相反，他们毫不费力地与同学们交往，以富有感染力的热情进行有趣的对话和学校活动。他们的自怜消失了，取而代之的是从内心散发出来的新的自信。19范文译文聚会的另一个好处是，吉娜后来似乎变了一个人。最大的敌人和前欺负者已经变成了我女儿们最坚定的拥护者，她永远不会对任何人动一根手指，也不会威胁小孩子。前几天，吉安困惑地问帕