高考英语 读后续写之“助人类”主题

读后续写助人类目录目标1助人类续写概述和写作步骤目标2困难处境来铺垫目标3消极情绪来烘托目标4助人过程来描写目标5感激、感动来升华目标6最新模拟目标7真题感悟_____________________________________________________________________读后续写中常常会遇到自己帮助别人或者自己受到他人帮助的故事情节，我们就把这类文章归为“脱险型”。在近年高考真题中，如2022年新高考I卷鼓励David越野跑；2020年新高考I卷帮助他人渡过难关等。【写作步骤】一困难处境来铺垫Thewaterwasdeepandrunningfastfromabigrainstormthenightbefore.暴雨，水又深又急。Athickburningsmellfilledtheair. 空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。Itriedtoclimboutofthehole,butwhenIgotakneeontheice,itbrokelikewindowglass.我试图从洞里爬出来，但当我的膝盖跪在冰上时，它就像窗户玻璃一样断裂了。Asflamesshotathisfeet,hebrokethewindow’sglasswithhisbarehand.Bloodflowedfrombetweenhisfingersandheignoredthepain.当火焰射向他的脚边时，他徒手打破了窗户的玻璃。血从他的手指间流出，他没有理会疼痛。Thedoorwaywassealedbyfire.Theglassofthewindowwasbroken,somesmokeranoutofthewindow,andtherewaslesssmokeinthehouse.门口被火封住了。窗户的玻璃被打碎了，窗外有一些烟，房子里的烟也少了。Catherinesaidtoherfollowerswithsincerity,“I’llcontinuetodistributethecardsandbagstothehomelessonthestreetandatlocalshelter.”凯瑟琳真诚地对她的追随者们说：“我将继续把这些卡片和包分发给街上和当地收容所的无家可归者。”二消极情绪来烘托感到一阵....../一种......情绪袭来情绪名词+floodedoversb;sweptoversbawaveof...;afeelingof;asenseof...;aflushof...情绪名词：joy/shame/guilt/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/embarrassment/dispointment/sadness/sorrow/grief/fear...因......颤抖主语+tremble/shake/shiver/quiver...withfear/panic/rage/anger/excitement/horror/fright...进一步细节描写(通常是肢体五官等细节来展现)Tearsrolleddownmyeyes/cheeks.泪水模糊了双眼/留下脸颊。Watchingtheshoreinthedistance,Ifeltpowerlessasifwewerebrokentinyboatsatthemercyofstrongwaves.看着远处的海岸，我感到无力（无力的），就好像我们是被强浪摧毁的小船。Exhaustedandcold,thethoughtthatwemightdiehereflashedacrossmymind,whichmademequiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright.疲惫而冰冷，我们可能死在这里的想法在我的脑海中闪现，这使我因一种无法控制的恐惧/恐惧/恐惧而颤抖。Lookingatthevastsea,Ifeltasenseoffearsurgingthroughmywholebody.看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感掠过我的全身。三助人过程来描写1.Asthecoatbecamecompletelywet,itdraggedmedown.Iwastiredofthestruggleandrestedwithmyarmsstretchedoutontheice.当外套完全湿了，它把我拖了下来。我厌倦了挣扎，伸出双臂在冰上休息。Astheydrovetothelibrary,Sebastiannervouslyapproachedtheroofersandofferedthewater.当他们开车去图书馆时，塞巴斯蒂安紧张地走近屋顶工人，给了水。Withoutamoment’shesitation,Cheemijumpedthroughthewindow.Carlwassleepingsoundly.Pickinghimup,Cheemiputhimonherbackandtiedhimtightlytoherselfwithabedsheet.切米毫不犹豫地跳过了窗户。卡尔睡得很香。切米把他抱起来，把他放在背上，用床单把他紧紧地绑在自己身上。Slowlyshescaledtheladderandpeepedthroughthewindow.Carefullysheundidthebedsheetandhandedit,withthechild,toapoliceman.她慢慢地爬上梯子，从窗户里偷看。她小心翼翼地解开床单，把它和孩子一起交给了一个警察。“Weneedtothinkoutaway!”Imuttered,scratchingmyhead.“我们需要想个办法！”我抓着头，嘟囔着。Nervousandanxious,JohnstruggledtocalmherselfdownandcarriedoutfirstaidtoSmith.尽管紧张而焦虑，约翰努力让自己镇静下来，对史密斯进行了急救。Surroundedbyfireandsmoke,herecognizedthedirectionofthecryandrushedtowardsit.Hefeltthechild,quicklypickedherup,andranoutasfastashecould.在火和烟雾的包围下，他认出了哭声的方向，就朝它冲去。他感觉到了那孩子，迅速地把她抱起来，尽快地跑了出去。四感激、感动来升华Ensuingtheirsafety,Ifeltasurgeoftriumph.当他们安全下来后，我感到一阵胜利。Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound.最终，我们又回来了，安然无恙。Hearingthenews,Icouldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.听到这个消息，我忍不住抑制住了自己的兴奋。Whentheyleft,thedogturnedandgaveawinkgoodbye,seeminglysayingthatPaulwastobethanked.当他们离开时，狗转过身，眨眼道别，似乎在说要感谢保罗。Onhearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief,grinningmerrilyateachother.听到这个好消息，汤姆和我如释重负地叹了口气，愉快地咧着嘴笑。6.（2023年浙江卷1月真题）Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.看到这个声音和感激的生物，我感到一阵欣慰和敬畏，我知道我将永远珍惜我们爬上车开车离开时分享的回忆。7.“IfIhadnotbeengivenfirstaid,Iwouldhavedead.”SimmonssaidtoNorwoodgratefully.SimmonsshowedhergratitudetoNorwood,saying“Itwasyouwhocametomyaidandsavedmylife.”如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”8.Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.赠人玫瑰，手留余香。9.Smallkindnesscanbring/contributeto/giverisetoabigdifference.小小的善意可以产生大大的影响。10.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords.Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.一瞬间，我眼里涌起了泪水，我被言语感动了。我感到很温暖，好像胸口有九个太阳。(2020年山东卷真题)Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.不用说，他们非常感动，尤其是伯纳德，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。TheythankedSebastianandhisdadagainandwavedthemgoodbyeastheydroveaway.他们再次感谢了塞巴斯蒂安和他的父亲，并在他们开车离开时挥手告别。SomovedandoverjoyedwasIthatIwantedtogiveherabighug,toexpressmydeepestgratitude,butinaCOVIDworld,allIcoulddowassay,“Oh,mygoodness!Thankyousomuch!”我非常感动，欣喜若狂，我想给她一个大大的拥抱，以表达我最深切的感激之情，但在一个冠状病毒病的世界里，我所能做的就是说：“哦，我的天哪！非常感谢！”IsilentlythankedSisterEstherinmyheart.Whatagreatteacherandagoodfriend!Whatshedidbroughthappinesstoourdarkdays!我在心里默默地感谢以丝特修女。多么伟大的老师和好朋友！她所做的一切给我们黑暗的日子带来了幸福！【最新模拟】（2023·河北·校联考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsanundergraduateinauniversityinPhiladelphia,Pennsylvania,CatherinehadvolunteeredattheHopeRescueMissioninherhometownwithhermotherwhoservedastheshelter’sdevelopmentdirector.Afterworkingwiththehomelessandreceivingcardsfromhermominthemail,Catherinedecidedtobeginherproject.“You’veGotMail”.Shehadahugeheartforthoseinneed.Forthepeoplethatshewashelping,shesawthehomelessnessfirsthandanditwasabattle.Shethoughtnoonewantedtochoosetobehomeless,andshealwaysdonatedthebasicneeds,includingthetoiletries,theshampoosandtoothbrushes.Inhermind,individualsfacinghomelessnesscertainlysufferedphysically,butformany,theemotionalsufferingwasevenmorepainful.Feelingaloneandhopelesscutdeeperthanfeelinghungryandcold.Therefore,shehelditthat,akindgesture,suchasherprojectaboutencouragementcards,couldbethatlightinsomeone’sdaytokeepthemstrivingandhopingforabettertomorrow.Oneday,shesharedherideawithhermother,“Iwasthinkingofaboxfilledwithholidaycards.Iwanttodosomethingtomakethehomelesswithemptyheartssmile,lettingthemknowmanypeoplestillcareaboutthem.”Hermother,smiledandsaid,“Justdoitandspreadyourlove!”ThenCatherinelaunchedaholidaycarddriveforthehomelessafterbeinginspiredbyvolunteeringattheshelter.Shecollected2,000cards,surpassingheroriginalgoalof500injustafewweeks.Catherine’scompassionforothersdidn’tstopatjustfeelingsympathyforthemintheirhardships.Shealsofollowedhermother’sadvicetolookforwaystohelpthembeatthosehardshipsthroughherkindness.SoCatherineaskedheronlinefriendsforholiday-themedcards,andsoon,herinboxwasfloodedwithpeopleofferingtohelp.Amazingly,thepeoplesheknew,thepeopleshehadn’tspokentosinceprimaryschool,andthepeopleshehadneverspokentobefore,sentthecardstoher.Thensheaskedforcardsfromanyone.Shewasnotturningdownany.Shethoughtitwasreallygreattoacceptthem.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Inhonorofthe“You’veGotMail”initiative,Catherineandhermotherhostedacardmakingparty.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Catherinehopedherprojectwouldremindotherstomakeadifferenceinsomeone’slife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inhonorofthe“You’veGotMail”initiative,Catherineandhermotherhostedacardmakingparty.Intheparty,shemetagroupofhergoodfriendswhoofferedheralargenumberofcards.Shealsoranintoacompany’smanager,whodonatedmanybagsandaccessoriestoher.Besides,amongtheparticipantsweresomefamousmediathatsanghighpraiseforCatherine’skinddeeds,callingontheworldtofollowsuit.Theymadethecardstogether.Catherinesaidtoherfollowerswithsincerity,“I’llcontinuetodistributethecardsandbagstothehomelessonthestreetandatlocalshelters.”Catherinehopedherprojectwouldremindotherstomakeadifferenceinsomeone’slife.Sheappealedtotheworldtocareforthepoor,andmeanwhileurgedthepoortospeakupforthemselves.Uptillnow,shehasconductedinterviewswithsomeofthemandputtogetheravideotobeonairinsociety.Shelistenedtotheirstories,learningabouttheirhealthconditions,theirfamiliesandtheirdreams.Inherhumbleopinion,simplybecauseyouonlypassthemonthestreet,youknownothingaboutthem.Sothebiggestthingisjusttolistenbecauseeverybodyhasastory,fromwhichyoucanfindouthowtohelp.