2024年高考英语话题写作攻略 中外节日与活动（读后续写话题之人与社会 ）

中外节日与相关活动（人与社会）

3中外节日与活动（读后续写话题之人与社会）【高频热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关

必备攻略（试卷）

［考情分析］

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2022新高考I&U卷人与自我之个人成长鼓融族男孩参加越野跑

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2022浙江1月卷人与自我之个人成长与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友

2021新高考i&n卷人与社会之亲情关爱母亲节的惊喜

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QJ【写作指导】

读后续写中涉及中外历史文化传统内容类的节日和传统非常多：如春节'国庆节、重阳节、植树节'

教师节、圣诞节、复活节、儿童节等；在此类续写中可以介绍中西方节日的起源、庆祝方式、假日活动安

排、生日、纪念日、毕业典礼的相关活动、对节日相关物品进行描述及续写参与这些活动的经历和感受等。

（如2021年浙江卷万圣节、2021年款高考I卷母亲节）相关词块及句式如下：

词汇积累（名破）

春节__________________元旦__________________教师节__________________

国庆节__________________妇女节_________________元宵节_________________

国际劳动节________________重阳节__________________清明节__________________

端午节__________________中秋节__________________复活节__________________

圣诞节___________________父亲节___________________母亲节___________________

圣节前夜__________________情人节____________________愚人节___________________

感恩节___________________节日____________________盛宴___________________

起源____________________创始人___________________庆祝__________________

仪式____________________鞭炮____________________聚会____________________

周年纪念（日）_______________毕业典礼__________________传统的___________________

尊（短懿）

庆祝春节___________________敬酒____________________

暑假期间____________________（因某事）向某人表示感激____________________

病假____________________休一天假____________________

1.Pumpkin（南鹿）caningatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthe

pumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.（2021年浙江卷1月）

在万圣节雕刻南瓜（南瓜）是一个家庭的传统。我们每年十月都会去参观当地的一个农场。在南瓜地里，

我和我的三个兄弟姐妹竟争，寻找最大的南瓜。

2.Throughtheculturalexchangeactivity,weexchangedviewswitheachotheronculturalshock.通

过这次文化交流活动我们就文化冲击交流了看法。

3.Byopeninganovel,Icanleavebehindmyburdensandenterintoawondeifulworld.

打开小说我就能放下包袱，进入一个奇妙的世界。

4.SofantasticarethepaintingsthatIamdeeplyimpressedbythetalentofthepaintersaswellasthecharmof

traditionalChineseculture.

这些画作极好，画家的才华和中国传统文化的魅力给我留下了深刻的印象。

5.Throughtheculturalexchangeactivity,wehaveenhancedtheunderstandingofdifferentcultures

andpromotedthefriendshipbetweenthetwoschools.

通过文化交流活动，我们增进了对不同文化的了解增进了两校之间的友谊。

6.Frommyperspective,IpreferthetraditionalChinesefestivalstoWestemfestivals.

就我而言，比起西方节日,我更加喜欢中国传统节日。

7.TheSpringFestivaliscoining/draviingnear/approaching.ItisanimportantfestivalforChinese,whenallthe

familymembersgettogether.

春节即将到来。对中国人而言这是全家团圆的重要节日。

8.TowelcomethecomingSpiingFestival,peoplespenddayscleaningthehouses,preparingdifferentkindsof

food,andbuyingnewclothes,especiallyforchildren.

为了迎接即将到来的春节人们用很长时间打扫房间,准备各种食物，买新衣服，尤其是为孩子们。

9.ItisdifferentkindsoffoodsandsnacksthatgiveyouthechancetoexperienceabundantChinese

foodculture.

正是各种各样的食物和小吃让你有机会体将中国丰富多样的饮食文化。

10.Wishyouhappinessandprosperityinthecomingyear!

祝你新的一年幸福成功！

11.WiecelebratedNewYear'sDaywithadanceparty.

我们举行舞会来庆祝元旦。

12.Laboristhesourceofhappiness.

劳动是快乐的根源。--伏尔泰

1.NoraininChong>rang,nofiostinSeptember.

