新教材2024高考英语二轮专题复习专题通关必测40分写作规范练四

40分写作规范练(四)写作(共两节，满分40分)第一节(满分15分)[2024·湖南省百所学校高三上联考]假定你是李华，上个月你去了长城旅游。请你就此写封电子邮件和外国网友Lucy共享此事，内容包括：1．描述过程；2．你的体会；3．建议她去长城旅游。留意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加微小环节，以使行文连贯。DearLucy，Howareyoudoing？_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua

其次节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面材料，依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。[2024·浙江省高三5月模拟卷]Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad'sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm，”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn'tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don'tbelateforsupper，”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon'tgetlost！”“OK！”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.留意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

40分写作规范练(四)第一节DearLucy，Howareyoudoing?Lastmonth,IwentonatriptotheGreatWallwithmyparents.Therewerealotoftourists,amongwhomweresomeforeigners.Iclimbedforafewhourswithperseveranceandeventuallyreachedthedesireddestination.IwasstruckbytheheightandgloryoftheGreatWall.IwasfullofadmirationfortheancientpeopleofChinabecausetheymadealotofeffortstobuildit.IknowyouareeagertovisittheGreatWall,soIrecommendyouenjoyitsbeautyinthenearfuture.I'mconvincedthatitwillbringyouadifferenttravelexperience.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua其次节【语篇解读】本文以人物为线索绽开，讲解并描述了父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个挚友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验的阅历。解析：1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。”可知，第一段可描写兔子出现后带来的反应扩绽开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要留意与其次段首句相呼应。②由其次段首句内容“我们不知道自己在哪里，天黑了。”可知，其次段可呼应前文保罗叔叔的嘱咐——不要延误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。2．续写线索：兔子出现——马受惊——迷路——天黑——被叔叔找到——到达农舍答案：Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itsabruptappearancescaredmyhorse,makingitrunoffthetrackwildly.IsparednoeffortstoholdonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepup,extremelyworriedaboutmysafety.Fortunately,minuteslater,thehorsestoppedbeforeariver,outofbreath.Relieved,welookedaroundtryingtofindthetrack.However,itwasnowheretobefound.Soaimlesslydidthefrightenedhorserunthatwegotlostunconsciously.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Nothinginsightwasfamiliarandneitherdidweknowwherethefarmhousewas.Justatthepointo