商务英语内部信函范文

商务英语内部信函范文第一篇商务英语内部信函范文第一篇DearSirorMadam:

WehavenoticedyouradvertisementintheSeptember15issueoftheSweaterWorldJournal.Wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendusapamphletaswellasthecatalogueandprice-listofyourproducts.

Wearealargechainofretailersandarelookingforamanufacturerwhocouldsupplyuswithawiderangeofsweatersfortheadultmarket.

Asweareusuallyabulkbuyer,wehopeyoucanfollowusalargediscount.

Welookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yourssincerely,

商务英语内部信函范文第二篇byPaula

TheOpportunity

Businessetiquetteismadeupofsignificantlymoreimportantthingsthanknowingwhichforktouseatlunchwithaclient.Unfortunately,intheperceptionofothers,thedevilisinthedetails.Peoplemayfeelthatifyoucan'tbetrustednottoembarrassyourselfinbusinessandsocialsituations,youmaylacktheself-controlnecessarytobegoodatwhatyoudo.Etiquetteisaboutpresentingyourselfwiththekindofpolishthatshowsyoucanbetakenseriously.Etiquetteisalsoaboutbeingcomfortablearoundpeople(andmakingthemcomfortablearoundyou!)

Peopleareakeyfactorinyourownandyourbusiness'success.Manypotentiallyworthwhileandprofitableallianceshavebeenlostbecauseofanunintentionalbreachofmanners.

DanMcLeod,presidentofPositiveManagementLeadershipPrograms,aunionavoidancecompany,says,xxxShowmeabosswhotreatshisorheremployeesabrasively,andI'llshowyouanenvironmentripeforlaborproblemsandobviouslypoorcustomersrelations.Disrespectfulanddiscourteoustreatmentofemployeesispassedalongfromthetop.xxx

商务英语内部信函范文第三篇DearSirorMadam:

ThankyouforyourorderNo.6565dated1Julyfor100widgets.

Iregrettosaythatourrecordsshowthatwedonothavesufficientletterofcredit.Wecanfulfillyourorderonlyuponthereceiptofaconfirmed,irrevocableletterofcredit.

Wearesorryforthedelayandawaityourinstructions.

Yourssincerely,

Hillary

商务英语内部信函范文第四篇DearSirorMadam:

Thisisinregardstoyourorderfor5,000widgetsandoursalesconfirmationNo.341.Wewouldliketoremindyouthatthedeliverydateisapproachingandwehavenotyetreceivedthecoveringletterofcredit.

WewouldbegratefulifyouwouldexpeditetheestablishmentoftheL/Csothatwecanshiptheorderontime.Inordertoavoidanyfurtherdelay,pleasemakesurethattheL/Cinstructionsareinpreciseaccordancewiththetermsofthecontract.

Welookforwardtoreceivingyourresponseatanearlydate.

Yourssincerely,

Hillary

商务英语内部信函范文第五篇Anumberofemployeesclearlysufferfromalackofmotivationasaresultofdissatisfactioninoneormoreareasoftheirwork.Thekeyfindingsareoutlinedbelow:

Stafffeelundervaluedbythecompany,bothonafinancialandapersonallevel.Itisgenerallyfeltthatthecompanyˇscompetitorsofferhigherlevelsofremuneration.TheperceptionthatthemanagersareunappreciativeofstaffeffortsisparticularlynoticeableintheSalesDepartment.

Certainemployeesfeelunder-challenged.Thecompanyisclearlynotexploitingitshumanresources.

ThereappearstobeabreakdownofcommunicationintheProductionDepartment.Theconfusionandresultantill-feelingtowardsmanagershasthepotentialtodisrupttheproductioncycles.

Recommendations

Westronglyrecommendthefollowingmeasures:

Anevaluationofjobprofilesthroughoutthecompanytoassesswhetherskillscouldbeutilisedmoreefficiently

Areviewofthecurrentsalarystructureinvolvingthecomparisonwithsimilarorganisations

ItisalsoessentialtoinvestigateandtakeactionregardingthecommunicationintheProductionandSalesDepartment.

商务英语内部信函范文第六篇DearMr/Ms,

IrepresenttheW/PElectronicsCompanyinDallas,andwillbeinKunmingfromnextMondaytoFriday,(October5-9).Ishouldliketocallonyoutodiscussournewmonitor.Would0930hoursonTuesday,October6beconvenient?