重阳无雨，九月无霜。

2.Chongyangnorainseethirteen,thirteennorainhalfwinterdry.

重阳无雨看十三，十三无雨半冬干。

3.QingmingRainstar,asorghum,aliter.

清明雨星星，一棵高梁打一升。

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4.IntheQingmingD>Tiast\swhenscrapingthesoil,itisnecessarytoscrapefbrty-five.

清明刮动土，要刮四十五。

5.CloudscoverthemoononAugust15andsnowlightsonJanuary15.

八月十五云遮月，正月十五雪打灯。

6.ThinboyswatchtheNewYear,oldpeoplefeartheNewYear.

细仔望过年，老人怕过年。

7.Clearandclearsnow,rainandfrost.

清明断雪,谷雨断霜。

8.Clearandwarm,coldanddewcold.

清明暖,寒露寒。

9.Chongyangsunshine,wintersunshine:ChongyangYin,winterice.

重阳晴，一冬晴；重阳阴，一冬冰。

10.WillowinsertionintheQmgmmgDynastyandAiinsertionintheDragonBoatFestival.

清明插柳，端午插艾。

11.September9,climbhighdrinking.

九月重九，登高饮酒。

12.LaBala,chinoff

腊八腊八，冻掉下巴。

13.Peopleareespeciallyhappyathappyevents,especiallyintheNfid-AutumnFestival.

大逢喜事尤其乐，月到中秋分外明。

14.ThereisnorainyyellowplumintheQmgmmgDy11aslY，andrainyyellowplumintheQingmingDynasty.

清明无雨旱黄梅，清明有雨水黄梅。

15.Nofishisafeast,nochickenisafeastinthefirstdayofjuniorhighschool.

三十无鱼不为宴，初一无鸡不成席。

16.AftereatingLabarice,wewillhandletheNewYear'sGoods.

吃了腊八饭，就把年货办。

17.ItrainedontheQingmingFestival,mtermittentlyforthreemonths.

阴雨下了清明节，断断续续三个月。

18.Winterwheatcoverthreebedding,nextyearpillowsteamedbunsleep.

冬天麦盖三层被，来年枕着馒头睡。

19.Thirtynightsoffire,fifteenlights.

三十夜的火，十五的灯。

20.ThereisasycamoretreeathomeandaPhoenixathome.

家有梧桐树自有凤凰来。

21.AncientscholarsmusttreattheirteacherswithdignityandthenwithTaoism.

古之学者必严其师，师严然后道尊。

21.Trickortreat.（万圣节）

不招待,就使坏。

22.Hethatwillnotworkshallnoteat.

不劳动者不得食。

23.Heavenneverhelpsthemanwhowillnotace.

自己不动，叫天何用。

24.Theearlybirdcatchestheworm.

早起的鸟儿有虫吃。

能写作模板

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Havingmarchedacrossthegrasslandforfivedays,General,ChenGeng（陈唐）wasdragginghisexhausted

bodycarefullystepbystep,leadinghisweakhorse.

Hesuddenlysawthefigureofasmallboyappear.ChenGengwasabouttogreetthelittleRedArmysoldier

whenhesawthattheboywasstaggering（蹒跚）andthenfelldown.ChenGenghurriedforwardafewstepsand

helpedthelittlesoldierbackonhisfeet.Heaskedtheboyinakindtone,“Areyouallright?”Thelittlesoldier

tumedaround.Hisfacewaspaleandbloodless,withthetwoeyesunusuallywideasaresultofhunger,yetshining

withspirit.

“Youmustbe...GeneralChenGeng!”thelittlesoldierrecognizedtheman.

“Yes,IamChenGeng.Howareyou,youngman?Youcertainlyhavetobecarefulcrossingthisswampy

grassland.Onecarelessslip,andyoucanfindyourselfindanger.Itisessentialthatwecomeoutofthisgrassland

alive.*

Thelittlesoldiernoddedinagreement./zDonftworry,General//hesaid.Tmphysicallystrong*Inspiteofthe

boy'sconfidentreply,ChenGengwasstillworriedabouthim.Hecouldseethatthelittlesoldierlackedenergy:

couldthischildpullthroughthetrials?

