英语作文辅导

Writingtraining（Howtoimproveyourcomposition?）

好作文要求1.内容完整无疏漏。2.语句流畅不拼凑。3.语法正确无错误。4.书写规范不潦草。请你评分I

am15-years-old.Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?请你挑错I

am15-years-old.

Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.

Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?请你挑错I

am15-years-old.

Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.

Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?请你纠错I

am15-years-old.Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?15yearsoldplayingeatinghealthyvegetables,fruithealthyMyarelikemathverymuchIt’sisusuallypatientIt‘sdifficultformesomefriendsDo

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易错点1.名词的单复数问题。2.主谓一致问题。3.词类误用问题。4.Chinglish问题。5.时态、语法问题。Howtodescribeaperson?1.Whoishe/she?2.Howoldishe/she?3.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?4.Whatishis/hercharacter?5.somethingelseWhichisbetter?1.天下大雨，他没赶上校车。A.Hemissedtheschoolbusbecauseoftheheavyrain.B.Itrainedheavily,sohedidn’tcatchtheschoolbus.2.我们应当保护环境。Aweshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.3.我希望你能帮我A.I’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.B.Ihopeyoucanhelpme.4.我不吃垃圾食品。A.Idon’teatjunkfood.B.Istayawayfromjunkfood.5.我们应该努力取得好成绩。A.We’resupposedtotryourbesttogetgoodgrades.B.Weshouldworkhardtogetgoodgrades.√√√√√Haveatrytowriteacomposition.MybestfriendPossibleversionMybestfriendisPeter.Heis15yearsold.Heisofmediumbuild.Hehasshortblackhair.Helovesplayingpingpong.Heisgoodatmath.Heoftenhelpsotherpeople.Ilikemyfriend.Tryagain1.写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议健康生活，从三个方面说明保持健康。foodablanceddiet,vegetables,fruit,lessmeat…exercisedomoreexercise,takeawalk,playballgames…happinesskeephappy,makefriends,smile…Good WaystoKeepHealthyItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?

2.请就你喜欢的宠物，如猫、狗等写一篇70-80字的短文，为什么喜欢它，介绍大家认识你的宠物