IshallbeinBeijing,attheGreatWallHotel,fromTuesday,September29,untilSunday,October4,whereamessagewillreachme.Ifthedayisnotconvenient,willyoupleasesuggestanother.

Yoursfaithfully

尊敬的先生/小姐

我是达拉斯W/P电子公司的代表,将于下周一到周五(10月5-9日)住留昆明。我乐于请您商讨我们新的显示器。星期二即10月6日上午09:30是否方便?

从周二,即9月29日,我将住在北京的长城宾馆,直到周六,即10月4日,在那会有通知给我。如商讨日期不方便,请另外建议。

商务英语内部信函范文第七篇DearMr.Steve,

Congratulationsonyour50thbirthday.Thisisaspecialandimportantdayforyouandwewouldliketoexpressoursincerestgreetings.

Toachievebetterperformance,wewillpulltogetherandhelpeachothersincerelyasusual.

Withaffectionatebirthdaywishes.

Yoursfaithfully,

K&WCompany

尊敬的史蒂夫先生：

祝您50岁生日快乐!对您来说，今天是一个特殊而又重要的'日子，在这个特别的时刻，我们想献上我们最真诚的祝福。

为取得更好的业绩，我们会如往常一样齐心合力，真诚互助。

送上美好的生日祝福。

K&W公司员工

商务英语内部信函范文第八篇Hithere,Mynameiswouldliketoapplyforthisjobofenglishteacherforplanforthefutureisthatiwouldliketostaywithchildrenandsharethemomentsintheirlivesandprovidethemwithhelpfuladvice.makingfriendswiththemandlettingthemfeelyouaretheonetheycantalkandilikeenglishverythisidea,iwanttocombinemyloveforchildrenwithmyabilityofenglishtogether,soicanworkinapleasantenvironmentdoingthegreatthingsienjoydoing.

Iconsidermyselfwithrichpotentialofqualifyingoutasagoodenglishhaveaheartforchildren,alovingandcaringiwouldcertainlyplaceituponmystudents,beingtheirclosefriendandwithmycreativeandrelaxingenglishteachingmethod,studentswouldlearnenglishthroughinteractingwithmeortheothersinsteadofbeingtoldwhattosay.Iamalsoveryopen-mindedandeasy-going,whichwillmakemyselfapopularfigureofcourseiamverymuchthetypeofthegirlnextwillingtotakeinsuggestionsandcreateafunclassroomforournextgeneration.

IbelieveI'vesaidquiteenoughofmyself.Ihopeyounowknowmoreaboutmethanjustnow.Iwouldcertainlycherishthisjobandgetalongverywellwithallpeopleoutthankyouverymuchagainforgivingmethisopportunitytotalkwithyou.

Ilookforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou.

Thankyou!

商务英语内部信函范文第九篇DearMr.Sation

Withreferencetoyourletterdated3rdMay2004,Iamwritingtoapologiesforthemistakewemade.

Themistakewasmadebecauseourcomputerbrokedownon29April.Icanassureyouwewillsendthechequeof$200toyouintwodays.Wewillofferyou20%discountforyounextstay.

Pleaseacceptourapologiesfortheinconveniencethiserrorhascausedyouandwelookforwardtomeetingyouagain.

Yoursincerely

商务英语内部信函范文第十篇为了培养我们的创新精神和实践能力，提高我们的综合素质。进行了为期一周的实习，实习中我们互相学习和进步着。在实习期间，我们既要对理论知识进一步的学习，又要体会对商务英语应用中的实践过程，真正切身感受本课程的实际应用。

一、实习目的

了解商务英语在社会和实际工作中的应用，丰富课程的内容，培养我们理论联系实际的能力，提高在语言应用中分析及解决问题的实际能力。

二、实习要求

1、严格遵守实习作息时间。

2、自觉维护好课堂纪律。

3、自觉完成实习项目。

三、实习内容

（一）商务英语口语练习

1、建立商业关系通过一篇商务对话，了解了关于商务谈判的过程，并对这篇对话进行了音标以及口语的练习。翻译了英语的明信片，使我们认知英文的名片书写过程。

2、商务谈判继商务谈判的的对话，模拟业务续写了英语对话，更提高了我们对商务谈判的能力，对以后工作提供铺垫。

（二）商务信函的书写

在国际商务买卖的过程主要分为询盘、发盘、还盘、接受四个环节，其过程中最重要的便是商务信函的书写，我们这次实习中主要对发盘的过程进行了练习。在老师的帮助下对发盘的发虚盘、发实盘的信函实例进行分析与解读和翻译，并对一些内容进行书写练习，使我们掌握了英文信函的书写方式、提升了书写技巧。