GeneralChenGengorderedthelittlesoldiertomounthishorse,intendingtogivehimarest.Buttohis

surprise,theboyrefusedhimwithalookofannoyance,wWhat!DoyouthinkI'mnotgoodenough?1/theboycried.

ufmstrongerthanyou.Ifyoudon'tbelieveme,letshaveacontest//

Atthattime,ChenGengwastooexhaustedtoengageinacontestofenergy.Allhecoulddowastakeabarley

dumpling（青木果面），andsaytothelittlesoldier,“Well,here,haveit!”Buttheboysimplysmiled,saying,“Youkeep

it.Ihavemorefoodthanyouhave/pointingtoabulging（鼓鼓的）blackbaghewascarryingonhisback.

注意：

L续写词数应为ISO左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Intheend,ChenGenggavein,mountedhishorseandrodeon.

Heopenedtheboy'sbackpack,onlytofindabundleofbark（树皮）.

△jr高考真题】

<2021年新高考n卷读后续写）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.

HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrench

toastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeff

knewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.They

decidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadethe

Frenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesinto

theeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Everythingwasgoing

smoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jenna

threwtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridge

boiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthe

stovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.But

JeflTshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshe

caughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadmthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：L续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

史］［名校模拟题提升练】

1.（2023年•山东,模蛔测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

TheScienceofHappiness

Kateisabrightyoungwomanwithanintensefocusonacademicsandalong-termgoalofbecominga

neuroscientist（神经系统科学家）.Herpathischartedverycarefullyeachdayaccordingtoschedule.Shemeets

afterschoolwiththeBrainClub,agroupshestartedthatdiscussesneuroscienceandtradesacademicpaperslike

baseballcards.It'sthekindofgroupyouwouldneverimagineinhighschool,whichismaturebeyondtheiryears

andledbytheirowninitiative.

ItwouldseemtherewasnoroominKate'sscheduleforfun,letalonehelpingothers.Butthenshefoundout

aboutanelementaryschoolhithardbythepandemic,theninflation,andnowarecession（衰退）.Itsitsinthe

middleofaworking-classneighborhoodandmostofparentsweretiredoutbyworkingphysicallydemandingjobs

fromdawntodark.Mostfamiliesweredoingthebestbuttheycouldjustputafewgroceriesonthetable.

Halloweenwasapproaching,andmanyofthefamiliesdidn'tparticipatebecausetheylackedcostumesand

couldn'taffordtogiveoutcandythemselves.SoKatecalledtheheadmasteroftheelementaryschool.Shewastold

thefamilieswantedtheirkidstohavefirnonHalloween,buttheyalsoneededmorebooksinthehome.

SoKatewenttowork.ShebeganwiththeBrainClubandthenbranchedouttootherclubs.Theywould

sponsoratrick-or-treateventfeaturinggames,candyandbookgiveaways.Itwasahugeorganizational

challenge_onethatonlyaveryorganizedpersoncouldhandle.SoKateputhersmartstouse.Shearrangedfor

groupsofherfellowstodecoratetheircarsandcreategames.ShefoundaDJandroundedupboxesofcostumesfor

thekids.Sheevengotthelocalpolicetodecoratetheircruiser（巡逻车）.Andshewenttoworkgettingkidsbooks

donated.

注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

AtduskonHalloween,thecarsarrivedintheparkinglot.

Theheadmastersaidthiswasthehappiesttimefbrthekids.

2.（2023•湖北•二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

TwelveDaysofKindness

AlthoughitwaslessthantwoweeksbeforeChristmas,Ifounditdifficulttobeinafestivemood.Wehad

movedtoCanada,andholidaysweredifficultfbrusbecausewemissedourfriendsandrelativesinMinnesota.Our

familywasalsogoingthroughaverydifficultyear,withhealthproblemsandaseriouswork-relatedproblemfbr

myhusband.

""Mom,HowIwishwecouldspendChristmaswithGrandpaandGrandmainNfinnesota.Ireallymissthem

andmyfriendsthere/5saidmyfifteen-year-olddaughter,Rachel.

