2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习 读后续写如何进行情绪描写

2025届高考英语精准冲刺复习

读后续写如何进行情绪描写Step1Lead-inWatchamovieclipandanswerquestions.1.Whatisthemainactor'semotion?2.Howdoyouknowthat?

What’shisemotion?Heisangry.Step2Competition词汇大比拼靓句大挑战文段险提速

Task：Emotionalwords

Pleasewritedownemotionalwordsofthesamekindasmanyaspossiblein1minute.词汇大比拼emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.靓句大挑战

GamerulesPleaseorganizesentencesbyusingsomesentencepatternsintroducedbyteachers.1、无灵主语（用无生命的事物作主语）例："我开心。“

I'mhappy.

Delight

seizedme.

Awaveofdelightseizedme.2)(加短语）“一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我。”1)(换主语）“开心（的情绪）抓住了我。”1、无灵主语（用无生命的事物作主语）

Instantly,asurgeofdelightseizedme.

Instantly,asurgeofdelightseizedmewhenIheardthegoodnews.4)(加时间状语从句）“听到那个好消息，一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我。”3)(加副词）“立刻，一股开心（的情绪）抓住了我。”无灵主语：情绪名词+固定动词+sb+when/assbdosth“当某人做某事时，一股...情绪涌上心头。”eg:听到这个坏消息时，一股悔恨的情绪无法控制地涌上我心头。Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.Practice:[2022全国1卷]1.当意识到大卫的情况可能会变得更糟，我感到担忧和焦虑。2.当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时，我感到欣慰和开心。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid'ssituationmightgetworse.AwaveofreliefanddelightsweptovermewhenDavidfinallybecamedeterminedtocontinuetherace.2、非谓语：情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2，sbdosth,doingsth“感到...和...,某人做某事1，并做某事2。”eg:(感到)紧张和害怕，彼得设法走上舞台，开始发表演讲。Nervousandscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.

Practice:[2022全国1卷]1.感到坚定和受到鼓舞，大卫抬起头，感激地看着我。2.（感到）放松的和快乐的，大卫在越过终点线后立刻向我挥手，表达他的快乐和感激。Determinedandencouraged，Davidraisedhishead，lookingatmewithgratitude.Relievedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveyinghishappinessandgratitude.情绪形容词非谓语扩写叠加大卫继续跑步。

Davidkeptonrunning.1)(前加情绪形容词）大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning.2)(后加非谓语/分动作)大卫充满信心和决心，继续奔跑，奋力冲向终点线。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,struggling/managingtoreachthefinishline.3)(后加独立主格/五官)大卫自信而坚定，继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.3.让步状语从句：情绪形容词+assb+be动词，sb(still)dosth.尽管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事e.g.尽管很紧张，彼得仍鼓起勇气走上舞台。Nervousashewas，Peterpluckedupthecouragetostepontothestage.Practice:

[2022全国1卷]尽管还有一丝紧张，David决心完成赛跑。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidbecamedeterminedtofinishtherace.4.独立主格结构：身体部位+动词非谓语，sbdosthe.g.眼泪顺着他的脸颊流下来，大卫感谢我及时的鼓励。Tearsstreamingdownhischeeks,Davidthankedmeforthetimelyencouragement.e.g.他热泪盈眶，用颤抖的声音感谢警察。Tears

wellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicemanwith/inatremblingvoice.(眼里闪着...)(脸上洋溢着...)(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)Eyes

glitteringwith

relief/joy,sb.dosth.Face

shining

with

delight,sb.dosth.Heart

beating

with

nervousness,hefailedtoutteraword.其他部位：Arms/legs/musclesachingandknees

shaking/trembling,sb.didsth.(胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝盖发抖/颤抖，某人...)

Practice:[2022全国1卷]让我们欣喜若狂的是，大卫顺利越过终点线，脸上洋溢着满足的喜悦。Toourjoy,Davidcrossedthefinishinglinesmoothly,hisface

shiningwithsatisfieddelight.总结①无灵主语（“情绪名词+固定动词+sb”+as/whensbdosth）②非谓语（情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,doingsth.）③让步状从（情绪形容词+assb+be动词，sb(still)dosth.）④独立主格（身体部位+动词非谓语，sbdosth.）①无灵主语+④独立主格NervousnessenvelopingPeter,hewalkedtothestage,hishands

shakingslightly.eg:紧张笼罩在彼得心头，他走向舞台，双手微微颤抖。③让步状语从句+④独立主格:Nervous

ashewas,Peterwalkedtothestage,hishands

shakingslightly.Peter虽然紧张，但还是走上舞台，他的手微微颤抖。②非谓语+④独立主格:Nervousandslightlyscared,Peterwalkedtothestage,hishandsshakingslightly.

既紧张有点害怕，彼得走上舞台，手微微颤抖。文段险提速Trytowriteasmallpassageabout50wordsinthreeminutesaccordingtothescene,andthendiscussalltheworkswithyourgroupmembersinordertochoosethebestonetopresent.Finally,astudentwillcommentonitandgiveapoint.

Scene1:Hearingthebadnewsthatherbeloveddogwashitbyacar,________________________________________.

Scene2:Lastweekend,whenIwasaddictedtoplayingthegameGloryofKings,myfathercameinwithfury,_______________________________________

Scene3:OnMother'sDay,Icarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwokemotherup.She____________.

Pleaseusetheproperemotionaldescriptionsaccordingtothescenes.Tips:1.useadvancedemotionalwords2.useadvancedsentencepatterns1）无灵主语2）非谓语3)让步状从4）独立主格Scene1:Hearingthebadnewsthatherbeloveddogwashitbyacar,____________________________.Scene2:Lastweekend,whenIwasaddictedtoplayingthegameGloryofKings,myfathercameinwithfury,_____________________________.Scene3:OnMother'sDay,Icarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwokemotherup.She____________________.Shebursti