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。主人公凯瑟琳在大学时做志愿者帮助了很多无家可归的人，所以在她毕业后，她开展了自己的“你有一封邮件”的项目，给无家可归的人寄送鼓励贺卡。在项目进行的过程中，也有无数人不断向凯瑟琳寄卡片。【详解】1.段落续写①由第一段首句内容“为了纪念“你收到了邮件”倡议，凯瑟琳和她的母亲举办了一个贺卡制作派对。”可知，第一段可描写凯瑟琳在派对上和参与派对的人之间的互动。②由第二段首句内容“凯瑟琳希望她的项目能提醒其他人去改变别人的生活。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳为无家可归的人进行发声，呼吁大家关心穷人、帮助穷人。2.续写线索：凯瑟琳做大学志愿者——决定开展鼓励卡项目——凯瑟琳收集鼓励卡——开展制作贺卡派对——呼吁社会关心穷人3.词汇激活行为类①主办：host/hold②提供：offer/supply/give③高度赞扬：singhighpraise/speakhighlyof④呼吁：callon/appealto/urge情感类①友善的：kind/sweet/friendly②真诚：sincerity/honesty/earnesty/goodfaith③谦虚的：humble/modest【点睛】【高分句型1】Intheparty,shemetagroupofhergoodfriendswhoofferedheralargenumberofcards.（使用了who引导定语从句）【高分句型2】Besides,amongtheparticipantsweresomefamousmediathatsanghighpraiseforCatherine’skinddeeds,callingontheworldtofollowsuit.（使用了that引导定语从句）【高分句型3】Sothebiggestthingisjusttolistenbecauseeverybodyhasastory,fromwhichyoucanfindouthowtohelp.（使用了fromwhich引导非限制性定语从句）【真题感悟】1.（2023·全国·高考真题）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，我又去了农场。”可知，第一段可描写作者回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。②由第二段首句内容“我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。”可知，第二段可描写蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。2.续写线索：想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想3.词汇激活行为类①思绪回到……：thoughtsdriftbackto/thoughtsreturnto②匆匆回到：rushbackto/hurrybackto③盯着：eyeslockedon/eyesstaringat情绪类①宽慰：feelasurgeofrelief/feelrelieved②感激：grateful/thankful【点睛】[高分句型1]AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.(由as引导的时间状语从句和when引导的限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.(由that引导的主语从句)2．（2022·浙江·统考高考真题）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社区)inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool.Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen,soIdid,too.Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo.Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed,butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner.Webeganpreparingthefood,frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat.Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved,butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering.Itwasn’tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner.Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme,Igotalittlescared.I’dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly,someofthemlookedsodangerous.Ididn’thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit.Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome.ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp,she’dberightthere,whichIfoundquitecomforting.Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood.Theywereofallagesandnationalities.Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty.Somelookedliketheyhadtallygivenuponlife,whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation,smilingandjoking.Somewerebetteroffthanothers,buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat.Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn’thaveaplacetocallhomeandtheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Astheycameinmydirection,Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________