“Iknow,Rachel.SowouldI/51said."ButMmnesotais2,0(X)kilometersaway.Don'tyourememberhowhard

itwastodriveinthatsnowstormlastyear?Andthenthetemperaturedroppedto-30℃onourwayback?”

“Iremember,shesaidandduckedherheaddisappointedly.

WethoughtdrivingtoMmnesotaforChristmaswastooriskyandbuyingairlineticketsforthreepeoplewas

outofthequestion.WewouldbespendingChristmasaloneinCanada,andhadnomoneyforaChristmastreeora

Christmasdinner.

Wieweresurprisedwhenthedoorbellrang.Itwasdarkandcoldoutside,andweweren'texpectinganyone.

Hesitantly,Rachelstoodupandwentforwardtoopenthedoor,andthensaid,“Mom,there'sabigboxonthe

doorstepandnobodyisouthere!”Nfyhusbandalsowentandlooked.Buttherewasnobodyinsight.

Theybroughttheboxin.Weweresurprisedtofindthattheboxcontainedmanypackagescoveredinbright

Christmaspaper.Eachhadatypewrittennote:OpenDec.14,OpenDec.15...Therewereatotaloftwelve-the

'TwelveDaysofChristmas.Thenoteread:OurLOVEisgivenanonymously(匿名地)，soeiyoyfunwithyour

family,butdon'ttellanyoneplease.

注意：

1续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

Aft&,that,weopenedonemoregifteachday.

Paragraph2:

Weopenedthe12thpackageonDecember25th.

3.（2023年•石家庄•阶萌习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

ItwasnowDecembertwenty-fourthSoherewewere,travellingabout2,000milesandfinallyreachingour

destinationSanDiegoatlast.We'drentedaroominasmall,well-wornmotel（汽车旅馆）nearthebeach.

Six-year-oldChat"owned."ThereisnoChristmastree,Mommy!Butit'salmostChristmas.HowcanSanta

knowwheretoputourpresentswithoutaChristmastree?”

“Yes,aChristmastree!"echoed（附和）hisfour-year-oldbrotherJay."IwantaChristmastree!”

^Couldn'twejustgetasmallChristmastreeandsetitupinthisroomsomewhere?"askedChat.'Thatway,

SantaClauswillknowwheretoputourpresents.”

Isighed,lookingaroundatoursqueezed-inbedsandbags."But,honey,thefiveofuscanbarelymovearound

inherewithalloursuitcasesandeverything.I'msorry,butwejustdon'thavetheroomforsomethingextralikea

Christmastree」

Ouroldestson,seven-year-oldRobin,hadbeenlisteningquietly.Suddenly,hegrinned（咧嘴笑）.”Yes,we

do.”

Istared.“WhereT

Hepointedtoourmotelroom'sdoor."'Rightthere_onthebackofthatdoor.Please,Mommy,ifwecan'tgeta

realtree,can'twemakeapretendtreeandputitupthere?ThenSantawillknowweloveChristmasjustasmuchas

hedoes.

“Andleaveussomepresents,too!??Chatadded.

Makeatree?IlookedatthenewspaperthatIhadboughtwhenIwassearchingforplacestorent.IfItaped

someofthosepagestogether,cutthemoutintoatreeshape,andboughtsomeposterpaintandbrushesatthestore

nextdoor...

Now,Iwasgrinning,too."Okay,boys!ReadytomaketheverybestChristmastreeinthewholewideworld?”

“Yes!”

注意：

1-续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Soweboughtsomepaintandthentapedandcutandpainted.

Thenextmorning,Iheard,“Mommy!Daddy!Look!Santadidfindusafterall!”

4.（2023年•河北•模蛔测）闻读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整

的短文。

TheChristmasIwillneverforgethappenedwhenIwas9.1believedinSantawithallmyheart.HowcouldI

notwhenIreceivedeverythingIwishedfor.