（三）商务谈判

在看完有关商务谈判的视频后，在老师的指导下，我们根据视频中的谈判，对其谈判的案例进行分析。全面了解了谈判的类型、谈判时的重要因素、谈判时注意的问题及谈判时的信息搜索。谈判对于商务进行是不可缺少的部分，充分了解谈判的过程和技巧便更一步的促进了合作关系的达成。

（四）进出口贸易信函的分析和书写

根据多篇的进出口贸易信函的阅读及分析。对信函的英汉互译，这不仅对我们英语知识的提高，而且认识了进出口贸易信函书写的方式，在我们多次的练习中提升了写作技巧，更为以后的工作节约了时间。

（五）商务报告

搜索最近发生的经济事件，对事件进行分析与总结，并详写了我们自己的观点。让我们看事件来分析问题，曾进的不只是我们的观点，更是我们对问题分析的能力。最后我们的这项实习任务，用英文的格式练习书写了我们自己的简历，及招聘广告的书信。现在的社会大发展，英文已离不开我们的生活，这样的实习巩固的是我们的课程，也为我们以后的工作提供了极大的方便。

实习是走向社会起到了一个桥梁的作用，过渡的作用，也对将来走上工作岗位也有着很大帮助。在短暂两周的实习过程中，既有收获也有遗憾。通过这次实习，加深了我对商务英语的基本知识的理解，丰富了实际操作知识，认识到要学好商务英语既要注重理论知识的学习，更重要的是要把实践与理论两者紧密相结合。

商务英语内部信函范文第十一篇Formulateasmokingpolicyforyourofficewhichisfairtobothsmokersandnonsmokers.Writea40-50wordmemoinformingallstaffofthepolicy.

提示：

我们需要确定，如果我是公司职员，我要在这篇memo中获得什么信息?是不是要知道：

1.新的吸烟政策从什么时候开始;

2.吸烟区划定在什么地方?

to:AllStaff

from:SusuanWu

Tocreatanonsmokingofficeroom,wehopethatsmokingisforbiddenintheworkofficefrom.WouldyoupleaseenjoyyoursmokingintheLaunchbyclosingtheofficedoor.

Thankyouforyourcoperation.

名师指导：

To:Allstaff

From:SarahBuffay

Asyouallknow,thereisanincreasingdisputeaboutsmokingintheoffice.Nowwe'dliketoformulateapolicybothfairtosmokersandnonsmokers:Thevacantroom408willbeopenedasxxxSmokingRoomxxxfromtomorrow.Allsmokersmaygotherewithinthetimelimitationfrom9:.to4:.Butsmokersarenotallowedtosmokeoutsidethisroom.[1]Ifyouhaveanyproblems,pleasecontactme.[2]

名师指导：

[1]去掉。

[2]这是信件的结尾，不是memo的，直接用thankyou就可以。

商务英语内部信函范文第十二篇Thepast4years,ispendmostofmytimeonstudy,ihavepassedCET4--6withaease.Andihaveacquiredbasicknowledgeofpackagingandpublishingbothintheyandinpractice.Besides,ihaveattendseveralpackagingexhibitionholdinBeijing,thisisouradvantagestudyhere,ihavetakenatourtosomebigfactyandcompany.

