读后续写之节日（情感与情绪描写）-2025届高三英语一轮复习

People'sfeelingsandemotionsinfestivals

LearningaimsInthislesson,youwillbeableto1.mastersomewordsandphrasesaboutfeelingsduringthefestivals2.usedifferentwaystodescribepeople'sfeelingsvividly近5年左右高考有关与节日相关的读后续写1)Haveyougotanyredpocketsfromyourteachers?2)Howdoyoufeel?Mayeverythinggoasyouwish.Mayallyourwishescometrue.万事如意心想事成Wishyousuccessinyourstudies回顾教材feelingsandemotionsWhatisthemainfeelingduringthefestival?ThreewaystoexpresshappinessdirectdescriptionfacialexpressionbodylanguageHappinessActivity12.someadjectives

todescribehappiness1.some

nounstodescribehappiness1)Tomcried______________________________

汤姆高兴地大声说。注意：放______,表状态。withjoy/delight/happiness.句尾2)I___________very__________togetyourletter.

很高兴收到来信。注意：形容词前补________________________.was/feltpleasedbe,系动词Activity14.somephrasestodescribehappiness3.some

verbstodescribehappinessKnowingthatherbestfriendwouldcome,Ada________forjoy.

知道好朋友要到来，Ada开心地跳起来。jumped/danced

I__________________________,becauseIneverexpectedtodosowell.我太开心了，我从没想过我会做得如此漂亮(介词短语）。注意：介词短语前补__________________________.wasonthetopoftheworldbe,系动词汤姆兴奋地打开了礼物盒。1.Tomopenedhispresentboxwithexcitement.（名词）2.Tomwasexcitedtoopenhispresentbox.（形容词）3.Seeingthepresentboxinfrontofhim,Tomdancedwithexcitement.（动词）4.whenTomopenedhispresentbox,hewasonthetopoftheworld.（介词短语）Exercise1请大家分别用上述所学方法（加词汇,短语）进行描述。1）V-ing/…,主+V.2）adj1+adj2(双形容词),主+V.3)"......."said+主.4)Awaveof+情绪名词welledupinsbas+主+vTrytodescribethepictureindetails.

KnowingthatherfatherwouldtakehertotheDisneyland,thelittlegirlwaswildwithjoy.1）V-ing/…,主+V.2）adj1+adj2(双形容词),主+V.3)"......."said+主.4)Awaveof+情绪名词welledupinsbas+主+vTrytodescribethepictureindetails.

Shewassoexcitedthatsheimmediatelytookouthercellphoneandcouldn'twaittotellherfriendabouttheexperience.Itissofunny!HappinessActivity21.Myteacher__________(欣慰地笑),“________________________.”2.KnowingthatIwonthefirstprizeinthecompetition,

mymother’stearsofhappiness_______________________hercheek.（热泪盈眶）3.Hearingthis,everybody____________________________.(欢欣雀跃)Exercise2根据所给语境合理补充信息beamedwithrelieffloweddownjumpedforjoy/inhighspiritsCongratulations1）V-ing/…,主+V.2）adj1+adj2(双形容词),主+V.3)Awaveof+情绪名词welledupinsbas+主+v4)"......."said+主.Trytodescribethepicturesindetails.Seeingtherisinglanternsintheair,Ifeltawaveofwarmthwellingupinmyheart.Delightedandjoyful,wearingbrightsmiles,thewholefamilygottogethertohaveabigfamilyreuniondinner.Howdoyoufeelwhenyouwatchthevideo?Activity3Doyouhavethesameexperience?三、情景再现：连续在校学习一个月的你，终于通知放假回家。描写接下来的你的反应：（主要从听到消息到与家人团聚的过程）1）HearingthenewsthatIwouldhaveashortbreak,

Ijumpedwithjoy.(动作）2)AssoonasIgothome,Icalledmymumwithexcitement.(动/名）3）Delightedandsurprised

,mymumrushedtowardsmeandgavemeawarmhug.（双形容词）4)“Imissyousomuch",

saidmymother.Igrinnedfromeartoearandsaid,“Imissyoutoo"(对话）5)Mydadwalkedtowardsme,pattedmyshoulderandbeamedwithrelief.(三连动）6)Awaveofjoy/happiness/sweetness

welledupinthewholehouse.Hearingthenews,

Ijumpedwithjoy.Ican'twaittoseemyparentsandmyfriends,soassoonasIgothome,Icalledmymumwithexcitement.Delightedandsurprised,mymumrushedtowardsmeandgavemeawarmhug.“Imissyousomuch",saidmymother.Igrinnedfromeartoear,“Imissyoutoo."Mydadwalkedtowardsme,pattedmeonmyshoulderandbeamedwithrelief.

Awaveofjoywelledupinthewholehouse.微读写训练

观察图片，尝试续写春节期间，老人等待和子女重逢的情节，侧重人物高兴和激动的情感细节描写。试设计故事情节（首句已给出。）Finally,thedayhascome.Themothercan’twaittoseethechildren.______________________________________________________________________________不等了1234Activity4Finally,thedayhascome.Themothercan’twaittoseethechildren.Anxiousandexcited,shestoodbythewindow(情绪描写）.Shelookedoutofthewindow,

hopingherchildrenwouldcomeearlier(神态心理描写）.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandingthereforacentury（夸张手法，表达期待).Nooneappeared.Awaveofdisappointmentwashedoverher.Suddenlysheheardsomeoneknockingatthedoor.(动作）Shestoodup,tookoffhergrasses,dashedtoopenthedoor,andsawafamiliarfigure(动作）.

Tearsofhappinesswelledupintheireyesastheyhuggedtightlytogether.（无灵主语）.

参考答案：写作建议:读后续写中，要按照一定的时间、空间、动作先后等顺序,有条理、有逻辑地组织行文，恰当运用多种细节描写手法，灵活选择词汇和句式，定能出彩！Finally,thedayhascome.Themothercan’twaittoseethechildren.Anxiousandexcited,shestoodbythewindow(情绪描写）.Shelookedoutofthewindow,

hopingherchildrenwouldcomeearlier(神态心理描写）.Itseemedasifshehadbeenstandingthereforacentury（夸张手法，表达期待).Nooneappeared.Awaveofdisappointmentwashedoverher.Suddenlysheheardsomeoneknockingatthedoor.(动作