December1st.Momwouldannounce,"It'stime."Hearingthosewords,weallknewitwastimetowriteour

letterstoSanta.OnedayIaskedmomwhywealwayswroteourlettersonDecember1st.Shesaidbecausesomany

kidswerewritingletterstoSanta,heneededtimetoreadthemandmakeallthetoysthekidswanted.Onceour

letterswerefinished,momwouldputtheminherpurseandmailthemthenextday.

ChristmasEvefinallyarrived.Wewereallsoexcited.WedidourChristmasEvetraditions.DaddyreadusThe

NightBeforeChristmas'story.Thenitwastimeforsleep.IhadsuchagoodfeelingaboutChristmasthisyear.It

wasdifficulttofallasleep.ButsleepfinallycameandsodidChristmasmoming.Iwokeuphearingmybrothers

yelling.Jimmycamenmningandjumpingonmybed."Santa'sbeenhere,sister!Let'sopenpresents!”

Werandownthestairs.Oureyeswereglowinglikewildfireasweeyedoverthepresentsunderthetree.Nfy

brothersandIquicklysnuggled（依偎）amongthepackages.WeallwatchedaseachpersonunwrappedagiftI

keptwatchingasmybrothersunwrappedgifts.Mydaddidn'thandmeanypackage.'Thisyearyouaregoingtobe

thelasttogetyourpresentsbecauseyouaretheoldest.hedeclared.Ididn'tthinkanythingofit,soIwhispered

“OK」

Onebyoneallofthepackageshadbeenopened.Therewasnoneleft.Icouldn'tunderstand.Ihadbeenso

goodthisyear.Tearsbeganslidingdownmycheeks.Iranuptomyroom.Nfymomwentupthestairsformeto

comebackdown.Dadwantedtotalktomessobbing,Islowlymademywayback.

注意：L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dadsignedtometofollowhim

ThememoiyofthatChristmasstayedwithmealltheseyears.

5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的矩文。

Iwasfouryearsoldin1993,whenmyfamilyemigrated.（移民）fromtheUnitedArabEmiratestoToronto.

Ybungenoughtobechangedbymynewhome,butoldenoughtoknowIwasdifferentfromeveryonearoundme.I

wastheonlyArabandonlyMusliminmyjuniorkindergartenclass.Beyondthoseobviousdifferences,Canadian

lifeprovedtobequitedistinctinotherways.AndIdiscoveredanothersurprisethatDecember.

OvemighLeverythingwassuddenlycoveredinredandgreen.Myclassmatestalkedexcitedlyaboutcookies

andwhatgiftsthey'daskedSantaforthatChristmas.Atsomepoint,Imusthaveaskedmyself,“Whatis

Christmas?"There'snothingquitelikeitintheMuslimworld.TheclosestcomparisonmightbeEidal-Adha,which

translatesfromArabicto“Festivalofsacrifice”.Whilebothholidaysshowthesamespiritofsharingwiththeless

fortunateandspendingtimewithlovedones,Eidmeantnewclothesandafamilydinner.Andthatwasaboutit.No

treedecoratedwithornaments（装饰物），andnogiftscoveredinwrappingpaper.

Christmaswascompletelyforeigntome,butthenmyparentsunexpectedlyinformedmethatSantawouldbe

payingusavisitonChristmasEve."Butaren'tweNfuslim?”Iasked.

“Yes,butSantalovesallchildrenequallyandgetsthemallgiftsJmymotherreplied.

SoonthatfirstChristmasEveinCanada,shehungoversizedredandwhitestockings,eachonecustomized

withournames,offourbedposts.Ihaveadistinctmemoryoftherestlessexpectationthatkeptmeawakelongafter

bedtimeandmyjoywhenIgotuponChristmasmorningtofindmystockingfilledwithgifts.

Stillinmypyjamas（睡衣），IranovertothekitchentotellmyparentsthatSantahadindeedvisiteduslast

night.Iaskedifthey'dseenhim,andMomsaid,"Ofcourse!,5MomofferedSantaacupofcofiee,asistheArab

customwhenhostingguests.Heneededtheenergyforthelongnightahead,shetoldme.

WhenIreturnedtoschoolaftertheholidays.Ihadastorytosharewithmyclassmates.Santahadvisitedme

too!Icouldshowoffgiftswhileotherkidsshowedofftheirs.

