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英语书面表达2评分原则1总分25，分5个档次2先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分3词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分34评分时应注意的的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量及准确性、上下文的连贯性与语言的得体性5拼写与标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑46如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次！5写作要领1细读提示——明白写什么，日记、信函、报导或叙事描写2写全要点——了解核心内容，非重要情节，图画作文应认真分析判断才能分清主次。表格类原则上一个不能少3卷面干净——事先打草稿然后腾写是使文章通畅的关键6认真书写，不求文字娟秀，力保规范工整，这是留下好印象的起码条件4层次分明——为使短文令人感到赏心悦目，分成2至3段为好5承上启下——简而言之是连接词、过度句.他们是组成文章粘和剂，上下沟通的纽带76繁简有度——文章总有详写与略写，尤其是图画类短文，学会筛选是非常必要的，如其不然，事无巨细全部点到，不仅使文章成了流水帐，显得冗赘，而且空耗了时间。若再因超长而被扣分岂不得不偿失？！7亮点突出——较高级词汇和较8复杂的语法结构的合理适时使用，这最能影响或打动改卷教师，是求得高档次及该档次高端分值的保证9第二节书面表达(满分25分）假定你叫李华，你班同学约定本周日上午9点在市中心公园的小树林边聚会，想邀请你们的外籍英语教师Sally参加。请根据下图指示给她写一封e-mail,告诉她如何到中心公园找到你们。1.词数:100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearSally,Thestudentsinourclassaregoingtohaveaget-togetherintheCentralParkat9thisSunday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Yours，

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ThestudentsinourclassaregoingtohaveagettogetherintheCentralParkat9thisSunday.Wesincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.Hereishowyoucanfindusinthepark.12

Whenyoucomeoutofourschool,gostraighttothemainstreet.Turnrightandwalkalongthestreetuntilyoufindahospitalatthesecondcrossing.

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JustoppositethehospitalisaNo.7busstop.Takeabusandgetoffatthethirdstop.YouwillfindtheCentralParkinfrontofit.14

Whenyouenterthepark,walkalongthelakeonyourlefttillyoucometothewoods.We’llhaveourpartyjustattheedgeofthewoods.

Wouldyoupleasecomeifitisconvenientforyou?15DearSally,ThestudentsinourclassaregoingtohaveagettogetherintheCentralParkat9thisSunday.Wesincerelyinviteyoutojoinus.Hereishowyoucanfindusinthepark.Whenyoucomeoutofourschool,gostraighttothemainstreet.Turnrightandwalkalongthestreetuntilyoufindahospitalatthesecondcrossing.Justoppositethehospitalis

aNo.7busstop.Takeabusandgetoffatthethirdstop.YouwillfindtheCentralParkinfrontofit.Whenyouenterthepark,walkalongthelakeonyourlefttillyoucometothewoods.We’llhaveourpartyjustattheedgeofthewoods.Wouldyoupleasecomeifitisconvenientforyou?Yours,LiHua16操场教学大楼办公楼花园校门学生宿舍实验楼游泳池体育馆图书馆下面是你所在学的模型图。把你的学校向外宾做一简要介绍。内容要点：办公楼共8层；教学大楼共6层，32间教室，在校学生2，000余人；图书馆共有3层，2间大阅览室，收藏图书20多万册；实验楼内共有12个物理、化学、生物实验室，2个语音室。17操场教学大楼办公楼花园校门学生宿舍实验楼游泳池体育馆图书馆18Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.I’mverygladtointroduceourschooltoyou.Thisisamodelofourschool.Theschoolgatefacessouth.Thisisaneight-storeyedofficebuilding.Theleadersandteachersworkhereeveryday.,a119Ontherightisourlibrary

whichisthree-storeyedbuildingandhastwolargereadingroomsandmorethan200,000copiesofbooks.,a1220Ontheleftistheexperimentbuilding,inwhichthereareadozenlabsforphysics,chemistryandbiologyandtwolanguagelabs.Thisisasix-storeyedteachingbuilding.Morethan2,000studentsstudyinthethirty-twoclassrooms.,a21321Infrontoftheteachingbuildingistheschoolgardenandbehinditistheplayground.Onitsrightarethestadiumandtheswimmingpoolandonitsleftarethestudents’dormitorybuildings.That’sallaboutourschool.Thankyou!,a4567822Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.I’mverygladtointroduceourschooltoyou.Thisisamodelofourschool.Theschoolgatefacessouth.Thisisaneight-storeyedofficebuilding.Theleadersandteachersworkhereeveryday.Ontherightisourlibrarywhichisthree-storeyedbuildingandhastwolargereadingroomsandmorethan200,000copiesofbooks.Ontheleftistheexperimentbuilding,inwhichthereareadozenlabsforphysics,chemistryandbiologyandtwolanguagelabs.Thisisasix-storeyedteachingbuilding.Morethan2,000studentsstudyinthethirty-twoclassrooms.Infrontoftheteachingbuildingistheschoolgardenandbehinditistheplayground.Onitsrightarethestadiumandtheswimmingpoolandonitsleftarethestudents’dormitorybuildings.That’sallaboutourschool.Thankyou!It’smypleasuretomyhonorstands,awhichlieswithmorestudying2324,a45678TheNanhuMiddleSchoolwasbuiltin1982andnowthereare12classeswith620studentsand52teachersinit.Theschoolislocatedatthefootofahillanditsgatefacessouth,infrontofwhichliesahighway.25,a4678

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