Throughtheseihaveadeeplyunderstandingofdomesticpackagingindustry.Comparedtodevelopedriessuchasus,unftunately,althoughwehavemadeextradinaryprogresssince1983,ourpackagingindustryarestillunderdeveloped,mess,unstable,thesituationofemployeesinthisfieldareawkard.Butihavefullconfidenceinabrightfutureifonlyoureconomycankeepthegrowthpacestill.iguessyoumaybeinterestedinthereasonitchtolaw,andwhatismyplanduringgraduatestudylife,iwouldtotellyouthatpursuelawisoneofmylifelonggoal,mymajorispackagingandiwontgiveup,ificanpursuemydegreehereiwillcombinelawwithmyfmereducation.Iwillbehardinthesefields,patent,trademark,copyright,onthebaseofmyyearsstudyindepartmentofmyacter.Icannotdescribeitwell,butiknowiamoptimisticandconfident.Sometimesiprefertostayalone,reading,listeningtomusic,butiamnotlonely,tochatwithmyclassmates,almosttalkeverything,myfavitepastimeisvalleyball,playingcardssurfonline.Throughcollegelife,ilearnhowtobalancebetweenstudyandentertainment.Bytheway,iwasaactofouramazingdramaclub.Ihadafewgliousmemyonstage,thatismypride.

商务英语内部信函范文第十三篇一、内容的清晰性

发送商务信函的目的在于建立商务往来关系，就某一细节进行商讨，努力达成共识，以便促进一项商务活动的开展。要达到这些目的，首先必须保证阅读者能够清楚了解写信人的意图，迂回或闪烁其辞的话语会让读信人产生不信任，甚至会怀疑对方的语言表达能力，对进一步开展商务活动很不利。模棱两可的话轻则阻碍读信人对信函意思的理解，重则会对发函方造成不必要的损失。例如:AstothesteamerssailingfromHongkongtoSanFrancisco，wehavebimonthlydirectservices.此处bimonthly有歧义，可以是twiceamonth或者oncetwomonth.故读信人就迷惑了，可以改写为WehavetwodirectsailingseverymonthfromHongkongtoSanFrancisco.

翻译要保留原文的清晰度相当重要。由于在较为正式的场合中，为了将一概念定义完整和清楚，英文常常用关联词将几个短句并在一起形成一个长句，而中文无法照样只用一句话来翻译，即使这样译了也很难达到通顺和自然。这时，我们就采取将长句按特定的事情发展的顺序拆分成两个或两个以上的小句子的方式来翻译。必要时还要增加或省略一些词语，让整段文字结构更合理、内容更清楚。例如:Thepricesstatedarebasedoncurrentfreightrates，anyincreaseordecreaseinfreightratesattimeofshipmentistobethebenefitofthebuyer，withthesellerassumingthepaymentofalltransportationchargestothepointorplaceofdelivery.例句中以一个介词with来分界，译为“合同价格是以运费计算，装运时运费的增减均属买方。卖方则承担至交货地的全部运费”。在原文中with分句是一个状语，翻译时采用中国人平铺直叙的思维方式，用分述的方式把这个句子拆成两句，清楚地表达了原文的语言信息。

是不是一封书信只要包含了全部关键信息就可以成为一封好的书信了呢?拟信人还应注意语言组织的条理性，或按事情发展的先后顺序，或按各要素的重要性排序编写。东扯一句，西扯一句的写法必定会影响文章的清晰度。

二、表达的简洁性

简洁就是用最精炼的语言来表达意思，在商务信函中言简意赅就是为了方便高效率沟通与工作。能用一个字表达的不用一个词组，能一个词组讲清的事就不用讲成一句话。商务信函不用因顾及礼貌而开头就说“Ihopeyouarewell”(近日可好?)，天气也从不在此中提及。我们用“now”不用“atthesametime”;用“though”而不用“inspiteofthefactthat”……。形容词虽然可以表达友好、满意、歉意等感情，但只是在十分必要的情况下才出现。中国人在写英文信函时经常会出现一些不必要的重复，比如:“truefacts”、“nexttimeinthefuture”这样的词语读者能懂，但是会对这种不地道的说法嗤之以鼻。

中文就简洁这一点在很多情况下具有优势，商务信函中最能体现这一优势的是一些客套而必要的敬语，比如:“wearelookingforwardtoyourearlyreply”，翻译成中文就五个字:“盼早日回复”;“withallkindregards，Iremain”，中文为“祝好”。像“regards”、“wishes”这一类词，都不用按照原意翻译，祝好的英文句子大多用中文的俗语代替。

三、词语的专业性

商务英语内部信函范文第十四篇DearMrJacobs

IamwritingtoapplytothepositionofSalesAdviserfortheNorthEastRegionwhichwasadvertisedinHeraldInternationalyesterday.