注意：

1-续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

NfyparentskeptourChristmastraditiongoingforyears,untilIwastoooldtobelieveinSantaanymore.

Asanadult.Fvecometorealizecreatingasenseofbelongingisjoiningintraditions.

6.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Theydon'tmeanit

OurfamilymovedherefromChinatwoyearsago,andwethoughtwewereprettywelladjustedtoAmerican

ways.ThisyearmyparentsdecidedtogiveapartyonChineseNewYearandinvitesomeofourAmericanfriends.

Thepartywentprettywell.Ourguestswereamazedattheflavorofallthespecialfoods.Afterthedinner,they

thankedusforshowingthemwhatarealChineseNewYeardinnerwaslike.

“Ilovedthedishes.Youandthegirlsmusthavespenthoursdoingallthework!75Mrs.O'Mearasaidtomy

mother.

4tThegirlshelpedwiththecuttingandPmsorrytheydidsuchaterriblejob/5saidMother.

Iheardalittlegasp（倒吸气）&ommyfriendKimO'Meara,whostaredwide-eyesatMother.WhenIasked

whatthematterwas,shetoldmeshejustdidn'tunderstandwhymymothersaidso.

Ihadtolaugh."Shedoesn'tmeanit!Ifsjustthewayshetalks.”

Seeingherstillconfusedlook,Iwentonexplaining,“InChina,parentsconsideritgoodmannerstodeny

praisesabouttheirchildren.Otherwise,itwouldbethesameasbragging（自夸）「Kimseemedalittlehesitant,but

shenoddedanyway.

ThatEaster,theO'Mearasinvitedourfamilyfordinner.Nfrs.O'Mearacookedahugehamwhichweenjoyed

alot.AsNfrs.O'Mearastartedcuttingupthecakefordessert,Mothersaid,'Tmnotsureiflcaneatonemorebite.

ThatwasthebesthamFveevertasted!5,

"Aw,thathamwasterrible/5saidKim."Ibetyoucoulddoalotbetter,Mrs.Yang.”

注意工续写短文词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Therewasastunned（藤惊的）silencearoundthetable.

Paragraph2:

IfinalfyknewhowKimhadmisunderstoodwhatIhadsaid.

动物救助与宠物陪伴（人与自然）

［考情分析】

年份璋话题

2024九省联考适应性试题人与自然之人与动物海豚玛雅械密

2023浙江i月卷人与自然之人与动物

史］【写作指导】

读后续写中涉及人与动物的和谐相处，人对动物的救助甚至动物对人带来的温暖都是常见话题。（如

2024年九省联考适应性考试真题“海豚玛雅标密“，2023年浙江卷“我与蜂鸟的漫逅力相关词块及句式

如下:

1.（2024年九省联考）Fromthenon:theSeaLifeParkisfullofwarmthandharmony.Maya,sperformancein

frontoftheaudienceisgettingbetterandbetter.

从那时起，海洋生物公园就充满了温暖与和谐。玛雅在观众面前的表演越来越好。

2.（2023年浙江卷1月）Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingfbrme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasif

tryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.

那只鸟似乎在等着我，它那明亮的眼睛盯着我，仿佛在试图表达某种深深的'不言而喻的感激之情。

3.Herdad,TedKasper,whotooksomephotoswhenhesawhisdaughtercomingdownthetrailwithadogonher

shoulders.

她的父亲，泰德卡斯帕，当他看到他的女儿骑着一只狗下来时，他拍了一些照片。

4.Lookingbeyondourreachhighinthesky,birdshavefeelingslikehumanbeings,sodomanyother

livingthings.

越过高处的天空，鸟类有像人类一样的感觉，许多其他的生物也是如此。

5.Thisexperiencehasbeenasmeaningfultomeasanythinginmylife.

这段经历对我来说和我生活中一样有意义。

6.Adogwillteachyouunconditionallove.Ifyoucanhavethatinyourlife,thingswon'tbetoobad.一只

狗会教会你无条件的爱。如果你的生活中有这个，事情就不会太糟糕。

7.Wecanjudgetheheartofamanbyhistreatmentofanimals.

我们可以通过一个人对待动物的方式来判断他的心。

8.Ifhavingasoulmeansbeingabletofeelloveandloyaltyandgratitude,thenanimalsarebetteroffthanalotof

humans.

如果拥有灵魂意味着能够感受到爱、忠诚和感激，那么动物比许多人都要好。

9.Suchshortlittlelivesourpetshavetospendwithus,andyettheygiveussomuch.

我们的宠物和我们一起度过的生命如此短暂，然而它们给了我们这么多。

10.Oscarreachedupandnibbedhispawsagainsttheauthor'shusband'sface.

奥斯卡伸出手，用爪子摩擦着作者丈夫的脸。

11.Max,verydifferentfromothercatswalkingaroundtheroomwhilethekidsread,purredonhislapasif

hehadunderstoodwhatBenread.

和当孩子们读书时在房间里走动的其他猫非常不同，他在腿上咕噜着（发出呼噜声），好像他明

白了本读的东西。

12.Whentheownerrusheddowntofindhim,hedisappeared.

当主人冲下去找他时，他消失了。

13.Adogwillstaywithyouevenifit'srainingcatsanddogsoutside,soneverpushthemaway.Remember,all

theywantisyourattention.

即使外面下着倾盆大雨，狗也会和你待在一起，所以永远不要推开它们。记住，它们想要的就是你的关

注。

14.Ifadogwillnotcometoyouafterhavinglookedyouintheface：youshouldgohomeandexamineyourface.

如果一只狗在你盯着它看之后不愿意走向你，你应该回家亩视一下自己的脸。

15.Theonlytimedogsdon'tkeeptheirwordiswhentheyarechasedbycats.

狗唯一不守信用的时候是当它们被猫追赶时。

16.Dogsarenotourwholelife,buttheymakeourliveswhole.

狗不是我们的全部生活，但它们让我们的生活变得完整。

17.Dogsaremiracleswithpaws.

狗是用爪子创造奇迹的。

18.Theloyalcompanionshipofapetisasmuchasourceofpleasureasitisacomfortintimesofanxiety.

宠物的忠实陪伴既是快乐的源泉,也是焦虑时的安慰。

19.Theloveofadogisunconditional,theloyaltyofadogisunwavering,andthefriendshipofadogiseternal.

一只狗的爱是无条件的,一只狗的忠诚是坚定不移的,一只狗的友谊是永恒的。

20.Animalsaresuchagreeablefriends~~theyasknoquestions;theypassnocriticisms.

动物是如此令人愉悦的朋友一他们不提问题；他们不做评论。

21.Benfeltawaveofdisappointment,sinkingintothegreatsadnessoflosinghisfelinefriend.

Ben感到一阵失望,沉浸在失去猫科动物朋友的巨大悲痛之中。

22.WhenMaxgreetedhimwithameow,asenseofgratitudesurgingthroughBen'sheart.

当啮啮一声迎接他时,一种感激之情涌上了本的心头。

23.ThefearthatMaxwasadoptedbysomeonecreptintohismind,reducinghimtotears.

对被别人收养的恐惧悄悄进入了他的脑海，使他流下了眼泪。

23.Thesunshonebrightlyinthesky,castingawarmshadowonthefigurewhereaboy

waspatientlytellingstoriestoacat.

太阳在天空中闪耀，给一个男孩耐心地给猫讲故事的身影投下了温暖的影子。

25.HeturnedaroundandfoundMaxlyinginMrs.Patel'scourtyard,yawningandstretchinglazily.

他转过身来，发现躺在她的太太身上。帕特尔的院子里，打着哈欠，懒洋洋地伸展着身子。

能写作模板

Stepl通读语篇，精准理解

1.语篇类型：记叙文

2.关键信息:根据记叙文六要素who,when,where,what,why,how,把握故事梗概.

Step!年全局，椀1故事情节

Step3推端节，

1.发现问题

2.情节发展

设置矛盾与冲突

合理的解决办法

3.主旨升华

Step4激活表达，精品检出

1.语言润色

运用丰富高级的词汇

多变句式结构9r