AlthoughIamcurrentlyworkingintheMarketingDepartmentofalargemultinational,Iwouldappreciatetoworkforarapidlyexpandingyoungcompanysuchasyours.

AsyoucanseefrommyenclosedCV,IobtainedanhonoursdegreeinSalesandMarketingfromNottinghamUniversityin1994.IthoroughlyenjoyedthesixmonthsIspentinworkinginBootsplcaspertofthecourse.DuringthistimeIgainedinvaluableinsightsintothenatureofsales.AfterleavinguniversityIinitiallyspenttimeworkingforasmalllocalfirmbeforefindingmycurrentjobandIfeelthatIammoresuitedtothedynamicsandvarieddemandsofasmallerfirm.

Notonlyhasmyexperiencefamiliarisedmewiththechallengesfacedbytheindustrytodaybut,havingbeenbroughtupinthenortheast,Iknowtheregion,itsproblemsanditsundoubtedpotential.Asaresult,IfeelthatIwouldbeabletorelatetoyourcustomersonbothaprofessionalandapersonallevel.

Iamavailableforinterviewfrom15SeptemberandwouldbepleasedtodiscussmyCVinmoredetailthen,

Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.

商务英语内部信函范文第十五篇MynameisXXXXXXXX.IamgraduatefromXXXXXXXXseniorhighschoolandmajorinXXXXXXXX.ThereareXXXXXXXXpeopleinmyfamily.

Myfatherworksinacomputercompany.Andmymotherisahousewife.Iamtheyoungestoneinmyfamily.

Inmysparetime,Iliketoreadnovels.Ithinkreadingcouldenlargemyknowledge.

Asfornovels,IcouldimaginewhateverIlikesuchasawell-knownscientistorakung-fumaster.Inadditiontoreading,IalsoliketoplayPCgames.

AlotofgrownupsthinkplayingPCgameshindersthestudentsfromlearning.ButIthinkPCgamescouldmotivatemetolearnsomethingsuchasEnglishorJapanese.

MyfavoritecourseisEnglishbecauseIthinkitisinterestingtosayonethingviadifferentsounds.

IwishmyEnglishcouldbeimprovedinthenextfouryearsandbeabletospeakfluentEnglishinthefuture.

商务英语内部信函范文第十六篇DearMsPhilips

TranslationServices&Fees

Thankyouforyourletterof4Novemberenquiringaboutourtranslationservices.

LinguaServicesGalacticofferafullrangeoftranslationservicestohelpyouinthedevelopmentofsalesliteratureandwebsites.Ihavepleasureinenclosingourlatestbrochuresandpricelistfromwhichyoucanseethatourpricesarehighlycompetitive.

Ilookforwardtocallingyouinafewdays.

Yourssincerely

JamesBrown

JamesTBrown

SalesManager

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商务英语内部信函范文第十七篇fromtriplewavesdn.bhda-5-9empiretower,ss6subangjaya,47500,selangor,malaysia.

dearvisaofficer,wewouldbegratefulifabusinessvisacouldbegrantedforchinaresearchinstituteofelectronicengineering,tovisitmalaysiaonmondayfebruary5throughfebruary20,XX.duringthistriphewillmeetwithourcompanyrepresentativetodiscussthesaleanddistributionofdigitalcctvsurveillancesolutions,accesscontrolsystemandsecurityalarmsystemandothercommunicationsolutions.chinaresearchinstituteofelectronicengineeringisfinanciallyreonsiblefortheapplicant’svisitandundertakestoensurethatthathewillabidebytherulesandregulationsofthemalaysiasincerely,mr.samirseniorvicepresidenttriplewavesdn.bhd.

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商务英语内部信函范文第十八篇fromtriplewavesdn.bhda-5-9empiretower,ss16/1subangjaya,47500,selangor,malaysia

dearvisaofficer,wewouldbegratefulifabusinessvisacouldbegrantedforchinaresearchinstituteofelectronicengineering,tovisitmalaysiaonmondayfebruary15throughfebruary20,XX.duringthistriphewillmeetwithourcompanyrepresentativetodiscussthesaleanddistributionofdigitalcctvsurveillancesolutions,accesscontrolsystemandsecurityalarmsystemandothercommunicationsolutions.chinaresearchinstituteofelectronicengineeringisfinanciallyresponsiblefortheapplicant’svisitandundertakestoensurethatthathewillabidebytherulesandregulationsofthemalaysiasincerely,mr.samirseniorvicepresidenttriplewavesdn.bhd

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47500,selangor,malaysia

商务英语内部信函范文第十九篇商务写作

(BusinessWriting)

一、商务信函概述

?一、正确的观念

?1.商务信函是一种“推销”函

?商务信函是一种常用的商业联系媒介，实际上商务信函是一种“推销”函，写信人总是在推销着什么，或是物品、或是服务等。要写好商务信函不仅要具备相关的业务知识，掌握好法规和条款等，还应具备扎实的语言基础，熟悉信函的书写形式和行文要求。2.商务信函的基本特点商务信函书写的重点应放在“效率”上，应易读易懂；语气真诚、友好、客气；语言简短、朴实、自然；内容清晰、准确、具体；行文正确、完整。3.商务信函无定律好的信函并没有固定不变的写作模式，因人而异。写信时，应充分考虑收信方的观

点和看法、背景和所处环境。

二、应用原则

?1.“挨达”AIDA原则：在拟就一封商务信函时，应首先考虑的原则：A—Attention注意I—Interest兴趣D—Desire意愿A—Action行动个“C”的行文原则明晰Clearness具体Concreteness简洁Conciseness诚意Conscientiousness正确Correctness个性Character礼貌Courtesy完整Completeness体谅Considerateness优美Concinnity

三、商务信函的构成要素

?1.信头（Letterhead）

?是指发信人所在公司的名称和地址，通常是预先印制好的，一般位于信纸的正上方。?

?内容包括：电话号码、电报挂号（CableAddress）、传真（Fax）和电传（Telex）号码、信件编号或索引号码以及写信日期。例如：英国——date/month/year27February,2008美国——month/date/yearFebruary27,20082.信内地址（InsideAddress）即收信人的姓名和地址，通常是在日期下面隔两行，位于书信正文的左上方。3.称呼（Salutation）是发信人对收信人的称号用语，自成一行，位于“信内地址”左下方的一、二行处。商务书信的称呼通常要注意下面几点：（1）DearSirs和Gentlemen是最常使用的公文用语，前者是英国式的称呼，后者

是美国式的称呼；注意Sirs前通常加Dear；Gentlemen必须用复数；

?（3）DearSir是指男性，DearMadam是指女性，DearSirorMadam是指不知道对方性别。（4）称呼后面用冒号或逗号均可，一般用冒号。4.正文正式的商务信件在每一段之间均留一空行。每一行末尾的单词一般不移行。5.结尾客套语位于正文最后一行下面一、二行处，从信纸中间偏右的地方开始写，一般占一行，第一个字母要大写，结尾用逗号。6.签名是指发信人、书信执笔人或公司代表在书信上签上公司名称或个人名字，通常位于

结尾客套语下面两行，从中间偏右处开始写，一般占3～4行：第一行写公司名称，第二行是个人签名，要用钢笔；第三行打印自己的名字，用于辨认和复信；第四行打印所属部门的名称及签名人的职称。

?信封和书信的写法-TheStyleofEnvelopeandLetter1.信封的写法（1）美国式航空信封的写法（Stamp）ABCManufacturingCompany(收信人地址)150GieraCourtParlin,LivingstoneNewJersey08859,USAMr.BlackSmith(收信人名字和职称)PresidentoftheCompanyBeijingImportandExportCompany86Baiyilu,HaidianDistrict100872Beijing,PRC(发信人地址)（2）英国式航空信封的写法（Stamp）BeijingImportandExportCompany(收信人地址)86Baiyilu,HaidianDistrict100872Beijing,PRCAFTER15DAYSPLEASERETURNTO(发信人地址)SMITH&SON,LTD15WOODSTREETLONDON6ENGLAND商务写作的十大技巧1.了解读者2.使用第二人称，强调读者的利益3.确定单一的交流目标和目的4.清晰、简洁、直白5.使用主题行、缩格、简短的开头段落和附言6.开篇和结尾有力7.在长文件中应用标题、空白、图表

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